Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KA0NXNY8JMT7Z6SZT7QE5K

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.038910
Provider:
Sail Research

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the tape at the base of a maintenance stairwell and let the dark swallow the daylight. The air tasted of wet brick and old copper. She descended with one hand on the rail, her worn leather watch catching the emergency lights. Behind her, a constable’s torch carved loops through the dust. “How far down?” “Platform level. Mind the third step—it’s gone.” She shifted her weight. Rust flaked under her shoes. At the bottom, a steel door stood open, propped with a bone-white wedge. Harlow paused. The wedge had the smooth patina of something handled for years, but it held the door like any scrap of wood. “Who found him?” “Station maintenance. They came down to check a sewer smell.” Harlow stepped through into a broad vault that had never known a paying passenger. Arc lamps buzzed and pooled white light over the platform. Old tiles hung in cracked constellations. Stalls made from salvaged doors and theatre curtains lined the walls, their tables empty. At the centre, a body lay on its side. “Dr. Kowalski is already here,” the constable said. “DI Mercer called her from the British Museum.” Harlow’s jaw tightened. “She’s not a police officer.” “She’s consulting on the symbols.” Harlow walked toward the body. The platform floor had a skin of fine grit, and it showed every disturbance. The arc lamps had been placed after the fact, their cables cutting clean trails through the dust. Her own shoes left sharp impressions. She avoided the perimeter set with yellow markers. Eva Kowalski crouched near the dead man, her curly red hair clipped back, her round glasses low on her nose. A worn leather satchel rested against her knee, spilling books with titles too faded to read. She looked up and tucked a loose curl behind her left ear. “Detective Quinn.” Eva’s voice carried no surprise. “I was told you’d want the museum’s reading before the scene got trampled.” “Tell me what you see.” Eva pointed to the floor around the body. Someone had poured salt wide, but it was broken in two places. Symbols had been scratched into the tiles with something sharp. The cuts were jagged and white-edged, fresh enough to catch the light. “It’s a warding circle. The sigils are a corrupted variant of fifteenth-century alchemical script. This wasn’t a break-in gone wrong. It’s ritual.” Harlow said nothing. She circled the body. The dead man lay on his right side, one arm thrown over his head, the other tucked under him. A small brass compass sat just beyond his fingers, half-buried in the salt. Its casing had the green bloom of verdigris. “His name?” “Victor Ashe. Dealer in antiquarian scientific instruments. There’s a stall at the back with his name on a chalkboard.” “Who called it in?” “The maintenance crew saw the salt from the platform entrance. Thought it was a chemical spill.” Harlow crouched several feet away. The body had been arranged, not fallen. The man’s coat lay flat under him, but the hem was twisted against his movement. His shoes were clean. Too clean. The station grit went to the laces of everyone who had walked in, including Eva. Ashe’s soles were polished black leather with no dust in the treads. “His shoes didn’t walk here,” Harlow said. Eva frowned. “Maybe he was carried.” “Carried in, or placed after.” “The salt circle would have been broken by anyone who carried him.” Eva used the eraser end of a pencil to point toward the two gaps. “Whoever left broke the ward behind them.” Harlow moved closer to the wall. A dark stain spread low on the tiles, near the floor. The body lay a metre away, the wound on his temple too bloodless for the stain. The stain had a drip pattern that ran down, not splattered from impact. “Did the pathologist see this?” “Not yet. They’re waiting for your go-ahead.” “Have them photograph the wall before they move him.” Eva studied Harlow with a green-eyed, unguarded look. “You think the blood isn’t his.” “I think the body was moved.” Harlow straightened. “Lividity will tell us. His back would show pooling if he lay on it after death. But he’s on his side.” She turned to the compass. It lay beyond the fingers, as if it had rolled from his grip. The salt around it was disturbed in a pattern that did not match a roll. The grains had been swept into a shallow crescent, the kind made by a careful hand positioning an object. “Don’t touch it,” Eva said. Harlow pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her coat. “I wasn’t going to.” She knelt and picked up the compass. It was small brass, heavier than it looked, its face etched with protective sigils. The needle did not point north. It swung, trembled, then settled toward a black service tunnel at the far end of the platform. The casing was warm. “North must be that way.” Eva pointed. “Magnetic interference down here is normal.” Harlow glanced at her own watch. North lay behind them, toward the staircase. “It’s not pointing north.” Eva stood and dusted her hands. “A cheap compass. The market’s full of them.” “Not this one.” Harlow tilted the compass under the arc lamp. The sigils on the face matched some of the scratches on the floor. The verdigris had been worn smooth at the edges, but the needle’s pivot was clean. Recent handling. “The scratches on the floor were copied from this. Someone carved what they saw.” “That’s consistent with ritual preparation.” “Or staging.” Harlow held the compass out and walked toward the service tunnel. The needle stayed locked on the opening. When she stepped over a set of boot prints in the dust, the needle twitched. She stopped. The boot prints were not hers. They were large, deep at the toe, and they led away from the body. They ended at a blank wall where the tiles had been pulled loose and replaced. Harlow scanned the floor near the wall. A thin line of black grit marked the baseboard, as if something had been dragged over it. “These prints are fresh.” “Could be from the maintenance crew.” She shook her head. “They came in and left by the main entrance. These are toe-heavy, uneven spacing. Someone was carrying weight.” Eva moved beside her, peering at the dust. “Then where did they go? The wall’s solid.” Harlow ran her gloved hand along the edge of a tile. It shifted. She pressed, and a section swung inward on hidden hinges, revealing a narrow passage. Cold air spilled out, carrying stale water and hot copper. The compass needle pointed into the dark. “Everyone missed the second exit,” Harlow said. “And the boot prints.” Eva’s voice dropped. “That doesn’t explain the circle. Or the symbols.” “No.” Harlow stepped back and looked at the body, the broken salt, the bloodstain on the wall, the compass in her hand. “But it explains how the killer left without breaking the ward.” She turned the compass over. On the back, the brass was warm, and a residue had transferred to her glove—ash-like and metallic. The boots had tracked it from the tunnel. Harlow looked at the hidden door, then at the main staircase where the constable waited. “Seal this passage. No one goes in until forensic has been through.” The constable fumbled for his radio. Eva crossed her arms. “You’re thinking this was staged to look like a ritual.” Harlow did not answer. She watched the way the salt had been brokennot from the inside, but from the outside. Someone had stepped into the circle, arranged the body, and stepped back out. The two gaps matched a pair of strides. The third gap, near the compass, was smaller, made by a hand. Harlow looked at Eva. “You said the ward was broken behind him. If the killer came in through that passage, the ward was broken before he entered.” Eva pushed her glasses up. “From the outside?” “Which means the circle wasn’t meant to keep someone out.” Harlow turned the compass in her palm. The needle still pointed toward the hidden door. “It was meant to keep something in.” The arc lamps hummed. Dust hung in the air. Harlow crouched by the body again. The man’s face was slack, but the position of his left hand had been altered—the fingers curled inward, as if someone had pressed them into a fist after death. Under the edge of his sleeve, a small white object caught the light: a bone token, carved in a spiral. The same kind as the wedge propping the door. Eva’s breath hitched. “That’s a market token.” “Was it his?” “I don’t know.” Harlow did not move. The body, the compass, the boot prints, the hidden door. Each piece clicked into place, but not the story Eva had assembled. The symbols had been copied, the circle broken from outside, the blood left on a wall where no body lay. The scene had been dressed twice—once by the killer, and once by someone else.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Harlow stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.218
leniency0.436
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.036
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1517
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1517
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"etched"
2"trembled"
3"magnetic"
4"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1511
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
36.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1101
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.27
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow25
Quinn1
Kowalski1
Eva17
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.365
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.662
wordCount1511
matches
0"not from the inside, but from the outside"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean22.89
std19.43
cv0.849
sampleLengths
056
13
27
345
43
510
653
716
88
95
1050
1148
1220
135
1442
1522
1647
172
1819
194
2016
2160
227
236
245
2533
2646
275
287
299
3014
3129
3252
335
3414
3548
3613
3713
384
3914
4055
415
4237
4359
444
456
4622
4716
4844
4911
65.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount13
totalSentences115
matches
0"been placed"
1"was broken"
2"been scratched"
3"been arranged"
4"was disturbed"
5"been swept"
6"been worn"
7"been pulled"
8"been dragged"
9"been broken"
10"been altered"
11"been copied"
12"been dressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
70.52% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences158
ratio0.025
matches
0"On the back, the brass was warm, and a residue had transferred to her glove—ash-like and metallic."
1"She watched the way the salt had been broken—not from the inside, but from the outside."
2"The man’s face was slack, but the position of his left hand had been altered—the fingers curled inward, as if someone had pressed them into a fist after death."
3"The scene had been dressed twice—once by the killer, and once by someone else."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1110
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"North lay behind them,"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.017117117117117116
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009009009009009009
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean9.56
std5.67
cv0.593
sampleLengths
021
19
216
310
43
57
64
75
813
92
1021
113
1210
1314
1410
156
1614
179
188
198
203
215
225
235
2414
2517
266
278
2820
2916
3012
317
3213
335
348
3512
3610
3712
3822
393
404
4119
4213
438
442
4519
464
4716
485
497
58.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3860759493670886
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences104
matches
0"She descended with one hand"
1"She shifted her weight."
2"Her own shoes left sharp"
3"She avoided the perimeter set"
4"She looked up and tucked"
5"She circled the body."
6"Its casing had the green"
7"His shoes were clean."
8"She turned to the compass."
9"It lay beyond the fingers,"
10"She knelt and picked up"
11"It was small brass, heavier"
12"It swung, trembled, then settled"
13"They were large, deep at"
14"They ended at a blank"
15"She shook her head."
16"She pressed, and a section"
17"She turned the compass over."
18"She watched the way the"
ratio0.183
3.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences104
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"The air tasted of wet"
2"She descended with one hand"
3"She shifted her weight."
4"Rust flaked under her shoes."
5"The wedge had the smooth"
6"Harlow stepped through into a"
7"Arc lamps buzzed and pooled"
8"Stalls made from salvaged doors"
9"the constable said"
10"Harlow’s jaw tightened."
11"Harlow walked toward the body."
12"The platform floor had a"
13"The arc lamps had been"
14"Her own shoes left sharp"
15"She avoided the perimeter set"
16"Eva Kowalski crouched near the"
17"A worn leather satchel rested"
18"She looked up and tucked"
19"Eva’s voice carried no surprise"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A thin line of black grit marked the baseboard, as if something had been dragged over it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.145
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.6244%