Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KCXGJ3PJBRPRX6450355ZG

Run Details

Duration:
4m 38s
Cost:
$0.001520
Provider:
CoreWeave

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened with the familiar shudder of the third deadbolt clearing its housing. Rory stood in the doorway, damp from the evening drizzle, a canvas bag slung across her shoulder. The warm hallway light split around her silhouette and fell across the threshold into the flat's dimness. Inside, Eva stood with one hand still on the chain, her other arm wrapped across her chest like a shield. Her dark curls were twisted into a messy knot, and a pencil was tucked behind her ear. The cat, Ptolemy, wove between her ankles, watching the visitor with the meticulous suspicion it reserved for anyone who was not Eva. The air smelled of turmeric and old paper and the particular must of a place where someone lived alone and thought too much. "Rory." The word came out flat, an observation rather than a greeting. Rory's mouth curved, something less than a smile. "Hello, Eva." A beat passed. The chain rattled as Eva let it drop from her fingers. She stepped back, not quite opening the door wider, not quite closing it. "You're soaked. What time is it?" "Half ten," Rory said. "And I've been wet before. It's not the rain that's the problem." Eva's gaze flicked down to the canvas bag, then back up to Rory's face. "You're not delivering food at this hour. Yu-Fei sent you home?" "I don't work for Yu-Fei anymore. Left two weeks ago." Eva's eyebrows lifted a fraction. She'd always done that — a single, economical gesture that conveyed volumes. Rory had spent years reading those increments. She remembered the first time she'd seen it, across a crowded student union bar, when Eva had been arguing with someone about Foucault and had made that exact movement, and Rory had thought, I want to know what that means. She knew now. It meant: unexpected. It also meant: we are not done talking. "Come in, then. Before you catch your death on my doorstep." Eva stepped fully aside. Rory crossed the threshold. The flat was as chaotic as she remembered — taller stacks of books than the last time, a fresh layer of loose papers drifting across the table like autumn leaves. A half-empty mug of tea had gone cold beside a laptop, its screen dark. Ptolemy abandoned Eva's ankles to sniff Rory's boots with a deliberate, judicial air. ."I'd offer you tea, but I'm out of milk," Eva said, closing the door and shooting each deadbolt home with practiced efficiency. "And I've got a feeling you didn't come here for tea anyway." Rory set her bag down by the armchair — the same armchair she'd slept in for three weeks in the aftermath of Evan, the same armchair that had smelled of Eva and dust and safety. "No. I didn't come for tea. I came because I didn't know where else to go." Eva's arms crossed again. She leaned against the kitchen counter, a deliberate stretch of distance between them. The room was small enough that the distance was mostly ceremonial. "Two weeks, Rory. You left two weeks ago, and you didn't tell me. I found out from Silas, and only because he mentioned you'd stopped coming bythe bar for your shift drinks." Rory's jaw tightened. "Silas talks too much." "Silas cares. There's a difference. One you've never been good at spotting." The words landed with more sting than Eva likely intended, or perhaps exactly as much as she intended. Rory pressed her palm against the doorframe, feeling the old wood's grooves. "I know. I'm sorry. I should have said something." "Yes. You should have." Eva's voice had gone quiet, and that quiet was worse than anger. She picked up the cold mug of tea, carried it to the sink, poured it out. The liquid spiraled down the drain, a small brown galaxy. She did not turn around. "You left Cardiff. You left London. You left me —and then you came back, and you've been here for eight months, living above Silas' bar, and I thought —" she stopped, her shoulders rising and falling once. "I thought we were past the part where you disappear without a word." Rory took a step into the room. The floorboards creaked. Ptolemy jumped onto the armchair and began kneading the cushion, purring like a small engine. "I didn't leave without a word. I left with no words I could say. There's a difference." Eva turned. Her eyes were bright, but her mouth was set. "Try me." Rory's throat worked. She'd rehearsed this on the walk over, through the drizzle, past the shuttered curry house and the laundrette that hummed even at this hour. She'd rehearsed it in the safe, dull hum of her own head, and every version had sounded cowardly. Now, with Eva's gaze on her, the rehearsals dissolved. . "I'm not going to be able to do this if you're standing over there looking at me like that." Eva's expression didn't change, but something in her posture loosened. She crossed the room, sat on the edge of the armchair, Ptolemy shifting grumpily to accommodate her. She patted the cushion beside her. "Come here. Sit down. Tell me."Rory sat. The armchair groaned under the combined weight. Their shoulders did not touch, but the space between them hummed with the current of six years of nearlys. Rory stared at her hands, at the pale scar curving around her left wrist. She'd had it since she was seven, falling out of a tree she'd been told not to climbed. Evan had always called it her flaw. Eva had never once mentioned it. ."It's Evan. He found out where I work. He found out where I live." Eva went still. The kind of still that preceded something dangerous. "He came to the restaurant?" "He came to the restaurant. Twice. First time I talked him out the back door, told him I'd call the police if he didn't leave. He left, laughing. Second time he didn't come inside. He stood across the street, watching. Just watching. For an hour." Rory's voice stayed level, but her hand had found her left wrist, thumb tracing the crescent scar beneath her sleeve. A habit she'd thought she'd broken. "Yu-Fei caught me looking out the window. He's not a stupid man. He gave me my wages, shook my hand, said 'come back when your ghost stops following you.'" Eva was quiet for a long moment. Then her hand moved, slow, and settled on Rory's wrist, over the scar. Her thumb brushed across it once, soft. "You should have come to me the first time. Not the second. Not after a week of staring at walls."Rory's breath hitched. "I know. I thought I could handle it. I thought if I just ignored him, he'd get bored, move on, find someone else to haunt. But he's not bored. He's never bored. He's patient in the way that rot is patient." "He's not here now," Eva said. Her grip on Rory's wrist tightened, grounding. "You're here. You're safe. He doesn't know about this place."Rory shook her head. "He doesn't. I made sure of that. You're the only thing I ever kept from him."Eva's breath caught. She let go of Rory's wrist, and instead cupped her face, turning her to look at her. Her gaze was fierce, soft, and full of things she'd been holding back for years. "Rory. Look at me."Rory looked. The flat's dim light caught the gold in Eva's brown eyes. She'd gotten older — they both had — and the years had carved new lines around her mouth, new weights behind her smile. But she looked at Rory the same way she had that first night in the student union bar, like Rory was a question she wanted to spend her life answering. "I'm not going anywhere," Eva said. "And I'm not going to let you push me away because you're scared. I've let you do that for six years. I'm done letting you do that."Rory's laugh came out wet, cracked. "You've never let me do anything. You've just been patient enough to wait me out.""Patient. Is that what you call it?" Eva's mouth curved. "I call it terrified. I call it loving you and not knowing how to say it without watching you bolt."The words landed like a stone in still water. Rory's hands came up, covering Eva's where they rested on her cheeks. Her thumbs stroked across Eva's knuckles. The calluses from years of turning pages, of gripping pens, of holding on too long and too tight. "Say it again."Eva's eyes went bright. She blinked, once, twice, and her voice came out steadier than her hands. "I love you. I've loved you since we were nineteen, and I have never said it out loud because I was afraid it would scare you off. But you're here now, and you're scared, and I'm scared,and I don't want to be scared anymore." The flat was silent save for the rain beginning to tick against the window. Rory's hand rose, trembling, and cupped Eva's cheek. Eva's eyes closed at the contact, a breath escaping her. "You're not going to scare me off," Rory said, her voice rough. "I've been scared of the wrong things. I've been scared of him. I've been scared of being a burden. I've been scared of wanting this so badly that I'd ruin it." Eva's eyes opened. They were bright, wet, and alive. "And now?" Rory leaned in. Her forehead met Eva's. The contact was soft, grounding, a homecoming. "And now I'm still scared. But I'm here. I'm not running." Eva's hand found the back of Rory's neck, fingers threading through her damp hair. "Then stay. That's all I've ever asked." Rory kissed her. It was tentative at first, a question, a request for confirmation. Eva answered by pulling her closer, by the soft noise she made against Rory's mouth, bythe way her other arm wrapped around Rory's waist and held on like she was anchoring herself to solid ground. The kiss deepened, and the flat's cluttered warmth folded around them. Ptolemy, unimpressed, hopped off the armchair and padded toward the kitchen,in search of a better vantage point. . When they finally broke apart, breathing uneven, Rory's back was against the wall, Eva's forehead resting against hers, both of them smiling like fools. Eva laughed, a wet, unsteady sound. "You're soaked. You're getting the floor all wet." Rory's hands were fisted in the back of Eva's jumper, holding on like she might float away. "I'll clean it up. I'll — I'll do the dishes. I'll make tea. I'll stay." Eva pulled back just enough to look at her. Her gaze was soft and fierce all at once. "You'll stay? Not just tonight?" Rory met her eyes. The scar on her wrist felt less like a brand and more like a reminder — she had survived. She had walked through rain and fear and the long dark of her own making,and she had landed here, in a cramped flat above a curry house, with a tabby cat and a woman who had loved her for six years and had finally said so. "I'll stay. I'll stay as long as you'll have me." Eva kissed her again, quick, bright, a seal on the promise. "Then that's forever, because I'm not letting you go again." Outside, the rain picked up, drumming against the window like applause. The kettle remained cold on the hob. The tea could wait.
created_at"2026-09-03T10:27:01.327Z" 9/3/2026, 10:27:01 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1900
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1900
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"aftermath"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flicked"
2"chaotic"
3"aftermath"
4"weight"
5"tracing"
6"warmth"
7"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
98.56% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount1
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0.007
matches
0"\"I've been scared of the wrong things. I've been scared of him. I've been scared of being a burden. I've been scared of wanting this so badly that I'd ruin it.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1909
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions75
wordCount1222
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.95
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva36
Ptolemy5
Rory31
Foucault1
Evan2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.027
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite opening the door wider, not quite closing it"
1"not quite closing it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1909
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean48.95
std56.56
cv1.155
sampleLengths
0107
123
222
333
416
525
610
778
811
965
1034
1151
1260
137
1412
1539
1697
1742
1813
1954
201
21130
2214
2316
24100
2590
26334
2775
2811
2925
3021
3177
321
3338
3432
3523
3679
3721
3822
95.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"were twisted"
1"was tucked"
2"been told"
3"were fisted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs211
matches
0"was anchoring"
41.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences141
ratio0.035
matches
0"She'd always done that — a single, economical gesture that conveyed volumes."
1"The flat was as chaotic as she remembered — taller stacks of books than the last time, a fresh layer of loose papers drifting across the table like autumn leaves."
2"Rory set her bag down by the armchair — the same armchair she'd slept in for three weeks in the aftermath of Evan, the same armchair that had smelled of Eva and dust and safety."
3"She'd gotten older — they both had — and the years had carved new lines around her mouth, new weights behind her smile."
4"The scar on her wrist felt less like a brand and more like a reminder — she had survived."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount999
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.036036036036036036
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005005005005005005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean13.52
std10.31
cv0.762
sampleLengths
014
117
217
320
417
522
623
712
88
92
103
1111
1213
136
144
1512
1614
1711
1810
195
2012
217
2240
233
243
258
2611
274
284
2930
3014
3113
3222
3312
3435
3516
364
3713
3811
3932
403
414
4212
4318
4412
459
4616
4716
4810
495
43.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2198581560283688
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners31
33.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then her hand moved, slow,"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences99
matches
0"Her dark curls were twisted"
1"She stepped back, not quite"
2"She'd always done that —"
3"She remembered the first time"
4"She knew now."
5"It meant: unexpected."
6"It also meant: we are"
7"She leaned against the kitchen"
8"She picked up the cold"
9"She did not turn around."
10"Her eyes were bright, but"
11"She'd rehearsed this on the"
12"She'd rehearsed it in the"
13"She crossed the room, sat"
14"She patted the cushion beside"
15"Their shoulders did not touch,"
16"She'd had it since she"
17"Her thumb brushed across it"
18"Her grip on Rory's wrist"
19"She let go of Rory's"
ratio0.293
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences99
matches
0"The door opened with the"
1"Rory stood in the doorway,"
2"The warm hallway light split"
3"Her dark curls were twisted"
4"The cat, Ptolemy, wove between"
5"The air smelled of turmeric"
6"The word came out flat,"
7"Rory's mouth curved, something less"
8"A beat passed."
9"The chain rattled as Eva"
10"She stepped back, not quite"
11"Eva's gaze flicked down to"
12"Eva's eyebrows lifted a fraction."
13"She'd always done that —"
14"Rory had spent years reading"
15"She remembered the first time"
16"She knew now."
17"It meant: unexpected."
18"It also meant: we are"
19"Eva stepped fully aside."
ratio0.939
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Now, with Eva's gaze on"
ratio0.01
86.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The cat, Ptolemy, wove between her ankles, watching the visitor with the meticulous suspicion it reserved for anyone who was not Eva."
1"She'd always done that — a single, economical gesture that conveyed volumes."
2"She'd rehearsed this on the walk over, through the drizzle, past the shuttered curry house and the laundrette that hummed even at this hour."
3"She had walked through rain and fear and the long dark of her own making,and she had landed here, in a cramped flat above a curry house, with a tabby cat and a …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"The word came out, an observation rather than a greeting"
1"Eva's voice had, and that quiet was worse than anger"
2"Rory's voice stayed, but her hand had found her left wrist, thumb tracing the crescent scar beneath her sleeve"
3"Rory said, her voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.104
leniency0.208
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.9572%