Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KAD46TW75K3EKVFD2TWE14

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.000723
Provider:
Wafer

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt scraped like a guilty confession. Rory had her hand flat against the door before the final lock turned, and the wood clicked open with a sound that meant trouble. Rain hit the Brick Lane pavement in sheets, and the curry house downstairs had let its steam up through the floorboards again. She blinked against the yellow glare of the corridor bulb. Lucien Moreau stood on the third step, one gloved hand resting on the banister, his charcoal overcoat darker in the wet. His hair was still slicked back, rain beading in the platinum strands, a single drop hung on the tip of his right ear. He held the ivory-handled cane in his left hand, point down, utterly still. She knew a long beat passed between them because the cat, Ptolemy, got up from the radiator in the hall and announced himself with a stretched yawn. “Hello, Rory.” His accent flicked through the vowels like a blade through gravel. “You have a nerve.” Lucien allowed himself the smallest smile. The amber one caught the light, glinting like a coin tossed away. The black eye gathered the darkness instead. “Eva said you live alone, now. She's unlocking a way to live by it.” “Don't talk about Eva.” “I won’t. May I come in?” “No.” He waited. The rain kept time. A motorcycle gunned past at the end of the alley, and the curry house door hammered brass somewhere below. “Malphora,” he said, using the not so sweet name, the old name. Rory’s knuckles went white on the doorjamb. “Don’t call me that either.” “I came for what I owed you.” She let the door swing a fraction wider, not an invitation, not yet, so he could see the living room beyond: books stacked five deep on the sideboard, Eva’s tarot cast in the middle of the floor, Ptolemy weaving figure eights around the green lamp base, the half-drunk cup of tea cooling. A witness had seen her yesterday, then, in this place. “You owe me a why,” she said. He lifted his chin. Raindrops ran along the stitching of his collar, soaked deep into wool. “The last answer I gave you was gone before I could tell it. A favour called in before the debt was paid on my side.” His voice turned the flat. “I was neither dead nor missing, Rory. I was rented.” Her laugh came out a little of a little burst, empty, and her leg across her chest. I didn’t picture Paris as the hedge, her hands crossing her arms. “You left me at a Question? I waited two hours for you at Paddington Station. I might have handled the note, not a pocket park.” A muscle in Lucien’s jaw jumped. “The note was a trap. I delivered it to me to get moving.” “Who wrote it?” “My father.” An old quiet filled the corridor. Even the curry house below had paused mid‑clatter. Rory remembered once, one time of his hand—gloved, warm, the palm a cold solid—closing over her left wrist, exactly in the crescent scar. That had been goodbye. The then-louder now came the gravity too heavy between him and her: memory. Her thigh ached from the long standing. She shifted. “You knew who he was.” “I knew,” Lucien said. “I knew when she came for you. That's why I left the note anyway.” “You broke your word to me. I didn't ask about your father. I asked you stay in London.” It was the unsaid thing he heard the room it was not always going. His gloved fingers closed around the ivory of the cane. The shaft clicked, and she watched him decide the blade inside. He set his jaw he made not careful — he was asking a bridge’s hand to his chest and gripping something. “Then I owed you and still haven’t paid.” He lowered his hand. List the sound of the books, the hundred pages of research notes, the attention unwashed dish in the crowded inside tomb of her life. He stepped one foot into the threshold. Rory put her palm flat against his sternum. His coat soaked at the touch, and a star - Eucalyptus - something abyssal and cool came off him, wet wool and cologne. “Why are you here, Lucien? The truth.” “Because I made a choice once and thought I was protecting you, and this is the first session of my life I’m here to be told whether the choice was what the woman forgave,” he said. The amber and the black didn’t blink. “She might say no. I wanted to hear it. I no longer took it from your father's ear or from your fear.” She studied the part of him with it, the line between him and the sidelines. Irony had asked her from this cheap beard, her white palm, her scar. The steady wanting told her stay cross. He stood there exactly three feet, black in rain, a man half of Avaros, built from all the things she had refused to name. A door at the bottom of the stairwell slammed, and someone shouted in Bengali across the street. Rain came down again in a flush. Rory widened the door, the hinges an inch of wet wood groan open. Ptolemy crossed the threshold, wound against Lucien’s blunt shoe, then looked back at her, blinking slowly. “Eva won’t be home until midnight,” she said. “You’ll be gone before then.” Lucien stepped through, and the doorway swallowed him, the subtle scent of saturated rain consumed by georgine, books, hers. He folded his cane across his forearms, a kind of surrender she hadn’t seen in him. “Not gone,” he said quietly, not speaking to her. “It's a cold man in need besides.” She closed the door, turned the bolts one by one, and leaned her forehead against the wet-splintered wood. A silence passed between them.
created_at"2026-09-03T09:43:07.241Z" 9/3/2026, 9:43:07 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.071
89.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount978
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount978
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"abyssal"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"glinting"
2"abyssal"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords979
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount722
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Lucien6
Rory5
Eva1
Paris1
Eucalyptus1
Avaros1
Bengali1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Avaros"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Paris"
3"Bengali"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
97.85% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.021
wordCount979
matches
0"neither dead nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean23.88
std19.44
cv0.814
sampleLengths
032
132
257
327
413
54
639
74
86
91
1025
1112
1212
137
1462
157
1656
1754
1819
193
202
2154
229
235
2418
2518
2656
278
2835
2931
307
3165
3259
3324
3413
3516
3613
3735
3816
3918
405
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was not always going"
1"was asking"
34.36% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences79
ratio0.038
matches
0"Rory remembered once, one time of his hand—gloved, warm, the palm a cold solid—closing over her left wrist, exactly in the crescent scar."
1"He set his jaw he made not careful — he was asking a bridge’s hand to his chest and gripping something."
2"His coat soaked at the touch, and a star - Eucalyptus - something abyssal and cool came off him, wet wool and cologne."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount725
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cold solid—closing over her"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.034482758620689655
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006896551724137931
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean12.39
std8.71
cv0.703
sampleLengths
08
124
222
310
421
523
613
727
813
94
106
1112
127
1314
144
156
161
172
184
1919
2012
217
225
237
2452
2510
267
274
2812
2930
3010
3117
3212
3325
346
3513
363
372
386
398
4023
414
4213
437
442
455
464
4714
4818
4914
59.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.379746835443038
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners30
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Even the curry house below"
ratio0.019
46.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences53
matches
0"She blinked against the yellow"
1"His hair was still slicked"
2"He held the ivory-handled cane"
3"She knew a long beat"
4"His accent flicked through the"
5"he said, using the not"
6"She let the door swing"
7"He lifted his chin."
8"His voice turned the flat"
9"Her laugh came out a"
10"I didn’t picture Paris as"
11"Her thigh ached from the"
12"It was the unsaid thing"
13"His gloved fingers closed around"
14"He set his jaw he"
15"He lowered his hand."
16"He stepped one foot into"
17"His coat soaked at the"
18"She studied the part of"
19"He stood there exactly three"
ratio0.434
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences53
matches
0"The third deadbolt scraped like"
1"Rory had her hand flat"
2"She blinked against the yellow"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"His hair was still slicked"
5"He held the ivory-handled cane"
6"She knew a long beat"
7"His accent flicked through the"
8"Lucien allowed himself the smallest"
9"The amber one caught the"
10"The black eye gathered the"
11"The rain kept time."
12"A motorcycle gunned past at"
13"he said, using the not"
14"Rory’s knuckles went white on"
15"She let the door swing"
16"A witness had seen her"
17"He lifted his chin."
18"Raindrops ran along the stitching"
19"His voice turned the flat"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said quietly, not speaking to her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.5931%