Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KC88KKF20K4WDB13KHBEGK

Run Details

Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.001597
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened and a slice of Soho's neon bled across the floorboards before the door swung shut. Aurora didn't look up. She nursed a glass of water at the end of the bar, her delivery jacket still zipped to her chin, the smell of soy sauce and rain clinging to her. Silas wiped down the counter with a cloth, his signet ring catching the low light. He glanced at the newcomer, then at her, and something in his face shifted. He had a habit of reading a room before the room knew it was being read. "Rory." Her name, spoken in that Cardiff accent, landed like a stone in still water. She looked up. Rhys Davies stood by the door, rain-darkened shoulders, a tie loosened at his throat. He was broader than she remembered, the boyish softness of his face planed away by years. He held a briefcase. He looked like a man with places to be. "Rhys." His name came out smaller than she intended. He crossed the room slowly, as if approaching a deer. He set the briefcase against the bar stool beside her and didn't sit. "I thought that was you. I nearly walked past. Then I saw the scar." She touched her left wrist without meaning to. The crescent-shaped scar, pale against her skin. He remembered it. Of course he remembered it. They'd been twelve, climbing a fence in Bute Park, and she'd caught her wrist on a broken wire. He'd held her hand the whole walk home, telling her it would be fine, that scars were just stories you could read with your fingers. "Small world," she said. "Smaller than that." He looked at her jacket. The Golden Empress logo, a red dragon curled around a pagoda. His eyes travelled up to her face, and she watched him doing the maths, reconciling the girl he'd known with the woman in front of him. Silas drifted to the other end of the bar, giving them the space. He had a way of becoming furniture when the moment required it. "Can I get you something?" Aurora slid off the stool. Easier to be the host than the guest. "Whisky. Whatever he's got." She poured it herself. Silas let her. She'd learned the optics months ago, the way you tipped the bottle and let the glass fill to the right measure. A skill she'd never expected to have. She set the glass in front of Rhys and leaned her hip against the counter. "You're a long way from Cardiff." "So are you." The silence stretched. He picked up the whisky, swirled it, didn't drink. "I looked for you. After you left. Nobody knew where you'd gone. Your mum wouldn't tell me anything." "I asked her not to." "I figured." He finally drank. "Evan?" The name sat between them like a third person. Aurora looked at her hands. The knuckles, the chipped nail polish, the delivery driver's tan line where her gloves ended. "That's over." "I heard. I heard he—" Rhys stopped. He set the glass down with a click. "I should have done something. Back then. I saw the way he talked to you. I saw the bruise on your arm that summer, and I didn't say anything." "You couldn't have known." "I knew enough." His voice was rough. "I knew you were shrinking. The Rory I grew up with didn't shrink from anything. And I watched you get smaller and smaller, and I told myself it wasn't my business." Aurora picked up her water glass. The condensation had formed a ring on the bar. She wiped it with her thumb. "You were twenty-one. What were you supposed to do? Fight him? You'd have lost." "I'd have tried." "And then what? You'd be the one with the black eye, and I'd still have gone home with him." She said it without bitterness. Just the arithmetic of it. "You can't save someone who isn't ready to be saved." Rhys was quiet for a long moment. The bar hummed around them — the fridge, the distant murmur of traffic, the rain starting again against the window. "Look at you," he said finally. "You're delivering Chinese food. You live above a pub. You—" He stopped, and she saw him searching for the right words. "You were going to be a barrister. You were going to argue cases in front of judges. You had the highest marks in our year." "I had a plan. Plans change." "Or they get broken." She didn't answer. She couldn't. Because he wasn't wrong, and the truth of it sat in her chest like a stone she'd swallowed years ago and never passed. Silas appeared at her elbow. He didn't say anything, just refilled Rhys's glass and left the bottle. His hand brushed her shoulder as he passed — a small gesture, barely there. She felt it anyway. "Who's he?" Rhys asked, watching Silas retreat to the other end of the bar. "My landlord. My boss. My—" She stopped. "He's a friend." "You've got friends here." "I've got one." Rhys nodded slowly. He looked around the bar — the old maps on the walls, the photographs of people she'd never identified, the green glow of the sign bleeding through the window. A place that held secrets. She'd learned to read the maps, the places Silas had marked with pencil, the routes that didn't exist on any public transport system. "It's not what I pictured for you." "What did you picture?" He thought about it. "A courtroom. A robe. You, standing up, making some barrister's argument, and the whole room going quiet because you'd said something so sharp it cut through everything." Aurora laughed. It came out cracked, unfamiliar. "I don't think I'm that person anymore." "Maybe not." He looked at her directly. "But I don't think she's gone. I think she's just hiding." The words hit her harder than she expected. She turned away, busied herself with the bottle, poured herself a whisky she didn't want. "You're a solicitor now?" "Barrister, actually. Just made junior at a chambers in Gray's Inn." "Good for you." "It's just a job." "It's the job. The one we talked about." She raised her glass. "You did it. You got out." He didn't raise his. "I got out of Cardiff. I didn't get out of anything else." The rain picked up. Rhys checked his phone, then put it away. He had somewhere to be. She could see it in the way he shifted his weight, the way his eyes kept flicking to the door. "I should go. I've got an early meeting." "Of course." He picked up his briefcase. He stood there for a moment, looking at her, and she saw the boy he'd been — the one who'd held her hand walking home from Bute Park, who'd told her scars were stories you could read with your fingers. "Rory. If you ever want to come back—" "I can't." "You can't, or you won't?" She didn't answer. He nodded, as if she'd said something he already knew. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a card, set it on the bar. His name, his chambers, a phone number. "In case you change your mind." She picked up the card. Thick, expensive paper. It felt like a different life. "Rhys." He stopped at the door. "I'm glad you found me." Something moved in his face. "I'm glad I found you too." He left. The door swung shut, and the green neon blinked through the rain, and Aurora sat at the bar with the card in her hand, listening to his footsteps fade down the street. Silas came back. He didn't say anything. He just picked up Rhys's glass, wiped the ring it had left on the bar, and put it away. "You could have gone with him." "I know." She put the card in her pocket. She didn't throw it away. She didn't know what that meant.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.228
leniency0.456
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.035
92.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1322
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1322
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1326
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount919
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Rhys"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rhys"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Cardiff1
Davies1
Bute2
Park2
Golden1
Empress1
Easier1
Rhys9
Aurora6
Silas7
persons
0"Davies"
1"Rhys"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Bute"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a man with places to be"
1"as if approaching a deer"
2"felt like a different life"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1326
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean18.68
std16.46
cv0.882
sampleLengths
052
145
21
317
443
59
623
714
866
94
1045
1125
1218
134
1450
156
163
1712
1818
195
206
2129
222
2344
244
2538
2621
2714
283
2939
3027
3152
326
334
3428
3535
3614
3710
384
393
4060
417
424
4331
4414
4518
4623
474
4811
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
60.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences138
ratio0.029
matches
0"The bar hummed around them — the fridge, the distant murmur of traffic, the rain starting again against the window."
1"His hand brushed her shoulder as he passed — a small gesture, barely there."
2"He looked around the bar — the old maps on the walls, the photographs of people she'd never identified, the green glow of the sign bleeding through the window."
3"He stood there for a moment, looking at her, and she saw the boy he'd been — the one who'd held her hand walking home from Bute Park, who'd told her scars were stories you could read with your fingers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount917
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03598691384950927
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006543075245365322
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean9.61
std7.66
cv0.797
sampleLengths
018
14
230
315
414
516
61
714
83
914
1016
114
129
139
1410
1513
1614
178
187
193
205
2118
2225
234
248
2511
2626
2713
2812
2910
308
314
324
333
3421
357
3615
376
383
393
409
4118
425
435
441
459
465
4715
482
497
39.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2753623188405797
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners38
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"Of course he remembered it."
1"Just the arithmetic of it."
ratio0.022
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences90
matches
0"She nursed a glass of"
1"He glanced at the newcomer,"
2"He had a habit of"
3"Her name, spoken in that"
4"She looked up."
5"He was broader than she"
6"He held a briefcase."
7"He looked like a man"
8"His name came out smaller"
9"He crossed the room slowly,"
10"He set the briefcase against"
11"She touched her left wrist"
12"He remembered it."
13"They'd been twelve, climbing a"
14"He'd held her hand the"
15"He looked at her jacket"
16"His eyes travelled up to"
17"He had a way of"
18"She poured it herself."
19"She'd learned the optics months"
ratio0.633
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences90
matches
0"The door opened and a"
1"Aurora didn't look up."
2"She nursed a glass of"
3"Silas wiped down the counter"
4"He glanced at the newcomer,"
5"He had a habit of"
6"Her name, spoken in that"
7"She looked up."
8"Rhys Davies stood by the"
9"He was broader than she"
10"He held a briefcase."
11"He looked like a man"
12"His name came out smaller"
13"He crossed the room slowly,"
14"He set the briefcase against"
15"She touched her left wrist"
16"The crescent-shaped scar, pale against"
17"He remembered it."
18"They'd been twelve, climbing a"
19"He'd held her hand the"
ratio0.944
55.56% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Because he wasn't wrong, and"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He stood there for a moment, looking at her, and she saw the boy he'd been — the one who'd held her hand walking home from Bute Park, who'd told her scars were …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.07
leniency0.14
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.3905%