| 98.31% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Eva said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "she said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.373 | | leniency | 0.746 | | rawRatio | 0.136 | | effectiveRatio | 0.102 | |
| 75.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1630 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1630 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "processed" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1649 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A man in his forties, she guessed." |
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| 45.22% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1193 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.1 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 25 | | Tube | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 21 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Camden" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.452 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 28.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like he'd simply decided to lie do" | | 1 | "looked like any abandoned station" | | 2 | "Something like old earth, and rot, and iron" | | 3 | "quite eyes, and Quinn understood — with the clarity of a struck bell — that it had been here all along" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.606 | | wordCount | 1649 | | matches | | 0 | "not north, but toward the dark mouth of the tunnel beyond the platform" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 23.9 | | std | 18.59 | | cv | 0.778 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 78 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 66 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 43 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 49 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | |
| 69.92% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | | 0 | "was still pointing" | | 1 | "was already walking" | | 2 | "was talking" | | 3 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of ozone and copper — blood, she thought, then revised." | | 1 | "Round glasses caught the lamp glare as she turned, and Quinn saw the satchel on the ground beside her — worn leather, stuffed with books." | | 2 | "\"I'm not.\" Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear — a nervous habit Quinn had clocked the first time they'd met, at the British Museum, where Eva had given her a dead-end lead with a smile that didn't reach her eyes." | | 3 | "The man's palm was smooth, unblemished — but as she watched, the lamp light shifted, and she caught the faintest silvery tracery under the skin." | | 4 | "Quinn looked around — the tiled walls, the rusted rails, the faint graffiti that had faded to ghosts." | | 5 | "But the shoes were wrong — scuffed, worn, the kind of shoes a man wears when he's been walking for hours." | | 6 | "Underneath, a sharper note — something mineral." | | 7 | "The needle trembled, then spun, then settled — pointing not north, but toward the dark mouth of the tunnel beyond the platform." | | 8 | "A flicker at the edge of her vision — a shape, barely there, like heat shimmer over summer asphalt." | | 9 | "She'd been so focused on the body, on the details, on the puzzle — she'd missed the fact that they weren't alone." | | 10 | "Not recklessly — she was too experienced for that — but deliberately, one hand hovering near her service weapon, her eyes tracking the shimmer in the darkness ahead." | | 11 | "She could smell it now — that acrid, struck-match smell, stronger here." | | 12 | "Tall, gaunt, with arms too long and a face that was — wrong." | | 13 | "It simply stood in the darkness, watching her with eyes that weren't quite eyes, and Quinn understood — with the clarity of a struck bell — that it had been here all along." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1180 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03389830508474576 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011864406779661017 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 10.05 | | std | 7.58 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 42 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 52.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.3780487804878049 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 30.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, silence pressed against her" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her watch." | | 1 | "He lay on his back," | | 2 | "They were slack, empty, wrong." | | 3 | "she said, pressing two fingers" | | 4 | "She was shorter than Quinn" | | 5 | "She gestured to the body" | | 6 | "She'd been a detective for" | | 7 | "She'd seen cruelty, depravity, the" | | 8 | "She did not believe in" | | 9 | "She believed in evidence, motive," | | 10 | "It looked like any abandoned" | | 11 | "She crouched again, studying the" | | 12 | "She touched it, brought her" | | 13 | "It moved, and the dust" | | 14 | "She'd missed it." | | 15 | "She'd been so focused on" | | 16 | "Her face tightened." | | 17 | "Her footsteps echoed, and the" | | 18 | "She could smell it now" | | 19 | "she said, though she wasn't" |
| | ratio | 0.243 | |
| 72.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairs were wrong before" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn paused mid-descent, one" | | 2 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 3 | "The air smelled of ozone" | | 4 | "Something acrid underneath, like struck" | | 5 | "She checked her watch." | | 6 | "The leather strap was warm" | | 7 | "The red hair was unmistakable" | | 8 | "Quinn stepped onto the platform," | | 9 | "Quinn ignored that and crossed" | | 10 | "A man in his forties," | | 11 | "He lay on his back," | | 12 | "the uniform offered" | | 13 | "Quinn crouched, studying the man's" | | 14 | "That was the word that" | | 15 | "They were slack, empty, wrong." | | 16 | "This one looked like he'd" | | 17 | "she said, pressing two fingers" | | 18 | "Eva said quietly" | | 19 | "Quinn looked at her." |
| | ratio | 0.775 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He lay on his back, arms at his sides, arranged with a neatness that prickled the back of her neck." | | 1 | "Not recklessly — she was too experienced for that — but deliberately, one hand hovering near her service weapon, her eyes tracking the shimmer in the darkness a…" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn stepped, her boots echoing too loudly against the tiles" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her voice steady despite the cold crawling up her spine," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.203 | | leniency | 0.407 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.034 | |