Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KR792KXY5RYKJJ7Q2A4QMN

Run Details

Duration:
42.7s
Cost:
$0.003287
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Night had dropped hard over Richmond Park and the paths were empty. Aurora pulled her coat tighter against the damp and checked the time on her phone. 2:17. The pendant hung cold against her chest under her shirt, a deep crimson thumbnail on a silver chain, and it had not warmed. She had told herself it was a job. A late delivery to Silas' bar had gone wrong, a regular who claimed he left a package for pickup at the old oak stones, and the tip was stupidly high. Yu-Fei would have laughed at her for taking it. The trees closed in as she left the main avenue. The map on her phone showed nothing but green. The standing stones rose out of the grass ahead, seven ancient oaks set in a loose circle, their trunks thick with moss. Wildflowers pushed up between them even in November, white and yellow and impossible. She stopped at the edge of the circle and lifted the pendant. The stone stayed dark. "Right. Hello." Her voice sounded thin. She tucked the scar on her left wrist under her sleeve without thinking, the small crescent from when she was nine and a kettle tipped. The air inside the circle felt heavier. The wind that had been tugging at her hair stopped. She stepped between two stones. The ground under her boots changed from packed earth to soft loam. The flowers leaned toward her. A sound came from the left. A twig snap, sharp and close, then nothing. Aurora turned her head. Bright blue eyes caught movement in the dark between trunks, a flicker of pale. "Show yourself." No answer. The silence returned, too complete. Even the distant traffic on Roehampton Lane had gone. She pulled out her phone again. Signal had died at the stones. The screen showed 2:17 still. The pendant was warm now. A faint heat pressed against her skin. The crimson gem pulsed once, slow. She walked further into the clearing. The centre was open, a flat ring of grass where no leaves had fallen. A hollow oak stood there, its trunk split open like a mouth. Inside the split, something glowed. She reached the hollow and stopped. The glow was not from her phone. It was low and amber, breathing. "You shouldn't be here." The voice came from behind her. Low, male, close enough that she felt the air move. Aurora spun. No one stood there. The stones stood. The flowers stood. "You shouldn't be here." She stared at the hollow. The glow steadied. "Who's there?" A shape shifted at the edge of vision, just beyond the right-hand stone. She caught it out of the corner of her eye, a dark that moved wrong against the dark. She turned. The space between the stones was empty. Grass. Flowers. Her breath came short. The pendant was hot now, enough to sting. The gem threw a faint inner light across her palm. The wind returned. It moved through the oaks with a rush that made them groan. The sound did not match the trees. It came from inside them. She took a step back toward the stones. The ground felt uneven under her boots, as if the loam had shifted while she watched. "I'm leaving." The flowers leaned away from her as she moved. The glow in the hollow dimmed. A laugh came, soft and close to her ear. She jerked her head up. Nothing. The standing stones were not where she left them. One of them had moved. The seventh oak now stood a foot closer to the centre, its roots showing above the soil where they had been buried. Aurora's coat caught on a low branch as she turned. The branch was not low a moment before. Her fingers brushed bark that was warm. "Enough." The pendant flared. The crimson stone glowed hard enough to paint her chest red. The heat spiked and then dropped. The air changed. The clearing smelled of wet earth and something sweet and rot. She heard footsteps behind her, bare feet on soft ground. Slow. Deliberate. They stopped when she stopped. She did not turn. "You're not alone." The words came from the hollow. From the trees. From the space where the shape had been. She lifted her hands, empty. Her phone was in her pocket, dead weight. The glow in the hollow steadied again. It pulsed in time with the pendant. She looked down at her wrist. The crescent scar had gone white. It throbbed. The shape moved again at the edge of vision. This time she saw it. A tall, thin outline, hair like black water, eyes that caught the pendant's light and threw it back wrong. It did not step forward. It waited. Aurora's throat worked. She spoke to the air, to the shape, to herself. "Rory Carter. Delivery for Silas. That's it." The footsteps resumed. Closer. The oak standing stones groaned. Bark split with a sound like a bone cracking. From the split, a thin white root rose, uncurling toward her ankle. She stepped back. The root followed. The pendant pulsed once, hard, and the crimson light spilled across the grass. The flowers shivered and turned their faces up. A whisper slid through the clearing, in a language that felt like Welsh and something older. She pulled the chain over her head. The stone was burning now. "Fine. Take it." She opened her hand. The shape stepped into the open.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:44:35.867Z" 9/3/2026, 1:44:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount908
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount908
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"silence"
2"pulsed"
3"footsteps"
4"weight"
5"throbbed"
6"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords908
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount852
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Yu-Fei1
November1
Roehampton1
Lane1
Welsh1
Aurora5
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"Roehampton"
4"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like Welsh and something older"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount908
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean17.13
std12.92
cv0.754
sampleLengths
051
147
254
316
42
529
617
722
832
92
1016
1117
1218
1337
1419
154
1616
1712
184
198
202
2142
2222
2327
2424
252
2615
2715
2836
2925
301
3120
3214
3317
344
353
3617
3713
3814
3914
4033
417
4213
437
444
4526
466
4721
4816
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"been buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs146
matches
0"was burning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences125
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount74
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.013513513513513514
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean7.26
std5.22
cv0.719
sampleLengths
012
115
21
323
48
530
69
710
89
922
1013
1112
124
132
144
1525
167
1710
185
1912
205
216
228
234
2414
252
262
275
289
296
306
315
325
337
346
356
3614
3712
385
396
407
416
424
436
4410
452
464
473
483
494
34.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.27419354838709675
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners34
64.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"Bright blue eyes caught movement"
1"Even the distant traffic on"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences103
matches
0"She had told herself it"
1"She stopped at the edge"
2"Her voice sounded thin."
3"She tucked the scar on"
4"She stepped between two stones."
5"She pulled out her phone"
6"She walked further into the"
7"She reached the hollow and"
8"It was low and amber,"
9"She stared at the hollow."
10"She caught it out of"
11"Her breath came short."
12"It moved through the oaks"
13"It came from inside them."
14"She took a step back"
15"She jerked her head up."
16"Her fingers brushed bark that"
17"She heard footsteps behind her,"
18"They stopped when she stopped."
19"She did not turn."
ratio0.282
8.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences103
matches
0"Night had dropped hard over"
1"Aurora pulled her coat tighter"
2"The pendant hung cold against"
3"She had told herself it"
4"A late delivery to"
5"Yu-Fei would have laughed at"
6"The trees closed in as"
7"The map on her phone"
8"The standing stones rose out"
9"Wildflowers pushed up between them"
10"She stopped at the edge"
11"The stone stayed dark."
12"Her voice sounded thin."
13"She tucked the scar on"
14"The air inside the circle"
15"The wind that had been"
16"She stepped between two stones."
17"The ground under her boots"
18"The flowers leaned toward her."
19"A sound came from the"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A tall, thin outline, hair like black water, eyes that caught the pendant's light and threw it back wrong."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.4293%