Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K628TXY8E9N65WMCBCBM9Z

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Duration:
2m 6s
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$0.031670
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"You took your time." I undid the third deadbolt and pulled the door inward. Lucien Moreau filled the hall frame, too tall for Eva's narrow landing, his shoulders dusted with Brick Lane grime. He said nothing at first. His gaze ran down my face and stopped at my mouth. "Lost the key." "Changed the locks." Ptolemy wound around my ankles and hissed. The tabby cat hated strangers. He hated Lucien more than most. His tail puffed to twice its girth and he backed under the bookcase. Lucien stepped inside without an invitation. He always did that. He brought the smell of cold air and expensive cologne and the curry house below with him. Cumin and lamb fat clung to the wool of his tailored charcoal suit. I shut the door and shot all three bolts home. My fingers knew the rhythm by heart. Top. Middle. Bottom. "You look thin." "You look sober." He smiled with one corner of his mouth. His eyes caught the hall light. One amber, one black. The black one drank everything. In Marseille bars he passed it off as a trick of birth. I knew better. I knew about Avaros. I knew about the demon father who gave him perfect French and perfect lies in four languages. He leaned his ivory handled cane against the wall. He never went anywhere without it. Thin blade slept inside the shaft. I had seen him draw it once in Silas bar, fast as a laugh. "Eva is out." "I know." "Then you came for me." "Oui." The flat pressed in around us. Cramped one bedroom above the curry house, every shelf bowed. Eva stacked books on books, scrolls on top of research notes, tea mugs balanced on grimoires. The air tasted of paper dust and turmeric rising through the floorboards. A string of fairy lights buzzed over the sink. The bulb flickered, tick tock, tick tock, with the faulty wiring. Lucien picked his way through the piles with absurd grace for a man with a cane. He lifted a paperback with two fingers, glanced at the spine, set it down exactly crooked. "You left Cardiff in a hurry." "Cardiff left me first." "You left my place in a hurry also." That landed. Six months back. His rooms off Dean Street, high windows, clean sheets. I had woken with his arm heavy across my ribs and my phone lit with eleven missed calls from Evan. I had dressed in the dark and walked out before Lucien woke. No note. No merci. No au revoir. He remembered. Of course he remembered. Fixers collect debts and slights with equal care. "I called." "You sent a boy with a note." "I sent information. Evan's new address. His new girl's name. The court dates Brendan pulled for you." My father's name in his mouth soured my stomach. Brendan Carter, Dublin born barrister with a voice built for juries. He taught me to argue before he taught me to drive. Jennifer Carter, my mother, taught me when to stay silent. Both lessons failed me with Evan. Pre Law taught me the rest. Leave. Run. Do not look back. I crossed my arms. My left wrist turned out. The small crescent shaped scar caught the light, white against skin. Childhood accident, a broken fence in Cardiff. Lucien saw it and his throat moved. "You never answered." "I deliver noodles now. I live above a bar. I sleep on Eva's sofa when the pipes burst. Forgive me for poor correspondence." "You slice people with that tongue." "You liked it once." Silence stretched. Ptolemy growled from beneath the radiator. The pipes knocked. Someone downstairs shouted for extra naan in Bengali and someone else laughed. Lucien moved closer. He did not use the cane. He walked clean when he wanted to impress. Slicked back platinum blond hair, sharp jaw, that charcoal cloth stretched over his chest. He stopped a foot away. Too close for the size of the room. Close enough that I felt heat off him, unnatural heat, demon heat from Avaros blood. He reached out. He did not touch my face. His fingers hovered by my shoulder length straight black hair, then dropped. "Rory." "Do not." "Rory, listen." "No." "You owe me a conversation at least." "I owe Yu Fei Cheung three deliveries and Eva rent for the sofa. I owe you nothing." His amber eye narrowed. The black eye widened, pupil bleeding to the rim. When he felt strong emotion the demon side surfaced. "You use that name with me. Rory. Your friends call you Rory. To others you are Aurora Carter on a delivery roster. To some older things you are Laila. To one thing you are Malphora." My blood went cold. No one said that last name aloud. Not Eva. Not Silas. Not even Evan in his worst rages. "Where did you hear that." "Work." "Fixer work." "Information finds me." "Bullshit." He laughed, short and startled. He slipped into rapid French, a curse and a prayer tangled together, then caught himself and switched back to English with that polished public school edge his Marseille mother paid for. "Pardon. You anger me. You always angered me." "Good." "I came because men ask about a girl with bright blue eyes. Men who do not sweat. Men who pay in old coin." "London is full of men." "These men know about Cardiff. They know about Evan. They know the Golden Empress puts extra chilli oil in your bag because you flirt with the cook." My hands went numb. I gripped the edge of the table to hide it. A pile of Eva's notes slid and fanned across the lino. Hand drawn circles. Names crossed out. My name among them, underlined twice. Lucien saw it too. His expression shut like a ledger. "You told her to hide me." "Eva begged me. I refused at first." "Why." "Because hiding you meant losing you again." That hung there. Raw and stupid and honest. No broker polish on it. I hated him for saying it plain. I hated myself for the pull low in my belly, old attraction tangled with old hurt. I wanted to slap him and climb him in equal measure. I stepped back and hit the counter. A mug tipped. Cold tea spread across a scroll and I grabbed for it. Lucien grabbed at the same moment. His hand closed over my left wrist, over the scar. His skin burned. Mine went goosefleshed. We froze. Breath to breath. His thumb pressed once, deliberate, against the crescent mark. "Do you remember Dean Street." "Do not do this." "You stayed three nights. You slept with your shoes by the door. You said you felt safe for the first time since Evan broke your phone. Then you vanished." "I panicked." "You punish people who help you." "You sell secrets for a living." He released my wrist as if scalded. He stepped back and took up the cane. He twisted the ivory handle a quarter turn. Steel whispered inside wood. "You think I sold you." "I think everyone sells someone." "Not you. Never you." Ptolemy yowled. All the fur along his spine stood up. The fairy lights over the sink went out with a pop. The flat dropped into grey shadow lit only by the streetlamps through the blinds. The smell changed. Turmeric and paper dust drowned under sulphur and hot iron. Lucien's head snapped toward the door. Both eyes went black now, pits with no reflection. "Rory. Get behind me." "What." "Behind me. Now." Three heavy knocks shook the door on its hinges. Top deadbolt jumped. Middle deadbolt groaned. The wood around the bottom bolt splintered and white dust fell. A voice spoke through the crack, low and wet, mangling my name through teeth not built for English. "Malphora." Lucien drew the blade clean from the cane and pushed me hard against the bookshelf.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"perfect"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"flickered"
2"stomach"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences181
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1313
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
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wordCount969
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
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Eva4
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien11
Marseille2
Avaros2
French2
Silas2
Dean1
Street1
Evan3
Carter2
Dublin1
Law1
Cardiff1
Bengali1
English2
Ptolemy3
persons
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1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Carter"
5"Law"
6"Ptolemy"
places
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1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Avaros"
4"Silas"
5"Dean"
6"Street"
7"Dublin"
8"Cardiff"
9"Bengali"
10"English"
globalScore0.932
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1313
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean15.82
std16.63
cv1.051
sampleLengths
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216
33
43
531
640
720
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93
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132
145
151
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186
194
208
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2214
232
247
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306
314
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3359
3421
351
362
372
381
397
4017
4122
4235
4322
445
451
462
473
481
4936
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences181
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount969
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.025799793601651185
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0030959752321981426
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences181
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences181
mean7.25
std5.82
cv0.803
sampleLengths
04
110
219
35
411
53
63
77
85
96
1013
116
124
1317
1413
1510
167
171
181
191
203
213
228
236
244
255
2612
273
284
2917
309
316
326
3314
343
352
365
371
386
3910
4016
4112
429
4311
4416
4516
466
474
488
492
50.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.3812154696132597
totalSentences181
uniqueOpeners69
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Of course he remembered."
1"Too close for the size"
ratio0.018
48.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences114
matches
0"I undid the third deadbolt"
1"He said nothing at first."
2"His gaze ran down my"
3"He hated Lucien more than"
4"His tail puffed to twice"
5"He always did that."
6"He brought the smell of"
7"I shut the door and"
8"My fingers knew the rhythm"
9"He smiled with one corner"
10"His eyes caught the hall"
11"I knew better."
12"I knew about Avaros."
13"I knew about the demon"
14"He leaned his ivory handled"
15"He never went anywhere without"
16"I had seen him draw"
17"He lifted a paperback with"
18"His rooms off Dean Street,"
19"I had woken with his"
ratio0.43
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences114
matches
0"I undid the third deadbolt"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the hall"
2"He said nothing at first."
3"His gaze ran down my"
4"Ptolemy wound around my ankles"
5"The tabby cat hated strangers."
6"He hated Lucien more than"
7"His tail puffed to twice"
8"Lucien stepped inside without an"
9"He always did that."
10"He brought the smell of"
11"Cumin and lamb fat clung"
12"I shut the door and"
13"My fingers knew the rhythm"
14"He smiled with one corner"
15"His eyes caught the hall"
16"The black one drank everything."
17"I knew better."
18"I knew about Avaros."
19"I knew about the demon"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.1453%