Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KB7H92RB6TD5NJSQ7VHTFF

Run Details

Duration:
2m 38s
Cost:
$0.040661
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain streaked the front window of The Raven’s Nest, smearing the green neon into the puddles on the pavement. Rory shoved the door open with her shoulder. The delivery bag from Golden Empress hung from her elbow, soaked through with condensation and the smell of hoisin. Silas looked up from the taps, a pint glass in one hand, and tilted his chin toward the far end of the bar. A woman sat alone under a black-and-white photograph of the Thames at night. For a second, Rory didn’t recognise her. Then the woman turned. “Hello, Rory.” The voice dragged her back seven years. Eva had been all copper curls and paint-stained denim, a chaos of bracelets and rolled-up sleeves. The woman on the stool wore a charcoal coat that looked dry despite the weather. Her hair sat in a dark, perfect line at her jaw. Her fingers, bare except for a thin gold band, rested around the base of a wine glass. Rory set the delivery bag by the door. She crossed the room. The jukebox hummed low. Silas placed a whisky on the counter without being asked. “I was in the neighbourhood.” “Nobody’s in this neighbourhood by accident.” Eva’s mouth curved, but not enough. “I came to find you.” Rory slid onto the stool and left a gap between them. The whisky burned when she swallowed. “Your mother told me the name of the bar. She didn’t have your number.” “She has my number.” “She told me you changed it.” Rory turned the glass in her hand. The ice clicked. “You could have asked Silas. He’d have told you I’d be working late.” “I didn’t want to ask.” The silence stretched. Silas moved to the far end of the bar and began polishing glasses with a white cloth. The old signet ring on his right hand caught the light. “You look well.” “Don’t.” “Don’t what?” “Don’t do the polite thing. You never used to.” Eva’s laugh came out brittle. “I used to do a lot of things.” Rory studied her. The woman beside her had the same wide-set eyes, the same small scar on her chin from a bicycle fall. But behind them sat a guardedness that had not been there in the cramped attic studio where Eva once smoked roll-ups and painted until dawn. “I heard you stopped painting.” “I heard you dropped out of law.” “I didn’t drop out. I left.” “Same thing.” “No. Dropping out means you don’t finish. Leaving means you know what you’re walking away from.” Eva took a sip of wine. Her hand moved with a careful grace, as if she’d practised not spilling. “You always did have a talent for making running away sound noble.” The words landed in Rory’s chest. She didn’t flinch. “You told me to go.” “I told you to leave him. Not to leave me.” Rory turned on the stool. The movement brought them face-to-face for the first time. Eva’s perfume was subtle, citrus and cedar, not the turpentine and tobacco that used to cling to her clothes. “I didn’t leave you. I left Cardiff.” “You left everything. One night. A single text after you crossed the border.” “That’s not fair.” Eva set her glass down with a sharp click. “I drove you to the train station. I gave you my coat because you’d left yours in the flat. You stood on the platform and told me you’d call when you got to London.” “I did call.” “Three weeks later. One voicemail. ‘I’m fine. Don’t worry.’” Rory opened her mouth. The words died. Silas went to the back room, his limp a quiet rhythm on the floorboards. The bookshelf door clicked shut behind him. “Three weeks.” Eva’s voice flattened. “I thought you were dead. I called hospitals. I called your mother. I went to the police.” “I didn’t know.” “Because you didn’t want to know.” The rain picked up against the window. The green neon flickered once, then steadied. Rory reached for the whisky. “I needed to disappear.” “And I was part of the old life.” Eva’s voice dropped. “So I went too.” The weight of it settled over the bar. Rory looked at her own hands, at the small crescent scar on her left wrist. She had run her thumb over it so many times it had become a habit, a way of counting the cost. “What happened to you?” “I grew up.” Eva swirled the wine. “I stopped waiting for people to come back.” A long pause followed. Rory looked around the room. The old maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs, the dark wood that smelled of spilled beer and time. She had built her new life in these shadows. She had been so busy staying invisible she hadn’t noticed what she’d let go. “I’m here now.” “It’s been seven years.” “I know.” “That’s not an answer.” Rory drained the glass. The whisky sat warm in her stomach. “What do you want me to say?” Eva turned fully on her stool. Her eyes glistened, but she didn’t blink. “I want you to say you regretted it. Just once. Because I’ve spent seven years telling myself you didn’t.” “I did.” The words came out quieter than Rory intended. “I regretted it every time I walked past a train station. Every time I almost called.” “Then why didn’t you?” “Because I was ashamed.” Eva’s expression shifted—confusion, then pain, then something that might have been relief. “Ashamed of what?” “Of being the person who ran. You were the one who stayed and fought for me. I didn’t know how to face that.” Eva stared at the row of bottles behind the bar. The light caught the edge of her jaw, the faint lines at the corners of her mouth. Time had carved them there. “I didn’t fight for you, Rory. I was just there.” “That’s the same thing.” “No.” Eva reached for her glass but didn’t drink. “Fighting would have meant getting in the car and driving after you. I didn’t.” “You had a life.” “I had a damp flat and a job in a call centre.” Eva’s laugh came softer now. “I had no idea what I was doing. I thought if I gave you space, you’d come back. You didn’t.” Rory frowned. “You could have found me. My mother knew where I was.” “She knew the name of the bar. Not the flat. Not the number. You made sure of that.” The jukebox fell silent. For a moment, all they could hear was the rain and the low electric buzz of the neon sign. “What about now? Why look for me now?” Eva reached into her coat pocket. She placed a small envelope on the bar, unopened, the corner bent. A Cardiff postmark marked the paper. “I’m getting married in September. I didn’t want you to read about it in the local paper.” Rory looked at the envelope, then at Eva’s left hand. The thin gold band. Not a wedding ring, but a promise maybe. A life built without her. “Congratulations.” The word felt like a pebble in her mouth. “Don’t. Don’t be polite.” Rory turned away. She could see Silas through the gap in the back room door, pretending not to listen. “Then tell me about him.” “He’s a teacher. He’s patient. He doesn’t raise his voice.” “Does he know about Evan?” Eva’s jaw tightened. “He knows I had a friend who needed help once. He knows I lost her.” Rory flinched. “You didn’t lose me.” “I lost you the night you got on that train.” Eva stood and pulled her coat on. “I just didn’t accept it until today.” The finality of it hung in the air. Rory watched Eva pick up the envelope again and hold it between two fingers. “I’m not going to beg you to come to the wedding. But I wanted you to know.” She set the invitation back on the bar. Rory stood. The stool scraped against the floor. “Eva.” Eva paused at the door. The green neon cast a sickly glow across her face. “I did regret it.” Eva nodded slowly. “I know. That’s what makes it worse.” The door closed. The bell above it jingled. Rory stared at the invitation, the rain streaking the window behind it. Silas came back from the bookshelf, his shoes quiet on the floorboards. He picked up the empty glass and wiped the counter. “An old friend?” Rory shook her head. “Something like that.” She sat back down. The whisky bottle stood on the shelf, half full, amber in the dim light. Outside, the rain kept falling.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The word felt like [like]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.026
96.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1435
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1435
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"weight"
4"stomach"
5"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1434
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount854
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Thames1
Rory22
Eva22
Cardiff1
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"Thames"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.212
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a pebble in her mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.697
wordCount1434
matches
0"Not a wedding ring, but a promise maybe"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean15.42
std14.67
cv0.951
sampleLengths
089
14
22
366
426
55
66
711
817
914
104
116
1223
135
1431
153
161
172
189
1913
2048
215
227
236
242
2516
2631
2714
2810
2933
307
3113
323
3343
343
359
3628
3722
383
396
4014
419
4215
4344
444
4515
4651
473
484
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs136
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences166
ratio0.006
matches
0"Eva’s expression shifted—confusion, then pain, then something that might have been relief."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount865
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.020809248554913295
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003468208092485549
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean8.64
std5.77
cv0.668
sampleLengths
019
18
219
323
413
57
64
72
87
916
1015
1111
1217
138
144
154
1610
175
186
196
205
2111
226
2314
244
256
267
273
2813
295
303
3117
3211
333
341
352
369
375
388
393
4020
4125
425
437
446
452
4616
476
4813
4912
39.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.22289156626506024
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners37
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then the woman turned."
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences95
matches
0"Her hair sat in a"
1"Her fingers, bare except for"
2"She crossed the room."
3"Her hand moved with a"
4"She didn’t flinch."
5"She had run her thumb"
6"She had built her new"
7"She had been so busy"
8"Her eyes glistened, but she"
9"She placed a small envelope"
10"She could see Silas through"
11"She set the invitation back"
12"He picked up the empty"
13"She sat back down."
ratio0.147
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences95
matches
0"Rain streaked the front window"
1"Rory shoved the door open"
2"The delivery bag from Golden"
3"Silas looked up from the"
4"A woman sat alone under"
5"The voice dragged her back"
6"Eva had been all copper"
7"The woman on the stool"
8"Her hair sat in a"
9"Her fingers, bare except for"
10"Rory set the delivery bag"
11"She crossed the room."
12"The jukebox hummed low."
13"Silas placed a whisky on"
14"Eva’s mouth curved, but not"
15"Rory slid onto the stool"
16"The whisky burned when she"
17"Rory turned the glass in"
18"The ice clicked."
19"The silence stretched."
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"But behind them sat a guardedness that had not been there in the cramped attic studio where Eva once smoked roll-ups and painted until dawn."
1"Eva’s perfume was subtle, citrus and cedar, not the turpentine and tobacco that used to cling to her clothes."
2"The old maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs, the dark wood that smelled of spilled beer and time."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9585%