| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1508 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1508 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "quivered" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "glint" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "comforting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1494 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1291 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 21 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 11 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae | 4 | | One | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 0.687 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.008 | | wordCount | 1494 | | matches | | 0 | "not blue or black but deep amber, the color of honey held to a flame" | | 1 | "not an answer, but Rory had begun to learn" | | 2 | "not her own, but it pulled with the force of a tide" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 41.5 | | std | 32.03 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 91 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 84 | | 11 | 85 | | 12 | 83 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 125 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 77 | | 22 | 96 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 74 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 220 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment Rory stood in Richmond Park with wet grass soaking her trainers and the ancient oaks pressing close behind her; the next, the air tore like rotten silk and a warm light spilled out, as if someone had cracked the door of an oven in the middle of the autumn night." | | 1 | "Light came from everywhere and nowhere—no sun, no moon, only that thick golden glow pressing down like a hand." | | 2 | "Rory looked down, then back at her own footprints—deep, clear, already filling with amber dust." | | 3 | "The moonsilver was cold—far colder than it had been in London—and the chill bit through her jeans and into her skin." | | 4 | "It was full—of distant thuds, a faint rhythmic noise like someone kneading dough, the clink of glass, and under all of it a low, many-voiced murmur that Rory felt in her back teeth before she heard it." | | 5 | "She had eaten before they left London—she was sure of it—but the hunger that rose now was something else, a hollow ache in her center." | | 6 | "The chairs—tall-backed, upholstered in something that gleamed like silk—were pulled out at precise angles, as if the guests had only just left." | | 7 | "The food smelled incredible—salt and fat and sugar and herbs—but underneath it was the same overripe sweetness, the same faint rot." | | 8 | "She could taste the air—sweet, heavy, ancient." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1311 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "low, many-voiced murmur" | | 1 | "grey, rain-streaked stretch" | | 2 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 3 | "faint, many-voiced laughter," |
| | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.036613272311212815 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007627765064836003 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 11.76 | | std | 7.94 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 37 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 51.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3543307086614173 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 33.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the rift healed, or" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 90.71% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She had time to think," | | 1 | "She stood on a path" | | 2 | "Their body unraveled from the" | | 3 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 4 | "they whispered, and their voice" | | 5 | "She wore no boots." | | 6 | "Her bare feet touched the" | | 7 | "It was heavy enough that" | | 8 | "She touched the hilt of" | | 9 | "They began to walk." | | 10 | "It was full—of distant thuds," | | 11 | "She looked away." | | 12 | "Her stomach growled, sudden and" | | 13 | "She had eaten before they" | | 14 | "They passed under a trellis" | | 15 | "Her hand moved before she" | | 16 | "Her fingers brushed the warm," | | 17 | "It was soft." | | 18 | "Her fingertips tingled." | | 19 | "She heard the distant laughter" |
| | ratio | 0.323 | |
| 5.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The rift opened without a" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant flared against" | | 2 | "Rory pressed her palm over" | | 3 | "She had time to think," | | 4 | "She stood on a path" | | 5 | "The sky above was not" | | 6 | "Light came from everywhere and" | | 7 | "Vineyards stretched along terraced hills" | | 8 | "The grapes were dark as" | | 9 | "Nyx poured through the rift" | | 10 | "Their body unraveled from the" | | 11 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 12 | "they whispered, and their voice" | | 13 | "Isolde came last." | | 14 | "The Half-Fae stepped through with" | | 15 | "She wore no boots." | | 16 | "Her bare feet touched the" | | 17 | "Rory looked down, then back" | | 18 | "Isolde’s tracks simply weren’t there." | | 19 | "The air tasted sweet, like" |
| | ratio | 0.909 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment Rory stood in Richmond Park with wet grass soaking her trainers and the ancient oaks pressing close behind her; the next, the air tore like rotten si…" | | 1 | "The grapes were dark as bruises and red as embers, and many had split open under their own weight, leaking juice that looked black against the pale leaves." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted rather than stepped, their lower body dissolving into a thin vapor that touched the ground only when they chose." | | 3 | "Fruit hung low: pears with coppery skins that gleamed, apples so dark red they were nearly black, figs cracked open to show flesh like wet garnets." | | 4 | "Wooden platters sagged under roasted birds with lacquered golden skin, racks of ribs glazed with dark sauce, breads still steaming as if just pulled from an ove…" | | 5 | "The chairs—tall-backed, upholstered in something that gleamed like silk—were pulled out at precise angles, as if the guests had only just left." | | 6 | "Nyx circled the table, their form flattening and stretching over the ground." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.93% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.148 | |