Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K9RZDT73M3WYNA8EXT618G

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Duration:
59.0s
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$0.043720
Provider:
BaseTen

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The glass in Rory's hand was still warm from the washer when the door swung open. Green neon from the sign outside bled across the floorboards and caught the edge of a woman's raincoat. She stood in the doorway, unbuttoning the coat with one hand, glancing at her phone with the other. Then she lifted her head. Rory's fingers tightened on the pint glass. "Megan." The name escaped before Rory could stop it. Megan Vaughan's eyes found her. Three years collapsed into a single blink. "Rory Carter." Megan's voice had a new edge, clipped and polished. "Of all the bars in London." She crossed the room. Her heels made small, precise sounds against the wood. The last time Rory had seen her, Megan had worn Doc Martens and a denim jacket with a CND badge on the lapel. "You look—" Megan stopped, tilted her head. "Different." "So do you." Megan laughed, a short exhale. "I'm a solicitor now. Corporate law. Mergers and acquisitions." She delivered the words like a confession. "They make me wear these." She gestured at her suit, charcoal grey, tailored. Rory set the glass down on the bar. "You always said you'd rather set yourself on fire than work for a corporation." "I also said I'd never leave Cardiff." Megan's mouth twitched. "Here I am." Silas emerged from the back room, wiping his hands on a towel. He glanced between them, said nothing, and began polishing a row of tumblers. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light. "What are you drinking?" Rory asked. "Gin and tonic. Double." Rory reached for the gin. "You hate gin." "I know." Megan slid onto a barstool. "I've become the kind of person who drinks gin." The tonic fizzed over ice. Rory pushed the glass across the bar. "How long has it been?" Megan asked. "Three years. Give or take." "Three years, four months." Megan took the glass. "I counted." Rory said nothing. The jukebox in the corner clicked over to a new track, something low and bluesy. The smell of lemon polish and spilled beer hung in the air. "You vanished, Rory. One day you were there, the next your flat was empty. I called your mum. She said you'd moved to London. That's all she'd say." Rory wiped the bar with a cloth. "I needed to leave." "I know." Megan's voice dropped. "I knew about Evan." The cloth stopped moving. "You knew?" "Not everything. Enough." Megan stared into her glass. "I saw the bruises once. On your wrist. You said you'd caught it on a door." Rory's left hand moved to her sleeve, covering the crescent scar. "I should have done something." Megan's voice cracked. "I told myself it wasn't my business." "It wasn't." "It was. You were my best friend." The words sat between them, heavy as wet wool. Rory poured herself a glass of water. Her hand was steady. "Why are you here, Megan?" "I had a client meeting around the corner. Walked past this place. Saw the sign." Megan looked around at the old maps and black-and-white photographs. "Thought I'd have a drink. I didn't know you worked here." "I live upstairs. I deliver for a Chinese restaurant. Golden Empress." Megan's eyebrows lifted. "You were top of our class. You were going to be a barrister." "Plans change." "Evan changed them." Rory's jaw tightened. "Evan didn't change anything. I made choices." "Did you?" Rory turned away, slotted clean glasses into the rack above the bar. The clink of glass filled the silence. "I thought about you," Megan went on. "Every time I drove past your old street. Every time I heard a song you used to play. I thought about calling. I never did." "Why not?" "Shame." Megan swirled the gin in her glass. "I knew something was wrong and I looked the other way. That's not something you call to apologise for." Rory faced her again. "You didn't owe me anything." "We shared a flat for two years. We stayed up until three in the morning planning our futures. You were going to fight for the underdog. I was going to burn down the establishment." Megan's laugh was hollow. "Now I'm the establishment. And you're—" "Delivering noodles." "I was going to say 'free.'" Rory let out a breath. "I'm not free. I'm hiding." The words landed between them like a dropped coin. "Hiding from Evan?" Megan asked. "From everything. From Cardiff. From the person I was supposed to become." Rory picked up a damp cloth and began wiping the bar in slow circles. "You think I don't know what I gave up? I know. Every day." Rory remembered the poster above Megan's desk in their shared flat—a quote from some revolutionary, the edges curling from the damp. Megan had underlined the word "resist" in red pen. The pen had bled through the paper. She had stood on her bed to hang it, nearly put her foot through the plaster. Megan reached across the bar and caught Rory's wrist. The left one. Her thumb brushed the crescent scar. "I'm sorry." Rory pulled her hand back. "Don't." "Why not?" "Because if you apologise, I have to forgive you. And I'm not ready." Megan sat back. Her face shifted through several expressions before settling on something like acceptance. "Fair." She let out a breath. "Look at us. The radical and the runaway." "I prefer 'delivery person.'" "Same thing." Silas set a fresh bowl of peanuts on the bar between them. His eyes met Rory's for a fraction of a second. A question. Rory gave a small nod. He moved away, his left leg dragging. "You work for him?" Megan asked. "I rent the flat upstairs. He's—" Rory searched for the word. "He's Silas." "He looks like he's seen things." "He has." Megan drained her gin. The ice clinked against her teeth. "I should go. My train leaves in an hour." Rory nodded. "Cardiff?" "Cardiff." Megan stood, smoothed her skirt. "I'm married now. His name's David. We have a daughter. Seren." The name lodged in Rory's chest. Seren. Star. Megan had always said she'd name her first child after the night sky. "She's two," Megan continued. "She has your stubbornness. I don't know how that happened." Rory's throat closed. "I didn't know." "How could you? You left." The words weren't cruel. They were true. Megan pulled on her raincoat. She reached into her handbag and slid a business card across the bar. "If you ever want to talk. Or visit. Seren would like to meet her namesake's inspiration." Rory stared at the card. Megan Vaughan, Solicitor. The address was in Cardiff. "I can't." "I know." Megan walked to the door. She paused with her hand on the handle. "But the offer stands." The door swung shut. The green neon flickered once, then steadied. Rory picked up the business card. She turned it over in her fingers, then tucked it into her back pocket. Silas appeared at her elbow. "Old friend?" "Something like that." He nodded once and returned to his tumblers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Megan looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.268
leniency0.537
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.024
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flickered"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count2
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1175
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount673
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity4.46
worstName"Megan"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory28
Vaughan2
Megan30
Doc1
Martens1
Silas3
Solicitor1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Vaughan"
2"Megan"
3"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like acceptance"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1175
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs92
mean12.77
std10.95
cv0.858
sampleLengths
034
123
27
31
48
512
617
736
88
93
1026
118
1222
1313
1436
156
164
178
1816
1912
207
215
2210
2330
2428
2511
269
274
282
2924
3011
3115
322
337
349
3511
365
3736
3811
3916
402
413
4210
432
4419
4532
462
4727
489
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences155
ratio0.006
matches
0"Rory remembered the poster above Megan's desk in their shared flat—a quote from some revolutionary, the edges curling from the damp."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount676
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.01775147928994083
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0014792899408284023
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean7.58
std5.89
cv0.776
sampleLengths
016
118
218
35
47
51
68
75
87
911
106
114
129
1323
147
151
163
175
1816
195
208
218
2214
2310
243
2512
2613
2711
286
294
305
313
327
339
345
357
367
375
388
392
403
4115
4212
4328
447
454
465
474
484
492
43.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3096774193548387
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners48
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Then she lifted her head."
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences87
matches
0"She stood in the doorway,"
1"She crossed the room."
2"Her heels made small, precise"
3"She delivered the words like"
4"She gestured at her suit,"
5"He glanced between them, said"
6"Her hand was steady."
7"She had stood on her"
8"Her thumb brushed the crescent"
9"Her face shifted through several"
10"She let out a breath."
11"His eyes met Rory's for"
12"He moved away, his left"
13"They were true."
14"She reached into her handbag"
15"She paused with her hand"
16"She turned it over in"
17"He nodded once and returned"
ratio0.207
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences87
matches
0"The glass in Rory's hand"
1"She stood in the doorway,"
2"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
3"The name escaped before Rory"
4"Megan Vaughan's eyes found her."
5"Megan's voice had a new"
6"She crossed the room."
7"Her heels made small, precise"
8"The last time Rory had"
9"Megan stopped, tilted her head"
10"Megan laughed, a short exhale."
11"She delivered the words like"
12"She gestured at her suit,"
13"Rory set the glass down"
14"Megan's mouth twitched"
15"Silas emerged from the back"
16"He glanced between them, said"
17"The silver signet ring on"
18"Rory reached for the gin."
19"Megan slid onto a barstool"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Megan continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.122
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.024
83.4393%