| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "complex" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "e with panic" | | 1 | "was afraid" | | 2 | "h with terror" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1106 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.47% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1043 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 12 | | London | 2 | | Tube | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Urdu | 1 | | South | 1 | | Morris | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.925 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.904 | | wordCount | 1106 | | matches | | 0 | "not another market tunnel but a street" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 31.6 | | std | 24.25 | | cv | 0.767 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 78 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 83 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 3 |
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| 98.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "She rounded the corner and caught a glimpse of him—young, lean, dark hair plastered to his forehead—disappearing through a gap in a chain-link fence." | | 1 | "No—not gone." | | 2 | "The smell hit her next—damp stone, burnt herbs, and something sweet that clung to the back of the throat." | | 3 | "The walls were tiled like an old Tube station, but the tiles were wrong—some glowed faintly green, others shifted color when the light passed over them." | | 4 | "The tunnel curved, and with it came a change in the air—thicker, charged, scented with cinnamon and copper." | | 5 | "Faces turned to her—some human, some stretched into shapes that made her stomach clench." | | 6 | "The suspect hit a dead end—a solid wall of black stone veined with moving silver light." | | 7 | "A doorway opened, spilling the scent of rain into the chamber—impossible, because they were forty feet underground." | | 8 | "The logical part of her brain—the part that had solved seventeen case files by dogged procedure—screamed that the wall was a trick, a hidden door, a hallucinogen in the air." | | 9 | "Quinn’s radio squawked—uniforms arriving at the surface entrance, voices bouncing off wet tile." | | 10 | "Somewhere beyond it, thunder rolled, and the sound was wrong—too deep, too rhythmic, like laughter from the earth itself." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1061 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "young, lean, dark hair" |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.019792648444863337 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001885014137606032 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 9.88 | | std | 6.85 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 57.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.4107142857142857 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 70.18% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the tunnel opened." | | 1 | "Somewhere beyond it, thunder rolled," |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice cut through the" | | 1 | "He didn’t stop." | | 2 | "He vaulted a low railing" | | 3 | "Her left wrist ached where" | | 4 | "She rounded the corner and" | | 5 | "She squeezed through the gap," | | 6 | "She pushed the door." | | 7 | "She descended, flashlight beam probing" | | 8 | "She pressed forward, one hand" | | 9 | "He sent a crate crashing." | | 10 | "Her flashlight felt foolish against" | | 11 | "She broke into a run." | | 12 | "They cleared space because they" | | 13 | "Her quarry glanced back, and" | | 14 | "He wasn’t afraid of her." | | 15 | "He was afraid of what" | | 16 | "He spun, chest heaving, and" | | 17 | "He pulled out a small" | | 18 | "His voice cracked, accent local," | | 19 | "He didn’t answer." |
| | ratio | 0.284 | |
| 44.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped" | | 2 | "The suspect was a wraith" | | 3 | "Her voice cut through the" | | 4 | "He didn’t stop." | | 5 | "He vaulted a low railing" | | 6 | "Her left wrist ached where" | | 7 | "She rounded the corner and" | | 8 | "The metal rattled a frantic" | | 9 | "She squeezed through the gap," | | 10 | "The alley dead-ended at a" | | 11 | "A rusted metal door stood" | | 12 | "The air around the doorway" | | 13 | "The rain seemed to hesitate," | | 14 | "Quinn drew her flashlight and" | | 15 | "She pushed the door." | | 16 | "The hinges moaned." | | 17 | "Stairs dropped into darkness, the" | | 18 | "The smell hit her next—damp" | | 19 | "She descended, flashlight beam probing" |
| | ratio | 0.832 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped through ankle-deep puddles, each stride a fresh impact that shivered up her spine." | | 1 | "The suspect was a wraith in a dark jacket twenty yards ahead, weaving between late-night pedestrians who scattered with curses and flailing umbrellas." | | 2 | "Stalls cobbled from rusted Tube carriages and tarpaulin sprawled across the old platform in a labyrinth that shifted as she watched." | | 3 | "Faces turned to her—some human, some stretched into shapes that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "The cages pressed close, their occupants silent except for a low, rhythmic clicking that matched her own heartbeat." | | 5 | "The logical part of her brain—the part that had solved seventeen case files by dogged procedure—screamed that the wall was a trick, a hidden door, a hallucinoge…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |