| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.591 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 91.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1188 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1188 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "carried the weight" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "wavered" | | 12 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1191 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 953 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Plough | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Mara | 4 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Mara" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.818 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like moonlight given a body" | | 1 | "eyes that seemed to follow as you moved" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 39.7 | | std | 21.31 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 104 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 32 |
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| 86.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "were turned" | | 1 | "were made" | | 2 | "been seen" | | 3 | "been caught" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | |
| 39.59% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers stood in impossible bloom, their colours richer than any palette Aurora had known — a blue so deep it seemed to drink the light, a red that moved with the slow pulse of something living." | | 1 | "Their voice echoed, but not in the way a voice should echo — the sound came back layered, as if their words had been caught and repeated by unseen mouths." | | 2 | "The root-walls bore carvings — figures with wings and antlers, figures with too many fingers, figures with eyes that seemed to follow as you moved." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 954 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thin, green-gold strands." |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.0220125786163522 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0020964360587002098 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 14.35 | | std | 8.88 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 54.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3614457831325301 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she smiled, and it" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "They said nothing, but their" | | 1 | "She was the newest to" | | 2 | "She pressed her boot into" | | 3 | "It wasn't warmer, but it" | | 4 | "Her silver hair fell to" | | 5 | "Her eyes were pale lavender," | | 6 | "Her voice carried the weight" | | 7 | "Their voice was the whisper" | | 8 | "She followed their stare." | | 9 | "They stretched toward the centre" | | 10 | "Her hand rested on the" | | 11 | "She turned, and her feet" | | 12 | "She walked toward the largest" | | 13 | "she said, and it was" | | 14 | "Their voice echoed, but not" | | 15 | "Her hand was still on" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 30.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through the park" | | 1 | "Trees crowded closer, their branches" | | 2 | "Aurora kept one hand on" | | 3 | "Nyx walked at her side," | | 4 | "They said nothing, but their" | | 5 | "The slash of their form" | | 6 | "Mara whispered from the rear" | | 7 | "She was the newest to" | | 8 | "She pressed her boot into" | | 9 | "The soil gave beneath her" | | 10 | "The smell of damp moss" | | 11 | "The trees ended without warning." | | 12 | "The air changed." | | 13 | "It wasn't warmer, but it" | | 14 | "Wildflowers stood in impossible bloom," | | 15 | "A circle of ancient oaks" | | 16 | "Her silver hair fell to" | | 17 | "Her eyes were pale lavender," | | 18 | "Her voice carried the weight" | | 19 | "Aurora stepped into the clearing." |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 9.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The slash of their form was sharper here, more defined somehow, as though the grove gave them substance the mortal world denied." | | 1 | "She was the newest to their small company, a thin woman with the kind of stillness that came from knowing how to disappear." | | 2 | "The soil gave beneath her weight, but there was a slight give, a soft resilience, as if the earth were holding its breath." | | 3 | "Wildflowers stood in impossible bloom, their colours richer than any palette Aurora had known — a blue so deep it seemed to drink the light, a red that moved wi…" | | 4 | "A circle of ancient oaks surrounded the space, their trunks bearing the smooth, deliberate marks of standing stones that had grown into bark over centuries." | | 5 | "The grass underfoot gave a soft sigh, bending in a way that had nothing to do with her footsteps." | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed against her skin, a slow, rhythmic warmth that had nothing to do with her heartbeat." | | 7 | "The ceiling vanished into an unseen height, and the floor became a surface of dark mirror, reflecting a sky of stars that had never been seen from the mortal wo…" |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Mara said, and her tone was flat, a statement of fact rather than accusation" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Mara whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Mara observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.591 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |