| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1599 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1599 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "crystalline" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1583 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1428 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 22 | | London | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Hel | 1 | | November | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.73 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like molten glass, and inside them" | | 1 | "looked like recognition" | | 2 | "felt like a door closing behind her" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 3.79 | | wordCount | 1583 | | matches | | 0 | "not with the slow furnace-heat it gave off near a Hel portal, but with something brighter, quicker" | | 1 | "not stragglers but a meadow of them, delphiniums" | | 2 | "not organs but light" | | 3 | "Not much, but it moved" | | 4 | "not with wind but with something" | | 5 | "Not broken, but bent, pressed down by the passage of something heavy" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 33.68 | | std | 31.76 | | cv | 0.943 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 87 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 110 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 74 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 120 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 96 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 57 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 73 | | 39 | 83 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 43 | | 46 | 14 |
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| 92.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "being looked" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 53.16% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 227 | | matches | | 0 | "was wearing" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was smiling" | | 3 | "was holding" | | 4 | "were trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil between worlds was wearing thin—that was the rumor, and the reason she was here, teeth chattering, chasing a half-fae seer's riddle through a royal park." | | 1 | "It had been warm against her skin for the last hour—not with the slow furnace-heat it gave off near a Hel portal, but with something brighter, quicker." | | 2 | "The air thickened to clear honey, and for one disorienting heartbeat Rory felt herself suspended—not drowning, not sinking, something in between—and then she was through, and the sound of London vanished like a candle pinched out." | | 3 | "Wildflowers in November—not stragglers but a meadow of them, delphiniums and poppies and cornflowers and a dozen species she had no name for, blooming in absurd, impossible color beneath a canopy of oaks that had never lost their leaves." | | 4 | "Nyx came through the boundary behind her, and their silhouette—usually a crisp edge of shadow against daylight—blurred, refracted, as if seen through the join of two panes of glass." | | 5 | "Beneath the chiming, she could hear something that might have been a distant drum—or only the blood moving in her own ears." | | 6 | "They were the size of her thumb, bodies made of something like molten glass, and inside them pulsed not organs but light—tiny lanterns carried by winged things with too many legs and no face at all." | | 7 | "The heartstone pressed against her collar like a hand on her shoulder, warning or encouraging; she still couldn't tell which." | | 8 | "The canopy overhead was silver willow and amber oak; the reflection showed a bruised violet sky, a moon the color of a vein, and a field of pale flowers that did not exist on this side of anything." | | 9 | "Not much, but it moved—a fraction of a fraction—between one breath and the next." | | 10 | "The Fae-forged blade at Rory's hip—Isolde's gift, slender and leaf-shaped, cold as midwinter—had begun to glow with a faint pearl light, the way it did in moonlight." | | 11 | "They grew in a perfect ring—except on one side, where they lay flat." | | 12 | "Somewhere between one chime and the next, a silver-haired woman with pale lavender eyes was watching them, and Rory could feel it—the weight of that attention, like a held breath against the back of her neck." | | 13 | "For a moment the amber light broke on the pale shape of a figure standing among the roots—a dress green as deep water, hair the color of moonlight, and two eyes that caught the light and kept it." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1456 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "older underneath, green wine" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03021978021978022 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007554945054945055 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 12.98 | | std | 10.45 | | cv | 0.806 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 56.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.39344262295081966 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the world took its" | | 1 | "Instead, a high, crystalline chiming," | | 2 | "Then it was gone." | | 3 | "Somewhere between one chime and" | | 4 | "Then she was gone." | | 5 | "Only the cairn of stones" |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 1 | "She'd known Nyx for less" | | 2 | "It had been warm against" | | 3 | "It pulled, the way a" | | 4 | "Their violet eyes pulsed once." | | 5 | "Their voice was a whisper" | | 6 | "She couldn't tell." | | 7 | "she asked the grove, or" | | 8 | "She filed it away." | | 9 | "They were willows hung with" | | 10 | "They were the size of" | | 11 | "They raised their head, and" | | 12 | "It was a silver willow," | | 13 | "She was certain she hadn't" | | 14 | "It was a pool." | | 15 | "They extended a hand toward" | | 16 | "She drew it without deciding" | | 17 | "They grew in a perfect" | | 18 | "She followed the bent line" | | 19 | "They came to her side," |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 78.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "The bark was still there," | | 2 | "November had laid its cold" | | 3 | "The tourists were gone, the" | | 4 | "The winter solstice was six" | | 5 | "The Veil between worlds was" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted at her shoulder," | | 7 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 8 | "Rory didn't argue." | | 9 | "She'd known Nyx for less" | | 10 | "The heartstone pendant hung beneath" | | 11 | "It had been warm against" | | 12 | "It pulled, the way a" | | 13 | "The boundary didn't so much" | | 14 | "The air thickened to clear" | | 15 | "Wildflowers in November—not stragglers but" | | 16 | "The light was amber, a" | | 17 | "Nyx came through the boundary" | | 18 | "Their violet eyes pulsed once." | | 19 | "Their voice was a whisper" |
| | ratio | 0.763 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.09% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The bark was still there, fossilized into whorls and furrows, so the monoliths looked less like monuments than trees that had outlived themselves by a thousand …" | | 1 | "Nine of them stood in a ring, each leaning at a different angle, as if the circle had begun to fall and thought better of it." | | 2 | "The Veil between worlds was wearing thin—that was the rumor, and the reason she was here, teeth chattering, chasing a half-fae seer's riddle through a royal par…" | | 3 | "Wildflowers in November—not stragglers but a meadow of them, delphiniums and poppies and cornflowers and a dozen species she had no name for, blooming in absurd…" | | 4 | "The light was amber, a warm late-afternoon glow that had no business existing at this hour, and the air lay against her skin like water held a degree above bloo…" | | 5 | "Nyx came through the boundary behind her, and their silhouette—usually a crisp edge of shadow against daylight—blurred, refracted, as if seen through the join o…" | | 6 | "Beneath the chiming, she could hear something that might have been a distant drum—or only the blood moving in her own ears." | | 7 | "The heartstone pressed against her collar like a hand on her shoulder, warning or encouraging; she still couldn't tell which." | | 8 | "The canopy overhead was silver willow and amber oak; the reflection showed a bruised violet sky, a moon the color of a vein, and a field of pale flowers that di…" | | 9 | "For a moment the amber light broke on the pale shape of a figure standing among the roots—a dress green as deep water, hair the color of moonlight, and two eyes…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.93% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.37 | | leniency | 0.741 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.148 | |