Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KANESAWYZKVYS5TB8CA2QR

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Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.021991
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came in a pattern she hadn't heard in eighteen months. Two sharp, one soft, then the scrape of a ring against the warped wood. Aurora's hand stopped halfway to the kettle. She stared at the door, the chain still on. "Open up, Aurora." His voice slipped through the gap like smoke. She crossed the room in four strides and undid the first deadbolt. Her left wrist caught the light, the small crescent scar pale against her skin. She kept the chain on. "It's late." "May I?" Lucien's face appeared in the foot-wide opening, one amber eye and one black. The black one swallowed the landing light. "I've not the patience to argue through a chain." "What do you want, Moreau?" "You always did favour honesty over comfort." He adjusted his grip on the ivory-handled cane. "Open the door." "You lost the right to show up unannounced." "I surrendered it. There is a distinction." "It's eighteen months too late for distinctions." "Then it's lucky I'm not here for that." He leant his shoulder against the frame. "Someone is coming to kill you. I intend to stop it." Aurora's fingers found the chain. The little scar whitened as she slid it free. "That's a new one." "I imagine so." He stepped past her. The hem of his coat brushed her bare shin, cold and wet from the street. He brought the smell of rain and something sharper, vetiver and iron. The flat above Silas's bar was two rooms and a galley kitchen. The window over Brick Lane glowed orange from the curry house sign below. "Still cannot keep a plant alive." He tapped a withered fern on the sill. "Still cannot mind your business." "Au contraire. Business is precisely my business." She moved behind the sofa, using it as a barrier. "You said someone's coming. Who?" Lucien unbuttoned his coat with his free hand. "May I sit?" "No." He sat anyway on the armchair, smoothing the charcoal trousers. The cane rested across his knees. "They'll be here before dawn. I came to move you." "You came to move me." She repeated the words flatly. "Like furniture." "You are hardly furniture." His gaze dropped to her wrist. "How is it?" "How is what?" "The scar." Aurora tugged her sleeve down. "Some things don't heal." "Some things don't need to." He looked at the bookshelf, at the spine of a thin blue volume. "You kept it." She followed his gaze. Among the paperbacks sat Le Petit Prince. He had left it on her nightstand with a note that said only, So long as you keep reading, I am not gone. She had thrown the note away. She had not thrown the book. Her chest tightened. "You left it." "I left a great many things." He turned back to her. "I would like to explain." "You had eighteen months to explain. You chose silence." "I chose your survival." "Is that what you tell yourself?" "I tell myself the truth. The truth is that my enemies have long memories and longer knives. The moment they knew I loved you, you became a weakness." She flinched at the word. "You never said that." "I'm saying it now." She laughed, a short bitter sound. "You waltz in after eighteen months and drop the L-word between death threats. Forgive me if I'm not swooning." "I don't need you to swoon. I need you to run." "Then run with me." He held her gaze. For a moment, the black eye seemed less hungry. "I cannot." "Right. Because of the enemies. Because of the realm. Because of the great bloody game." Aurora walked to the kitchenette and poured yesterday's cold tea down the sink. The tap dripped. "You know what I did after you left? I rebuilt. I got a job. I started paying rent with actual money. I stopped checking the shadows for your silhouette. And now you show up and tell me that wasn't enough." "It was never about enough." He stood. The cane remained on the chair. "You are the only thing I have ever failed to leave." "And yet, here we are. You managed it anyway." "Here we are," he said, "and you are still wearing my mother's ring." Aurora's hand twitched. The silver band on her right thumb caught the orange light. "It's just a ring." "You have never been a good liar." He crossed the room. She backed up until the counter pressed against her lower back. The smell of rain and vetiver filled the space between them. His body heat reached her before his hand did. He did not touch her. He simply raised two fingers and let them hover over the pulse at her throat, close enough that she felt the static. "Why are you really here, Luc?" "Someone has been asking questions about you in the underbelly. A human with demon money. They hired a pair of half-breeds to follow you since Tuesday. Your Golden Empress deliveries gave them easy marks." She froze. "You've been watching me." "I've been watching them." "Same thing." "Not at all. One keeps you alive." He stepped closer, until her back met the cabinet and his chest nearly met hers. "The other one buried you." Her breath came shallow. The ring on her thumb felt hot, as if it remembered his mother's hand. She pushed two fingers against his chest, not hard enough to move him. "You don't get to be the hero now." "I've never been a hero." His hand dropped to her wrist. His thumb found the crescent scar and traced it slowly. "I am the thing that comes after the heroes fail. And I am here, whether you believe me or not." "I believe you're afraid." "Of losing you again? Yes." His lips brushed the shell of her ear. "But not of the half-breeds." The words sent a shiver down her spine. Before she could answer, a floorboard creaked in the corridor outside. Lucien's head snapped toward the door. The amber eye flared, turning the colour of hot honey. "The back window," he murmured. "There is no back window. It's a bloody flat above a bar." "Then we use the roof." A key scraped in the lock. The first deadbolt clicked.
created_at"2026-09-03T09:47:40.231Z" 9/3/2026, 9:47:40 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.239
leniency0.478
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.03
85.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"traced"
3"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1039
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount556
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora5
Silas1
Brick1
Lane1
Le1
Petit1
Prince1
Lucien3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1039
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean15.74
std15.08
cv0.958
sampleLengths
042
111
231
32
431
55
618
78
87
97
1026
1114
124
133
1456
1514
165
177
1815
1911
201
2116
2210
2312
2413
253
262
279
2821
2949
303
3116
329
334
346
3528
369
374
3825
3911
404
4115
4271
4324
449
4513
4614
474
487
4962
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs91
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences118
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount558
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.025089605734767026
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008960573476702509
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean8.81
std6.5
cv0.738
sampleLengths
012
114
27
39
411
512
614
75
82
915
107
119
125
1315
143
158
167
177
1815
1911
205
219
224
233
244
2515
2612
2712
2813
2914
305
317
3210
335
348
353
361
3710
386
3910
4010
412
4210
433
443
452
465
474
4818
493
46.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3220338983050847
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences63
matches
0"She stared at the door,"
1"His voice slipped through the"
2"She crossed the room in"
3"Her left wrist caught the"
4"She kept the chain on."
5"He adjusted his grip on"
6"He leant his shoulder against"
7"He stepped past her."
8"He brought the smell of"
9"He tapped a withered fern"
10"She moved behind the sofa,"
11"He sat anyway on the"
12"She repeated the words flatly"
13"His gaze dropped to her"
14"He looked at the bookshelf,"
15"She followed his gaze."
16"He had left it on"
17"She had thrown the note"
18"She had not thrown the"
19"Her chest tightened."
ratio0.556
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences63
matches
0"The knock came in a"
1"Aurora's hand stopped halfway to"
2"She stared at the door,"
3"His voice slipped through the"
4"She crossed the room in"
5"Her left wrist caught the"
6"She kept the chain on."
7"Lucien's face appeared in the"
8"The black one swallowed the"
9"He adjusted his grip on"
10"He leant his shoulder against"
11"Aurora's fingers found the chain."
12"The little scar whitened as"
13"He stepped past her."
14"The hem of his coat"
15"He brought the smell of"
16"The flat above Silas's bar"
17"The window over Brick Lane"
18"He tapped a withered fern"
19"She moved behind the sofa,"
ratio0.937
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Before she could answer, a"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The ring on her thumb felt hot, as if it remembered his mother's hand."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She repeated (repeat)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.09
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.06
86.3908%