Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KD1SE9NDHSXRK8JGHKHY0B

Run Details

Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.020836
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory wrenched her hand back from the oak standing stone. Its surface was slick, warm, wrong. She wiped her palm on her jeans and listened. The grove didn't need her permission anyway. Cross the boundary, let the old roots decide. The boundary was two ancient oaks leaning together, their lower branches braided into a doorway. Beyond it, the footpath ended at a wall of silver birch that should not have been there. Her heartstone pendant, warm at the bus stop, now hung cold against her collarbone. Not dead. Waiting. She had come for Eva. The note had been folded into her delivery bag that morning, no postmark, only her name in Eva's handwriting: Midnight. The grove. Come alone or don't come at all. Eva had been missing for eleven days. Rory had learned not to argue with that kind of arithmetic. She ducked under the arch of branches. The temperature dropped not gradually but in a single step, as if she had walked from a warm room into a cellar. The wildflowers underfoot were wrong for late autumn: bluebells, primroses, cowslips, all blooming in a carpet too bright for the dark. They bent away from her boots. At first, silence. Then a blackbird sang from somewhere to her left. Three clear notes, a pause, then the same three notes again. Not quite. The second time, the notes arrived in the wrong order. Rory stopped. Blackbirds did not sing at night. Or repeat phrases like a recording. The song came again, closer, from a hawthorn bush that had no leaves. She kept moving toward the centre of the grove, where a low stone table, more like an altar, sat ringed by foxgloves. Eva had taken her there once, years ago, before Rory understood what the grove was. Something rustled in the undergrowth to her right. She turned. Nothing but a patch of moonlit grass. The grass was still now, but the tips were bent as if something had been standing there a moment before. She held her breath. Two seconds. Three. Another breath, soft and wet, continued a metre behind her. She spun. The clearing was empty. "Eva?" The word came out flat, no echo, as if the air had swallowed it. She waited for a reply. None came. Only the blackbird, now mimicking the cadence of her name: three notes, pause, two notes. The heartstone pendant remained cold, but once, as she passed a loose ring of toadstools, it gave a single hard throb, like a muscle spasm. She pressed her hand over it. Not now. Not yet. The stone table had moved. She was certain of it. When she had first spotted it, the table had been perhaps thirty metres away, half-hidden by a curtain of ivy. Now it stood close enough that she could see the grain in the granite, the shallow channel carved around its edge. She had not heard it move. Stone did not move. But the grove did not follow rules. That was the first thing Eva had told her. Don't trust the distance between things. It changes when you blink. Rory stopped blinking. Her eyes began to burn. She stared at the table until the channel in the stone seemed to deepen, wet with something that was not water. A child's laugh came from the foxgloves. High and delighted, then cut off as if smothered. Foxgloves were toxic. Rory had not seen a child. She reached the altar. A phone lay face-up on the granite. Eva's phone. The screen was on, background a photo of the two of them at a beach in Pembrokeshire. Older than eleven days. The screen flickered. A new message appeared. Turn around. Rory did not turn around. Her shadow lay in front of her, stretched thin by moonlight. It should have moved when she shifted her weight. It did not. Worse, it had too many fingers. She lurched backward. The shadow moved now, a half-second behind her, matching too late. It raised its hand. Rory's own hand was still pressed to the pendant. The shadow's fingers curled. Then the blackbird's song changed. It became a woman's voice, soft and familiar. "You're early." It came from behind the altar. Not from the phone. The voice was Eva's, but wrong in the same way the blackbird's notes had been wrong. Each syllable too precise, too clean, like a recording played at the wrong speed. Rory scanned the treeline. The foxglove bed was empty. The hawthorn bush stood bare. But there, just beyond the altar, a figure in a red coat. Eva's red coat. The figure faced away from her, arms at its sides, hair hanging straight and black. Exactly how Rory wore her own. It was not Eva. Eva's hair was blonde, cropped short. The figure took one step backward, toward her, without turning. The movement was too smooth, as if it had glided over the wildflowers. "You came alone." Not a question. It used Rory's voice now. "I knew you would." Rory's heartstone gave another throb, hot enough to sting through her shirt. She pulled the chain free. The gem glowed faintly, deep crimson, and the light caught on the figure's shadow. The shadow stretched toward her across the grass, twitching, separating from the body that cast it. "Eva's not here," Rory said. Her voice did not shake. She forced the words out steady. "What did you do with her?" The figure turned. And Rory understood that she was not alone, and had not been alone since the moment she crossed between the oaks. She had been watched. She had been followed. And now the grove had finished with its bird songs and its twitching shadows and its borrowed voices. It opened its mouth.
created_at"2026-09-03T10:29:21.514Z" 9/3/2026, 10:29:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"throb"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"lurched"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"echo"
2"throb"
3"flickered"
4"weight"
5"lurched"
6"familiar"
7"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords954
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount935
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva10
Midnight1
Rory14
Pembrokeshire1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Pembrokeshire"
globalScore0.751
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
95.18% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.048
wordCount954
matches
0"not gradually but in a single step, as if she had walked from a warm room into"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"understood that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean26.5
std17.37
cv0.655
sampleLengths
040
132
217
352
456
53
659
737
837
923
101
1136
1235
1361
1427
1529
1625
1741
182
195
2029
2131
2213
232
2440
2526
263
2721
2810
2923
3015
3147
3222
333
3447
354
96.19% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"been folded"
1"been watched"
2"been followed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences120
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.55% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.04051172707889126
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006396588486140725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean7.95
std5.71
cv0.718
sampleLengths
010
16
29
37
48
515
617
714
82
91
105
1120
122
137
147
1511
167
1722
1821
196
203
219
2211
232
2410
252
266
276
2813
2922
3015
318
322
337
3420
354
362
371
3810
392
404
411
4214
435
442
4515
4625
476
482
492
51.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.35
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences101
matches
0"Then a blackbird sang from"
1"Only the blackbird, now mimicking"
2"Then the blackbird's song changed."
3"Exactly how Rory wore her"
ratio0.04
97.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences101
matches
0"Its surface was slick, warm,"
1"She wiped her palm on"
2"Her heartstone pendant, warm at"
3"She had come for Eva."
4"She ducked under the arch"
5"They bent away from her"
6"She kept moving toward the"
7"She held her breath."
8"She waited for a reply."
9"She pressed her hand over"
10"She was certain of it."
11"She had not heard it"
12"It changes when you blink."
13"Her eyes began to burn."
14"She stared at the table"
15"She reached the altar."
16"Her shadow lay in front"
17"It should have moved when"
18"It did not."
19"She lurched backward."
ratio0.307
68.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences101
matches
0"Rory wrenched her hand back"
1"Its surface was slick, warm,"
2"She wiped her palm on"
3"The grove didn't need her"
4"The boundary was two ancient"
5"Her heartstone pendant, warm at"
6"She had come for Eva."
7"The note had been folded"
8"Eva had been missing for"
9"Rory had learned not to"
10"She ducked under the arch"
11"The temperature dropped not gradually"
12"The wildflowers underfoot were wrong"
13"They bent away from her"
14"The second time, the notes"
15"Blackbirds did not sing at"
16"The song came again, closer,"
17"She kept moving toward the"
18"Eva had taken her there"
19"Something rustled in the undergrowth"
ratio0.782
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now it stood close enough"
ratio0.01
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The temperature dropped not gradually but in a single step, as if she had walked from a warm room into a cellar."
1"The grass was still now, but the tips were bent as if something had been standing there a moment before."
2"The shadow stretched toward her across the grass, twitching, separating from the body that cast it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.9786%