Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KA3F297H81WKDCR77A3X30

Run Details

Duration:
53.9s
Cost:
$0.011466
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory’s fingers fumbled with the topmost deadbolt. The brass had gone slick from the curry-house steam that crept through the floorboards, a perpetual ghost of tikka masala and jasmine rice. The second bolt slid free with a rasp. The third stuck, as it always did, and she had to shove her shoulder against the doorframe to coax it loose. The door swung inward. Lucien Moreau stood in the cramped hallway, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other holding a manila envelope gone soft at the corners. His tailored charcoal suit drank up what little light spilled from the flat. The amber eye caught the glow first, molten and watchful. The black one revealed nothing at all. The tabby, Ptolemy, wound between Rory’s ankles and hissed. “Charming,” Lucien murmured. Rory’s throat closed. Six months since she’d seen him. Six months since the night she’d walked out of his office in Mayfair with his voice still coiled around her name. She’d left no forwarding address. She’d changed her delivery routes. She’d let Eva screen her calls. “How did you find me?” Lucien tilted his head, a faint crease appearing between his brows. “You’re working for Yu-Fei again. She owes me a favor.” “She sold me out for a favor.” “She assumed I meant you no harm.” His gaze drifted past her shoulder, scanning the cramped flat. Books stacked in teetering columns. Scrolls unrolled and pinned beneath coffee mugs. Eva’s research on fae bloodlines spilled across every surface like autumn leaves. “May I come in?” “No.” “Rory.” The sound of her name in that voice—low, accented, impossibly patient—sent a traitorous warmth down her spine. She hated it. She hated that he stood there looking like he’d just stepped out of a Savile Row fitting, as if the past six months had been nothing but a mild inconvenience. “What do you want, Lucien?” He lifted the envelope. “A job.” “I don’t work for you anymore.” “I’m not asking you to work for me. I’m asking you to read this.” He paused. “It concerns Eva.” The name hit like cold water. Rory’s grip tightened on the doorframe. Ptolemy, sensing the shift, retreated to the safety of a book tower. “What about Eva?” “May I come in?” he repeated, softer now. “I’d rather not discuss it in a hallway that smells of burnt ghee.” Rory held his gaze for a long moment. The heterochromatic eyes remained steady—one burnished gold, one fathomless black. She remembered nights spent studying that face, tracing the hard line of his jaw, the faint lines around his mouth that deepened when he lied. He wasn’t lying now. She stepped aside. Lucien crossed the threshold with the careful grace of a man who measured every movement. His cane tapped once against the warped floorboards. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. Rory closed the door and shot the deadbolts home, one by one. “You’re staying here,” Lucien observed. “Why does that matter?” “It doesn’t.” He set the envelope on the kitchen table, nudging aside a stack of Eva’s notes on demonic linguistics. His fingers lingered on a page covered in cramped handwriting. “Still trying to decipher Avarosan dialects without me?” “Eva doesn’t need you.” “I didn’t say she did.” Rory crossed her arms. “You said this was about her. So talk.” Lucien turned to face her. The small kitchen left nowhere to hide. The space between them shrank until she could smell his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, like woodsmoke after rain. “Eva’s been asking questions in places she shouldn’t,” he said. “Specifically, she’s been asking about the Ardent Court.” Rory’s pulse skittered. “She’s a researcher. That’s what she does.” “She’s an unbound human poking at a fae court that hasn’t made contact with Earth in three centuries.” Lucien’s voice hardened. “She’s lucky she still has her tongue.” The words settled between them like a thrown knife. Rory thought of Eva’s cramped flat, the deadbolts, the way her friend flinched at shadows since that business with the barghest in Whitechapel. “What did you find out?” Rory asked. “I found out that she put in a request at the Black Archive for the original treaty scrolls between the Ardent Court and the Seelie Crown. She signed her own name.” He tapped the envelope. “The Archive flagged it. The Ardent Court has watchers in the Archive.” “Watchers.” Rory’s mouth went dry. “What kind of watchers?” “The kind that don’t leave a paper trail.” Lucien picked up the envelope and held it out to her. “I pulled what I could. Names. Locations. Patterns. The Court’s been quiet, but Eva’s inquiry woke something up.” Rory took the envelope. It felt heavier than paper had any right to. “Why didn’t you go to Eva directly?” Lucien’s jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. “Because Eva would slam the door in my face. You know that.” “And you thought I wouldn’t?” “I hoped you wouldn’t.” He leaned back against the edge of the table, crossing one ankle over the other. The cane rested against his thigh. “You’re the only person she trusts without question. If you tell her to drop this, she might listen.” “Drop it?” Rory’s voice rose. “You want me to tell my best friend to abandon her research because some fae might get annoyed?” “Yes.” No hesitation. “The Ardent Court doesn’t get annoyed. They get even. Slowly.” Rory stared at the envelope in her hands. Her mind raced through half-formed plans—warnings she could give Eva, favors she could call in, places they could hide. London suddenly felt like a held breath. “Why do you care?” she asked quietly. Lucien didn’t answer right away. When she looked up, the amber eye had darkened to the color of old honey, and the black one seemed to twist like smoke. “Because she’s your friend,” he said. “And because I owe you.” “You don’t owe me anything.” “I owe you more than you know.” A muscle feathered in his cheek. “I never should have sent you into that auction house alone.” The memory flashed—the vaulted ceiling, the iron cage, the slaver’s voice echoing off marble. And Lucien’s face through the crowd, fighting to reach her. “I made it out,” Rory said. “You almost didn’t.” “But I did.” Lucien’s hand moved, a small aborted gesture, as if he’d meant to reach for her and thought better of it. The space between them thrummed with six months of silence. “I looked for you,” he said. “After. You vanished.” “I needed to vanish.” “From the people who wanted to hurt you. Not from me.” The words cut deeper than she wanted to admit. Rory set the envelope down on a stack of Eva’s books. Her fingers trembled, and she curled them into fists. “You kept things from me,” she said. “You used me as bait without telling me the full plan. You—” Her voice cracked. “You made me feel like I was just another asset you could deploy.” Lucien’s composure fractured, just for a second. Pain flashed across the sharp planes of his face. “Never.” “But you didn’t tell me.” “Because I couldn’t. If you’d known the full plan, the slaver’s truth-seeker would have pulled it from your mind.” He pushed off the table, closing the distance. “I made a choice. I chose your survival over your trust.” She flinched. “That wasn’t your choice to make.” “No. It wasn’t.” Lucidity bled through his voice. “And I’ve spent every day since regretting it.” Rory’s breathing went shallow. The flat was too small, too warm, too full of him. She could see the faint stubble along his jaw, the tired smudges beneath his eyes that even his meticulous grooming couldn’t hide. “You still should have come,” she whispered. “When?” “After. When I was piecing myself back together in Eva’s spare room, jumping at every sound in the street.” She swallowed hard. “I waited for a week. Then a month. Then I stopped waiting.” Lucien’s expression went very still. “I thought you didn’t want to see me. I thought chasing you would make it worse.” “So instead you let me think I was nothing to you.” “Rory.” Her name came out ragged. “You were never nothing to me.” The silence that followed felt alive, a dangerous current running between them. Ptolemy emerged from beneath the sofa and gave Lucien a baleful look before disappearing into the bedroom. Rory wanted to hate him. She wanted to hold on to the anger that had kept her upright through those first brutal weeks. But looking at him now—the cracked composure, the steady amber eye and restless black one—she realized the anger had been a dam, and it was leaking slowly into something far more terrifying. “I need to call Eva,” she managed. “I’ll wait.” Lucien stepped back, giving her space, and lowered himself into the room’s only chair. The cane leaned against his knee. He looked at home among Eva’s chaos, an impossible element among the paper and dust. Rory grabbed her phone from the counter. Her thumb hovered over Eva’s contact. But she didn’t dial. Not yet. “Lucien.” He looked up. “If you disappear again,” she said, “I won’t wait next time.” His lips curved, faint and humorless. “I understand.” She held his gaze across the tiny flat—six months of unanswered questions stacked between them like Eva’s books, precarious and waiting to fall.
created_at"2026-09-03T09:37:50.679Z" 9/3/2026, 9:37:50 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"she asked quietly [quietly]"
2"She swallowed hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.338
leniency0.675
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.075
87.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"marble"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"warmth"
2"down her spine"
3"tracing"
4"measured"
5"pulse"
6"raced"
7"echoing"
8"marble"
9"silence"
10"trembled"
11"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1554
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount989
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Rory19
Mayfair1
Eva9
Books1
Savile1
Row1
Whitechapel1
Lucien16
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Books"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Mayfair"
1"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.539
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a held breath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1554
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences162
matches
0"hated that he"
1"studying that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean18.28
std15.37
cv0.841
sampleLengths
059
14
258
39
43
546
65
721
87
945
101
111
1250
135
146
156
1619
1724
183
1921
2047
213
2228
2312
245
254
2638
274
285
2912
3030
3118
3210
3328
3432
357
3647
379
3837
3913
407
4117
425
4343
4423
4513
4634
477
4829
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs185
matches
0"wasn’t lying"
1"was leaking"
19.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences162
ratio0.043
matches
0"The sound of her name in that voice—low, accented, impossibly patient—sent a traitorous warmth down her spine."
1"The heterochromatic eyes remained steady—one burnished gold, one fathomless black."
2"The space between them shrank until she could smell his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, like woodsmoke after rain."
3"Her mind raced through half-formed plans—warnings she could give Eva, favors she could call in, places they could hide."
4"The memory flashed—the vaulted ceiling, the iron cage, the slaver’s voice echoing off marble."
5"But looking at him now—the cracked composure, the steady amber eye and restless black one—she realized the anger had been a dam, and it was leaking slowly into something far more terrifying."
6"She held his gaze across the tiny flat—six months of unanswered questions stacked between them like Eva’s books, precarious and waiting to fall."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1000
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.031
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean9.59
std6.8
cv0.709
sampleLengths
07
123
28
321
44
528
613
710
87
99
103
113
126
1321
145
155
166
175
1811
1910
207
2117
225
237
2412
254
261
271
2817
293
3030
315
324
332
346
3516
363
376
386
3912
403
418
4213
438
4410
4525
464
473
4815
498
38.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.24691358024691357
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences96
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit drank"
1"She’d left no forwarding address."
2"She’d changed her delivery routes."
3"She’d let Eva screen her"
4"His gaze drifted past her"
5"She hated it."
6"She hated that he stood"
7"He lifted the envelope."
8"he repeated, softer now"
9"She remembered nights spent studying"
10"He wasn’t lying now."
11"She stepped aside."
12"His cane tapped once against"
13"He set the envelope on"
14"His fingers lingered on a"
15"He tapped the envelope"
16"It felt heavier than paper"
17"He leaned back against the"
18"Her mind raced through half-formed"
19"she asked quietly"
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences96
matches
0"Rory’s fingers fumbled with the"
1"The brass had gone slick"
2"The second bolt slid free"
3"The third stuck, as it"
4"The door swung inward."
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"His tailored charcoal suit drank"
7"The amber eye caught the"
8"The black one revealed nothing"
9"The tabby, Ptolemy, wound between"
10"Rory’s throat closed."
11"She’d left no forwarding address."
12"She’d changed her delivery routes."
13"She’d let Eva screen her"
14"Lucien tilted his head, a"
15"His gaze drifted past her"
16"Books stacked in teetering columns."
17"Scrolls unrolled and pinned beneath"
18"Eva’s research on fae bloodlines"
19"The sound of her name"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The brass had gone slick from the curry-house steam that crept through the floorboards, a perpetual ghost of tikka masala and jasmine rice."
1"She hated that he stood there looking like he’d just stepped out of a Savile Row fitting, as if the past six months had been nothing but a mild inconvenience."
2"She remembered nights spent studying that face, tracing the hard line of his jaw, the faint lines around his mouth that deepened when he lied."
3"The silence that followed felt alive, a dangerous current running between them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"Lucien observed (observe)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.1
78.8688%