Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KCMC8V7FSAE506TRHBKAX6

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59.6s
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$0.009750
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GMICloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn pressed the bone token into the rusted slot of the maintenance door. The lock coughed once, then the steel slid aside without a sound. The air that bled through carried the mineral bite of old water and something else — ozone, burnt sugar, the static before a storm. She stepped down into the abandoned Tube station. Her worn leather watch marked 3:47 a.m. The platform stretched ahead, lit by a string of bare bulbs that hummed at a frequency that made her fillings ache. Vendors had set up stalls along the tracks, but the usual commerce had gone still. A city of thieves holding its breath. The body lay near the third stall, a stall draped in indigo cloth and hung with bird skulls. The victim — male, mid-thirties, hair the color of wet ash — had been arranged on his back, arms folded across his chest like a knight atop a tomb. His eyes had clouded to milk glass. No blood. No bruising. No sign of struggle at all. A constable stood three feet back, thumbing the edge of his notepad. Detective Inspector Mercer. Quinn had seen him at three prior scenes. Young, ambitious, prone to accepting the first story that fit. “Robbery gone wrong,” Mercer said. “Stall owner, name’s Aldous Vane. Dealt in memory glamours and — get this — bottled luck. Probably flashed the wrong trinket at the wrong customer. Someone grabbed a fistful of his inventory and ran.” Quinn knelt beside the body. She held two fingers an inch above the dead man’s skin. Cold, but not with the deep cold of the tunnels. This was a surface chill, the kind that settled after the blood stopped moving. Rigor had set in the jaw, not yet the fingers. Death had come four, maybe five hours earlier. His hands were clean. Too clean. No dirt from the tunnels, no ink from his own ledger books. The indigo cloth on the stall had been ripped — a clean vertical tear, as if someone had sliced it with a blade, not torn it in a struggle. “Where’s the inventory?” Quinn asked. “Gone. Every bottle, every vial. That’s why it’s a robbery.” She stood and moved to the stall. The display shelves had been stripped bare, but the dust beneath them told a different story. The dust sat undisturbed, except for small rectangular footprints where the bottles had once stood. No smudges from a grabbing hand. No broken glass. A thief in a hurry would have left chaos. “Did anyone hear anything?” Quinn asked. “The vendors and patrons weren’t present at the time,” Mercer said. “Found him when they returned after the midnight lull. Market has a quiet hour, apparently. Bone ritual, cleansing the space. Not everyone participates, but most clear out.” “Who found him?” “A Shade artisan. Goes by Fen. Crafted compasses and other navigational tools. They waited until the other vendors returned before approaching the body. Kept their distance.” Fen sat on an upturned crate near the far wall. Pale, hairless, eyes the color of tarnished silver. They wore a coat sewn from black fabric that swallowed the light. Their hands lay still in their lap. “You found the body,” Quinn said. “I was the first to return. My stall is nearest the eastern stair.” “What did you see?” Fen’s mouth tightened. “Aldous on the ground. His skin gray. His face peaceful. No one else.” “Did you touch him?” “No.” “Did you touch the stall?” A pause. “I stepped close enough to see he was beyond help. Then I moved back.” Quinn glanced at the ground near the body. The dust around Aldous held a single set of footprints — his own, walking from the stall to the center of the platform. But no prints led to him. No other disturbance. The killer had either flown or walked on air. “The noise,” Fen added. “When I came down, there was a humming. Like bees trapped in glass. It stopped when I reached the platform.” Quinn turned back to the body. She eased open the collar of his shirt. A small rune had been burned into the skin just below his left collarbone — a circle bisected by a jagged line, the edges still pink and raw. Not a defensive wound. A mark of intent. “What does this symbol mean?” Quinn asked no one. Fen stood, walked over with careful steps. “That is the Sigil of Unmaking. Used by those who practice erasure magic. It removes things from memory. From existence. From the world.” Mercer cut in. “So someone used magic to wipe the scene clean. Explains no footprints. The killer didn’t want to be seen or remembered.” “Then why leave the body?” Quinn asked. Mercer shrugged. “Maybe the spell took too much out of them. They fled before finishing.” Quinn studied the overturned crate behind Aldous. A wooden stool lay on its side in the shadows, as if someone had knocked it over in passing. But the dust on the stool showed no fingerprints. No scuffs from a shoe. The stool fell on its own — or was placed that way. “Aldous was posed,” she said. “Arms crossed. Body straightened. That’s not a panicked thief. That’s ceremony.” Mercer shifted. “Could be a rival merchant sending a message.” “A message to whom?” “The Market. Stay in your lane. Don’t sell what isn’t yours.” Quinn walked the perimeter of the scene again. The stall’s back wall held a row of small drawers, each painted with a different symbol. One drawer hung open, empty. The other drawers stayed locked, their contents undisturbed. A thief would have gone for the locked drawers first — the hidden cash, the private ledgers, the premium stock. She examined the open drawer. Inside, a faint indentation in the velvet lining marked where something rectangular had once rested. Too small for a ledger. Too flat for a bottle. A case, perhaps a box. The velvet bore no dust. “His strongest inventory was on the shelves?” Quinn asked Fen. “The bottled luck was on the shelves. His private work he kept in the back.” “What was in this drawer?” Fen looked at the empty drawer and then at the dead man. “A compass. Not one of mine. Aldous claimed it was from a Shade artisan from another city. He said it was the only one of its kind — a Veil Compass. It pointed not north, but toward rifts. Portals. Thin places between worlds.” Quinn let the word settle. A tool that could find doors between worlds. Nothing like that would be left behind by accident. “So the killer took the compass and left the luck bottles,” Quinn said. “Cleaned the scene with erasure magic, posed the body, and burned a sigil into his chest. But only removed one item from a locked drawer.” Mercer frowned. “That doesn’t make sense. Why go through all that for a compass?” “Because the compass was never the target,” Quinn said. “It was the message.” She pointed to the body’s hands — folded neatly, the left over the right, but the right index finger curled inward toward the palm. Not a natural fold. A deliberate gesture, frozen before death completed its work. “He died pointing at something,” she said. Quinn followed the line of the curled finger to the platform floor. A dark stain, old and dry, in the shape of a crescent. Not blood. Wax. She crouched and scraped a flake onto her fingertip. Black wax, the kind used in binding rituals. “Mercer,” she said slowly. “You said the Market has a midnight lull. A cleansing. Who performs it?” “The Market’s caretaker. A woman named Vesper. She walks the platform with a bone bell. Everyone leaves except for those too old or too weak to move.” “And Aldous?” “He always stayed,” Fen said. “He said the bell soothed him.” Quinn turned and faced the length of the platform. The bulbs still hummed. The shadows still held their breath. The signal was there for anyone who looked: the posed body, the empty drawer, the black wax. A ritual that doubled as a kill. “This wasn’t a robbery,” Quinn said. “Someone came here during the cleansing. Someone who knew Aldous would be alone. They didn’t have to break in. They wore the quiet like a coat.” Mercer opened his mouth, but no words followed. Quinn lifted her gaze to the stalls. Dozens of faces watched from behind their wares, their expressions unreadable. The Market had seen more than it would ever say. “What else goes missing during the cleansing?” she asked. Fen met her eyes. “Memories. Small ones. The Market takes them as payment for keeping the space hidden.” Quinn unwound the strap of her watch, checked the face, then tightened it again. “Then we’re not looking for a person. We’re looking for a memory no one remembers losing.” The sound of water dripped somewhere far down the dark tunnel. The humming of the bulbs shifted to a murmur. Somewhere beyond the edge of the light, something moved — not fast, not loud, but with the patience of a secret being kept. Quinn knelt one last time beside Aldous Vane. His clouded eyes reflected the string of bulbs, and in them she saw it — a second moon, faint and silver and impossible. A portal. Somewhere close. Somewhere open. She closed his eyes with two fingers and stood. “We need the memory of every vendor during the cleansing,” she said. “And I want to know who bought a Veil Compass in the last month.” “We don’t have jurisdiction here,” Mercer said. “The Veil Market polices itself.” Quinn pulled her coat straight. “The Veil Market just became my crime scene. And I don’t need permission to ask questions.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.691
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.036
96.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"velvet"
2"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences124
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1627
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1021
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn23
Tube1
Inspector1
Mercer9
Fen8
Aldous3
Market1
Vane1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Mercer"
3"Fen"
4"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0.374
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.459
wordCount1627
matches
0"Not everyone participates, but most clear out"
1"not north, but toward rifts"
2"not fast, not loud, but with the patience of a secret being kept"
3"not loud, but with the patience of a secret being kept"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences160
matches
0"placed that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean24.65
std17.76
cv0.72
sampleLengths
051
158
264
333
439
558
647
75
810
956
106
1138
123
1326
1437
156
1613
174
1816
194
201
215
2216
2349
2424
2550
269
2730
2824
297
3015
3152
3216
3310
344
3511
3657
3740
3810
3915
405
4155
4222
4338
4414
4513
4637
477
4844
4917
88.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences124
matches
0"been arranged"
1"been ripped "
2"been stripped"
3"been burned"
4"was placed"
5"being kept"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences160
ratio0.063
matches
0"The air that bled through carried the mineral bite of old water and something else — ozone, burnt sugar, the static before a storm."
1"The victim — male, mid-thirties, hair the color of wet ash — had been arranged on his back, arms folded across his chest like a knight atop a tomb."
2"The indigo cloth on the stall had been ripped — a clean vertical tear, as if someone had sliced it with a blade, not torn it in a struggle."
3"The dust around Aldous held a single set of footprints — his own, walking from the stall to the center of the platform."
4"A small rune had been burned into the skin just below his left collarbone — a circle bisected by a jagged line, the edges still pink and raw."
5"The stool fell on its own — or was placed that way."
6"A thief would have gone for the locked drawers first — the hidden cash, the private ledgers, the premium stock."
7"She pointed to the body’s hands — folded neatly, the left over the right, but the right index finger curled inward toward the palm."
8"Somewhere beyond the edge of the light, something moved — not fast, not loud, but with the patience of a secret being kept."
9"His clouded eyes reflected the string of bulbs, and in them she saw it — a second moon, faint and silver and impossible."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1011
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.027695351137487636
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019782393669634025
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean10.17
std7.32
cv0.719
sampleLengths
015
112
224
38
47
521
615
77
818
929
107
112
122
136
1412
153
168
1710
185
1934
205
2111
2210
2314
2410
258
264
272
2812
2929
305
3110
327
3316
3415
356
363
379
386
3911
4027
413
4226
4310
448
4512
467
476
4813
494
49.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.34375
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences96
matches
0"Pale, hairless, eyes the color"
1"Too small for a ledger."
2"Too flat for a bottle."
3"Somewhere beyond the edge of"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences96
matches
0"She stepped down into the"
1"Her worn leather watch marked"
2"His eyes had clouded to"
3"She held two fingers an"
4"His hands were clean."
5"She stood and moved to"
6"They wore a coat sewn"
7"Their hands lay still in"
8"She eased open the collar"
9"She examined the open drawer."
10"She pointed to the body’s"
11"She crouched and scraped a"
12"she said slowly"
13"His clouded eyes reflected the"
14"She closed his eyes with"
ratio0.156
58.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences96
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed the"
1"The lock coughed once, then"
2"The air that bled through"
3"She stepped down into the"
4"Her worn leather watch marked"
5"The platform stretched ahead, lit"
6"Vendors had set up stalls"
7"A city of thieves holding"
8"The body lay near the"
9"The victim — male, mid-thirties,"
10"His eyes had clouded to"
11"A constable stood three feet"
12"Detective Inspector Mercer."
13"Quinn had seen him at"
14"Quinn knelt beside the body."
15"She held two fingers an"
16"This was a surface chill,"
17"Rigor had set in the"
18"Death had come four, maybe"
19"His hands were clean."
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The platform stretched ahead, lit by a string of bare bulbs that hummed at a frequency that made her fillings ache."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Fen added (add)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.691
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.036
83.8081%