Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KBN2Q5ETRB1EQCNYQYDN4V

Run Details

Duration:
3m 7s
Cost:
$0.001585
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The morning had not yet found the hollow beneath Camden. What passed for daylight filtered through the grilles above, thin and greasy, catching the dust that hung in the air like a held breath. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape and set her boots on the platform, and the first thing she noticed was the quiet. No rumble of trains. No hum of cables. Just the slow, deliberate drip of water somewhere in the dark, counting time. The body lay thirty feet down the platform, a dark shape on the grey concrete, haloed by the cones of portable lamps. DS Mercer stood over it, tablet in hand, already shaking his head before she reached him. "Male, mid-forties." He turned the screen toward her, then thought better of it. "No ID, no wallet. Maintenance crew found him at six-forty. Thought he was a sleeper at first." Quinn stopped at the edge of the lamp pool. "You don't think he is." "I think he's a problem." He gestured at the body with his pen. "Suit jacket. Good shoes. No needle marks, no visible trauma. Heart attack, maybe. Or an OD that doesn't show. Coroner will sort it." Quinn stepped closer and looked down. The man lay on his back, arms straight at his sides, legs together. His jaw was slack, his eyes closed, as if someone had arranged him for a coffin. Too neat. A fall left you crumpled. A collapse left you twisted. This was placement. Deliberate placement. "He was put here." She didn't look away from the body. "Obviously." Mercer scanned the platform floor. "Somebody dumped him." "From where? Show me the drag marks." His pen went still. The grime lay thick, decades of neglect, and around the body it was unbroken — a perfect, untouched field of dust. The only prints in it were the boots of the maintenance crew, coming within five feet and retreating. "He could've been carried," he tried. "Someone holding him —" "Would still leave footprints." Quinn crouched. The man's hands lay open, palms up. She lifted the nearest one. Clean nails. A faint callus on the index finger, the kind you got from a pen, not a shovel. No dirt under the nail bed. This man had not crawled, stumbled, or fallen anywhere in this station. He had been placed here after death, and the only evidence of transit was the body itself. "Maybe the floor was cleaned." Mercer scrolled through his tablet. "Ritual. Weird cult stuff. Happens in the tunnels." "Was the ceiling cleaned too?" He looked up. Quinn pointed. The platform ceiling was a lattice of old iron and flaking paint, and directly above the body a water stain bloomed, dark with moisture. A slow drip hung from a rivet, and as they watched, a drop let go and fell, striking the concrete six inches from the dead man's shoulder with a soft, patient slap. "Rigor says eight hours. Minimum." She measured the stain with her eyes. "He's been here since two in the morning. If he was laid out under that leak the whole time, his jacket would be soaked. It's dry." Mercer frowned at the jacket. "So he was moved recently." "Or the leak started recently." Quinn touched the floor beside the body. The water had carved a thin runnel through the dust, and the runnel stopped at the dead man's shoulder. "That's been dripping all night. The body arrived after the drip began, and it hasn't been here long enough to get wet." Mercer was quiet. Quinn liked him for that. He didn't argue when the evidence bit back. She circled the body, keeping to the clean concrete near the platform edge. The dead man's coat was expensive — dark wool, a maker's mark inside the collar that she recognised but didn't name. His shoes were polished, scuffed only at the toe. A man who cared about appearances. The gold signet ring on his right hand caught the lamp light. A mugger would have taken that. A thief would have taken the ring and left the body in the alley where it dropped. Instead, the body was here, and the ring was still there. "Robbery doesn't work." "It was always weak," he admitted. "No witnesses. No cameras in the tunnels. The crew said the gate was locked when they arrived." "The gate." "Access door off the service stair. Chained. They had to cut the lock." Quinn stood. She looked at the tunnel mouth beyond the body — a black arch swallowing the lamplight. The air moved from it, faint and cold, carrying a smell like old pennies and something else, something she couldn't place. Her hand went to her left wrist, to the worn leather of her watch strap. She did that without thinking. "Look, I'm not saying it's not weird." Mercer shifted his weight. "But weird doesn't mean—" "Check his pockets." He gave her a look, then knelt. He was careful, gloved, professional. He found nothing in the jacket pockets, nothing in the trousers. Then the inner breast pocket, and his hand came out holding something small and brass. The compass was no bigger than her thumb. The casing wore a patina of verdigris, green and crusted, and the face was etched with symbols she had never seen — whorls and angles that caught the light wrong, like they were cut deeper than the metal could hold. Mercer turned it over. The needle was not pointing north. It trembled, then swung, and settled toward the tunnel mouth, dead on. "Broken." "Was it in his pocket, or was it pointed at him?" Quinn took it from him, careful. The needle did not move as she brought it toward her chest. It stayed fixed, aimed at the darkness beyond the lamp pool. She turned her wrist. The needle held, as if the tunnel mouth had a magnet in it. "Okay," Mercer said, slow. "That's a compass. It points at things. It's pointing at the tunnel." "There's something in the tunnel." "It's a tunnel, Quinn. It goes somewhere." She didn't answer. She was looking at the floor again, at the faint pale residue she had noticed earlier — a thin, almost invisible line of chalk or ash that ran in a rough circle around the body, broken where the maintenance crew had walked through it. She crouched and touched it. The residue came away on her fingertip, grey and fine. Not chalk. Ash. The circle was not complete. It had been interrupted. "You see that?" "See what?" She stood and walked the perimeter, careful not to step in it. Eight feet across. The body lay at the centre, dead centre, as if it had been placed on a plate. And near the tunnel mouth, the ash was smeared — dragged through, scuffed, as if something had crossed the boundary and stepped on the line on its way out. "Somebody drew a circle around him." Quinn pointed at the smear. "Then somebody left. They stepped in the line, here. That's the exit." Mercer came and looked. "Ritual." "That's what you said." "It's the only word for it." He straightened. "Cult stuff. The market, maybe. There's rumours about what goes on down here." Quinn looked at him. "Market." "Urban legend. People talk. An underground market, moves around. They say it's under Camden sometimes." He shrugged. "I always figured it was drugs." Quinn looked down at the compass in her hand. The needle still pointed into the dark. She thought of Morris — of his closed office door, of the box of his effects she had gone through alone, three years ago, looking for answers she hadn't found. She had seen a bone token in that box. A small disc, carved, with a hole in it. She had put it back and told herself it was nothing. "Find anything else on him?" Mercer shook his head. "Just the compass. And a key, I think. Small. Bone-coloured." Quinn's breath went still. "Show me." He fetched an evidence bag from his kit and brought it over. The token lay in the plastic, the size of a coin, carved from pale bone, with a single hole drilled through the centre. A disc. A key. Quinn did not take it. She looked at it, and she looked at the ash circle, and she looked at the body of a man in an expensive coat with a gold ring on his finger and no wallet in his pocket, laid out in a dead station under a drip that had not yet touched him. "Your drug theory." She kept her voice low. "It was never going to work." Mercer started to answer, and then stopped. At the far end of the platform, beyond the cordon, a figure stood at the edge of the light. Small, red-haired, a satchel strap across her chest, round glasses catching the lamplight. She was not wearing a coat. She had been standing there long enough to be cold. Quinn recognised her. Eva Kowalski. She had seen her file. She had seen her laugh, once, across a table at a café, in a photograph on Aurora's social media. She had never seen her stand still like this, watching a body, her hands loose at her sides, her face unreadable. Mercer followed her gaze. "You know her?" "Not yet." Quinn crossed the platform toward the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1554
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1554
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"perfect"
2"measured"
3"weight"
4"etched"
5"trembled"
6"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences119
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1561
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1211
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Mercer12
Morris1
Kowalski1
Aurora1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Mercer"
3"Morris"
4"Kowalski"
5"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.839
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1561
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean27.88
std25.15
cv0.902
sampleLengths
079
138
230
314
436
56
646
711
89
97
1043
1110
1272
1318
145
1561
1638
1710
1853
1916
2095
213
2223
232
2413
2559
2615
273
2838
2970
301
3157
3216
335
347
3574
363
372
3861
3923
405
414
4221
435
4423
4575
465
4714
486
4939
87.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences119
matches
0"was unbroken "
1"been placed"
2"was etched"
3"been interrupted"
4"been placed"
5"was smeared "
98.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was not pointing"
1"was looking"
2"was not wearing"
12.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences153
ratio0.046
matches
0"The grime lay thick, decades of neglect, and around the body it was unbroken — a perfect, untouched field of dust."
1"The dead man's coat was expensive — dark wool, a maker's mark inside the collar that she recognised but didn't name."
2"She looked at the tunnel mouth beyond the body — a black arch swallowing the lamplight."
3"The casing wore a patina of verdigris, green and crusted, and the face was etched with symbols she had never seen — whorls and angles that caught the light wrong, like they were cut deeper than the metal could hold."
4"She was looking at the floor again, at the faint pale residue she had noticed earlier — a thin, almost invisible line of chalk or ash that ran in a rough circle around the body, broken where the maintenance crew had walked through it."
5"And near the tunnel mouth, the ash was smeared — dragged through, scuffed, as if something had crossed the boundary and stepped on the line on its way out."
6"She thought of Morris — of his closed office door, of the box of his effects she had gone through alone, three years ago, looking for answers she hadn't found."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount451
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.031042128603104215
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004434589800443459
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean10.2
std8.42
cv0.825
sampleLengths
010
124
224
34
44
513
622
716
813
917
109
115
1213
1323
146
1513
1616
172
185
195
203
212
2211
236
243
257
264
2721
2818
296
304
316
327
335
342
3517
366
3712
3817
3910
408
415
423
432
4424
4532
4612
4726
485
495
54.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3790849673202614
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners58
96.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Just the slow, deliberate drip"
1"Instead, the body was here,"
2"Then the inner breast pocket,"
ratio0.029
77.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences104
matches
0"He turned the screen toward"
1"He gestured at the body"
2"His jaw was slack, his"
3"She didn't look away from"
4"His pen went still."
5"She lifted the nearest one."
6"He had been placed here"
7"He looked up."
8"She measured the stain with"
9"He didn't argue when the"
10"She circled the body, keeping"
11"His shoes were polished, scuffed"
12"She looked at the tunnel"
13"Her hand went to her"
14"She did that without thinking."
15"He gave her a look,"
16"He was careful, gloved, professional."
17"He found nothing in the"
18"It trembled, then swung, and"
19"It stayed fixed, aimed at"
ratio0.356
12.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences104
matches
0"The morning had not yet"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The body lay thirty feet"
3"DS Mercer stood over it,"
4"He turned the screen toward"
5"Quinn stopped at the edge"
6"He gestured at the body"
7"Quinn stepped closer and looked"
8"The man lay on his"
9"His jaw was slack, his"
10"A fall left you crumpled."
11"A collapse left you twisted."
12"This was placement."
13"She didn't look away from"
14"Mercer scanned the platform floor"
15"His pen went still."
16"The grime lay thick, decades"
17"The only prints in it"
18"The man's hands lay open,"
19"She lifted the nearest one."
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His jaw was slack, his eyes closed, as if someone had arranged him for a coffin."
1"The casing wore a patina of verdigris, green and crusted, and the face was etched with symbols she had never seen — whorls and angles that caught the light wron…"
2"She was looking at the floor again, at the faint pale residue she had noticed earlier — a thin, almost invisible line of chalk or ash that ran in a rough circle…"
3"She looked at it, and she looked at the ash circle, and she looked at the body of a man in an expensive coat with a gold ring on his finger and no wallet in his…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn took, careful"
1"Mercer said, slow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.038
85.0154%