| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 91.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1217 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1217 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "mechanical" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "resonance" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "porcelain" | | 13 | "predator" | | 14 | "down her spine" | | 15 | "footsteps" | | 16 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1227 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1211 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a chuckle, not quite a sigh" | | 1 | "not quite a sigh" |
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| 37.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.63 | | wordCount | 1227 | | matches | | 0 | "not a pulse but a sustained burn, as if it were pleading with her not to lea" | | 1 | "not the darkness of shadow but the darkness of absence, a patch of the world" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 37.18 | | std | 28.78 | | cv | 0.774 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 92 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 69 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 85 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 75 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 65 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 72 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 69 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 2 |
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| 88.71% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "been commanded" | | 1 | "been caught" | | 2 | "was shaped" | | 3 | "been seen" | | 4 | "been scrubbed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "were pleading" | | 1 | "was screaming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "They were the same colours as always — cornflower blue, poppy red, butter yellow — but the stalks bent at angles that defied botany, curving away from her as if she were a wind blowing through them." | | 1 | "Only the standing stones, their mossed surfaces glistening with a wetness that had no source — the ground beneath them was bone dry, the grass yellow and brittle." | | 2 | "The pendant's warmth flared — not a pulse but a sustained burn, as if it were pleading with her not to leave." | | 3 | "A sound behind her, so faint she might have imagined it — a single note, high and thin, like glass being polished." | | 4 | "It was shaped like a human, but the proportions were wrong — arms too long, shoulders pitched at an angle that read as a shrug frozen mid-motion." | | 5 | "And as it tilted, the darkness around it moved — not the darkness of shadow but the darkness of absence, a patch of the world that had been scrubbed clean and was now healing wrong." | | 6 | "Not from in front of her — from behind." | | 7 | "Whatever warmth had drawn her here had fled, leaving her with a lump of dead stone and the certainty — absolute, marrow-deep — that she was not alone in this place." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 54 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.037037037037037035 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 11.36 | | std | 8.83 | | cv | 0.777 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 34.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.28703703703703703 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the trees drew in" | | 1 | "Then the silence began." | | 2 | "Then the rustle of leaves" | | 3 | "Only the standing stones, their" | | 4 | "Just water, beaded on the" |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 79.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come because the pendant" | | 1 | "It wasn't a conscious decision," | | 2 | "She'd expected the clearing to" | | 3 | "They were the same colours" | | 4 | "Her voice came out thin," | | 5 | "She told herself it was" | | 6 | "She was twenty-five, sensible, a" | | 7 | "She didn't believe in things" | | 8 | "She believed in the pendant's" | | 9 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 10 | "It was the removal of" | | 11 | "She jerked her torch beam" | | 12 | "Her beam swept the perimeter" | | 13 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 14 | "Her fingers came away wet." | | 15 | "It was water." | | 16 | "she said aloud, and the" | | 17 | "She took the first step." | | 18 | "She didn't turn around." | | 19 | "Her torch beam guttered." |
| | ratio | 0.351 | |
| 32.16% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove never looked the" | | 1 | "That was the first wrong" | | 2 | "She'd come because the pendant" | | 3 | "It wasn't a conscious decision," | | 4 | "The silver chain felt hot" | | 5 | "The moon was a thin" | | 6 | "She'd expected the clearing to" | | 7 | "The air smelled of turned" | | 8 | "The flowers were wrong." | | 9 | "They were the same colours" | | 10 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 11 | "Her voice came out thin," | | 12 | "The Grove should have echoed." | | 13 | "The standing stones ringed a" | | 14 | "She told herself it was" | | 15 | "The way exhaustion played tricks" | | 16 | "She was twenty-five, sensible, a" | | 17 | "She didn't believe in things" | | 18 | "She believed in the pendant's" | | 19 | "It wasn't the absence of" |
| | ratio | 0.856 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the trees drew in close, their branches interlacing into a vaulted ceiling that swallowed her torch beam whole." | | 1 | "They were the same colours as always — cornflower blue, poppy red, butter yellow — but the stalks bent at angles that defied botany, curving away from her as if…" | | 2 | "She was twenty-five, sensible, a girl who ran from abusive exes and built new lives in borrowed rooms above pubs." | | 3 | "The resulting quiet was so total that Rory heard her own pulse, a dull thudding in her ears that kept time with the pendant's heat." | | 4 | "Only the standing stones, their mossed surfaces glistening with a wetness that had no source — the ground beneath them was bone dry, the grass yellow and brittl…" | | 5 | "Rory took a step back toward the archway of oaks that marked the boundary." | | 6 | "The pendant's warmth flared — not a pulse but a sustained burn, as if it were pleading with her not to leave." | | 7 | "It dimmed, the beam narrowing until it painted only a pale coin of ground at her feet, as if something vast had stepped between her and the source of the power." | | 8 | "It was shaped like a human, but the proportions were wrong — arms too long, shoulders pitched at an angle that read as a shrug frozen mid-motion." | | 9 | "Its face was a blank, featureless oval, like a porcelain doll that had rolled in the mud of some deep place and dried." | | 10 | "It held itself perfectly still, the stillness of a predator that knows it has been seen and sees no reason to pretend otherwise." | | 11 | "The pendant's heat was now just a steady, terrified blaze against her sternum, as if the stone itself was screaming." | | 12 | "And as it tilted, the darkness around it moved — not the darkness of shadow but the darkness of absence, a patch of the world that had been scrubbed clean and w…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said aloud, and the word dropped into the silence like a stone into a well" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |