| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.509 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1539 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1539 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "comfortable" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "unraveling" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 157 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1533 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.08% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1172 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Rory | 26 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 12 | | Isolde | 15 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.391 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 92.53% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed carved from ice" | | 1 | "chime that seemed to form words just beyond hearing" |
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| 4.31% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.957 | | wordCount | 1533 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the portal now, but in a steady rhythm, like a second heart" | | 1 | "not with their usual fluidity but with a slow unraveling, like smoke losing its shape" | | 2 | "not from nausea but from a sudden, violent hunger" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 25.55 | | std | 20.2 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 64 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 72 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 41 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 78 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 56 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 94.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "been smeared" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were carved" | | 3 | "were seared" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 157 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the tear hung in the air—a shimmering distortion that turned the trees behind it into smeared watercolor." | | 1 | "The vineyard gave way to orchards—trees with gnarled trunks and leaves of copper and gold." | | 2 | "Instead, they rang—thin and glassy, a chime that seemed to form words just beyond hearing." | | 3 | "Dark liquid poured from the mouth of a carved figure—a man with a bowl in his hands and a face stretched in ecstasy." | | 4 | "She felt it trying to name her hungers—coffee, salt, cold rain, the particular warmth of her mother’s kitchen, Evan’s cologne, the burnt sugar of a London market." | | 5 | "Not a warning this time—an invitation." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1181 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.026248941574936496 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005080440304826418 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 157 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 157 | | mean | 9.76 | | std | 5.59 | | cv | 0.573 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 48.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.33121019108280253 | | totalSentences | 157 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 29.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, they rang—thin and glassy," |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Her Heartstone pendant kicked against" | | 1 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 2 | "Her silver hair moved as" | | 3 | "She stepped through first." | | 4 | "Her feet left no prints" | | 5 | "It was a path of" | | 6 | "Its cold seeped through the" | | 7 | "It thickened as they walked," | | 8 | "They moved deeper." | | 9 | "She pressed a palm over" | | 10 | "It was true." | | 11 | "They emerged from the orchard" | | 12 | "It rose through her belly" | | 13 | "She clenched both hands at" | | 14 | "Her shadow stretched behind her," | | 15 | "It strained toward the food," | | 16 | "She stepped back." | | 17 | "They circled the table at" | | 18 | "It moved too slowly, oil-thick," | | 19 | "She pulled back." |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 0.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 103 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil parted with a" | | 1 | "Her Heartstone pendant kicked against" | | 2 | "Nyx rippled at her shoulder." | | 3 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 4 | "Her silver hair moved as" | | 5 | "She stepped through first." | | 6 | "Her feet left no prints" | | 7 | "Rory followed before the tear" | | 8 | "The ground on the other" | | 9 | "It was a path of" | | 10 | "The sky burned a warm" | | 11 | "The light came from everywhere" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted past her and" | | 13 | "Nyx extended one hand, fingers" | | 14 | "Isolde walked ahead, skirts brushing" | | 15 | "Rory touched the Fae-forged blade" | | 16 | "Its cold seeped through the" | | 17 | "Isolde didn’t turn" | | 18 | "The path descended into a" | | 19 | "Rows of vines stretched to" |
| | ratio | 0.92 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Her Heartstone pendant kicked against her chest, its crimson stone flaring with a warmth that felt less like comfort and more like warning." | | 1 | "Ahead, the tear hung in the air—a shimmering distortion that turned the trees behind it into smeared watercolor." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.40% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.302 | | leniency | 0.604 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.113 | |