Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K9Q41CEE7MF7B5Y19HAVZS

Run Details

Duration:
2m 27s
Cost:
$0.002149
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks crowded closer the deeper they walked, branches knitting overhead until they swallowed London's grey afternoon whole. Aurora counted her steps against the rhythm of her own pulse. One hundred and twelve. One hundred and thirteen. Nyx drifted at her shoulder, a column of living shadow that refused to settle into any single shape. Their violet eyes flickered like embers in a dying fire. "You feel it?" they asked. "The ground. It stopped being ground." Aurora looked down. The path beneath her boots had changed from packed earth to something smooth as river stone — dark, polished, veined with silver threads that pulsed in a slow rhythm, like the breath of a sleeping creature. She crouched and pressed her palm flat. Cold. Humming beneath her fingers, a song she felt in her teeth. "Where are the boundary stones?" Nyx pointed back. The cairn they had passed — the marker that should have defined the clearing's edge — stood twenty feet behind, its stacked stones arranged in a pattern she did not remember building. And above it, the sky had gone wrong. Aurora's breath caught. The canopy had opened into a dome of deep violet, shot through with constellations she had never seen: a spiral of white stars, a loose cluster of amber lanterns drifting in slow circles, a scattering of red sparks that blinked out and rekindled. The sun still burned somewhere — she felt its warmth on her arms — but the light fell sideways, casting shadows that ran against the logic of every direction she knew. Nyx's silhouette rippled. "We crossed." "The stones marked the boundary. We walked straight through them." "The grove decided we were worth letting in." Aurora pressed a hand to her chest. Beneath her jacket, the Heartstone pendant pulsed with a warmth unlike the hungry heat it carried near Hel portals. This one felt like recognition. She drew it out, let it catch the falling light — the deep crimson gem glowed from within, painting her fingers in soft red. Wildflowers bloomed at her feet. She had not seen them arrive. They stood knee-high, a riot of colours outside any natural palette. Translucent blue blooms that glowed faintly in the grove's half-light. Petals like spun silver, trembling without wind. Flowers that shifted hue as she watched — peach bleeding into violet, then into a green that existed nowhere in nature. The air smelled of honey and rain and something sharp she could not name. Sweet ozone. The scent of a storm that never broke, preserved in glass. "How long have we been inside?" she whispered. Nyx's form solidified into a suggestion of a figure — tall, narrow, cloaked in shadow so dark it drank the violet light. "An hour. A minute. Three days. The grove decides." "That is not an answer." "It is the only honest one available." Nyx turned their head, a gesture that conveyed unease even without a face. "I have lived between realms for four centuries. This is not the between." A pause. "Between is empty. This place is full. The difference between a door and a house." Aurora let the pendant fall against her collarbone and walked on. The path wound between ancient oaks, trunks as thick as cottages, bark furrowed grey with centuries. Some had grown so old their lower branches bent to touch the earth, sank roots, and rose again — a labyrinth of living wood, each tree an ancestor of itself. The ground underfoot shifted from smooth stone to moss so deep her boots sank at every step. The moss was warm. Like the flank of a sleeping animal. Like something that might wake. A sound drifted through the trunks ahead — delicate, crystalline, the shimmer of chimes. Not birdsong. The way she imagined stars might sound if they had voices. "Did you hear—" "Yes." Nyx's voice dropped. "We are not alone." The trees opened into a clearing. Aurora stopped at the edge. A pool lay at its centre, so still and so clear it reflected the violet sky like a second world beneath the surface. Around it grew a ring of flowers she recognised from a book her mother had kept — fae roses, but the book had shown only painted imitations. The real ones moved. Petals turned toward her as she approached, every stem bending, every bloom tracking her like sunflowers chasing the sun. "They are watching you," Nyx said. "They are flowers." "They are looking at you, Aurora." She had no reply for that. The air turned warmer, heavier, layered with woodsmoke and the scent of dried herbs. Beyond the pool stood a low roundhouse woven from willow and oak, its roof thatched with living moss and pale flowers. Smoke rose from the peak in a column that refused to scatter — it gathered into a neat spiral, as if the air above the roof had solidified. A figure stepped from the doorway. She was small, silver-haired, robed in grey that moved around her like water. She crossed the clearing and left no footprints on the moss. She stopped at the pool's edge. Her eyes were pale lavender, and when they settled on Aurora, the grove seemed to hold its breath. "You came through the gate," the woman said. Her voice carried the deep ring of a bell that had been sounding for three centuries. "Most do not find it twice." "You are Isolde." "I am called that." She smiled, warm and utterly unreadable. "And you carry a gift from hands you do not know, seeking answers to questions you have not yet learned to ask." Aurora touched the pendant. Its warmth swelled toward the Seer, pulsing in time with her heartbeat. "I need to know what this is. Where it came from." Isolde's gaze moved to Nyx. The Shade flickered — not by choice, but as though the Seer's attention itself unsettled the fabric of what they were. "You," Isolde said, "are far from where you began, Aldric." Nyx flattened. The shadows composing them drew tight and dark, until they were a void against the grove's impossible light. "That name has not been spoken in a long time." "Names remember their owners." Isolde turned and gestured toward the roundhouse. "Come inside. The grove has given you more hours than it gives most, but even a Fae-touched afternoon ends." Aurora hesitated at the threshold. She looked back at the pool, at the flowers still turned toward her, at constellations wheeling in a sky that had no right to exist. The grove pressed against her — a held breath, an attention with no face. She stepped through the door.
created_at"2026-09-03T09:31:06.171Z" 9/3/2026, 9:31:06 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1091
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1091
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"furrowed"
count1
5
word"crystalline"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"unsettled"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flickered"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"furrowed"
5"crystalline"
6"unreadable"
7"unsettled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1105
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount903
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Aurora9
Heartstone1
Hel1
Nyx9
Seer2
Shade1
Isolde3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Seer"
3"Shade"
4"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.905
wordCount1105
matches
0"not by choice, but as though the Seer's attention itself unsettled the fabric o"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"threads that pulsed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean24.56
std22.97
cv0.935
sampleLengths
037
128
211
358
45
543
677
75
810
98
1055
115
1282
138
1431
155
167
1743
1811
1979
2027
213
228
2311
2473
256
263
276
286
2963
306
3124
3224
3330
343
3532
3616
3711
3826
3910
4030
414
4226
4344
445
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences98
ratio0.122
matches
0"The path beneath her boots had changed from packed earth to something smooth as river stone — dark, polished, veined with silver threads that pulsed in a slow rhythm, like the breath of a sleeping creature."
1"The cairn they had passed — the marker that should have defined the clearing's edge — stood twenty feet behind, its stacked stones arranged in a pattern she did not remember building."
2"The sun still burned somewhere — she felt its warmth on her arms — but the light fell sideways, casting shadows that ran against the logic of every direction she knew."
3"She drew it out, let it catch the falling light — the deep crimson gem glowed from within, painting her fingers in soft red."
4"Flowers that shifted hue as she watched — peach bleeding into violet, then into a green that existed nowhere in nature."
5"Nyx's form solidified into a suggestion of a figure — tall, narrow, cloaked in shadow so dark it drank the violet light."
6"Some had grown so old their lower branches bent to touch the earth, sank roots, and rose again — a labyrinth of living wood, each tree an ancestor of itself."
7"A sound drifted through the trunks ahead — delicate, crystalline, the shimmer of chimes."
8"Around it grew a ring of flowers she recognised from a book her mother had kept — fae roses, but the book had shown only painted imitations."
9"Smoke rose from the peak in a column that refused to scatter — it gathered into a neat spiral, as if the air above the roof had solidified."
10"The Shade flickered — not by choice, but as though the Seer's attention itself unsettled the fabric of what they were."
11"The grove pressed against her — a held breath, an attention with no face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount892
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02242152466367713
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004484304932735426
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean11.28
std8.44
cv0.749
sampleLengths
018
111
24
34
418
510
65
76
83
936
107
111
1211
135
143
1532
168
173
1843
1931
203
212
2210
238
247
2519
265
2724
285
296
3011
3110
327
3321
3414
352
3611
378
3822
399
405
417
4213
4315
4415
4511
4616
4730
4817
494
60.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.41836734693877553
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences69
matches
0"Their violet eyes flickered like"
1"She crouched and pressed her"
2"She drew it out, let"
3"She had not seen them"
4"They stood knee-high, a riot"
5"She had no reply for"
6"She was small, silver-haired, robed"
7"She crossed the clearing and"
8"She stopped at the pool's"
9"Her eyes were pale lavender,"
10"Her voice carried the deep"
11"She smiled, warm and utterly"
12"Its warmth swelled toward the"
13"She looked back at the"
14"She stepped through the door."
ratio0.217
32.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences69
matches
0"The oaks crowded closer the"
1"Aurora counted her steps against"
2"Nyx drifted at her shoulder,"
3"Their violet eyes flickered like"
4"Aurora looked down."
5"The path beneath her boots"
6"She crouched and pressed her"
7"Nyx pointed back."
8"The cairn they had passed"
9"Aurora's breath caught."
10"The canopy had opened into"
11"The sun still burned somewhere"
12"Nyx's silhouette rippled."
13"Aurora pressed a hand to"
14"This one felt like recognition."
15"She drew it out, let"
16"Wildflowers bloomed at her feet."
17"She had not seen them"
18"They stood knee-high, a riot"
19"Petals like spun silver, trembling"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The cairn they had passed — the marker that should have defined the clearing's edge — stood twenty feet behind, its stacked stones arranged in a pattern she did…"
1"The canopy had opened into a dome of deep violet, shot through with constellations she had never seen: a spiral of white stars, a loose cluster of amber lantern…"
2"The sun still burned somewhere — she felt its warmth on her arms — but the light fell sideways, casting shadows that ran against the logic of every direction sh…"
3"Translucent blue blooms that glowed faintly in the grove's half-light."
4"Nyx turned their head, a gesture that conveyed unease even without a face."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.357
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.071
82.8237%