Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KR7WW0F38QSA8T5D5NCPY5

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Duration:
20.8s
Cost:
$0.017441
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open, and the steel ferrule of an ivory-handled cane wedged into the two-inch gap before Rory could throw her weight against the oak. Ptolemy hissed from atop a precarious stack of demonology folios, his calico fur standing on end. The sharp aroma of toasted cumin and coriander drifted through the floorboards from the curry house below, smothered instantly by the smell of ozone and sandalwood. "You have five seconds to remove the stick, Lucien." "A hostile welcome, *chérie*. You changed the cylinders. Yale Superior, six pins, anti-drill." "I changed my city, too. Clearly I did not run far enough." Rory braced her shoulder against the door, muscles burning under her faded grey cotton sweatshirt. She shoved hard, intending to shear the cane's silver collar, but the pressure on the other side did not yield a fraction of an inch. Half-demon strength, smooth and effortless. The door swung inward with deliberate slowness. Lucien Moreau stood on the draughty landing, filling the narrow frame. His platinum blond hair remained slicked back without a single strand astray, catching the jaundiced glow of the hallway bulb. He wore a bespoke charcoal wool suit, pristine as ever, though the faint smear of dried soot on his left lapel betrayed him. One eye burned like polished amber. The other remained an abyss of solid black, pupil and iris swallowed whole. "You look well, Rory. Cardiff suited you, but East London adds a certain feral edge." "Step over that threshold and I will put an iron poker through your good eye." "You would ruin the symmetry." Lucien stepped inside anyway, the tip of his cane tapping the worn pine floorboards with a dull thud. He closed the door behind him and turned all three locks with practiced ease. "And we both know you prefer the black one." Rory retreated two steps, keeping her hands open and low. Her thumb traced the pale crescent scar on her left wrist, an old nervous habit she despised herself for keeping. "Three months," she said. "Seventy-nine days." "You did not call. You did not send word through Silas. You let me think the Council dragged you into the Thames." "Would you have wept for me?" "I would have billed your estate for the dry cleaning." Lucien smiled, a slow, razor-thin expression that never reached his mismatched gaze. He leaned his weight onto the cane, his posture casual, yet his shoulders carried a rigid tension that had nothing to do with the damp London chill. He let his amber eye wander over the cramped room, taking in the chaotic sprawl of parchment, the antique iron grates, and the red nylon jacket from the Golden Empress slung over the armchair. "Delivery driver," he murmured. "Yu-Fei Cheung's establishment, if the grease stains on the polyester tell an accurate tale. A former pre-law scholar from Cardiff, reduced to shuttling sweet-and-sour pork across Tower Hamlets." "It pays the rent. And nobody in a takeaway kitchen asks why my blood doesn't coagulate properly under fluorescent lights." "I could have bought you the building, Aurora." "I don't want your money, Lucien. I never did." "No. You wanted my honesty. An infinitely more expensive commodity." He moved toward the centre of the room, closing the distance between them with that silent, predatory glide that always made the hairs on her arms stand up. Rory held her ground. She refused to give him the satisfaction of seeing her flinch, even when he stopped a mere foot away. Up close, the scent of him hit her with the force of a physical blow. Expensive tobacco, crisp autumn rain, and the faint, sweet underlying rot of brimstone. It pulled at something dark and buried deep in her ribs, a reckless pulse that had nearly gotten her killed in Whitechapel. Lucien reached up with his gloved right hand. Leather creaked softly as his knuckles grazed the line of her jaw, cold and precise. Rory caught his wrist in an iron grip. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his heterochromatic stare. "Do not touch me." "Your pulse contradicts you." "My pulse is preparing for a fight." "Pity." Lucien did not pull away. His pulse beat against her fingers, frantic and hot, running at twice the speed of a human heart. "I came here to offer an olive branch." "You came here because you need something. The great Lucien Moreau does not crawl into a moldy flat on Brick Lane out of sentimentality." "You wounded me deeply with that assessment." "Show me your ribs, Lucien." The Frenchman's lips thinned. The teasing arrogance in his posture faltered, replaced by the grim stillness of a hunted animal. Rory yanked his lapel aside before he could block her. The fine silk lining of his suit jacket hung in ribbons against his left side. Beneath the shredded fabric of his white poplin shirt, four jagged, blackened lacerations tore through the pale skin above his hip. The flesh around the wounds wept an oily, violet fluid that sizzled against the air, releasing the foul reek of pure Avaros sulfur. "Abyssal hounds," she whispered. "They have improved their tracking methods since we last met in Marseille." "Those wounds are necrotising. You need pure salt, crushed rowan, and a cautery iron, not a witty conversation." "I possess the iron," Lucien said softly, his voice dropping into that low, resonant register that made her stomach twist into knots. "I lack the hands steady enough to hold it." Rory stared at the wound, then up into his face. His skin carried an ashen pallor beneath the high cheekbones. The demon half of his heritage fought the poison, but the human half dragged him toward the grave. He had crossed half the city bleeding pure venom just to collapse on her rug. "Why me?" she demanded, voice trembling with an anger that failed to mask the terror underneath. "You have a dozen safe houses in Mayfair. You have warlocks on retainer." "Warlocks ask for debts in return. And none of them look at me the way you do." "With disgust?" "With rage. It is far more reliable than loyalty." Rory let go of his jacket, turning swiftly toward the small galley kitchen. She dragged a copper basin from beneath the sink and retrieved a jar of coarse sea salt from the pantry shelf. Her movements were sharp, efficient, driven by the pure necessity of survival that London had carved into her bones. "Sit on the stool," she commanded. "Take the jacket off." Lucien obeyed without a single sarcastic retort, which terrified her more than any threat. He peeled the ruined suit jacket from his shoulders and let it drop to the floorboards. As he unbuttoned the blood-soaked shirt, Rory caught sight of his chest, broad, pale, and mapped with old silver scars from a lifetime spent in the city's underbelly. She set the copper basin on the floor between his polished leather oxfords. When she knelt before him, her black hair fell across her face. Lucien's bare fingers gently tucked the strands behind her ear. He didn't pull away this time, and neither did she. His touch burned against the skin of her cheek. "I stayed away to keep them off your scent, Rory," he said quietly. "Evan sold your name to the syndicate before I took his tongue." Rory froze, her hands hovering above the open wound. "You found Evan?" "He will not trouble you again." "Lucien—" The front door exploded inward in a hail of splintered oak and screeching iron. The three deadbolts tore free from the frame, tumbling across the rug as a wave of putrid, scalding air flooded the flat. On the threshold crouched a creature of twisted bone and midnight muscle, its jaw unhinging to reveal rows of translucent needle teeth, its yellow eyes locked directly onto the demon blood pooling in Rory's copper basin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien said softly [softly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.209
leniency0.419
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.093
88.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count4
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"abyssal"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"grave"
count1
13
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"effortless"
2"pristine"
3"practiced ease"
4"traced"
5"tension"
6"chill"
7"chaotic"
8"pulse"
9"silk"
10"abyssal"
11"stomach"
12"grave"
13"efficient"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1309
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount924
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Moreau1
Lucien8
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Whitechapel1
Frenchman1
Avaros1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Frenchman"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.905
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1309
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean22.96
std18.59
cv0.809
sampleLengths
027
142
29
313
412
545
67
754
819
915
1015
1146
1230
134
142
1522
166
1710
1873
1932
2020
218
229
2310
2451
2550
2623
2717
284
294
307
3132
3224
337
345
3520
3669
374
3812
3918
4031
4153
4229
4317
442
459
4653
4710
4858
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences97
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount929
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slow, razor-thin expression"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.024757804090419805
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010764262648008612
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean13.49
std7.53
cv0.558
sampleLengths
027
116
226
39
413
512
615
725
85
97
1011
1120
1223
136
1413
1515
1615
1723
1814
199
2010
2120
224
232
2422
256
2610
2712
2827
2934
304
3128
3220
338
349
3510
3628
374
3819
3915
4013
4122
428
4315
448
459
464
474
487
496
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.44329896907216493
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
70.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences59
matches
0"She shoved hard, intending to"
1"His platinum blond hair remained"
2"He wore a bespoke charcoal"
3"He closed the door behind"
4"Her thumb traced the pale"
5"He leaned his weight onto"
6"He let his amber eye"
7"He moved toward the centre"
8"She refused to give him"
9"It pulled at something dark"
10"Her bright blue eyes locked"
11"His pulse beat against her"
12"His skin carried an ashen"
13"He had crossed half the"
14"she demanded, voice trembling with"
15"She dragged a copper basin"
16"Her movements were sharp, efficient,"
17"He peeled the ruined suit"
18"She set the copper basin"
19"He didn't pull away this"
ratio0.373
27.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences59
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked open,"
1"Ptolemy hissed from atop a"
2"The sharp aroma of toasted"
3"Rory braced her shoulder against"
4"She shoved hard, intending to"
5"The door swung inward with"
6"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
7"His platinum blond hair remained"
8"He wore a bespoke charcoal"
9"The other remained an abyss"
10"Lucien stepped inside anyway, the"
11"He closed the door behind"
12"Rory retreated two steps, keeping"
13"Her thumb traced the pale"
14"Lucien smiled, a slow, razor-thin"
15"He leaned his weight onto"
16"He let his amber eye"
17"He moved toward the centre"
18"Rory held her ground."
19"She refused to give him"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He leaned his weight onto the cane, his posture casual, yet his shoulders carried a rigid tension that had nothing to do with the damp London chill."
1"It pulled at something dark and buried deep in her ribs, a reckless pulse that had nearly gotten her killed in Whitechapel."
2"The flesh around the wounds wept an oily, violet fluid that sizzled against the air, releasing the foul reek of pure Avaros sulfur."
3"Lucien obeyed without a single sarcastic retort, which terrified her more than any threat."
4"On the threshold crouched a creature of twisted bone and midnight muscle, its jaw unhinging to reveal rows of translucent needle teeth, its yellow eyes locked d…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
80.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.279
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.14
83.7165%