"The pendant had done this before — once, outside a shuttered tube station in Camden, where the air had smelled of ozone and wet ash."
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"They were oak, not granite — ancient, gnarled trunks that had grown into the shape of standing stones, their bark ridged and furrowed like the faces of old men."
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"The night was cold — she'd felt it through her jacket on the walk over — but the air inside the grove was warm, damp, like a greenhouse in high summer."
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"It was warm — not uncomfortably so, but alive, like a small animal cupped in her palm."
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"She caught it out of the corner of her eye first — a cluster of blue blooms near the nearest stone, their heads turned toward her."
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"Her heel came down on something that crunched — not twig, but bone, thin and hollow."
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"It was tall — taller than the stones, or maybe that was just the angle — and thin, and it stood at the very limit of her vision, where the rhododendrons met the grass."
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"The red light spilled through her fingers, and in that light, the silhouette had a face — or the suggestion of one, a pale oval with no features, tilted toward her as if listening."
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"They stood at irregular intervals, each one taller than her, their roots knotted into the earth as if they'd been driven there."
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"Colder than the air, colder than the ground, cold like the touch of something that had been waiting a long time."
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"She felt it, in the bones of her skull, in the roots of her teeth, in the pendant that was now burning hot against her chest."
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"It stood at the edge of the flower circle, and she could see now that it wasn't a shadow at all, but something with a shape, a long-limbed silhouette that swaye…"
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"The red light spilled through her fingers, and in that light, the silhouette had a face — or the suggestion of one, a pale oval with no features, tilted toward …"
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"She just moved, her boots slipping on the damp grass, her shoulder clipping the edge of one of the oak stones as she fled."
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"Faint, distant, but there, vibrating in her teeth, in the roots of her hair, in the scar on her wrist that was cold again, colder than the night around her."
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"But she felt it, a pressure at the base of her skull, a certainty that settled into her bones like frost."