Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KB9MY4JS2JP828D66SPN40

Run Details

Duration:
3m 58s
Cost:
$0.001660
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, hammering the pavement so hard it bounced back up in a fine mist that clung to Quinn's face. She'd been on her feet for eleven hours, and the worn leather watch on her left wrist had stopped keeping time somewhere around the third — the battery was dead, but she never replaced it. Morris had given it to her. She didn't need it to know she was losing ground. The man ahead of her, Tomás Herrera, moved through the wet Soho streets like a fox through a burning field — quick, deliberate, never wasting a step. He cut left through a gap between a shuttered kebab shop and a launderette, and Quinn followed, her boots splashing through a gutter that had become a small river. The rain had driven most people indoors, but the few who remained moved in huddled clusters, umbrellas lowered against the wind, and she had to shoulder through them, muttering apologies she didn't mean. "Stop!" she shouted. The word came out ragged, swallowed by the downpour. He didn't stop. He didn't even look back. She'd had him once, an hour ago, outside the Raven's Nest. The distinctive green neon sign had buzzed overhead, bleeding its light into the puddles, and she'd watched him through the rain-streaked window of a café across the street. He'd come out of the bar with a medical bag slung over one shoulder, a Saint Christopher medallion catching the light at his throat. She'd recognized him from the file — Tomás Herrera, twenty-nine, born in Seville, former NHS paramedic who'd lost his license for administering unauthorized treatments to patients who weren't quite human. The file didn't say what "not quite human" meant. The file was full of gaps like that. She'd been waiting for him to lead her somewhere useful. Instead, he'd led her on a chase through half of London, and now her lungs were burning and her sharp jaw was set so tight her teeth ached. He was fast. She was faster, once — eighteen years ago, before the desk work and the late nights and the weight of a dead partner's watch on her wrist. She pushed harder, her military bearing keeping her upright even as her legs screamed. The gap closed to twenty yards. Fifteen. He glanced back. His warm brown eyes met hers for half a second, and she saw something in them — not fear. Calculation. He was measuring her. Then he turned and ran straight into the mouth of an abandoned Tube station. Quinn skidded to a stop at the top of the stairs. The entrance was a black maw in the rain, the old iron gates hanging crooked on their hinges, a faded sign warning of danger and no entry. The steps disappeared into darkness, and the water ran down them in thin, hungry rivulets. The station had been closed for decades, sealed off after some disaster the official records had never fully explained. She'd read the file. The file had been full of gaps too. She'd been here before. Three years ago, on a case that had ended with DS Morris dead in a drainage tunnel beneath the city, his body unmarked, his eyes wide open, his expression one of pure, uncomprehending terror. The coroner had called it a heart attack. Quinn had called it a lie. She'd spent three years trying to prove it, and every path had led her to the same dead end: people who didn't exist, places that weren't on any map, a world that operated just beneath the surface of the one she'd sworn to protect. Herrera was halfway down the stairs now, his silhouette shrinking against the dark. He stopped, turned, and looked up at her. The Saint Christopher medallion swung at his throat. "You don't want to follow me down here, Detective," he said. His voice carried up the stairwell, calm and clear despite the rain. "Come back up and we'll talk about it." He shook his head. "You don't understand what you're chasing." "I understand you're a person of interest in a murder investigation." Something flickered across his face — a wince, almost. "I'm a medic. I patch people up. That's all." "Then you've got nothing to worry about." He looked at her for a long moment. The rain hammered the pavement around her, but under the shelter of the station's crumbling canopy, the silence felt deeper than it should have. Then he said, "The market moves tonight. If you come down here, you won't be able to unsee it." He turned and disappeared into the dark. Quinn stood at the top of the stairs, rain streaming off her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, her hand resting on the worn leather of her watch. The seconds stretched. She could call it in. She could wait for backup. She could do the smart thing, the safe thing, the thing the department would expect of a detective with eighteen years of service and a record as clean as hers. But Morris's face was in her mind. That look of pure, uncomprehending terror. And she knew, with the same certainty that had carried her through every case she'd ever solved, that if she walked away now, she'd never get another chance to understand. She drew her service weapon, held it low against her thigh, and started down the stairs. The dark swallowed her. The stairs were slick with moss and old water, and she had to feel her way along the wall, her fingers trailing over tiles that were cold and wet and covered in something that felt like grime but smelled like copper. The sounds of the city faded above her — the rain, the traffic, the distant wail of a siren — replaced by a deep, resonant silence that pressed against her ears. Her boots echoed on the concrete, each step a small thunder in the gloom. At the bottom of the stairs, a corridor stretched ahead of her, lit by a single bare bulb that flickered and buzzed. The walls were covered in old posters, faded and peeling, advertising products that didn't exist — tonics for the blood, salves for the soul, a dentist who promised painless extractions "for all species." Quinn's skin prickled. She kept her weapon up, her finger resting along the frame, and moved forward. The corridor bent left, then right, and then opened into a wider space — an old ticket hall, its ceiling lost in shadow, its floor a mosaic of cracked tiles. And there, in the center of the hall, stood a door. It hadn't been there a moment ago. She was sure of it. The door was made of dark wood, banded with iron, and set into its center was a small brass plate with a single word: VEIL. Herrera stood before it, his back to her. He didn't turn around. "There's a token," he said. "A bone token. You need it to pass. The market doesn't let just anyone in." "I don't have a token." "I know." He turned, and in his palm he held a small white object — a carved piece of bone, smooth and polished, etched with symbols she didn't recognize. "I have two. I was going to use the second one to get back out." He held it out to her. Quinn looked at the token. Then at him. "Why would you help me?" "Because you're going to follow me anyway," he said. "And because if you go in there without a token, the market will eat you alive. I've seen it happen." She took the token. It was warm in her palm, warmer than it should have been, and it seemed to pulse faintly, like a second heartbeat. The scar on Herrera's left forearm caught the flickering light — a long, pale line running from wrist to elbow, the kind of scar that came from a knife and a fight you barely survived. "One more thing," he said. "When we're in there, don't ask questions. Don't make eye contact with the vendors. And whatever you do, don't touch anything you haven't paid for." He turned back to the door, pressed his token into a small recess in the iron band, and pushed. The door swung open on silent hinges, revealing a staircase that descended into a warm, golden glow. The air that rushed out was thick and strange — incense and candle smoke and something else, something old and mineral, like the smell of a cave that had never seen the sun. Quinn stood at the threshold. Behind her, the dark corridor and the silence of the dead station. Ahead of her, the unknown. The token pulsed in her hand. She thought of Morris. She thought of the look on his face. She thought of all the gaps in the files, all the questions she'd never been able to answer, all the nights she'd lain awake staring at the ceiling of her flat, trying to convince herself that the world made sense. It didn't. It never had. And here, at last, was proof. She stepped through.
created_at"2026-09-03T09:58:41.875Z" 9/3/2026, 9:58:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1506
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1506
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"maw"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"streaming"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"mosaic"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"maw"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"streaming"
5"echoed"
6"gloom"
7"mosaic"
8"etched"
9"pulse"
10"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
84.55% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1519
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1346
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn8
Tomás2
Herrera5
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Saint2
Christopher2
Seville1
London1
Tube1
Morris4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Seville"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite human"
1"felt like grime but smelled like copper"
2"smelled like copper"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1519
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean36.17
std29.24
cv0.808
sampleLengths
075
189
212
38
4110
538
651
727
814
984
1096
1129
1223
138
1410
1511
1618
177
1851
197
2069
2143
2216
234
2486
2572
2641
2737
2812
2920
305
3144
326
3313
3429
3561
3630
3769
3828
3952
4011
413
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"been closed"
1"were covered"
2"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs210
matches
0"was losing"
1"were burning"
2"was measuring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences109
ratio0.11
matches
0"She'd been on her feet for eleven hours, and the worn leather watch on her left wrist had stopped keeping time somewhere around the third — the battery was dead, but she never replaced it."
1"The man ahead of her, Tomás Herrera, moved through the wet Soho streets like a fox through a burning field — quick, deliberate, never wasting a step."
2"She'd recognized him from the file — Tomás Herrera, twenty-nine, born in Seville, former NHS paramedic who'd lost his license for administering unauthorized treatments to patients who weren't quite human."
3"She was faster, once — eighteen years ago, before the desk work and the late nights and the weight of a dead partner's watch on her wrist."
4"His warm brown eyes met hers for half a second, and she saw something in them — not fear."
5"Something flickered across his face — a wince, almost."
6"The sounds of the city faded above her — the rain, the traffic, the distant wail of a siren — replaced by a deep, resonant silence that pressed against her ears."
7"The walls were covered in old posters, faded and peeling, advertising products that didn't exist — tonics for the blood, salves for the soul, a dentist who promised painless extractions \"for all species.\" Quinn's skin prickled."
8"The corridor bent left, then right, and then opened into a wider space — an old ticket hall, its ceiling lost in shadow, its floor a mosaic of cracked tiles."
9"\"I know.\" He turned, and in his palm he held a small white object — a carved piece of bone, smooth and polished, etched with symbols she didn't recognize."
10"The scar on Herrera's left forearm caught the flickering light — a long, pale line running from wrist to elbow, the kind of scar that came from a knife and a fight you barely survived."
11"The air that rushed out was thick and strange — incense and candle smoke and something else, something old and mineral, like the smell of a cave that had never seen the sun."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1337
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02019446522064323
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0029917726252804786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.94
std10.84
cv0.778
sampleLengths
024
135
26
310
427
529
633
73
89
93
105
1111
1228
1324
1430
159
168
1710
1828
193
2027
2114
226
231
243
2519
261
274
2814
2911
3027
3115
3219
334
348
354
3634
378
386
3944
4013
418
428
4311
4412
458
464
476
4811
499
36.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.28440366972477066
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Instead, he'd led her on"
1"Then he turned and ran"
2"Then he said,"
3"Then at him."
ratio0.044
33.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences90
matches
0"She'd been on her feet"
1"She didn't need it to"
2"He cut left through a"
3"He didn't stop."
4"He didn't even look back."
5"She'd had him once, an"
6"He'd come out of the"
7"She'd recognized him from the"
8"She'd been waiting for him"
9"He was fast."
10"She was faster, once —"
11"She pushed harder, her military"
12"He glanced back."
13"His warm brown eyes met"
14"He was measuring her."
15"She'd read the file."
16"She'd been here before."
17"She'd spent three years trying"
18"He stopped, turned, and looked"
19"His voice carried up the"
ratio0.467
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences90
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"She'd been on her feet"
2"Morris had given it to"
3"She didn't need it to"
4"The man ahead of her,"
5"He cut left through a"
6"The rain had driven most"
7"The word came out ragged,"
8"He didn't stop."
9"He didn't even look back."
10"She'd had him once, an"
11"The distinctive green neon sign"
12"He'd come out of the"
13"She'd recognized him from the"
14"The file didn't say what"
15"The file was full of"
16"She'd been waiting for him"
17"He was fast."
18"She was faster, once —"
19"She pushed harder, her military"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The rain came down in sheets, hammering the pavement so hard it bounced back up in a fine mist that clung to Quinn's face."
1"He cut left through a gap between a shuttered kebab shop and a launderette, and Quinn followed, her boots splashing through a gutter that had become a small riv…"
2"She'd recognized him from the file — Tomás Herrera, twenty-nine, born in Seville, former NHS paramedic who'd lost his license for administering unauthorized tre…"
3"Three years ago, on a case that had ended with DS Morris dead in a drainage tunnel beneath the city, his body unmarked, his eyes wide open, his expression one o…"
4"She'd spent three years trying to prove it, and every path had led her to the same dead end: people who didn't exist, places that weren't on any map, a world th…"
5"Quinn stood at the top of the stairs, rain streaming off her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, her hand resting on the worn leather of her watch."
6"The stairs were slick with moss and old water, and she had to feel her way along the wall, her fingers trailing over tiles that were cold and wet and covered in…"
7"At the bottom of the stairs, a corridor stretched ahead of her, lit by a single bare bulb that flickered and buzzed."
8"The scar on Herrera's left forearm caught the flickering light — a long, pale line running from wrist to elbow, the kind of scar that came from a knife and a fi…"
9"The door swung open on silent hinges, revealing a staircase that descended into a warm, golden glow."
10"The air that rushed out was thick and strange — incense and candle smoke and something else, something old and mineral, like the smell of a cave that had never …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.1
80.1400%