Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KBK75VAA6FJCE6NJ6YJ40Y

Run Details

Duration:
1m 49s
Cost:
$0.022855
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora parked her bicycle against the outer fence of Richmond Park a little past eleven. Her breath made thin ghosts in the air. The gate she had chosen had no lock, only a rusted chain hanging slack, and she slipped through a gap that smelled of wet iron. Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone gave a single warm pulse, like a second heartbeat pressed against her sternum. The night felt stitched wrong. London’s constant hum—distant sirens, buses, the low churn of the city—cut off the moment she passed the fence line. Not gradually. Her ears popped, as though she had climbed. She stopped. Grass, glossy with frost, stretched into black. The park at night should have held deer moving, foxes barking, the rustle of small animals in the undergrowth. Instead the silence had texture, heavy as water. Aurora flexed her left hand. The small crescent scar on her wrist itched. She had come because the pendant had led her here. For three nights it had tugged subtly, a thread behind her ribs, toward the southwest corner of Richmond Park. Her phone map showed only woodland and open grass. The note from her unknown benefactor had said the Grove appears only to those it wants. She had told no one where she was going. The grass gave under her trainers with a sound too crisp, each step a small fracture. She kept to the treeline. Oak branches sprawled against a sky without stars, although the city glow should have thrown the clouds into amber relief. No stars, no cloud, no moon. Not even a plane. At the edge of a thick copse, she stopped again. Her phone screen read 11:43. The battery 87%. The compass needle idled north, then west, then spun, as if the park itself were the magnet. She pocketed the phone. The pendant warmed again. Not a gentle pulse. A steady throb. She drew the chain out. The crimson gem glowed faintly, enough to colour the underside of her jaw. Aurora followed that glow as it brightened. The standing stones appeared without warning. One moment there was a wall of brambles; the next, the brambles simply weren’t there. She had not turned away. The path had not shifted. The world blinked. Before her lay a clearing ringed by rough oak pillars sunk into the earth. Their tops were misshapen, as if the trees had been carved while still growing. Between them wildflowers covered the ground in thick clusters—foxglove, stitchwort, bluebells—all blooming out of season, all with their petals closed tight. Nothing moved. Yet every flower head leaned toward her, like filings toward a magnet. The air inside the circle was colder, but not the cold of October. It didn’t sting. It settled on her skin and seemed to wait. Aurora glanced back. The path she’d taken ended in darkness. No fence, no treeline, no city glow. She had not walked that far. She had counted maybe forty strides from the last oak. Her footprints should have shown in the frost. The grass behind her stood upright, untouched. The wrongness settled low in her stomach, a smooth stone of instinct. She swallowed. The soft click of her throat sounded loud. A sound came from the trees—not birdsong, but a whistle. Three notes. The first high, the second low, the third somewhere between. A child’s playground tune, but reversed. It stopped the instant she turned toward it. The pendant’s glow dimmed. That should have comforted her. It didn’t. Aurora stepped into the circle. The wildflowers rustled though there was no wind. The rustle passed through the clearing in a slow wave, beginning at her feet and moving outward, as though her weight had rippled through the ground. Something ran at the edge of her vision. A small shape, grey like a fox but wrong—too many legs, or legs too long. It vanished behind a standing stone. The stone cast no shadow. The thing had. A shadow three times the size of the body. Her pulse threw itself against her ribs. She turned fully, scanning. The pillars stood still. The grey shape was gone. But now she could not shake the sense that it had moved into the space between two stones, not behind one. That the stones were doors. Overhead, the blackness shifted. Not cloud. Something large, flat, and silent passed across the clearing, blocking a patch of sky she had not realised she could see. It made no sound. She felt the displacement of air on her face, faint as a curtain drawing. Aurora pulled her jacket tight. The cold wasn’t temperature. It came from inside, behind her navel. She thought of Eva, of the flat above the bar, of the warm buzz of the neon sign outside her window. That world felt far, not in distance but in time. She remembered the note tucked in her pocket, the one that had come with the pendant months ago: The Grove will answer what the city cannot. She had laughed at the melodrama. She wasn’t laughing now. A whisper started low, near the ground. Not a voice. Leaves dragging across leaves. But the flowers weren’t moving now. The whisper rose to the height of her knees, then her hips, then her ear. It circled her, a sound like a name spoken by a mouth with no tongue. “Rory.” Her name. Not Aurora. Not Laila. Rory. The name only her friends used. The voice wasn’t a voice. It was air forced through holes in wood. It came from every direction at once, including from inside her own skull. She didn’t answer. Her mother’s rule from childhood came back, absurdly: Never answer a stranger in the woods. The pendant flared. Deep crimson light washed over the flowers. In that red glow, the wildflowers were not flowers. They were small open mouths, the petal edges lined with fine translucent teeth. The light lasted half a second. Then they were flowers again. Aurora clenched the pendant. It burned against her palm, but she did not let go. Another sound: footsteps. Not behind her. Not ahead. To the left, inside the treeline. Slow, deliberate. Each footfall pressed into wet earth. They matched her own pace, but a half-beat delayed, as though the walker had heard her first and was correcting. She stopped. The footsteps stopped. One breath. Two. Then a third set of footsteps continued for four more steps after she had gone still. They were heavier than hers. Bare feet, maybe, with a wet slap. The ground inside the circle broke into a fine web of cracks. Frost spread from the centre outward, not in a simple circle but in shapes—letters? Runes? She couldn’t read them. They drew themselves in the frost like a finger through smoke, spelling something with too many angles. The air thickened. It tasted of copper and old moss. Her ears filled with a low moan that might have been wind through the stones, except there was still no wind. The oak pillars began to breathe. That was what she told herself—porous wood expanding and contracting. But the breathing had rhythm. And it was warm. She felt it on the back of her neck. Something watched her from the tallest stone. She saw it only as a darker blot against the oak. It had no shape she could keep in her mind. When she looked directly, the blot smoothed into bark. When she looked away, it stood a little closer. She could feel the distance between them shrink. Aurora forced herself to check her phone. The screen had collapsed into a field of static. The clock read 00:00. The battery 0%. She pressed the lock button. The screen flickered and showed her reflection. Behind her right shoulder, a second face. Pale, long, with dark hollows where the eyes should be. It hovered just above her own hair. She didn’t breathe. The reflection opened its mouth. The screen went black. Her breath came out in a shaken cloud. She lowered the phone. The clearing was still. The flowers had all turned fully toward her, their petals now open, though there was no sun and no moon. Inside each, a tiny black centre pulsed. The pendant began to cool. That was worse. Cold spread from the chain into her collarbone, as if the stone had finished speaking and now something else would. Aurora realised the silence had changed. Before, it had been empty. Now it was full. The space between the stones was occupied, crowded by things she could not see but could feel arranging themselves around her. The air thickened with the sense of audience. She did not run. Running would have told them what they wanted. But she took one step backward, toward the place where the path had been. The flowers under her foot did not crush. They moved aside, then returned. Behind her, the way out was no longer grass. It was a long corridor of black oak trunks, bending inward, their branches woven so tightly that no sky showed through. At the end of that corridor, something stood on two legs. Tall. Still. It had been waiting.
created_at"2026-09-03T10:03:55.472Z" 9/3/2026, 10:03:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"churn"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"footsteps"
count3
9
word"footfall"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count2
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"churn"
2"silence"
3"throb"
4"stomach"
5"weight"
6"scanning"
7"whisper"
8"footsteps"
9"footfall"
10"could feel"
11"flickered"
12"pulsed"
13"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences187
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences188
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1519
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1518
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
Grove2
October1
Eva1
Aurora10
Laila1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Laila"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
2.50% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.975
wordCount1519
matches
0"not birdsong, but a whistle"
1"not in distance but in time"
2"not in a simple circle but in shapes"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences188
matches
0"followed that glow"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean33.02
std20.64
cv0.625
sampleLengths
066
134
236
313
463
551
639
729
87
983
1014
1125
1248
1312
1410
1528
168
1711
185
1934
2046
2146
2245
2316
2467
2550
261
2739
2818
2943
3015
3147
323
3328
3448
3565
3654
3759
383
399
4043
4128
4244
4339
4443
454
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences187
matches
0"been carved"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was going"
1"wasn’t laughing"
2"was correcting"
36.47% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences188
ratio0.037
matches
0"London’s constant hum—distant sirens, buses, the low churn of the city—cut off the moment she passed the fence line."
1"One moment there was a wall of brambles; the next, the brambles simply weren’t there."
2"Between them wildflowers covered the ground in thick clusters—foxglove, stitchwort, bluebells—all blooming out of season, all with their petals closed tight."
3"A sound came from the trees—not birdsong, but a whistle."
4"A small shape, grey like a fox but wrong—too many legs, or legs too long."
5"Frost spread from the centre outward, not in a simple circle but in shapes—letters?"
6"That was what she told herself—porous wood expanding and contracting."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1527
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.032089063523248196
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.0091683038637852
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences188
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences188
mean8.08
std5.66
cv0.701
sampleLengths
015
18
225
318
45
519
62
78
82
97
1019
118
125
138
1410
1519
169
1716
189
1916
205
2120
226
234
2410
255
263
2717
284
294
304
313
325
3313
347
356
3615
375
385
393
4014
4114
4221
432
4412
4513
463
479
483
497
39.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.26595744680851063
totalSentences188
uniqueOpeners50
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences168
matches
0"Instead the silence had texture,"
1"Then they were flowers again."
2"Then a third set of"
3"Pale, long, with dark hollows"
ratio0.024
93.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences168
matches
0"Her breath made thin ghosts"
1"Her ears popped, as though"
2"She had come because the"
3"Her phone map showed only"
4"She had told no one"
5"She kept to the treeline."
6"Her phone screen read 11:43."
7"She pocketed the phone."
8"She drew the chain out."
9"She had not turned away."
10"Their tops were misshapen, as"
11"It didn’t sting."
12"It settled on her skin"
13"She had not walked that"
14"She had counted maybe forty"
15"Her footprints should have shown"
16"It stopped the instant she"
17"It vanished behind a standing"
18"Her pulse threw itself against"
19"She turned fully, scanning."
ratio0.315
70.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences168
matches
0"Aurora parked her bicycle against"
1"Her breath made thin ghosts"
2"The gate she had chosen"
3"The night felt stitched wrong."
4"London’s constant hum—distant sirens, buses,"
5"Her ears popped, as though"
6"Grass, glossy with frost, stretched"
7"The park at night should"
8"Aurora flexed her left hand."
9"The small crescent scar on"
10"She had come because the"
11"Her phone map showed only"
12"The note from her unknown"
13"She had told no one"
14"The grass gave under her"
15"She kept to the treeline."
16"Oak branches sprawled against a"
17"Her phone screen read 11:43."
18"The battery 87%." 1/1/1987, 12:00:00 AM
19"The compass needle idled north,"
ratio0.78
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences168
matches
0"Before her lay a clearing"
1"To the left, inside the"
2"Before, it had been empty."
3"Now it was full."
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The rustle passed through the clearing in a slow wave, beginning at her feet and moving outward, as though her weight had rippled through the ground."
1"They matched her own pace, but a half-beat delayed, as though the walker had heard her first and was correcting."
2"Cold spread from the chain into her collarbone, as if the stone had finished speaking and now something else would."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.3198%