Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KA7HPYJC78V7T3N4E5DPZV

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first knock came flat-palmed and heavy, the knock of a man who did not expect an answer. Rory Carter ignored it. The second knock carried the dull thump of a body catching itself against the wood, and her hand paused over the stack of takeaway menus she had been sorting for tomorrow's shift. She put the menus down and walked to the door. Through the spyhole, the fisheye lens caught a broken version of Lucien Moreau. His silver-blond hair lay plastered to his forehead, his tailored grey suit was streaked with wet grime and something darker that no London rain could account for. He leaned against the frame, one hand pressed hard against his ribs. Rory slid the chain off and opened the door a few inches. "You're on the wrong doorstep, Mr Moreau." He blinked at her as if the sight of her stung. His mouth moved through the ghost of a smile that didn't reach his mismatched eyes. One amber, one black. Fourteen months since she'd seen that impossible gaze and still her stomach turned over like a dropped pint. "Rory." His accent curled around her name. "I didn't know where else to go." "Hospital's two blocks over. They love a man who bleeds into their carpet." "They ask questions." "Then try the river. It asks none." A spasm of pain crossed his face. He shifted his weight and the hand pressed harder against his side, where a dark stain was spreading through the fine wool of his jacket. He stayed upright, but only just. There was a quiet, stubborn dignity in the way he refused to show her more weakness than he already had. She stepped back and pulled the door wide. "Silas will have your hide if you bleed on his staircase." Lucien crossed the threshold with the slow, careful steps of a man who had rehearsed standing upright and was losing the argument. His gaze swept the cramped flat above the bar, catching on the familiar scuffed floorboards, the stack of books by the armchair, the takeaway containers from the Golden Empress stacked for recycling. She saw him count the signs of her life and file them away. "Kitchen," she said, jerking her chin at the chair. "Sit." He obeyed without argument. Rory pulled the first-aid box from under the sink and set it by the kettle. Duct tape, gauze, iodine, and hope. She'd assembled it after a cut finger in the restaurant kitchen, never expecting to use it on a half-demon. "Take off the jacket." Lucien eased out of the torn grey wool with a hiss through his teeth. Underneath, the white shirt was soaked through the side. The gash beneath his ribs was long and clean, a blade stroke meant to finish the job. The edges of the wound had begun to darken, not with dried blood, but with something that crawled like slow ink through his veins. Her hands stilled. "Who did this?" "A former employer." His voice had gone rough. "I tend to leave my jobs without giving notice." "This is poison." "An old family recipe." He spoke as if discussing the weather, but his knuckles had gone white on the edge of the chair. "It closes up within the hour. It just needs time." Her fingers gripped the iodine bottle tighter. "This isn't closing up. It's spreading." "So you noticed." The smile he gave her was all teeth with no warmth. "I need you to trust me when I say that I have survived much worse." "Trust you?" Rory laughed, a short and brittle sound. "You disappeared from my life like a debt you'd settled. One note. One wire transfer. And I never heard from you again. Trust doesn't cover that." Lucien went still. The pale skin around his wound seemed to pulse with the dark veins beneath. His jaw tightened. "What did the note say?" "You know what it said." "I want to hear you say it." She set the iodine down with a clatter. "'It was a pleasure doing business with you.' Fourteen months. I waited fourteen months for you to come back, and all I got was the kind of goodbye you give to a client." He did not look away. "You were not a client, Rory." "Then what was I?" The question hung in the stale air of her kitchen. A siren wailed somewhere beyond the bar's grimy windows. Lucien opened his mouth, closed it, and for once, the fixer with a word for every situation found none. "I couldn't tell you the truth," he said finally. "If I had stayed, if I had told you where I came from and what my father owed—" "Your father." She shook her head. "You never even told me his name." "His name is a thing you do not want to know." Lucien's amber eye flickered, the black one stayed fixed on her. "He calls in debts, Aurora. Every favour I've ever done, every life I've ever saved, he owns the accounts. I thought if I broke contact, if I made you hate me..." He winced as a dark thread crawled up the side of his throat. "Then he wouldn't see you as something to bill me for." Rory stared at him. The anger she had carried for fourteen months sat suddenly heavy in her chest, uncertain of its footing. "So you chose for me." Her voice came out quieter than she meant. "You decided what I could and couldn't handle, and you never once asked what I wanted." "Look at me, Rory." He gestured at the ruin of his expensive suit, at the half-formed wounds still seeping darkness between his fingers. "This is what I wanted to protect you from. Not just him. From this. From being anywhere near what I am." "You healed me," she said. "When Evan happened, when I had nothing and no one. You gave me a way out, this flat, a job. You never once made me feel like a job, Lucien. And then you made me feel like one." He flinched. It was small, but she saw it. The next words came from him with difficulty, as if they'd been lodged beneath the wound and needed cutting free. "I came back every night for a month." He stared at the scarred linoleum between his shoes. "I stood across the street and watched the light in your window. I thought if I could see you safe, that would be enough. It wasn't. So I stopped coming. I stopped letting myself want something that would end up with my blood on your floor." "Your blood's on my floor right now." "Which is precisely what I was running from." His mouth twisted. "You deserve a life that doesn't begin with the phrase 'there's something I need to tell you.'" Rory knelt before him and pulled the gauze from the first-aid box. Her hands were steady now, even as her heart hammered against her ribs. "Lift your arm." He did. She cleaned the wound with firm, efficient strokes. The dark veins writhed under his skin, but she didn't flinch. When she pressed the gauze against the gash and reached for the tape, Lucien's free hand caught her wrist. His thumb brushed the crescent scar on the inside of her arm, the old childhood mark, and stayed there. "Still no watch?" he murmured. "I like seeing the scar." Her voice was barely audible. "Reminds me I survived." He released her wrist slowly, but his gaze never left hers. "Rory. If I had stayed that night, if I had told you everything and asked you to choose—" "I'd have chosen you." The words escaped before she could stop them. "And you knew that. That's why you didn't stay." Something raw flickered in his damaged eyes. For a moment, he looked less like the polished fixer in tailored suits and more like the man she'd once heard speaking to a frightened girl in a hostel hallway, telling her that she was safe now, that no one would ever hurt her again. "You're still bleeding," she said, because the silence had become unbearable. "It will stop." "Will it?" The dark veins had begun to recede, sluggishly, like tide pulling back from shore. Her hand pressed the bandage down and she felt the muscle beneath it tense, not from pain, but from proximity. The air in the small kitchen grew thick with the heat of him, the smell of rain and copper and expensive cologne clinging to his ruined shirt. "Lucien." She didn't know what she was going to say next. His name had simply needed to cross the space between them. He lifted his hand and touched her cheek, a whisper of contact. His palm was hot despite the poison working through him. "Fourteen months," he said, "and I still think about you every time I close my eyes." Before she could answer, the knock came. It was not a gentle knock. It was a fist against the door that shook the hinges, three heavy blows in quick succession. A voice followed, low and formal, with an accent that didn't belong to the East End streets below. "Lucien Moreau. We know you're in here. Your affairs in Marseille remain pending." Lucien straightened in the chair, the weariness falling from his face like a mask discarded. His eyes sharpened, the amber bright and the black one blacker. He put his hand firmly on her arm. "Do not open that door, Aurora." The voice came again, closer now, pressed against the wood. "We can hear you breathing, Moreau." Rory looked at the man bleeding on her kitchen chair, and she saw the truth of him in the sudden stillness of his body. Whatever he had been running from had finally caught up. He had come to her not for refuge, but for a chance to say goodbye. The door rattled again. His hand tightened on her arm, and his voice dropped low. "I'm sorry, Rory. But I would do it all again."
created_at"2026-09-03T09:40:04.467Z" 9/3/2026, 9:40:04 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His accent curled around [around]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.656
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.066
91.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1671
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"precisely"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1671
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"efficient"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"flickered"
6"efficient"
7"silence"
8"whisper"
9"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1671
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1109
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Lucien8
Moreau1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory7
East1
End1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Empress"
4"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"East"
3"End"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if discussing the weather, but his knuckles had gone white on the edge of the chair"
20.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.795
wordCount1671
matches
0"not with dried blood, but with something"
1"not from pain, but from proximity"
2"not for refuge, but for a chance to say goodbye"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean23.54
std19.9
cv0.846
sampleLengths
054
162
212
37
448
514
613
73
87
958
108
1111
1267
1310
1444
154
1664
173
183
1917
203
2133
2213
2329
2435
2520
265
275
287
2941
3011
314
3238
3327
3413
3577
3622
3729
3844
3943
409
4120
4263
437
4428
4525
463
4759
485
4914
97.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"was streaked"
1"been lodged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was spreading"
1"was losing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences133
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1115
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.026905829596412557
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008071748878923767
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean12.56
std8.75
cv0.696
sampleLengths
018
14
232
310
413
527
612
712
87
911
1015
114
1218
137
147
1513
163
177
187
1925
206
2120
228
2311
2422
2532
2613
279
281
294
3015
316
3219
334
3414
359
3617
3724
383
393
408
419
423
4323
4410
457
466
4714
4815
499
53.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3458646616541353
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences88
matches
0"She put the menus down"
1"His silver-blond hair lay plastered"
2"He leaned against the frame,"
3"He blinked at her as"
4"His mouth moved through the"
5"His accent curled around her"
6"He shifted his weight and"
7"He stayed upright, but only"
8"She stepped back and pulled"
9"His gaze swept the cramped"
10"She saw him count the"
11"she said, jerking her chin"
12"He obeyed without argument."
13"She'd assembled it after a"
14"Her hands stilled."
15"His voice had gone rough"
16"He spoke as if discussing"
17"Her fingers gripped the iodine"
18"His jaw tightened."
19"She set the iodine down"
ratio0.523
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences88
matches
0"The first knock came flat-palmed"
1"Rory Carter ignored it."
2"The second knock carried the"
3"She put the menus down"
4"His silver-blond hair lay plastered"
5"He leaned against the frame,"
6"Rory slid the chain off"
7"He blinked at her as"
8"His mouth moved through the"
9"His accent curled around her"
10"A spasm of pain crossed"
11"He shifted his weight and"
12"He stayed upright, but only"
13"She stepped back and pulled"
14"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
15"His gaze swept the cramped"
16"She saw him count the"
17"she said, jerking her chin"
18"He obeyed without argument."
19"Rory pulled the first-aid box"
ratio0.909
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Before she could answer, the"
ratio0.011
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The first knock came flat-palmed and heavy, the knock of a man who did not expect an answer."
1"Lucien crossed the threshold with the slow, careful steps of a man who had rehearsed standing upright and was losing the argument."
2"The next words came from him with difficulty, as if they'd been lodged beneath the wound and needed cutting free."
3"It was a fist against the door that shook the hinges, three heavy blows in quick succession."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He spoke, but his knuckles had gone white on the edge of the chair"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He spoke (speak)"
1"Rory laughed (laugh)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.131
leniency0.262
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.098
82.8476%