Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K9WNTBMZFK11HBDFVZEKCB

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Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.000478
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had been threatening all evening, a low grey ceiling over Soho that never quite broke. The Raven's Nest smelled of old wood and spilled stout, and the jukebox in the corner was playing something slow and mournful that nobody had bothered to change. Rory was wiping down the far end of the bar, counting the hours until she could climb the stairs to her flat. Silas had gone to the back room an hour ago with a man in a long coat, and she'd been left to mind the handful of regulars nursing their pints in the gloom. The door opened and a gust of damp air came in with him. He shook the rain from his coat collar, glanced around the room with that particular look of someone who had wandered in by accident and was already reconsidering. She almost didn't recognise him. Five years and thirty pounds of London living had reshaped Dylan Marsh into something more solid, more certain. He walked to the bar and ordered a whisky, neat. His voice had dropped half an octave since Cardiff. She poured it, set it on the counter. He reached for the glass, looked up, and froze. "Rory?" The name hung between them like a stone dropped into still water. She kept her hand on the bottle. "Dylan." He stared at her, and she watched him doing the arithmetic in his head, trying to reconcile the girl he'd known in lecture halls with the woman standing behind the bar of a Soho dive. Her hair was shorter than it used to be. Her face was thinner. She'd stopped wearing the bright colours she used to favour back then. "Christ," he said, and the word came out soft, almost reverent. "I thought you were in Cardiff. I thought—" He stopped, shook his head. "I don't know what I thought." She poured herself a measure of something dark, not because she wanted it but because it gave her hands something to do. The bar was quiet enough that nobody was watching. The regulars knew better than to pry. "I left," she said. "Three years ago." "I know. I heard from— someone. You just vanished." He wrapped both hands around his glass, held it without drinking. "I looked for you, at first. Asked around. Nobody knew where you'd gone." She let the silence stretch, the way Silas had taught her. Let him fill it if he needed to. "I was going to ask you to be my second chair at a mock trial," he said. "Senior year. You would have demolished the prosecution. You always saw the hole in an argument before anyone else did." "I remember." "Do you remember the night we stayed up in the library? The statutory interpretation exam. You found that loophole in the property act and you wouldn't let any of us sleep until you'd explained it to us four times." A memory surfaced, unbidden. The fluorescent lights of the library, the taste of stale coffee, Dylan's handwriting all over a whiteboard. She'd been so certain of everything then. She'd known exactly who she was and what she was building towards. "Evan didn't like it when I stayed out late," she said, and the words came out flatter than she'd intended. "He didn't like a lot of things." Dylan's face changed. Something shifted behind his eyes, a shutter coming down. He looked at his drink, then back at her. "I always wondered," he said, quiet. "The way he was with you. The way you got quieter when he came around." She hadn't expected that. She'd spent three years assuming nobody had noticed, that she'd been the only one who saw the trap closing around her. The weight of it settled differently now, hearing it spoken aloud. "Why didn't you say anything?" she asked. He took a long drink, let the whisky burn. "I didn't know how," he said. "You'd have told me to mind my own business. You were always so—" He gestured vaguely, searching for the word. "Unshakeable. You never let anyone see you doubt anything. I figured you knew what you were doing." The irony sat between them, unacknowledged. She'd been so good at pretending that everyone believed her. She'd built a fortress out of confidence and then discovered she couldn't get out of it. "I'm a delivery driver now," she said. "For a Chinese restaurant two streets over." He blinked. The shift was too abrupt, too far from the careful lattice of expectation he'd built around the memory of her. "You're— what?" "Mostly it's just Chinese food. Sometimes other things. Silas sends me places." She nodded toward the back wall, where the bookshelf sat flush against the panelling. "I live upstairs." Dylan looked around the bar as if seeing it for the first time. The maps on the walls. The photographs of people who'd never smile again. The green light bleeding through the window from the sign outside. "Rory," he said slowly, "what happened to you?" She considered the question. The honest answer would take hours, and she wasn't sure he'd earned it. She wasn't sure anyone could understand it without living through it. "I stopped pretending," she said. "That's what happened." He was quiet for a long moment, turning his glass in his hands. The jukebox clicked over to something else, a fiddle tune that cut through the melancholy like a blade. "I'm a solicitor now," he said. "Commercial property. I'm good at it. I hate it." She almost laughed. The sound surprised her, surprising him too. She saw his face relax a fraction. "Then why do it?" "Because I built it," he said. "Because I told everyone I wanted it, and now I can't take it back without admitting I was wrong about my whole life." The words landed between them, heavier than either of them had expected. She knew that feeling. She knew the particular weight of a future constructed from other people's expectations, brick by careful brick. "I'm sorry," she said. "That I never said goodbye. That I just— disappeared." He looked at her, really looked at her, and she saw him taking in the scar on her wrist, the calluses on her hands, the way she stood with her weight shifted back, ready to move. "I'm sorry too," he said. "For not seeing what was in front of me. For not asking the question I knew the answer to." The rain started outside, finally, drumming against the windows. Silas emerged from the back room, nodded once at Rory, and limped behind the bar to fix himself a drink. Dylan watched him move, curiosity flickering across his face. "He's why you stayed," Dylan said. It wasn't a question. "He gave me a place to land," she said. "He didn't ask me to be anyone I wasn't." Dylan finished his whisky and set the glass down with a quiet click. "I have a train back to Cardiff in the morning," he said. "I come to London every few months for work. Maybe I could—" He stopped, unsure how to finish the sentence. "Maybe," she said. He nodded, pulled his coat tighter around his shoulders, and walked to the door. He paused with his hand on the handle, turned back. "For what it's worth," he said, "I always thought you were the bravest person I knew. I just never said it." He left before she could answer. The door swung shut behind him, and the rain kept falling, and Silas slid a fresh glass of water across the bar to her without a word. She picked it up and drank, and the taste of the old life faded a little more from her mouth.
created_at"2026-09-03T09:34:08.217Z" 9/3/2026, 9:34:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"he said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.511
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
92.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1284
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount912
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Dylan"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Dylan"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Dylan7
Marsh1
Cardiff1
Silas4
Rory2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Dylan"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Marsh"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if seeing it for the first time"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1284
matches(empty)
76.58% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"noticed, that she'd"
1"pretending that everyone"
2"knew that feeling"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean24.23
std15.47
cv0.638
sampleLengths
045
155
264
319
417
51
619
71
860
930
1038
117
1233
1319
1437
152
1639
1740
1827
1921
2021
2136
227
239
2443
2532
2614
2722
282
2929
3037
318
3228
338
3431
3515
3617
374
3829
3933
4013
4136
4224
4338
4410
4518
4613
4724
488
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"been left"
15.84% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was playing"
1"was wiping"
2"was already reconsidering"
3"was watching"
4"was building"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences111
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount912
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04057017543859649
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008771929824561403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean11.57
std7.9
cv0.683
sampleLengths
017
128
222
333
413
528
65
718
810
99
108
119
121
1312
147
151
1635
179
184
1912
2011
2113
226
2322
249
257
264
273
2820
2913
3011
318
3217
3320
342
3539
364
3717
387
3912
4020
417
423
439
449
456
4615
474
4821
4911
36.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.26126126126126126
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences73
matches
0"He shook the rain from"
1"She almost didn't recognise him."
2"He walked to the bar"
3"His voice had dropped half"
4"She poured it, set it"
5"He reached for the glass,"
6"She kept her hand on"
7"He stared at her, and"
8"Her hair was shorter than"
9"Her face was thinner."
10"She'd stopped wearing the bright"
11"he said, and the word"
12"He stopped, shook his head"
13"She poured herself a measure"
14"He wrapped both hands around"
15"She let the silence stretch,"
16"She'd been so certain of"
17"She'd known exactly who she"
18"she said, and the words"
19"He looked at his drink,"
ratio0.589
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences73
matches
0"The rain had been threatening"
1"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
2"Rory was wiping down the"
3"Silas had gone to the"
4"The door opened and a"
5"He shook the rain from"
6"She almost didn't recognise him."
7"He walked to the bar"
8"His voice had dropped half"
9"She poured it, set it"
10"He reached for the glass,"
11"The name hung between them"
12"She kept her hand on"
13"He stared at her, and"
14"Her hair was shorter than"
15"Her face was thinner."
16"She'd stopped wearing the bright"
17"he said, and the word"
18"He stopped, shook his head"
19"She poured herself a measure"
ratio0.973
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He shook the rain from his coat collar, glanced around the room with that particular look of someone who had wandered in by accident and was already reconsideri…"
1"He stared at her, and she watched him doing the arithmetic in his head, trying to reconcile the girl he'd known in lecture halls with the woman standing behind …"
59.78% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, and the word came out soft, almost reverent"
1"she said, and the words came out flatter than she'd intended"
2"he said, quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.422
leniency0.844
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.5677%