| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "But her hand had already [already]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 88.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "symphony" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "mechanical" | | 12 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1300 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "The path to what you seek runs through the place where hunger never sleeps." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her, Nyx called her name, but the sound came from very far away." |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1084 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 16 | | Fear | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.67 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "green that seemed to glow from within" | | 1 | "not quite touching the ground" | | 2 | "looked like teeth, each one the size of a" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.846 | | wordCount | 1300 | | matches | | 0 | "not soil, but something spongy" | | 1 | "not from Nyx but from the trees" | | 2 | "not to the ground, but upward" | | 3 | "not a city of stone and wood, but of flesh" | | 4 | "not red but a deep, arterial crimson" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 30.23 | | std | 24.1 | | cv | 0.797 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 81 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 62 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 104 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was intoxicating" | | 1 | "was pulsing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stumbled through the rift and landed on ground that gave beneath her boots—not soil, but something spongy and warm, like walking on a sun-baked loaf of bread." | | 1 | "No sun, no moon—just that endless, glowing ceiling, pulsing with a slow heartbeat rhythm that Rory felt in her teeth." | | 2 | "Vineyards sprawled to the left, their vines heavy with grapes the size of plums, each one a different impossible color—midnight blue, bone white, a green that seemed to glow from within." | | 3 | "She leaned closer to one, and the flower turned its head—turned, like an animal—and spat a drop of that liquid onto her boot." | | 4 | "In the center stood a table—no, a banquet, but abandoned." | | 5 | "The food looked real enough—roasted birds with skin crisp and glistening, pies with crusts that flaked at the edges, fruits she had no names for." | | 6 | "Nyx knelt—or the shadow equivalent of kneeling—and passed a hand over the ground." | | 7 | "Their teardrop fruits began to fall, not to the ground, but upward—rising into the amber sky like bubbles in reverse." | | 8 | "Below, a city sprawled—not a city of stone and wood, but of flesh and bone." | | 9 | "And moving through those streets were figures—humanoid, but wrong." | | 10 | "The gem was no longer just glowing—it was pulsing in time with the heartbeat of the sky, and the light it cast was not red but a deep, arterial crimson." | | 11 | "Rory sheathed the dagger—it resisted, the blade humming with cold—and squared her shoulders." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1105 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03076923076923077 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004524886877828055 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 11.61 | | std | 7.93 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 68.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.41964285714285715 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 39.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her, Nyx called" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught her balance and" | | 1 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "It throbbed, warm as a" | | 3 | "They stopped, head tilting" | | 4 | "She held it low, ready." | | 5 | "They moved deeper." | | 6 | "She leaned closer to one," | | 7 | "she said, stepping back" | | 8 | "Her stomach growled, and she" | | 9 | "She snatched it back." | | 10 | "Their teardrop fruits began to" | | 11 | "It was an eye." | | 12 | "She stumbled back." | | 13 | "She held her breath, but" | | 14 | "Her thoughts grew syrupy, slow." | | 15 | "She looked at Nyx, whose" | | 16 | "They were at the edge" | | 17 | "They carried platters and goblets," | | 18 | "She looked down." | | 19 | "She thought of Isolde's words," |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 19.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tore open with" | | 1 | "Rory stumbled through the rift" | | 2 | "She caught her balance and" | | 3 | "The sky was the color" | | 4 | "Amber light bled across a" | | 5 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 6 | "Violet eyes flickered, scanning." | | 7 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 8 | "It throbbed, warm as a" | | 9 | "The ground stretched before them" | | 10 | "Vineyards sprawled to the left," | | 11 | "The air smelled of roasted" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted forward, their feet" | | 13 | "They stopped, head tilting" | | 14 | "Rory followed their gaze." | | 15 | "The light came from everywhere" | | 16 | "A shadow shaped like a" | | 17 | "Nyx's voice, always a whisper," | | 18 | "Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 19 | "The moonsilver dagger was cold" |
| | ratio | 0.881 | |
| 59.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "To the right, orchards of" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stumbled through the rift and landed on ground that gave beneath her boots—not soil, but something spongy and warm, like walking on a sun-baked loaf of bre…" | | 1 | "Vineyards sprawled to the left, their vines heavy with grapes the size of plums, each one a different impossible color—midnight blue, bone white, a green that s…" | | 2 | "A shadow shaped like a crouching figure slid across the path ahead, then dissolved into a puddle of darkness that seeped into the ground." | | 3 | "The moonsilver dagger was cold in her palm, colder than the air, and its faint luminescence brightened as if in response to the realm's wrongness." | | 4 | "A single shoe lay on its side, the leather still warm, as if the wearer had vanished mid-step." | | 5 | "The food looked real enough—roasted birds with skin crisp and glistening, pies with crusts that flaked at the edges, fruits she had no names for." | | 6 | "Grapes burst underfoot, releasing clouds of sweet-smelling mist that made Rory's vision blur." | | 7 | "Buildings rose like ribs from the ground, their walls made of stretched skin that glistened with moisture." |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's form flickered, their edges blurring" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.621 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |