Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KB3TE753PMTDYKKPYT7G4J

Run Details

Duration:
2m 54s
Cost:
$0.050490
Provider:
Fireworks

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain flecked the green glow of the sign above The Raven’s Nest. Inside, Silas Blackwood worked a cloth through a tumbler. The walls held their usual archive—old maps, black-and-white photographs, the smell of waxed wood and wet wool. Aurora Carter stacked clean glasses beneath the counter. The room had thinned to a last few customers. The door opened. A man stood in the frame, backlit by the green light. His coat hung from his shoulders like something borrowed from a broader man. Silas stopped moving. The cloth went still in the glass. “Christ.” The word came out low. Aurora looked up. The man crossed the floor without the ease of someone who belonged there. His shoes scuffed against the boards. Grey stubble darkened a face that had lost its architecture. “Hello, Silas.” Silas set the tumbler down. “Martin.” He braced both hands on the bar. “Nine years.” “Nine.” Martin unbuttoned his coat but didn’t take it off. “Maybe ten.” “Take a seat.” Silas nodded at the stool closest to the register. “Before your legs do it for you.” Martin sat. His hands found the bar top and pressed flat, as if the room might tilt. Aurora watched Silas reach for a bottle from the lower shelf, a single malt he reserved for old arguments. He poured two fingers without asking. “You still take it neat?” “Neat.” Martin lifted the glass. A tremor travelled through his wrist. Whisky sloshed against the rim. He drank. Silas studied him. “You look like hell, Martin.” “I know.” Martin set the glass down with both hands. “You look like you own a bar.” “I do own a bar.” “Then it’s true.” “What’s true?” “The world does go on.” Silas wiped the counter with the cloth. “Some days.” Martin looked toward the maps on the wall. “You kept the maps.” “I kept a lot of things.” Silas let his weight settle onto his right leg, a small adjustment, an old one. “Others I learned to let go.” “You never let go of anything.” “Don’t start, Martin.” “I’m not starting. I’m remembering.” Silas reached across and stilled the glass Martin had set down. “Why are you here?” Martin’s fingers found the edge of a cork mat and picked at it. “I was in the city. Thought I’d see if you were still alive.” “Five years, this bar. The sign’s hard to miss.” “I didn’t trust it.” “Trust what?” “That you’d be breathing.” Silas tapped his signet ring against the bar’s edge. “I’m hard to kill.” “For some of us.” Martin’s voice dropped. “Isn’t that the problem?” Aurora stepped out from the back, a crate in her hands. She caught Silas’s expression and set it down carefully. “Anything else?” “Give us a few minutes.” Silas didn’t look away from Martin. Aurora hesitated, then vanished into the back. The door clicked shut. Martin watched the space where she had gone. “Your daughter?” “Tenant. Friend.” Silas poured more whisky into his own glass. “Not the life I planned.” “No one plans this life.” “We planned everything once.” “That was the trouble.” Martin turned his glass. “We planned the bridge so well.” The word filled the space between them. “Prague.” Silas let the name settle like something sharp. “I should have come sooner.” “You came now.” “That’s not enough.” Martin lifted the glass. More whisky slopped over the rim. He didn’t wipe it. “You used to have hands like a surgeon.” “I used to have a lot of things.” Silas leaned against the back shelf, and the old limp showed in the way he crossed his legs at the ankle. “What do you want from me, Martin?” “Nothing.” Martin met his eyes, and there was something raw behind them. “That’s the worst part. I wanted to say I’m sorry.” “Then say it.” “I’m sorry.” Silas didn’t move. The clock above the photographs ticked too loud. “For what?” “For the order. For the fog on the bridge. For your leg. For every day after.” Silas set his glass down. “I don’t need it.” “I needed to say it.” Martin’s voice thinned. “You were always so bloody reasonable.” “Reasonable had nothing to do with it. We both read the same file.” “I gave the word.” Martin’s fist closed around the glass, and the tremor became a faint rattle. “I saw him in the window. I gave the word anyway.” “You made a call.” “Don’t rewrite it.” Martin’s jaw set, and for a second the old Martin surfaced. “I was arrogant. I wanted the win.” “Then you got it.” Silas kept his gaze level. “A pension and a dead man. I’d call that a win.” Martin flinched. “There it is.” “There’s nothing. You’re looking for something I don’t have.” Martin stood. His coat dripped onto the floor. “I shouldn’t have come.” Silas didn’t stop him. “Sit and finish your drink.” “I’m not thirsty.” “You will be.” Martin hovered a moment, then sat again. The rain thickened against the windows. The green sign outside broke the water into something like glass. Martin tilted his glass toward the window. “Do you ever hear from his daughter?” “Every December. A card from a place I can’t pronounce.” “I get the same.” Martin laughed without sound. “At least she’s alive.” “She’s not glad about it.” “You’ve seen her?” “Once. She asked if I had done everything I could.” Silas turned his glass. “I told her yes.” Martin’s face closed. “You always could lie.” “I didn’t.” “You should have.” Silas watched Martin’s hand tremble around the glass. “That’s new.” “Nothing. Nerves.” “Nerves or the other thing?” Martin released the glass and pressed his palm to the bar. “Both.” “How long?” “Long enough.” Martin drew a folded photograph from inside his coat and laid it on the wood. The creases had gone soft. “I carried this.” Silas looked at the picture without touching it. “I have the same one.” “I thought if I gave it back—” Martin stopped. “I don’t know what I thought.” “Keep it.” “I don’t want it.” Martin rose and buttoned his coat with slow, unsteady fingers. “I haven’t wanted it for nine years.” “But you kept it.” Martin looked at him a long moment. “So did you.” The door opened. The green light swallowed him. It closed. The bar went quiet except for the rain. Aurora came back from the back and stopped behind the counter. “Who was that?” “Someone I used to know.” Silas folded the photograph into his pocket. He picked up Martin’s glass, still half full, and poured the rest down the sink. “Turn the sign off.”
created_at"2026-09-03T09:55:30.901Z" 9/3/2026, 9:55:30 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Martin’s fist closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences101
tagDensity0.228
leniency0.455
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.02
95.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1095
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1095
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1094
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount634
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity4.73
worstName"Martin"
maxWindowNameDensity8.5
worstWindowName"Martin"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas23
Blackwood1
Carter1
Aurora6
Martin30
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Carter"
4"Aurora"
5"Martin"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1094
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean11.76
std9.45
cv0.803
sampleLengths
055
127
210
36
432
52
615
712
819
942
105
1118
128
1317
145
153
162
175
189
1912
2027
216
223
235
2415
2526
269
274
282
294
3013
3111
3220
332
3411
3511
3610
3715
385
394
4014
417
429
435
443
4517
468
478
4828
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences161
ratio0.006
matches
0"The walls held their usual archive—old maps, black-and-white photographs, the smell of waxed wood and wet wool."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount637
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.01726844583987441
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0015698587127158557
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean6.8
std4.17
cv0.614
sampleLengths
012
19
217
38
49
53
611
713
83
97
106
113
1213
136
1410
152
165
178
182
1910
202
2112
227
232
2415
2519
266
275
285
296
305
312
323
335
3410
357
365
373
382
395
407
412
428
434
4421
456
466
473
485
4911
55.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.37267080745341613
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences78
matches
0"His coat hung from his"
1"His shoes scuffed against the"
2"He braced both hands on"
3"His hands found the bar"
4"He poured two fingers without"
5"She caught Silas’s expression and"
6"He didn’t wipe it."
7"His coat dripped onto the"
8"He picked up Martin’s glass,"
ratio0.115
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences78
matches
0"Rain flecked the green glow"
1"The walls held their usual"
2"Aurora Carter stacked clean glasses"
3"The room had thinned to"
4"The door opened."
5"A man stood in the"
6"His coat hung from his"
7"Silas stopped moving."
8"The cloth went still in"
9"The word came out low"
10"Aurora looked up."
11"The man crossed the floor"
12"His shoes scuffed against the"
13"Silas set the tumbler down."
14"He braced both hands on"
15"Martin unbuttoned his coat but"
16"Silas nodded at the stool"
17"His hands found the bar"
18"Aurora watched Silas reach for"
19"He poured two fingers without"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Martin’s fist closed around, and the tremor became a faint rattle"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Martin laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences101
tagDensity0.01
leniency0.02
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.02
84.8716%