Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KCGZTQSNMJ8BZH81HV3F2M

Run Details

Duration:
2m 41s
Cost:
$0.029435
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the old deep-level shelter tasted of wet lime and cold soot. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath a low beam at the bottom of the ticket-hall stairs and stopped at the edge of a platform that no longer appeared on any London Underground map. Blue-white arc lights stood in a semicircle, their cables snaking back toward a diesel generator. Her shadow stretched long and thin over the tiles. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Four hours since the call. DS Meera Patel looked up from a clipboard. "You took the long route." "Transport Police had the Camden entrance locked. I came through the vent." Patel gestured at the body. "Male, late forties, no identification. Rigor fixed in the jaw and neck. Core temp suggests four to six hours. No visible wounds." Harlow pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her coat pocket and snapped them on. The body lay on a dark Persian runner unrolled across the platform. Arms folded across the chest. Shoes polished. Hair damp and combed. The face looked almost peaceful except for a single bruise behind the left ear. "Overdose," Patel said. "Tox will confirm." "Where's the kit?" "Gone. Users often take it with them." Harlow crouched beside the runner. The platform floor held decades of grey dust, smooth as a frozen lake. No footprints around the runner. No drag marks. The dust had not been disturbed beyond the arc light stands and the first responders' shoe covers. "He didn't walk here." "He was carried. Friends panicked and left him." "Then where are their footprints?" Patel hugged the clipboard. "These old shelters have strange drafts. Dust shifts." "Not like this." Harlow pressed two fingers into the dust an inch from the runner. It came away thick and cold. "This is settled undisturbed. Someone laid him down from the air." "Don't start." Harlow ignored her. She studied the body. No dirt on the soles. The oxfords looked new, but the leather at the heels had no creases. The trouser knees were damp. The coat back was dry. She leaned closer. The man's left hand curled around a small brass compass. Its casing had a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with symbols too fine to be decorative. The needle quivered behind the glass. It pointed not north but southwest, down the eastbound tunnel. "Who found him?" "A drone operator from Transport Police. He was scanning the abandoned shaft for structural cracks." Patel tilted her head toward the stairs. "He's outside with a cup of tea." "Exits?" "Eastbound tunnel, a maintenance shaft, and these stairs. The stairs were padlocked from the inside." Harlow looked up. The padlock hung open on the gate, its shackle clean. "Who cut the lock?" "Transport Police. The drone operator called it in. I had them cut it." "Any other way in?" Patel shook her head. "The ventilation shaft is sealed with a concrete cap. The eastbound tunnel ends in a brick wall fifty yards down. Dead end." At the far end of the platform, a figure moved between two old market stalls. Harlow straightened. "Why is she here?" Eva Kowalski stepped into the light, round glasses catching the glare, a leather satchel pressed to her chest. "I was asked to look at the markings." Patel raised a hand. "Ms Kowalski is a consultant with the British Museum. I called her." Harlow turned to Patel. "This is a crime scene, not an antiques fair." Patel's jaw tightened. "You wanted occult expertise on the previous case. I thought you'd want her." Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear. "I can leave." "Stay." Harlow pointed at the body. "Tell me what you see." Eva walked slowly around the runner. She stopped at the man's feet. "He was not killed here." "That's not what I asked." "I'm not finished." Eva crouched near the compass, her freckles stark under the arc lights. "The symbols on the casing are Shade wards. The needle is attuned to supernatural energy. It points to rifts and portals." She looked up. "This is a Veil Compass." Patel made a sound low in her throat. "The Veil Market is a story." Eva reached into her satchel and removed a thin bone disc carved with a crescent moon. "This platform is the Market's last site. It moves every full moon. They cleared out three nights ago." Harlow took the token. It was smooth and warm, not like bone. "How do you know that?" "I keep track. The British Museum archives contain references. Not all of them are ancient." "Put that away." Harlow handed it back. The token left a faint metal taste on her tongue. "What does a market want with a dead man?" Patel stepped closer. "What does any underground market want? He's a dealer who got stiffed on a deal, dosed with something, and dumped by people who know the tunnels. The compass is a trinket. You're both making this into something it isn't." Harlow walked to the platform edge and aimed her torch at the tracks. The rails gleamed. Not with moisture. She jumped down. Her boots landed on the ballast. The dust down here was thinner, marked by old rail polish. She played the beam over the steel. A line of dark drops led east toward the dead-end wall. "Patel. Get the photographer before I move." Patel jumped down. "What is it?" Harlow pointed. Three drops, evenly spaced. They ran along the top of the rail, not beside it. "Blood. Someone carried him along the rail so they wouldn't leave footprints." "Could be from the body." "Then why is there no blood on the runner? No blood on his clothing." Harlow moved forward, keeping her boots off the rail. The drops continued for ten yards, then stopped at a patch of cracked tile on the tunnel wall. A black handprint sat low, fingers splayed. Another above it. Another. "That's soot," Patel said. "You said the tunnel was a dead end. Did you check the wall?" "We checked. Brick." Harlow pressed her torch against the wall. The black handprints formed a line that rose up the tile and stopped four feet off the ground. They did not descend. The last print looked fresh, still glossy. She touched it with a gloved finger. It came away black, but not like soot. More like burnt honey. "Get the exhibits bag." Patel hesitated. "You're contaminating evidence." "It's already cold." Harlow held the glove up. The black smear caught the light and shifted, faintly violet. "Soot doesn't reflect. This is residue." Eva appeared on the platform above. "Detective. The needle has moved." Harlow turned. The dead man's hand had opened. The compass rested on his chest, not in his hand. The needle pointed directly at her. "Who moved him?" "No one touched him." Patel's voice cracked. Harlow looked at the body. The arms remained crossed. The man's face had not changed. But his left hand lay uncurled. Rigor mortis did not release in minutes. "There are two people in this room, Patel. No one touched him." "Maybe the first responder moved the hand." "Rigor would have kept it closed." Harlow climbed back onto the platform. She kept her eyes on the compass. "That's not possible." The needle swung gently, then fixed on Harlow's chest. She took a step to the left. The needle followed. She stepped right. It followed. "Turn it over." Eva knelt and turned the compass with a pen. The back was smooth except for a single sigil scratched into the brass. A circle crossed by a line. The same shape Harlow had seen in the black residue on the tunnel wall. "What does that mean?" Eva's face had gone pale. "It's not a ward. It's an offering mark." Patel pulled out her radio. "I'm calling this in. We need more units." "More units won't help." Harlow stared at the open hand, the clean runner, the dust that had not been disturbed. "He was killed somewhere else and placed here without a single footprint. The lock was on the inside. The blood leads to the wall and stops. The body released a compass from rigor. Tell me what that leaves." Patel said nothing. Harlow moved back to the platform edge and aimed her torch down the tunnel. The black handprints were gone. The tile gleamed clean. "Where did the marks go?" Eva stepped beside her. "They only show under the compass's light." Harlow turned. The compass needle still pointed at her chest, or at something just behind her. She did not turn around. "You see it now." Eva's voice dropped. "This isn't a murder scene. It's a delivery." "Then someone signed for it." Harlow snapped off her torch. "And we're standing in their drop box."
created_at"2026-09-03T10:20:10.982Z" 9/3/2026, 10:20:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Harlow climbed back [back]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.432
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.027
93.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"gently"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"quivered"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"quivered"
2"scanning"
3"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences179
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1460
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
6.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount874
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.86
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow25
Quinn1
London1
Underground1
Meera1
Patel17
Persian1
Kowalski1
Eva10
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Meera"
3"Patel"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.07
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.685
wordCount1460
matches
0"not north but southwest, down the eastbound tunnel"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences179
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs80
mean18.25
std17.7
cv0.97
sampleLengths
085
18
25
312
427
552
66
73
87
943
104
118
125
1312
1432
152
1683
173
1829
191
2015
2113
224
2313
244
2526
2617
274
2826
2916
3013
3116
3211
3311
3412
355
365
3744
3814
3934
4017
4115
4226
4342
4457
457
466
4717
4812
495
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences120
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"was etched"
2"been disturbed"
3"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences179
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount593
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.01517706576728499
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0016863406408094434
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences179
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences179
mean8.16
std6.16
cv0.755
sampleLengths
014
132
215
39
410
55
68
75
812
95
1022
1115
1212
135
142
154
1614
173
183
193
207
215
2213
235
243
2517
264
278
285
294
308
3115
326
3311
342
353
364
375
3813
395
405
413
4210
4319
446
4510
463
4722
487
491
49.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.329608938547486
totalSentences179
uniqueOpeners59
30.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"More like burnt honey."
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences110
matches
0"Her shadow stretched long and"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"It came away thick and"
3"She studied the body."
4"She leaned closer."
5"Its casing had a patina"
6"It pointed not north but"
7"She stopped at the man's"
8"She looked up"
9"It was smooth and warm,"
10"She jumped down."
11"Her boots landed on the"
12"She played the beam over"
13"They ran along the top"
14"They did not descend."
15"She touched it with a"
16"It came away black, but"
17"She kept her eyes on"
18"She took a step to"
19"She stepped right."
ratio0.191
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences110
matches
0"The air in the old"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath"
2"Her shadow stretched long and"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"DS Meera Patel looked up"
5"Patel gestured at the body."
6"Harlow pulled a pair of"
7"The body lay on a"
8"Arms folded across the chest."
9"Hair damp and combed."
10"The face looked almost peaceful"
11"Harlow crouched beside the runner."
12"The platform floor held decades"
13"The dust had not been"
14"Patel hugged the clipboard."
15"Harlow pressed two fingers into"
16"It came away thick and"
17"Harlow ignored her."
18"She studied the body."
19"The oxfords looked new, but"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva crouched, her freckles stark under the arc lights"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.081
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.027
84.6285%