Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KBQV0B4ZHFFRYW2CHVYR3H

Run Details

Duration:
2m 19s
Cost:
$0.027896
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain caught before the third knock. Rory’s hand froze on the brass. Through the gap stood Lucien Moreau, one shoulder against the jamb, the ivory handle of his cane catching the weak stairwell light. One amber eye. One black. The sort of man who charged for the air he breathed. “No.” She shoved the door. His cane tip slid between frame and wood. “That’s hardly a greeting, chérie.” “Remove the stick. Or I’ll remove your fingers.” “You’d have to open the door wider for that.” The bar below hit a lull. Somewhere, Silas bellowed about a snapped darts board. “Whatever you’re selling, I’m not buying.” “Even if it’s about Evan?” The name went through her sternum like a fishhook. Her grip on the chain slackened. “May I come in? This conversation prefers walls that don’t reek of bourbon.” She shut the door enough to slip the chain free. The bolt clicked. He stepped past her, wool grazing her bare arm. The flat held nothing much: a settee with a broken spring, a stack of delivery receipts, the kettle still warm from her last cup. The single window looked out on the back of Brick Lane, rain-spattered glass and pigeon filth. She left the main light off. The yellow glare above the hob leaked enough. “Speak.” She crossed the room to the counter where the knife block sat. Lucien followed her with his gaze, amusement and something rawer beneath. “You’ve lost weight. The delivery work not feeding you?” “Last I checked, you weren’t my dietician.” She filled a mug from the tap and drank, offering him nothing. The water did nothing for her dry throat. “I never was good at looking after you.” He said it like a fact, not an apology. “And yet here I am.” “Here you are, uninvited. That’s one thing you’re good at.” A phantom smile touched his mouth. He moved to the settee but did not sit. The cane rested against the arm. “Evan crossed the Severn three days ago. He’s in London.” The mug hit the counter harder than she meant. “You travelled all this way to tell me that?” “I came because he’s not just here. He’s asking for you by name in places that matter. And not the name on your payslip.” His gaze dropped to her left wrist. The small crescent scar began to itch under his attention. “He’s asking for Malphora.” The old handle from the forums and encrypted chats hit like a slap. She had not typed it in two years. Not since Cardiff. Not since the night she had rung Lucien from a services car park, bleeding and shaking too hard to drive. “Don’t call me that.” Her voice came out low. “I never did. But Evan does.” Lucien stepped closer, the floorboards creaking. “It seems he’s learned some new tricks. Worse, he’s learned who taught you to erase yourself.” She looked at him then. “You did. And you left before the lesson ended.” The air thickened. The rain on his coat smelled like wet iron and something electric. “I left because staying would have led him straight to you.” His fingers tightened on the cane. “I am not a safe man, Rory. That hasn’t changed.” “Neither is he.” She closed the distance, one step, then another, until she could see the faint pulse in his throat. “But at least he never pretended otherwise.” “You think I pretended?” His voice dropped, roughened at the edges. Her pulse jumped. “I think you were paid to keep an eye on me. My father’s money spends well. What did he call it? Protective oversight.” Lucien’s jaw flexed. “That was the arrangement. At first.” “At first.” She laughed, brittle. “Until what? Until you decided I looked better under you?” “Until I told him I was off the contract.” He said it quietly. “Three days before I left. He didn’t take it well. His exact words, I believe, were, ‘She’ll get herself killed without you.’” The confession pressed on a bruise she didn’t know she had. Rory turned to the window, arms wrapped around her ribs. Below, a figure crossed the lane, head down, too broad across the shoulders to be anyone she wanted. But it was only a stranger in the rain. “Then why are you really here?” she asked the glass. “Because he asked about a name I stopped using? Or because you want something from me now?” She heard him set the cane down. Then the soft fall of his shoes on the worn lino. He stopped behind her, close enough that her body catalogued the heat of him without touching. “Because if Evan’s using that name, he’s found the forum. And if he’s found the forum, he’s found the demon who runs it.” He paused. “That demon owes me a debt.” Rory turned. Their faces were inches apart, his mismatched eyes bright and unreadable. “So this is about a debt? Not about me?” “Everything I do is about you.” The words landed with terrible weight. “But this particular debt is how we stop Evan before he reaches your door.” “And what’s the price?” Silence. Then his breath ghosted over her lips. “We walk into a place that doesn’t welcome humans. You pretend to be mine. And I pretend I’m not already ruined because of it.” The room shrank. Her traitorous heart hammered against her ribs. “Pretend to be yours?” She tilted her chin up. “You’d like that.” “I’d hate it.” His hand came up and traced the line of her collarbone with the back of one finger, a ghost reading a scar. “You have no idea what it does to me to be near you.” “I have some idea.” She let her eyes drop to the front of his trousers, then back to his face, refusing to retreat. “But you couldn’t handle it then. What makes you think you can handle it now?” His hand stopped at the hollow of her throat. Not gripping. Not asking. Just resting there, as if he could feel the blood moving through her. “Because now I have no choice.” He stepped forward, forcing her back against the window frame. The cold glass bit through her thin jumper. Her skin erupted in gooseflesh. “No choice?” She set both palms on his chest, intending to shove. The heat of him through the shirt stopped her. “You always have a choice, Luc. You just make the ones that hurt.” The nickname landed like a blade. Something shifted in his black eye, a ripple of dark glass. “You’re right.” His other hand came up to bracket her jaw, thumb pressing at the corner of her mouth. “I chose to leave. I chose to let you hate me. I chose to burn every bridge back to your door.” “Then why are you standing in my flat?” His mouth came down on hers before she could draw another breath. Not gentle. The kiss was a confession, sharp with teeth and the faint taste of rain. His body pinned her to the glass. One hand fisted in her hair; the other still worshipped her throat. Rory didn’t think. Her fingers found the front of his shirt and pulled. The buttons bit into her palm. She kissed him back like a woman drowning, like she could swallow every unspoken word between them. He groaned into her mouth, low and broken. “Rory.” “Shut up.” She yanked his collar, hauled him closer, and bit his bottom lip hard enough to draw the taste of copper. Lucien’s answering growl vibrated through her sternum. He shifted, and the hard ridge of his arousal pressed against her stomach. “Still think I can’t handle it?” “Show me.” He dragged his mouth along her jaw to the shell of her ear. “Not here. Not yet. When I finally have you, it won’t be with that animal circling outside.” The words doused her. Rory went rigid. “What are you talking about?” A single knock came from the door. Heavy. Deliberate. Then another. Lucien’s body tightened. His black eye fixed on the door, his breath still uneven. “He’s early.” “Tell me you’re joking.” She pushed at his chest, but he didn’t move. “I never joke about that man.” His voice was midnight now, all heat gone. Without looking away from the door, he released her jaw and reached for the cane on the floor. A soft click, and two inches of thin blade gleamed in the low light. The third knock came harder, and this time the door frame shuddered. Rory’s blood turned to ice. “It can’t be. Not him.” “Stay behind me.” Lucien palmed her hip once, an apology and a promise, then stepped toward the door. The knock stopped. From the other side came a voice she remembered in her nightmares. “I know you’re in there, Laila.” The blade in Lucien’s hand caught the light. “Evan.” The name left her mouth like frost. “Open the door, or I’ll open it for you.” A pause. “You always did like the games. But we’re not playing now.” Lucien threw her a look over his shoulder, and in it she saw the exact moment the fixer became something other. Something not remotely human. “Say the word,” he said, too softly, “and I’ll make sure he never walks again.” The door handle rattled. Rory reached for the knife block.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1557
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1557
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"weight"
2"electric"
3"pulse"
4"unreadable"
5"silence"
6"traced"
7"could feel"
8"unspoken"
9"vibrated"
10"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1557
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Somewhere, Silas bellowed about a snapped darts board."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount987
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Moreau1
Silas1
Brick1
Lane1
Cardiff1
Rory7
Silence1
One3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.993
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like wet iron and something electr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1557
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean20.76
std13.04
cv0.628
sampleLengths
051
15
28
35
48
59
614
76
85
915
1013
1122
1254
1313
1420
1527
1622
1710
1831
1918
2045
2144
229
2328
2414
2515
2627
2728
2811
2926
309
3115
3235
3348
3427
3534
3631
3722
3826
394
4032
4110
4212
4338
4438
4526
4629
4734
4817
4940
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences157
ratio0.006
matches
0"One hand fisted in her hair; the other still worshipped her throat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount988
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.030364372469635626
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004048582995951417
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean9.92
std6.03
cv0.608
sampleLengths
07
16
222
33
42
511
65
78
85
98
109
116
128
136
145
159
166
1713
1810
193
209
2124
2216
236
248
2513
2611
279
2819
298
3017
315
3210
336
349
356
3610
379
389
3931
4010
414
4213
438
443
4520
469
4712
4816
495
53.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3503184713375796
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"Somewhere, Silas bellowed about a"
1"Then the soft fall of"
2"Then his breath ghosted over"
3"Just resting there, as if"
ratio0.038
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences105
matches
0"She shoved the door"
1"His cane tip slid between"
2"Her grip on the chain"
3"She shut the door enough"
4"He stepped past her, wool"
5"She left the main light"
6"She crossed the room to"
7"She filled a mug from"
8"He said it like a"
9"He moved to the settee"
10"His gaze dropped to her"
11"She had not typed it"
12"Her voice came out low"
13"She looked at him then."
14"His fingers tightened on the"
15"She closed the distance, one"
16"His voice dropped, roughened at"
17"Her pulse jumped."
18"She laughed, brittle"
19"He said it quietly"
ratio0.429
21.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences105
matches
0"The chain caught before the"
1"Rory’s hand froze on the"
2"The sort of man who"
3"She shoved the door"
4"His cane tip slid between"
5"The bar below hit a"
6"The name went through her"
7"Her grip on the chain"
8"She shut the door enough"
9"The bolt clicked."
10"He stepped past her, wool"
11"The flat held nothing much:"
12"The single window looked out"
13"She left the main light"
14"The yellow glare above the"
15"She crossed the room to"
16"Lucien followed her with his"
17"She filled a mug from"
18"The water did nothing for"
19"He said it like a"
ratio0.876
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
87.96% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien stepped, the floorboards creaking"
1"other hand came up, thumb pressing at the corner of her mouth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.072
leniency0.145
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.029
88.2510%