Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KC2X6N9E2D356EPNM87ADZ

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Duration:
43.1s
Cost:
$0.001385
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant had been warm against her collarbone since she climbed the fence at Roehampton Gate. Not the usual faint pulse she'd grown used to, but a steady, insistent heat, like a stone fresh from a fire. Rory tried to ignore it through the dark of the park, through the bracken and the mud-slick paths, but the warmth only grew, tugging her east, off the trail, into the part of Richmond Park the dog-walkers avoided after sunset. She told herself she was being sensible. The pendant had done this before — once, outside a shuttered tube station in Camden, where the air had smelled of ozone and wet ash. She'd turned back that time. This time the heat was stronger, and she needed to know what it wanted. The grove found her before she found it. One moment she was pushing through a stand of rhododendrons, their leaves glossy and black in the dark. The next, the trees opened like a held breath released, and she was standing at the edge of a clearing ringed by stones. They were oak, not granite — ancient, gnarled trunks that had grown into the shape of standing stones, their bark ridged and furrowed like the faces of old men. They stood at irregular intervals, each one taller than her, their roots knotted into the earth as if they'd been driven there. Between them, wildflowers bloomed in colours that hurt to look at: a blue that was too deep, a red that seemed to glow from within, petals that moved even when the air was still. Rory's breath fogged in front of her. The night was cold — she'd felt it through her jacket on the walk over — but the air inside the grove was warm, damp, like a greenhouse in high summer. The smell of it hit her next: soil and green things, but underneath, something sweet and wrong, like fruit left too long in the sun. The pendant pulsed against her sternum. She looked down. The deep crimson gem was glowing, a faint inner light that cast red shadows across her fingers. It was warm — not uncomfortably so, but alive, like a small animal cupped in her palm. She should leave. Every instinct she had, the ones that had kept her alive through Evan's rages and the long nights in London, told her to turn around and walk back through the rhododendrons. But the pendant had never glowed like this. And she'd come here for a reason, even if she couldn't remember exactly what it was anymore. The flowers were watching her. She caught it out of the corner of her eye first — a cluster of blue blooms near the nearest stone, their heads turned toward her. When she looked directly at them, they were still, just flowers, swaying in a breeze she couldn't feel. But the moment she looked away, she saw them move again, a slow, deliberate turn, like a crowd of faces tracking her progress. Rory took a step back. Her heel came down on something that crunched — not twig, but bone, thin and hollow. She looked down to find a scatter of small white fragments at her feet. Bird bones, she told herself. A fox's kill. But the bones were arranged in a circle, and at the centre of the circle lay a single black feather, long and curved, iridescent in the pendant's glow. The hum started then. It was low, barely audible, a vibration she felt in her teeth rather than heard. It came from the stones, or from the ground beneath them, or from the air itself. It rose and fell in a rhythm that almost matched her heartbeat, and when she tried to locate it, it shifted, always just behind her, just to her left, just out of reach. "Hello?" The word came out of her mouth before she could stop it, and it fell flat, swallowed by the warm, heavy air. No echo. The grove didn't return her voice. The pendant's glow flickered. For a moment, the red light dimmed, and in that darkness, Rory saw something move at the edge of the clearing. It was tall — taller than the stones, or maybe that was just the angle — and thin, and it stood at the very limit of her vision, where the rhododendrons met the grass. It didn't have a shape so much as a suggestion of a shape, a place where the darkness was darker, where the air seemed to bend around something that shouldn't be there. She turned to face it. Nothing. Just leaves, just shadow, just the patient stillness of the grove. The hum deepened. It was a voice now, or almost a voice, a low murmur that threaded through the air like smoke. She couldn't make out words, but she could feel them, pressing against the inside of her skull, asking a question she didn't want to hear. The flowers had all turned toward her now. Every single one of them, in every colour, their petals angled in her direction like a thousand small faces. The red ones glowed faintly, pulsing in time with the pendant. Rory's hand went to her wrist, to the crescent scar there, a habit she'd had since childhood. The scar was cold. Colder than the air, colder than the ground, cold like the touch of something that had been waiting a long time. The murmur resolved into a word. *Stay.* She didn't hear it. She felt it, in the bones of her skull, in the roots of her teeth, in the pendant that was now burning hot against her chest. The word hung in the air like a physical thing, and the grove held its breath. The tall, thin darkness was there again. Closer this time. It stood at the edge of the flower circle, and she could see now that it wasn't a shadow at all, but something with a shape, a long-limbed silhouette that swayed like a reed in water, even though the air was still. The pendant flared. The red light spilled through her fingers, and in that light, the silhouette had a face — or the suggestion of one, a pale oval with no features, tilted toward her as if listening. Rory ran. She didn't think about it. She just moved, her boots slipping on the damp grass, her shoulder clipping the edge of one of the oak stones as she fled. The stone was warm. Alive. It gave under her weight like flesh, and she heard a sound like a sigh, deep and ancient, rising from the earth. The rhododendrons were ahead. She crashed through them, branches whipping at her face, and the grove's warmth fell away behind her like a dropped coat. The cold of the night hit her, sharp and clean, and she kept running, through the bracken, over the mud-slick paths, until her lungs burned and her legs shook. She stopped at the edge of a clearing she didn't recognise. The moon was out, high and pale, and the park stretched around her, ordinary and empty. The pendant was cold against her chest. Dark. Dead. She looked down at it. The deep crimson gem was dull, like a stone that had never held light. And on the silver chain, caught in the clasp, was a single black feather, long and curved, iridescent in the moonlight. She hadn't picked it up. She hadn't touched it. The hum was still there. Faint, distant, but there, vibrating in her teeth, in the roots of her hair, in the scar on her wrist that was cold again, colder than the night around her. And somewhere behind her, in the dark of the park, something was walking. She couldn't hear footsteps. She couldn't see a shape. But she felt it, a pressure at the base of her skull, a certainty that settled into her bones like frost. She was not alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"furrowed"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"resolved"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"furrowed"
3"pulsed"
4"echo"
5"flickered"
6"could feel"
7"resolved"
8"weight"
9"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
81.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1325
ratio0.001
matches
0"Stay."
41.67% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Bird bones, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1324
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Roehampton1
Gate1
Richmond1
Park1
Camden1
Evan1
London1
Rory6
persons
0"Evan"
1"Rory"
places
0"Roehampton"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Camden"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"red that seemed to glow from within, petals that moved even when the air was still"
1"as if listening"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.264
wordCount1325
matches
0"Not the usual faint pulse she'd grown used to, but a steady, insistent heat, like a stone fresh from a fire"
1"not uncomfortably so, but alive, like a small animal cupped in her palm"
2"not twig, but bone, thin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean37.86
std24.05
cv0.635
sampleLengths
077
151
28
341
485
563
643
759
85
967
1071
114
1264
131
1430
1525
1666
1717
1847
1938
2042
216
221
2346
2452
2537
262
2756
2854
2936
3040
319
3235
3343
344
97.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"been driven"
1"were arranged"
2.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was being"
1"was pushing"
2"was standing"
3"was glowing"
4"were watching"
5"was walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences94
ratio0.085
matches
0"The pendant had done this before — once, outside a shuttered tube station in Camden, where the air had smelled of ozone and wet ash."
1"They were oak, not granite — ancient, gnarled trunks that had grown into the shape of standing stones, their bark ridged and furrowed like the faces of old men."
2"The night was cold — she'd felt it through her jacket on the walk over — but the air inside the grove was warm, damp, like a greenhouse in high summer."
3"It was warm — not uncomfortably so, but alive, like a small animal cupped in her palm."
4"She caught it out of the corner of her eye first — a cluster of blue blooms near the nearest stone, their heads turned toward her."
5"Her heel came down on something that crunched — not twig, but bone, thin and hollow."
6"It was tall — taller than the stones, or maybe that was just the angle — and thin, and it stood at the very limit of her vision, where the rhododendrons met the grass."
7"The red light spilled through her fingers, and in that light, the silhouette had a face — or the suggestion of one, a pale oval with no features, tilted toward her as if listening."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1318
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03338391502276176
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004552352048558422
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean14.1
std10.63
cv0.754
sampleLengths
016
121
240
37
425
55
614
78
818
923
1029
1122
1234
137
1431
1525
166
173
1817
1917
203
2131
228
2317
245
2526
2618
2723
285
2916
3014
315
323
3328
344
3515
3616
3733
381
3922
402
416
424
4321
4434
4532
465
471
4811
493
35.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2978723404255319
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners28
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Just leaves, just shadow, just"
ratio0.012
71.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences86
matches
0"She told herself she was"
1"She'd turned back that time."
2"They were oak, not granite"
3"They stood at irregular intervals,"
4"She looked down."
5"It was warm — not"
6"She should leave."
7"She caught it out of"
8"Her heel came down on"
9"She looked down to find"
10"It was low, barely audible,"
11"It came from the stones,"
12"It rose and fell in"
13"It was tall — taller"
14"It didn't have a shape"
15"She turned to face it."
16"It was a voice now,"
17"She couldn't make out words,"
18"She didn't hear it."
19"She felt it, in the"
ratio0.372
53.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences86
matches
0"The pendant had been warm"
1"Rory tried to ignore it"
2"She told herself she was"
3"The pendant had done this"
4"She'd turned back that time."
5"This time the heat was"
6"The grove found her before"
7"The next, the trees opened"
8"They were oak, not granite"
9"They stood at irregular intervals,"
10"Rory's breath fogged in front"
11"The night was cold —"
12"The smell of it hit"
13"The pendant pulsed against her"
14"She looked down."
15"The deep crimson gem was"
16"It was warm — not"
17"She should leave."
18"Every instinct she had, the"
19"The flowers were watching her."
ratio0.814
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"They stood at irregular intervals, each one taller than her, their roots knotted into the earth as if they'd been driven there."
1"Colder than the air, colder than the ground, cold like the touch of something that had been waiting a long time."
2"She felt it, in the bones of her skull, in the roots of her teeth, in the pendant that was now burning hot against her chest."
3"It stood at the edge of the flower circle, and she could see now that it wasn't a shadow at all, but something with a shape, a long-limbed silhouette that swaye…"
4"The red light spilled through her fingers, and in that light, the silhouette had a face — or the suggestion of one, a pale oval with no features, tilted toward …"
5"She just moved, her boots slipping on the damp grass, her shoulder clipping the edge of one of the oak stones as she fled."
6"Faint, distant, but there, vibrating in her teeth, in the roots of her hair, in the scar on her wrist that was cold again, colder than the night around her."
7"But she felt it, a pressure at the base of her skull, a certainty that settled into her bones like frost."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
72.5008%