Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5XJQCSV6FWYXXW1DBH1Z5

Run Details

Duration:
40.6s
Cost:
$0.022829
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest bled colour onto the wet Soho pavement. Rain left the street slick and black. Rory pushed through the door with her shoulder and the bell over the frame gave a thin jolt. Heat hit her face. The bar held low light and close air. Old maps covered the walls beside black-and-white photographs of men in coats with faces turned from the camera. The bar ran the length of the room, wood worn to a shine where hands had rested for years. Silas stood behind it. His auburn hair showed grey at the temples and his beard held the same grey. He topped six feet. Hazel eyes caught the light when he looked up. The silver signet on his right hand knocked against a glass as he set it down. He favoured his left leg when he moved, weight shifted off the old knee wound from Prague. Aurora Carter measured five six in her socks. Straight black hair cut at the shoulder brushed her collar. Bright blue eyes sat cool in her face. On her left wrist the small crescent scar caught the bar light, pale against skin. She still wore the red jacket from the Golden Empress, the zip half down, the Yu-Fei Cheung logo creased at the back. Her flat above the bar waited cold, but she had not gone up yet. "You had a late run." "The last drop was Kentish Town. Lift out. Bus back." Silas slid a glass of water toward her. His ring clicked on the wood. "You eat?" "Later." The door opened again. Cold air cut in. A woman stepped inside and shook rain from a dark wool coat. She had blonde hair cut short now, pixie style, and a sharp black blazer over a white shirt. A leather bag hung from her shoulder. She looked around the room as if she owned a checklist and this place failed it. Rory froze with the glass half to her mouth. The woman saw her. Her mouth opened. Her hand tightened on the bag strap. "Rory?" Eva's voice cracked on the single word. Rory set the glass down. Water slopped over the rim. "Eva." Silas looked between them. He wiped his hands on a cloth and stepped back, gave the bar over to them without a word. Eva took two steps in and stopped. She laughed, a short sound with no mirth in it. "Christ. It is you." "You cut your hair." "You kept yours. Same jacket though? No. Not that one. You had that blue parka in school. You lived in that thing." Rory touched the red sleeve. Her fingers found the zip pull. "This is work. Delivery." "Eva Hughes now. Well. Eva Hart. I married. You heard?" "No." Eva's coat dripped onto the floor. She did not take it off. Her eyes ran over Rory, head to foot, and back up. "You look the same. You look—" "I look tired. Say it." "You look tired." Silas placed a coaster on the bar. The soft thud drew Eva's glance. "Drink? On the house for old friends," Eva's smile flickered at him and returned to Rory. "Wine. White. Whatever you have." Rory kept the water. Her left hand curled round the glass, thumb over the scar. Eva perched on the stool next to her. The stool wobbled. Eva caught the bar edge. "Cardiff feels so far from here. Does it feel far to you?" "Far enough I don't hear Dad's court voice in my head every morning." Eva laughed. The laugh landed better this time. "Brendan Carter. God. He terrified us. And your mum? Mrs Ellis with the red pen?" "She still teaches. Year six. She sends me photos of spelling tests." "She always liked me more than you." "She did." Silence stretched. The bar hummed with low talk and glasses. Rain hit the window in bursts. Eva rolled the wine stem between thumb and forefinger. "You vanished. One day you were there and the next you were not. No text. No call. I went to your house and Jenny said you went to London. That was it." Rory stared at the maps on the wall. One showed the Thames with inked routes over it. "I left in a hurry." "I know. Evan. We all knew." Rory's jaw set. The name sat between them like a spill. "You told me to go. You said London, come to me. You said your flat had space." Eva's face flushed. "I did. I did say that." "You had that flat in Cathays with Mia. You said I could sleep on the sofa till I sorted a job." "I remember." "So I bought a ticket. I stood at Central Station with one bag. I called you. You did not pick up. For three days you did not pick up." Eva's hand flew to her mouth. Her eyes went wide and wet. "Rory—" "Yu-Fei took me in. Gave me a room out back and shifts on the bike. That was four years ago. Four years." "I was in a bad place. My mum was ill. I—" "You married." Eva flinched. The wine trembled in the glass. "That came later. Hart. He works in finance. We live in Clapham now. Two bedrooms. Garden. You would hate the garden. All that decking." Rory gave a short laugh. The sound hurt her throat. "I would." Eva leaned in. Her voice dropped. "I thought about you. Often. I drove past your old street last Christmas. I saw your mum at Tesco. She said you were in London, doing law? She said you were at Cardiff still?" "I left Cardiff Uni. Pre-Law. I left all of it." "But you wanted that. You wanted chambers. You argued cases in the kitchen for fun." "That was Dad's want. Not mine." Eva stared at her. The short blonde hair made her eyes look larger, older. "You look different. Not your face. Your stillness. You had that buzz. You talked fast, hands everywhere. Now you sit like—" "Like I work nights and sleep days?" "Like you take up less room." Rory turned the glass in a slow circle. Light refracted through water onto her scar. "You look different too. You look pressed. Ironed." Eva smoothed her blazer. Her nails were clean, pale polish. "Hart likes pressed. I like pressed now. I run a gallery shop. Admin. Lots of emails." "You hated emails. You said you wanted to paint." "I did. I do. On Sundays." The word Sundays hung there. Both of them heard the echo of sixth form art rooms, paint under nails, canvases propped against lockers. Rory's throat worked. "You never came. After. Not once." Eva's eyes filled. "You never answered my last message. I sent one. After I got my head straight. I said come, door's open. You left me on read." "I did not want open doors. I wanted a door you held open when I was on the street." Silas set down a small plate with peanuts. He did not look at either of them. His limp carried him to the far end of the bar where he lifted a crate. Eva watched him go. Her shoulders sank. "I failed you. I know it." Rory picked up a peanut. She set it down again. "I stood on that platform and watched the board flick. Cardiff to Paddington. I thought if I got here, we would be us again. Two beds, cheap noodles, that mix tape you made with all the Smiths songs." Eva's mouth twisted. "I still have that tape. No player. But I keep it." "You have a garden." "I have a garden." Rory's fingers found the crescent scar and traced it. Childhood fall, Cardiff pavement, Evan had not given her that one. That one was hers alone. "Do you remember when we cut class and went to the bay? You dared me to swim and I did with my uniform on." "You came out blue. Jenny grounded you for a week." "You brought me soup through the window." Eva reached out. Her hand stopped short of Rory's arm. She pulled it back to her own glass. "I wanted to be the person you could call. I wanted to be good at that." "You were good at it. For sixteen years." "And then not when it mattered." Rory exhaled. The bar air felt less close now, or she had grown used to it. "You know what Evan said when I told him I was leaving? He said no one waits in London. He was right." Eva's face hardened. "Don't give him that. Don't give him right." "I give him nothing. He stays in Cardiff." They sat side by side and faced the bar, not each other. The maps on the wall blurred in Rory's peripheral vision. The neon sign buzzed above the door, green light stuttered on glass. Eva lifted her wine. "Are you happy? With the bike and the flat and—" "I am awake. I am not scared to check my phone. That counts." Eva nodded. Her eyes shone. She set the wine down without drinking. "Do you want me to go?" Rory looked at her. Full look, blue eyes direct, black hair tucked behind one ear. "No. Stay. Have the wine. Tell me about the decking." Eva let out a wet laugh and wiped under her eye with a knuckle. "It warps when it rains. Hart hates it. He says we should replace it with stone." Silas returned, cloth over his shoulder. He refilled Eva's glass without request. The signet on his right hand caught the bar light again. "You two need food? Kitchen still open." Rory glanced at Eva. Eva glanced at the peanuts. "Go on then. Something fried." Silas nodded and moved toward the back, past the bookshelf that hid the back room. His left leg dragged a fraction before he caught rhythm. Eva turned on the stool. Her knee brushed Rory's. "You live above here?" "Second floor. One window. Fire escape." "Can I see it sometime?" Rory considered. The scar on her wrist showed white when she flexed. "You can see it now if you want. After we eat." Eva's hand found Rory's for a second. Warm, quick press, then gone. "I want that."
created_at"2026-09-03T08:24:43.506Z" 9/3/2026, 8:24:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1712
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1712
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"measured"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"trembled"
5"echo"
6"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1712
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount924
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity3.03
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Prague1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Rory22
Eva28
Thames1
Sundays1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Silas7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Rory"
6"Eva"
7"Sundays"
8"Evan"
9"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Golden"
3"Thames"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1712
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences197
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs130
mean13.17
std12.22
cv0.928
sampleLengths
040
149
265
377
45
510
614
72
81
961
109
1114
121
137
1410
151
1623
1717
184
194
2022
2111
224
2310
241
2523
266
275
283
2913
307
319
325
3315
3416
3512
3613
378
3815
3912
407
412
4216
439
4432
4517
465
476
4811
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences197
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount927
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.014023732470334413
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean8.69
std6.38
cv0.734
sampleLengths
015
17
218
34
48
518
619
74
815
94
109
1116
1217
138
1410
158
1615
1722
1814
195
2010
218
226
232
241
254
264
2712
2818
297
3016
319
324
333
347
351
367
375
385
391
404
4119
427
4310
444
454
4622
475
486
494
45.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2639593908629442
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners52
29.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Bright blue eyes sat cool"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences114
matches
0"His auburn hair showed grey"
1"He topped six feet."
2"He favoured his left leg"
3"She still wore the red"
4"Her flat above the bar"
5"His ring clicked on the"
6"She had blonde hair cut"
7"She looked around the room"
8"Her mouth opened."
9"Her hand tightened on the"
10"He wiped his hands on"
11"She laughed, a short sound"
12"Her fingers found the zip"
13"She did not take it"
14"Her eyes ran over Rory,"
15"Her left hand curled round"
16"Her eyes went wide and"
17"Her voice dropped."
18"Her nails were clean, pale"
19"He did not look at"
ratio0.272
3.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences114
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory pushed through the door"
2"Heat hit her face."
3"The bar held low light"
4"The bar ran the length"
5"Silas stood behind it."
6"His auburn hair showed grey"
7"He topped six feet."
8"Hazel eyes caught the light"
9"The silver signet on his"
10"He favoured his left leg"
11"Aurora Carter measured five six"
12"She still wore the red"
13"Her flat above the bar"
14"Silas slid a glass of"
15"His ring clicked on the"
16"The door opened again."
17"A woman stepped inside and"
18"She had blonde hair cut"
19"A leather bag hung from"
ratio0.912
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.2696%