Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KCCWQK55ZMD3CB2MCE8QJ9

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and brought Lucien Moreau back into my life, rain-soaked and utterly unchanged. He stood on the landing with the corridor bulb buzzing above him, his charcoal suit darkened to slate where the water had bitten through. Platinum hair plastered flat against his forehead. And his eyes, both fixed on mine: one amber as a streetlight, one black as a wound. When he smiled, the old feeling twisted in my chest, the one I had spent six months telling myself was a bad prawn and not a broken heart. "Hello, Laila." "Moreau." The word came out flat, practised. "You have five seconds." Mrs. Okonkwo's door was open a crack. A strip of eye and floral dressing gown observed the landing with professional interest. "She has very good hearing," Lucien said. "I'd hate for her book club to learn my business." "You are my business, Moreau. The worst kind." "Then let me apologise for it inside. Out here, I'm a spectacle." I wanted to slam the door in his clever face. I meant to. But my hand had already dropped from the frame, and I stepped back like a fool who still remembered a borrowed room in Marseille and a man who wrote my name in the steam on the window. The floorboards creaked under him. He crossed the threshold and filled the place like smoke, all six feet of tailored suit and bad news. He didn't sit. He stood by the window, cane held across his body, and surveyed my small life: the Golden Empress delivery bag by the door, the helmet on its hook, the stack of library books about London's hidden maps. "Nice place," he said. "It was." He laughed, a low breath of a sound. I turned to the kettle because my hands needed a job. "Do you want tea, or do you want to say what you came to say?" "Both." "Then sit down and begin with the apology." He didn't sit. He reached inside his jacket and produced a photograph, creased, water-spotted, held between two steady fingers. A man in a dark coat outside a newsagent in Whitechapel. Grainy phone-zoom. Slightly hunched shoulders. The set of them sent a cold prickle across the back of my neck. "Do you know him?" "No. Should I?" "He follows your delivery route. Every Tuesday, east route, he stands outside the shop on Wapping Lane. He doesn't buy anything. He watches you cycle past." The photograph rattled in my hand. My thumb pressed into the old crescent scar on my wrist, the childhood accident that had healed long ago and still ached when the weather turned. "If you knew that, why didn't you tell me?" "I'm telling you now." "Six months, Lucien." His name came out like gravel. "Six months of silence, and you walk in here like you're owed a welcome." He took three steps. The space between us collapsed, and each step took something from me. Up close, the rain had soaked into his collar. Beneath the wet wool I caught the expensive edge of his cologne, and under that, the older scent of cold smoke. "I have been watching you the entire time," he said. "The car that idles too long at the end of your street. The shadow at the bus stop. I kept my distance because everyone I love ends up in the ground, Laila, and I will not add you to the list." "Evan said that to me." My voice came out raw. "I'll keep you safe, darling. Just trust me. Just let me know where you're going. That's how it starts." His jaw tightened. "I am not Evan." "No? You turn up unannounced. You know my route. You stand in my kitchen and tell me what's good for me. Same control, better suit." He looked at the photograph, then at me. For a long moment, the only sound was the kettle's low hiss and the muffled bass from Silas's bar below. Three floors down, people were laughing. Three floors down, the night was normal. "My father's realm sent men after my mother," he said quietly. "They found her flat above a bakery in Lyon. They did not find her quickly, and they did not leave her recognisable. When I learned that my father knew about you, I made a choice. I became the kind of man who walks away. It was the only weapon I had." I waited for the words to land. They did, in the pit of my stomach, heavy as stones. "You're afraid," I said. He nodded once. "Of what they'd do to you. Of what I'd become doing it back." "And you think that makes it better? Leaving me in a hospital bed without a word, without a goodbye, without anything?" "They told me you were stable. They told me you were asleep." His fingers closed around my wrist, thumb resting on the crescent scar. "I stood in that doorway for an hour. Every second of it I wanted to stay. But I had already signed my name to the thing that put you there. I couldn't sign yours to the next one." "Then you should have stayed anyway." His lips curved without humour. "I have been wrong about many things, Laila. That is the one I carry." I let the words sit. The photograph had gone limp in my hand. I wanted to keep being angry, wanted to hold the anger like a shield. But the shield had a crack in it, and he was standing on the other side, looking through. "You came back," I said. "I came back when it was safe." "Is it safe?" He didn't answer. His thumb moved over my scar, back and forth, slow as a pardon. The touch burned like the first sip of something strong. "Tell me to leave," he said, "and I'll go." The trap in his voice was gentle, but it was still a trap. I should have laughed. Should have pointed at the photograph, at the six empty months, at the hospital exit he'd chosen. Instead, I saw that he was tired, properly tired, the kind of tired that lives in the bones and never gets confessed. His black eye had gone dull. His amber one flickered, waiting. "Say it," he whispered. "Give me the word, Laila." I opened my mouth. What came out was his name, thick and ruined. The kiss landed like a struck match against dry paper. My fists filled with his lapels, wet wool and cold rain, and he made a sound against my mouth, a broken thing he'd carried for months. The cane hit the floorboards and rolled. He broke away first, forehead against mine, breathing hard. "That's not why I came," he said, as though he needed to convince himself. A crash below. Glass this time, a proper amount of it, and the bass from Silas's bar cut dead. A moment of silence, thick as spilled oil. Then footsteps on the stairwell. Heavy, deliberate, climbing the way visitors do when they have time and bad intentions. Lucien moved before I could breathe. He scooped the cane from the floor, thumbed the latch, and the blade came out with a whisper, thin and pale and very honest. He herded me back with one arm, positioning himself between me and the door, all sharp angles and held breath. The footsteps stopped on the landing. A shadow pooled under the door. It did not move. Someone knocked. Three sharp raps, spaced like a sentence you don't want to hear. "Miss Carter." The voice came through the old wood, calm, unhurried, kind in the way that police officers are kind. "I've brought your delivery." I looked at Lucien. Both his eyes had gone dark. The amber one was gone, swallowed whole, and in its place something ancient watched the door with the patience of a buried thing. "Stay behind me," he said. "Do not open that door." The knock came again. Harder. The wood rattled in its frame. "It's the one you've been waiting for, Miss Carter." A pause. "I think we both know that." Lucien's free hand closed around mine. His grip was cold, and it did not shake.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"His fingers closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.319
leniency0.638
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.085
81.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"flickered"
3"footsteps"
4"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1369
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount908
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien5
Moreau1
Mrs1
Marseille1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Whitechapel1
Silas2
Three3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Mrs"
3"Silas"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
2"Whitechapel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1369
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"saw that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean23.2
std19.67
cv0.848
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176
22
311
421
517
68
712
850
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104
112
1219
1315
141
158
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174
183
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2032
219
224
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2446
2551
2629
277
2825
2941
3062
3118
324
3316
3421
3562
366
3719
3845
395
407
413
4226
439
4467
459
4656
4723
4846
4950
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"was tired"
1"gets confessed"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs164
matches
0"were laughing"
1"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences125
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount911
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.026344676180021953
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005488474204171241
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.95
std9.01
cv0.823
sampleLengths
016
124
27
317
428
52
67
74
81
96
1014
117
1210
138
1412
1510
163
1737
185
1919
203
2137
224
232
248
2511
2615
271
288
293
3016
3111
322
333
3414
354
363
3726
386
3926
409
414
429
4314
444
4512
469
4721
4810
4941
56.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.384
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"Slightly hunched shoulders."
1"Instead, I saw that he"
2"Then footsteps on the stairwell."
ratio0.037
32.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences81
matches
0"He stood on the landing"
1"I wanted to slam the"
2"I meant to."
3"He crossed the threshold and"
4"He didn't sit."
5"He stood by the window,"
6"He laughed, a low breath"
7"I turned to the kettle"
8"He didn't sit."
9"He reached inside his jacket"
10"My thumb pressed into the"
11"His name came out like"
12"He took three steps."
13"My voice came out raw"
14"His jaw tightened."
15"He looked at the photograph,"
16"he said quietly"
17"I waited for the words"
18"They did, in the pit"
19"He nodded once."
ratio0.469
58.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences81
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"He stood on the landing"
2"Platinum hair plastered flat against"
3"The word came out flat,"
4"Okonkwo's door was open a"
5"A strip of eye and"
6"I wanted to slam the"
7"I meant to."
8"The floorboards creaked under him."
9"He crossed the threshold and"
10"He didn't sit."
11"He stood by the window,"
12"He laughed, a low breath"
13"I turned to the kettle"
14"He didn't sit."
15"He reached inside his jacket"
16"A man in a dark"
17"The set of them sent"
18"The photograph rattled in my"
19"My thumb pressed into the"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His fingers closed around, thumb resting on the crescent scar"
1"he said, as though he needed to convince himself"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.043
88.6472%