Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5ZF099Z2ECEAHS0HBE71A

Run Details

Duration:
1m 46s
Cost:
$0.021846
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Northern line dragged its roar across the ceiling and dropped grit from the vaults. Harlow Quinn ducked under the tape at the mouth of the disused Camden platform and tasted iron and ozone on the back of her tongue. Her torch cut a cone through the dark. Tile walls sweated. A row of dead ticket gates stood with their jaws open. Beyond them a man lay on his back across the concrete, arms flung wide, coat spread like a bat wing. DC Ellis waited beside the body with his notebook shut and his gloves still in his pocket. “You beat traffic.” “I walked the last half mile. Camden Road shut for works.” “Lucky you. Drunk took a header off the maintenance walkway, looks like. Cracked his skull on the gate. Council lads found him on the early check.” Quinn stepped past him and crouched. Her knees popped. The worn leather on her left wrist caught the torchlight as she steadied herself against the gate. Sharp jaw set. Brown eyes narrowed against the dark. Crop of salt-and-pepper hair damp with tunnel sweat. Eighteen years left a posture no office chair undid, spine straight even in a crouch. Blood mapped the man’s shirt in a black fan from sternum to chin. A slit opened his coat from left rib to right hip. Clean edge. No ragged tear. “Where is the blood on the floor?” “He bled out under the coat. Soaks in.” Quinn swept the beam left, then right. Concrete showed pale under a skin of dust. Footprints tracked in from the stairwell, two sets of boots, hers and Ellis’s, and the scuff of the council crew. No pool. No drag. No spatter arc on the gates. A wound that wide painted the ground. It always painted the ground. She rose and circled the gates. Her shadow climbed the tile and fell off. “How long since a train ran through here?” “Sixty years. Sealed in the sixties. Kids break in for tags.” “Show me tags.” The walls held no paint. No cans. No fag ends. No piss stink. The air smelled of burnt sugar and hot copper. Stalls left ghosts in the dust, long rectangles where something heavy had stood and then lifted, awning poles scoring half-moon grooves by the wall. Chalk marks looped across the tiles at ankle height, circles inside circles, broken where a shoe scuffed through. Ellis flipped his notebook open and shut. “Gang thing, then. Shanked upstairs and dumped down the vent. Kids move bodies for a laugh.” “With clean shoes?” Quinn tipped her torch to the dead man’s feet. Trainers white at the toe, laces knotted double, soles free of tunnel grime. Trouser cuffs dry. Fingernails packed with something green-black under the tips, like crushed herbs. His right fist clenched a disc of yellowed bone, thumb-sized, a hole bored through the centre. His left hand gripped a small brass compass. Verdigris ate the casing in green scabs. The face bore fine cuts, rings and bars and crossed lines, sigils etched around the rim. The needle shivered and held north-northwest, straight at the blank tile wall behind the gates. Quinn held her own compass from her pocket beside it, a standard Silva. Her needle swung to magnetic north, east of the dead man’s needle by a full hand span. “Iron down here pulls needles. Interference.” “This much?” A stairwell door banged. Footsteps rattled down. A short woman in a waxed jacket picked through the dark with a torch in one hand and the strap of a worn leather satchel full of books cutting into her shoulder. Curly red hair escaped a clip. Round glasses flashed. Freckles stood dark against pale skin in the torch glare. Green eyes fixed on the body and widened. “Back behind the line, love.” “I rang her.” Ellis lifted a hand. “British Museum. Restricted archives. She IDs odd bits for us.” “Eva Kowalski. Ancient History. I catalogue—” “You catalogue what no one else wants to touch.” Quinn straightened to her full height and looked down the extra half foot at the newcomer. Eva tucked hair behind her left ear and hitched the satchel higher. “Who moved him?” “No one moved him.” “Someone did.” Eva stopped at the edge of the dust and stared at the rectangles, the chalk, the bone disc, the compass. Her breath shortened. “You see it.” “I see a dead man with no scene.” Quinn pointed the beam at the scuff through the chalk ring. “What breaks a circle like that?” “A foot. A fight. A rush.” Eva stepped sideways, careful to place her boots on the concrete ribs between dust sheets, and peered at the bone disc without touching it. “That opens a door. You hand it over and you walk in.” “What door?” “The Market uses it. It sets up down here. It sold things under the street, charms and powders and names. Things the law bans and men crave. It holds one night and shifts with the full moon.” Ellis snorted. “Black market in a sealed Tube. Right. Stallholders with lanterns.” “Stallholders with no need for lanterns.” Eva nodded at the grooves by the wall. “Pole feet. Canvas weight. That rectangle held a table six feet long. That one held cages. See the scatter? Seed husk. Feather down.” Quinn swung her torch low. Pale flecks glinted in the dust where Eva pointed. “Full moon was last night.” “It was.” “So the Market stood here last night and gone by dawn.” Eva tucked hair behind her left ear again and crouched over the compass. “May I?” “Gloves.” Eva snapped on latex from her pocket and lifted the brass case by its edge. The needle held its line, steady as a finger, toward the blank wall. “It finds rifts. Tears. Doors too thin. A Shade artisan built the casing to hold the charge. The sigils keep it from burning out the bearer.” “A man bleeds out and clutches a toy.” “He clutched a tool. He felt the tear open and he reached for the one thing that showed the way out.” Quinn took the compass and weighed it in her palm. Cold bit through her glove. The needle ticked a degree west and settled again. “You handle a lot of dead men’s toys for an archivist.” “I handle books men died writing.” Quinn turned the dead man’s cuff back. A stamp marked the inner wrist in violet ink, a crescent cut by a key. Fresh. Last night fresh. “Entry mark?” Eva leaned in, glasses low on her nose. “Buyer. Seller marks sit on the right hand.” Quinn checked the right hand. The bone disc filled the palm. Under the thumb a burn blistered the skin in a straight line, as if a hot wire had kissed it. “He paid. He argued. The circle broke.” Ellis spread his hands. “Or he bought bad gear and dropped dead in an alley and his mates dumped him where no camera sees. Alchemical substances, you said. Fentanyl with glitter.” “Fentanyl leaves foam. Needle tracks. A smell. This man smells of rosemary and smoke.” Quinn pressed two fingers to the wound edge and lifted. The flesh parted without seep or clot. The shirt fibres stood fused along the cut, melted, not sliced. The skin underneath pearled white. “No blade did this. Heat did this. Heat with an edge.” She remembered another platform three years back, another white face, DS Morris with his coat fused to his chest and no blood on the brick and a report that read misadventure because no other word fit. Her watch ticked loud in the quiet. Ellis saw her face and softened his stance. “Harlow. We log it as suspicious death, post-mortem, toxicology. No need to build a cathedral.” “We log what the dust says.” Quinn walked the line of stall ghosts to the blank wall where the needle pointed. Tiles ran floor to ceiling, grimed, hairline cracks threading through. She laid her palm flat. Cold sucked at her skin. A seam breathed faint warm air against her cheek, a vertical line no wider than a hair, straight as a rule from knee height to overhead. “Ellis. Light here.” The beam struck the tiles. The seam vanished under direct glare and reappeared at the edge of vision. “Subsidence crack.” “Subsidence cracks run with stress. This runs plumb.” Eva joined her, satchel banging her hip, and ran a fingertip beside the seam without touching. “A rift sat here. It opened and it shut. The compass still tastes it.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"magnetic"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"standard"
2"magnetic"
3"footsteps"
4"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"fist clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1418
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount949
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Northern1
Quinn13
Camden1
Ellis7
Silva1
Eva9
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Ellis"
2"Silva"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.815
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1418
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean16.49
std16.18
cv0.981
sampleLengths
040
142
217
33
411
526
658
729
87
98
1057
1114
128
1311
143
1564
167
1716
183
1936
2062
2130
226
232
2466
255
263
274
2810
296
309
3128
323
334
342
3523
363
378
3811
396
406
4124
4212
432
4437
452
4610
476
488
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences147
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount955
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.008376963350785341
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010471204188481676
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean9.65
std7.14
cv0.74
sampleLengths
015
125
28
33
411
520
617
73
811
926
106
113
1217
133
146
158
1615
1713
1811
192
203
217
228
237
248
2520
262
272
286
297
305
316
328
338
3411
353
365
372
383
393
409
4124
4218
437
4416
453
469
4713
483
4911
72.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.47619047619047616
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners70
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her torch cut a cone"
1"Her knees popped."
2"It always painted the ground."
3"She rose and circled the"
4"Her shadow climbed the tile"
5"His right fist clenched a"
6"His left hand gripped a"
7"Her needle swung to magnetic"
8"Her breath shortened."
9"She remembered another platform three"
10"Her watch ticked loud in"
11"She laid her palm flat."
ratio0.135
44.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences89
matches
0"The Northern line dragged its"
1"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
2"Her torch cut a cone"
3"Tile walls sweated."
4"A row of dead ticket"
5"DC Ellis waited beside the"
6"Quinn stepped past him and"
7"Her knees popped."
8"The worn leather on her"
9"Brown eyes narrowed against the"
10"Crop of salt-and-pepper hair damp"
11"Blood mapped the man’s shirt"
12"A slit opened his coat"
13"Quinn swept the beam left,"
14"Concrete showed pale under a"
15"Footprints tracked in from the"
16"A wound that wide painted"
17"It always painted the ground."
18"She rose and circled the"
19"Her shadow climbed the tile"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She remembered another platform three years back, another white face, DS Morris with his coat fused to his chest and no blood on the brick and a report that rea…"
1"Eva joined her, satchel banging her hip, and ran a fingertip beside the seam without touching."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.6401%