| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "she said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.46 | | leniency | 0.92 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 93.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1517 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1517 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "wavered" | | 7 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "stomach dropped" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.10% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "started to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1502 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Moreau | 2 | | Rory | 14 | | Lucien | 8 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.824 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 79.58% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like a laugh but not quite" | | 1 | "not quite" | | 2 | "looked like a man preparing to hand over" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1502 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 26.35 | | std | 19.95 | | cv | 0.757 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 56 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 75 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 53 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 98.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "been drawn" | | 1 | "was slicked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "In the year she’d been minding Eva’s flat, no one had ever come to the door this late—not without a text first." | | 1 | "Her stomach dropped—not fear, not relief." | | 2 | "The cane hooked the edge—not aggressively, just a neat, almost casual interruption." | | 3 | "She could smell him now—rain and something darker, like smoke from a fire she’d never been close enough to see." | | 4 | "He moved the way he always had—fluid, controlled, every gesture economical." | | 5 | "Every surface was indeed covered with Eva’s books and scrolls—stacked teetering towers around the sagging sofa, spreadsheets of notes pinned to the wall above the tiny gas fireplace." | | 6 | "The gesture was so familiar—the constant surveillance, the need to see every angle—that something in Rory’s chest tightened." | | 7 | "Eva’s research was everywhere—even propped against the kettle." | | 8 | "But his face had shifted—some mask slipping." | | 9 | "The arrogance, the casual remove—gone, replaced by something raw and almost pleading." | | 10 | "She could still feel the ghost of his presence in the flat—the smell of rain, the charged air between them." |
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| 95.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1050 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.045714285714285714 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009523809523809525 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 11.21 | | std | 8.58 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 51.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.35074626865671643 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 35.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he began to speak." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 32.77% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "She opened the door a" | | 1 | "He was exactly as she" | | 2 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 3 | "Her stomach dropped—not fear, not" | | 4 | "She said the first thing" | | 5 | "His mouth curved." | | 6 | "It wasn’t a smile." | | 7 | "She hated that." | | 8 | "He glanced past her into" | | 9 | "He looked, for a fraction" | | 10 | "He shifted the cane" | | 11 | "It was a defensive gesture," | | 12 | "She let the words hang," | | 13 | "He stepped closer, and the" | | 14 | "She could smell him now—rain" | | 15 | "It stirred the old, unwanted" | | 16 | "She hated that most of" | | 17 | "He inclined his head." | | 18 | "He moved the way he" | | 19 | "He closed the door behind" |
| | ratio | 0.468 | |
| 18.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The first deadbolt slid back" | | 1 | "Rory paused with her fingers" | | 2 | "She opened the door a" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 4 | "Rory’s hand tightened on the" | | 5 | "He was exactly as she" | | 6 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 7 | "Her stomach dropped—not fear, not" | | 8 | "She said the first thing" | | 9 | "His mouth curved." | | 10 | "It wasn’t a smile." | | 11 | "Rory started to close the" | | 12 | "The cane hooked the edge—not" | | 13 | "The sound of her name" | | 14 | "She hated that." | | 15 | "He glanced past her into" | | 16 | "Rory looked at the cat," | | 17 | "Rain dripped from the folded" | | 18 | "The corridor light was bare," | | 19 | "He looked, for a fraction" |
| | ratio | 0.883 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.52% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped, and the cane tapped once against the threshold" | | 1 | "she said, not turning around" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.22 | | leniency | 0.44 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |