Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KC42V4CPNWX6EF8EX5W98N

Run Details

Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.023479
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain warmed against Rory’s sternum half a mile from the park. By the time she reached the wall, the Heartstone pulsed under her shirt like a second heartbeat, and she knew the grove was close. She had come to Richmond for one reason: the pendant had pulled at her chest every night for a week, harder each time she faced the river. Tonight she stopped resisting. She climbed the fence where the iron curled away from the brick and dropped onto wet grass. The city noise—sirens, the low grind of a night bus—cut off as if a hand had closed around her ears. Ahead, the oaks stood too straight. Their branches did not sway. The standing stones at their feet gleamed with a faint, slick light that owed nothing to the moon. She stepped between them. No crickets. No wind. The wildflowers underfoot bent without sound. They bloomed in dense clusters, colors wrong for late October, petals too pale and too open, like little mouths tasting the dark. Rory touched the pendant through her jacket. It had gone still and cold. That felt worse than the heat. The clearing was smaller than it had looked from outside. Forty feet across, no more. At its center, the grass lay flattened in a spiral, as though some large animal had bedded there and risen long before she arrived. She knelt and pressed her palm to the ground. Dry. No dew. But the air had a wet, green smell, the smell of compost and crushed stems, and beneath it something metallic, like a coin held on the tongue. Behind her, a twig snapped. She stood and turned. Nothing moved between the oaks. The path she had entered through was still there, a pale cut between the trunks, but it looked farther away now, as if the grove had drawn a breath and expanded. “Hello?” Her voice came out small and dense, swallowed before it reached the trees. The silence that followed had weight. It pressed against her ears. She counted ten slow beats of her pulse in her throat, then twenty. The wildflowers nearest her left boot shivered, though no breeze touched her face. Rory stepped back toward the entrance. The pendant gave a single hot pulse, sharp enough to make her hiss, then went dead cold again. She kept her eyes on the treeline. A shape detached itself from behind the widest oak—a darkness darker than the trunk—and slid from one tree to the next. Not an animal. Too vertical. Too patient. She blinked and it was gone. “Okay,” she whispered. “Okay. You’re not alone.” She didn’t know if she meant herself or the other thing. The path stretched before her, but her feet no longer trusted it. The stones had changed. The left stone stood a few inches closer to the center. The right one had tilted, its crown pointing not at the sky but at her. She had counted seven stones on the way in. Now she counted nine. Or the dark had fooled her. A sound came from the trees to her right. Not a twig this time. A voice. Her mother’s voice, clear as a telephone call, said her name once. “Aurora.” She did not turn. The voice had come from too low to the ground, as if the speaker lay flat among the roots. “I know you’re there,” Rory said. The grass behind her rustled. Something shifted its weight from one foot to another. Very close. Close enough that she heard the soft click of a joint, the scrape of a nail against a stone. She turned. Nothing stood behind her. The spiral of flattened grass at the clearing’s center had changed. In the middle of it, one pale flower stood upright, its petals closed tight like a fist. She had not seen it before. She was certain. The moonlight thinned. Clouds moved across the sky, but above the grove they didn’t drift—they folded over each other, forming a deeper black, a hole in the night. Rory looked up and the stars inside that hole were not stars. They moved. A child laughed, close and delighted, from beneath the earth. Rory’s legs went loose. She stumbled backward and caught herself on the right standing stone. The stone was warm, like skin. She snatched her hand away and wiped her palm on her jeans. The pendant burned again, and this time the glow of the Heartstone leaked through the fabric, crimson and faint, throwing long thin shadows across the flowers. In those shadows, the flowers had faces. Not human faces. Arrangements of petals and stamens that suggested features the way a knot in wood suggests a screaming mouth. She forced herself to breathe. In through the nose, out through the mouth. She had dealt with bad streets, bad flats, Evan’s hands at her throat. Fear was a thing she knew how to file away. But this fear didn’t stay filed. It crawled back up her spine and settled behind her eyes. The path. Get to the path. She pushed off from the stone and walked. Three steps. Four. The entrance lay dead ahead between the two largest oaks. The trees had grown since she arrived. Their trunks pressed closer, roots humped up through the soil like knuckles. The gap between them narrowed. A voice behind her, no longer her mother’s. This one was wet and low, a sound shaped around her name as if learning it for the first time. “Laila.” The name her grandfather had called her. No one alive knew that name. She had never spoken it in London. Rory ran. The ground gave under her like a mattress. Each stride sank and slowed. The wildflowers clutched at her ankles, not with strength, but with a thousand feathery touches that felt deliberate. The path curved away from her, bending left where it should have stayed straight. The stones slid alongside, keeping pace. She heard breathing that wasn’t hers, a dry rasp from behind the nearest oak. She didn’t scream. Screaming felt like permission. Instead, she ran harder, pushing through the tall grass that now came to her knees, then her hips. The air thickened. The metallic taste on her tongue grew strong, like blood, like licking a battery. At the edge of the grove, the two oaks had closed. Not fully. A gap remained, just wide enough for a person to squeeze through sideways. The standing stones flanked it, humming low, a vibration she felt in her teeth. Rory threw herself toward the gap. Her shoulder scraped bark. The bark moved, shifting against her spine like a muscle flexing. Then she was through. She fell onto the bridle path, knees hitting packed earth. The city noise rushed back—distant cars, a fox screaming somewhere in the park. She lay there a moment, catching her breath. The pendant had gone cold again. She looked up. The grove was gone. Only the oaks stood there, ordinary and still, with no stones between them. No clearing. No wildflowers. Just an empty patch of parkland under a broken moon. Then, from the other side of the oaks, very faint, came the sound of something clapping slowly. She got to her feet. The park stretched around her, dark and empty. The path back to the gate was long, and the oaks were between her and it. But there—just at the edge of the treeline—stood a figure. Tall. Too tall. Arms too long. It did not move. It only stood, watching her with a face she couldn’t see. The clapping stopped. Rory took one step backward. The figure took none. It simply stood there, as patient as a stone, as if it had no need to rush. She felt the pendant warm again, a warning this time, not a guide.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences145
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1298
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1286
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Heartstone2
Richmond1
October1
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if learning it for the first time"
45.92% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.541
wordCount1298
matches
0"not at the sky but at her"
1"not with strength, but with a thousand feathery touches"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"knew that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.5
std22.26
cv0.754
sampleLengths
067
166
24
351
478
55
640
71
813
937
1059
116
1218
1361
1428
151
164
1719
186
1935
202
2141
2242
2310
2459
2528
2653
276
2845
2928
301
3120
322
3365
3442
3540
3625
3740
3831
3917
4060
413
4226
4313
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences145
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
46.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences148
ratio0.034
matches
0"The city noise—sirens, the low grind of a night bus—cut off as if a hand had closed around her ears."
1"A shape detached itself from behind the widest oak—a darkness darker than the trunk—and slid from one tree to the next."
2"Clouds moved across the sky, but above the grove they didn’t drift—they folded over each other, forming a deeper black, a hole in the night."
3"The city noise rushed back—distant cars, a fox screaming somewhere in the park."
4"But there—just at the edge of the treeline—stood a figure."
99.16% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1294
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.04095826893353941
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0038639876352395673
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean8.77
std6.49
cv0.74
sampleLengths
012
124
227
34
417
520
66
75
818
94
102
112
126
1322
147
156
166
1710
185
1924
209
211
222
2327
245
254
265
2731
281
2913
306
315
3213
3313
346
3518
367
3721
383
392
402
416
423
4315
4412
454
4611
4715
489
494
42.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.31756756756756754
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences124
matches
0"Instead, she ran harder, pushing"
1"Then she was through."
2"Only the oaks stood there,"
3"Just an empty patch of"
4"Then, from the other side"
ratio0.04
97.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences124
matches
0"She had come to Richmond"
1"She climbed the fence where"
2"Their branches did not sway."
3"She stepped between them."
4"They bloomed in dense clusters,"
5"It had gone still and"
6"She knelt and pressed her"
7"She stood and turned."
8"Her voice came out small"
9"It pressed against her ears."
10"She counted ten slow beats"
11"She kept her eyes on"
12"She blinked and it was"
13"She didn’t know if she"
14"She had counted seven stones"
15"Her mother’s voice, clear as"
16"She did not turn."
17"She had not seen it"
18"She was certain."
19"She stumbled backward and caught"
ratio0.306
64.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences124
matches
0"The chain warmed against Rory’s"
1"She had come to Richmond"
2"Tonight she stopped resisting."
3"She climbed the fence where"
4"The city noise—sirens, the low"
5"Their branches did not sway."
6"The standing stones at their"
7"She stepped between them."
8"The wildflowers underfoot bent without"
9"They bloomed in dense clusters,"
10"Rory touched the pendant through"
11"It had gone still and"
12"That felt worse than the"
13"The clearing was smaller than"
14"She knelt and pressed her"
15"She stood and turned."
16"Nothing moved between the oaks."
17"The path she had entered"
18"Her voice came out small"
19"The silence that followed had"
ratio0.79
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"By the time she reached"
1"Now she counted nine."
ratio0.016
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The city noise—sirens, the low grind of a night bus—cut off as if a hand had closed around her ears."
1"At its center, the grass lay flattened in a spiral, as though some large animal had bedded there and risen long before she arrived."
2"The path she had entered through was still there, a pale cut between the trunks, but it looked farther away now, as if the grove had drawn a breath and expanded…"
3"This one was wet and low, a sound shaped around her name as if learning it for the first time."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
87.8162%