Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KCX79JB5RTTRVEB0HJ649R

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3m 15s
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$0.002101
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Ptolemy heard the knock first. The tabby's head came up off the manuscript, ears rotating toward the door like twin antennas. Then Rory heard it, too—three distinct raps, unhurried, the kind that expected an answer. A visitor, not delivery. Delivery pounded and left. She knew the rhythm. No. That wasn't the truth. She *recognized* it. Her body recalled it before her brain did, a tightening low in her stomach as she set down the stack of Eva's research and rose, needing breath to cross the flat. Eva was in Stockholm. Which meant Rory was the only person with a key, and she was the only person Ptolemy had forgiven. Nobody else knows this place. The flat sat above a curry house on Brick Lane, walls sweating the smell of cumin and onions and something steamier, and the code was three deadbolts on the door. She worked them in sequence. Copper, black, the third one sticky. The knock came again, patient. "Rory." The sound of his voice through five centimetres of oak did something unacceptable to her spine. She opened the door a crack against the chain—no, she'd already turned the deadbolts, chained nothing. The door swung wide, and the landing light brought Lucien Moreau into a becoming shadow. He stood one step down, hand resting barely on the ivory knob of his cane, the rain already beading the shoulders of his charcoal coat. His collar was open the first two, which was wrong. She had never once seen Lucien with anything undone. His height filled the shaft of corridor, and his face— His eyes found her with a jolt: one strand of amber, one dark as polished jet. Heterochromia ran in the half-blood, she'd learned, but the amber one seemed the only warm thing on him at night. When he smiled, it cut a slash without warmth in his face. "Bonsoir, Rory." "Lucien." She heard her own voice, flat, polite as disuse. "You're not due in this address." "No," he said. "I was due in me." A long pause. The rain tapped against the glass of the stair's single window. The anthracite flame of his rain scattered the smell of London and West-end streets. She stood with her width blocking the door, dressed in—gods—sack jumper and woollen socks, a hat squash? No hat. Her hair, black, a raw shoulder, the scarred wrist folded across her. She made herself say, quiet, something. "How did you know I was here?" "Your name is attached by printing negatives to every good salvation. Why do you think I remained downtown?" "That Gothic, Rothschild theater." Her hand tightened. She had known where to find him, too. Amateurs, they were. They met through the word, the city, and he never knocked. "Why are you here, Lucien?" the syllables came slow and even. "Not because you feel safe in the pub." "No." He put it to the words. "I came to finish the argument." "We didn't have an argument." She kept the door held. "We had a conclusion." The set of his mouth was an almost imperceptible line. He looked down at Ptolemy who had padded over to his sholes, tail across like a small almanac, and the cat unblinkingly bilious—no, the cat did not hiss. It sat and regarded him. "Your cat remembers me." "Still all cats," she said. "must forgive him. Ptolemy was always a confidence trick." "I are not." A silence, a bump of steam through pipes. "It is absurd to say it through the weather," he said, "and you. But I have been walking three hours, from the river, circling this block. I'm not a man capable of wanting much. I've decided however, correcting the record." Rory opened the door a hair. Her fingers felt the flat in that crack, the cold spring air. "The record is closed," she said. "Tabloid. Yes." He pushed the tip of his umbrella into the carpet, a slow, patient gesture. He loved precision; every gesture she'd memorized, she was learning. "So what—what record runs?" A whisper: there they were. The old, insulting the ending rushed in like cold air: They had been picked for something—a hybrid year, maybe. She had just started with the house of London; he oversaw fixer, lonely, and he drew her out. An odd, strong attraction. Rory had not been gone from the margin; she knew her panic, her scar in the world, and his obscure nobility — but she liked him, deeply, before knowing. And then the branch up and she told him a line, and she went to his address, and she opened the bedroom drawer as the messenger for the letter he left. All the unwritten: in env. She heard the essence of the entire old room: "…a task with a face." The phrase, bitter, swallowed. Since — a year ago she had kept out of his angle. He let her. That is the *final*. Now. Here. "The lie," he said, "that night, at the Palissade—I wasn't arranging an exchange; I was settling a tail to get you out." Rory stood still. "You told me I was a 'she's nothing between arrival—'" "I told you so that your seed—the hollow one, the angry one—would hear. If I needed to be thrown in the season, the outdoor." His jaw worked. "I was not free to protect you in public, so I shielded you in mounting: inomething born of some default. But these words, the things I hadn't put—the only ones, I wrote. The other, that night, I was halfway to Paris to disappear from your life. I decided not to disappear. That decided your survival far more than I could're meant." " — you have no right to"—Rory stopped. Throat tightened. "None," he said. "That's why I'm steady on the stairs." Ptolemy wound and grumbled; the cat pressed against Lucien's leg, and his hand was still on the cane. The other hand, the leather glove, the black, hung still. "Lux." She said the word was not the sense. "You hurt me. You know that." "Yes." "Then why are you here? — you can't just unroll a departure and wait for it." He took one step up, and there was precise, cinematic, one-step. The landing light dropped across his face there amid. The luminous heterochrome eye looked into her, the black eye, like a grave. "Because for a year I accepted what there was, and I mastered that lie," he said. "You are not 'one who,' Rory. You're a soldier. I spent my life to never need a living, and you became softer than tonk. Since you, every road in London is 'in.' "Then," she said, "your past road is in London. Pity." A burst of laughter; a strange chime cut it. He entered a trace and something broke in his composure—a flash of the exhausted, impassable man with the collar. "Without work—a sentence, my friend, who owes," he said. "I have already sold and rebuilt my catalogue parts, just to you, that the network may be richer. For example— "You know what I'm gonna do?" she said. "Yes. You hold the door open and frost in a summer. That is our romance." Her breath hitched. She was standing in the — the little doorway, her hand on the door. The rain, low, a distant song. "Why tonight?" she asked, lower. "Why couldn't you want that? A year." "Tonight, an ordre arrived from home. The old will be collected." His stillness disciplined, but a wire was shaking at his jaw. "I am the likely.” Oh. The literal claim of the father came knocking. "I fought him then; the matter of the vineyard and her released. Tonight, he said I would come with him or Use the Society." Lucien the handle of his cane, rotated it a quarter turn. "Marriage politics. I came to see that before I the road," — a small shrug, "if I was not, before the door closed, to give you first purity; I want you to have chosen, untangled." Rory started. "You came to say goodbye by all things??" "I came to redo my last—to me—" He broke off. His mouth turned dry. "I came here to ask if you hold the door open." There it is. The song. The rain changed pitch. Rory considered his face. He still worn that, well. The black eye was as dark as it would, but the amber—the amber was honest, heavy, true, enough. Into the flat behind; the small lamps, the volumes, and the long-suffering little cat. "Eva is in Manchester," she said. "If you want a place." He heard the shift, stepped, and stood on the landing bright. "Are you sure—" began, and she took a step toward him in the square, had the man, close enough to have him smell of lavender and smoke. Her hand, left, went up to his shirt collar, the thing she was too proud to ever let him, now folded—the collar unsung. "Your answer hasn't been completed yet, either, 'Oh.'" He caught of her wrist, and his thumb used the crescent scar, gently. "I know the shape you pecked" — his voice downwards, hair above. With the other hand he lifted her. The rain hammered through. She gave the kiss first. There was a large fold of her history, and he said all the same through it — hungry, but nonetheless careful. He was torn, one of the warehouse and bit, and easy warmth. She pulled back just enough to see his face, in the amber eye the delicate black, took breath. "Come in," she said. "What else is fixed." Above the curry house, the track cast Brick Lane to darkness, and Ptolemy was now standing in the doorway, tail raised in exam, as they finally gave the components. "Should we survive to make things worse?" he asked, a whisper. "Sit down," said Rory. "We'll be the one us."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.475
leniency0.951
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1653
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1653
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"whisper"
4"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1645
ratio0.001
matches
0"recognized"
1"final"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1093
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Eva2
Stockholm1
Ptolemy5
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien4
Moreau1
London2
West-end1
Throat1
Oh1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Throat"
places
0"Stockholm"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"London"
4"West-end"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1645
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean22.53
std18.66
cv0.828
sampleLengths
05
138
24
339
458
516
61
716
831
954
1048
112
1216
138
1459
156
167
1718
1829
1919
2013
2114
2243
234
2414
253
268
2740
2824
2930
3015
3160
3254
3315
344
352
3622
3713
3888
3910
403
417
4228
4315
441
4516
4633
4748
4810
4928
96.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"been picked"
1"been gone"
2"was torn"
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was learning"
1"was standing"
2"was shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount9
flaggedSentences21
totalSentences150
ratio0.14
matches
0"Then Rory heard it, too—three distinct raps, unhurried, the kind that expected an answer."
1"She opened the door a crack against the chain—no, she'd already turned the deadbolts, chained nothing."
2"His height filled the shaft of corridor, and his face—"
3"She stood with her width blocking the door, dressed in—gods—sack jumper and woollen socks, a hat squash?"
4"He looked down at Ptolemy who had padded over to his sholes, tail across like a small almanac, and the cat unblinkingly bilious—no, the cat did not hiss."
5"He loved precision; every gesture she'd memorized, she was learning."
6"They had been picked for something—a hybrid year, maybe."
7"She had just started with the house of London; he oversaw fixer, lonely, and he drew her out."
8"Rory had not been gone from the margin; she knew her panic, her scar in the world, and his obscure nobility — but she liked him, deeply, before knowing."
9"Since — a year ago she had kept out of his angle."
10"\"The lie,\" he said, \"that night, at the Palissade—I wasn't arranging an exchange; I was settling a tail to get you out.\""
11"Ptolemy wound and grumbled; the cat pressed against Lucien's leg, and his hand was still on the cane."
12"A burst of laughter; a strange chime cut it. He entered a trace and something broke in his composure—a flash of the exhausted, impassable man with the collar."
13"For example—"
14"She was standing in the — the little doorway, her hand on the door."
15"\"I fought him then; the matter of the vineyard and her released. Tonight, he said I would come with him or Use the Society.\" Lucien the handle of his cane, rotated it a quarter turn."
16"\"Marriage politics. I came to see that before I the road,\" — a small shrug, \"if I was not, before the door closed, to give you first purity; I want you to have chosen, untangled.\""
17"The black eye was as dark as it would, but the amber—the amber was honest, heavy, true, enough."
18"Into the flat behind; the small lamps, the volumes, and the long-suffering little cat."
19"Her hand, left, went up to his shirt collar, the thing she was too proud to ever let him, now folded—the collar unsung."
20"There was a large fold of her history, and he said all the same through it — hungry, but nonetheless careful."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1097
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.0300820419325433
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008204193254329991
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean10.97
std9.4
cv0.857
sampleLengths
05
116
214
34
44
54
61
74
83
931
104
1119
125
1330
145
156
165
171
1816
1916
2015
2125
2210
239
2410
2516
2620
2712
282
2910
306
313
325
333
3411
3514
3617
372
3812
396
407
4118
427
438
443
4511
4611
478
487
496
62.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners60
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Then Rory heard it, too—three"
ratio0.01
32.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences98
matches
0"She knew the rhythm."
1"She *recognized* it."
2"Her body recalled it before"
3"She worked them in sequence."
4"She opened the door a"
5"He stood one step down,"
6"His collar was open the"
7"She had never once seen"
8"His height filled the shaft"
9"His eyes found her with"
10"She heard her own voice,"
11"She stood with her width"
12"Her hair, black, a raw"
13"She made herself say, quiet,"
14"Her hand tightened"
15"She had known where to"
16"They met through the word,"
17"He put it to the"
18"She kept the door held"
19"He looked down at Ptolemy"
ratio0.469
21.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences98
matches
0"Ptolemy heard the knock first."
1"The tabby's head came up"
2"A visitor, not delivery."
3"Delivery pounded and left."
4"She knew the rhythm."
5"That wasn't the truth."
6"She *recognized* it."
7"Her body recalled it before"
8"Eva was in Stockholm."
9"Nobody else knows this place."
10"The flat sat above a"
11"She worked them in sequence."
12"Copper, black, the third one"
13"The knock came again, patient."
14"The sound of his voice"
15"She opened the door a"
16"The door swung wide, and"
17"He stood one step down,"
18"His collar was open the"
19"She had never once seen"
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He looked down at Ptolemy who had padded over to his sholes, tail across like a small almanac, and the cat unblinkingly bilious—no, the cat did not hiss."
90.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked, lower"
1"His stillness disciplined, but a wire was shaking at his jaw"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.492
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.3751%