| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the chairs pushed back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 95.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1221 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1221 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "crystal" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "grave" | | 14 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1234 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 991 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.81 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Shade | 2 | | Aurora | 7 | | Nyx | 8 | | Roots | 1 | | Rory | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.93% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.621 | | wordCount | 1234 | | matches | | 0 | "not on trellises but in spiraling twists, climbing toward the sky in corkscrews t" | | 1 | "not wind, but something wet" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 34.28 | | std | 29.67 | | cv | 0.866 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 87 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 109 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 117 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 65 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 67 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 51 |
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| 85.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "being called" | | 1 | "were covered" | | 2 | "been replaced" | | 3 | "were laid" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.153 | | matches | | 0 | "Above her, the sky hung like heated glass — a warm, honeyed gold that had no business being called sky, no sun to mark its source, only a vast and patient glow that bathed everything in perpetual late-afternoon light." | | 1 | "The grass beneath her boots was thick and velvet-soft, cropped close like a bowling green, and it emitted a faint perfume every time she took a step — crushed mint and something floral tonight, something that had no name in any language she knew." | | 2 | "Others had patterns on their skins — faces, though hazy ones, too distorted to be truly human, too deliberate to be accident." | | 3 | "A mead-hall of a structure rose from a rolling meadow — a vast banquet carried on columns of carved stone, each pillar depicting a different creature mid-feast." | | 4 | "There was music — a plucked string instrument, a bone flute, a drummer keeping time with something that had a pulse." | | 5 | "The tables were laid with crystal and silver, the chairs pushed back, the wine fountains still running — wine that sloshed over the basins' rims and pooled in channels that ran beneath the tables, where rats the size of small dogs circled and drank, their coats sleek and glossy." | | 6 | "The orchard had rearranged itself — the rows now curved in a spiral she hadn't noticed before, a whirlpool of trees converging on a center point she couldn't see." | | 7 | "\"Portal,\" Nyx said, and she heard the change in their voice — a tightening, like a bowstring drawn." | | 8 | "Aurora looked down, and the grass between her boots rippled — not wind, but something wet and sinuous swimming just beneath the sod." | | 9 | "Nyx tilted their head — or what passed for a head." | | 10 | "The Shade pointed, and for the first time she noticed the grove at the far edge of the meadow — a cluster of stunted, gnarled trees growing from bare, cracked earth." | | 11 | "The moonsilver was cold against her palm — impossibly cold, the kind that healed as it ached." | | 12 | "\"Then let's be quick,\" she said, and stepped toward the blighted grove, leaving the banquet of the unpeopled hall behind her — but the music followed, that bonedrilling sweetness, all the way to the edge of the dead soil, where it faded at last, swallowed by the silence of the stones." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 737 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.025780189959294438 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009497964721845319 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 14.52 | | std | 11.51 | | cv | 0.793 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 49 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 87.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5529411764705883 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood at her shoulder," | | 1 | "She swallowed the cold knot" | | 2 | "It was hot, almost uncomfortably" | | 3 | "She gave them a look," | | 4 | "she said, forcing calm into" | | 5 | "she said, and stepped toward" |
| | ratio | 0.109 | |
| 32.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The rift tore itself closed" | | 1 | "Aurora stood at the edge" | | 2 | "The pendant against her collarbone" | | 3 | "The word drifted toward her" | | 4 | "They stood at her shoulder," | | 5 | "The Shade's voice was a" | | 6 | "The orchard stretched ahead of" | | 7 | "Peaches the size of her" | | 8 | "Apples with skin like polished" | | 9 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 10 | "Aurora forced herself to look" | | 11 | "The soil under the grass" | | 12 | "She swallowed the cold knot" | | 13 | "The orchard gave way to" | | 14 | "Vines grew not on trellises" | | 15 | "Some were translucent, the seeds" | | 16 | "Others had patterns on their" | | 17 | "Aurora averted her gaze and" | | 18 | "Nyx murmured, reading her expression" | | 19 | "Aurora stepped wider, keeping a" |
| | ratio | 0.855 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Above her, the sky hung like heated glass — a warm, honeyed gold that had no business being called sky, no sun to mark its source, only a vast and patient glow …" | | 1 | "The pendant against her collarbone pulsed with a low, satisfied warmth, as if it had been thirsting for this place." | | 2 | "The grass beneath her boots was thick and velvet-soft, cropped close like a bowling green, and it emitted a faint perfume every time she took a step — crushed m…" | | 3 | "Vines grew not on trellises but in spiraling twists, climbing toward the sky in corkscrews thick as her thigh, bearing clusters of grapes the size of her eyes." | | 4 | "There was music — a plucked string instrument, a bone flute, a drummer keeping time with something that had a pulse." | | 5 | "The moonsilver was cold against her palm — impossibly cold, the kind that healed as it ached." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |