Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KR85FJ0ZW086DTFA9WABS6

Run Details

Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.004357
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate at Richmond Park was locked at ten. Rory ducked under the chain and stepped into the dark. Cold had settled in the grass and her breath came out in short clouds. The delivery bag was gone, left on the bike outside The Golden Empress. The pendant was not. It hung against her throat on a silver chain, the deep crimson stone warm enough to sting. It had started to pulse halfway through her shift, a faint inner glow she had first noticed in the kitchen when Yu-Fei was shouting orders. She had told herself it was the heat from the ovens. By the time she reached the flat above Silas’ bar the warmth had become insistence. She had checked the scar on her left wrist, the small crescent from a childhood accident, as if the familiar ridge could anchor her. It did not. She walked past the main avenue and toward the hill where the old oaks stood. The park map in her head was accurate enough. Streetlamps thinned to nothing. The path under the trees was slick with fallen leaves. The standing stones were there. Ancient oak trunks, not stone, but the local name had stuck. They formed a loose ring half-hidden by bracken. Wildflowers bloomed at their feet in year-round defiance of season, white and violet against the dark earth. Rory stopped at the edge of the ring. The air inside the clearing felt thicker. The pendant warmed. “Right,” she said. “That’s you.” She lifted the chain. The gem was dull in the open air, then brightened as she took a step forward. The glow caught in her bright blue eyes and threw a crimson point onto the bark. A sound came from the trees beyond the ring. Not wind. A dry rustle, deliberate, like a hand brushing leaves in the opposite direction to the breeze. Rory stood still. The clearing was empty. The flowers did not move. She had come because the warmth would not stop. Eva had once told her about Isolde’s grove, about a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm where time moved differently. Rory had laughed at the story over cheap beer in Silas’ bar. She had laughed at a lot of things since she left Cardiff and Evan. Now she stood in a place that should not be there at night, in a park that should be empty, with a stone that pulsed against her skin. “Okay,” she said. “Show me what you want.” The rustle came again, closer. She turned her head. Nothing. The edge of vision caught movement, a blur of dark against dark, and then nothing. She blinked. The oak trunks were still. The flowers were still. The pendant pulsed. Heat climbed her collarbone. She took a step into the ring. The ground under her boots felt spongy, as if the soil breathed. A faint chime rose, high and thin, then cut off. The sound had no source she could place. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud. It bounced back wrong, as if the clearing absorbed it. The wildflowers seemed to lean toward her. She told herself it was a trick of the glow from the stone. She crouched and touched a bloom. Petals were cool. They smelled of nothing. She stood and pressed her palm to the nearest oak. Bark was rough and alive with sap. The tree was warm. The rustle was now on her left. She turned. A shadow shifted between two trunks, low to the ground, and vanished before she could focus. The pendant flared. She pulled the chain free and held the stone out. The crimson deepened. “Is this a Hel portal?” No answer. The clearing held its breath. Somewhere far off a dog barked, then stopped. The night in Richmond Park should have held traffic, distant sirens, the hum of the city. Here there was only the soft tick of sap and the faint thud of her own pulse in her ears. A branch cracked behind her. She spun. The ring of oaks was empty. The flowers had not moved. The sound came again, directly behind her now, a soft scrape of bark. She did not run. Rory was cool-headed and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking. She counted. Four stones. No, four trees. Seven steps across. The pendant was warm, then hotter. She closed her fist around it. “Fine,” she said. “You’re not alone in here.” The rustle answered. It moved around the perimeter, circling. She could feel it in the change of air pressure, in the way the flowers seemed to tilt. The glow from the stone painted her face red. She stepped back toward the edge of the ring, toward the path she had come on. The warmth lessened as she moved. The rustle increased. She turned and walked. Halfway to the boundary the ground changed under her feet. The sponginess gave way to normal earth. The pendant cooled. She stopped. The rustle stopped with her. “Come on,” she said. “If you’re going to do this, do it.” The oak trunks loomed. One of them exhaled. The bark split a fraction, a thin line opening like a mouth. No sap ran. The line widened. Rory lifted her wrist, the crescent scar catching the stone’s light. She did not wait for shape or explanation. She stepped forward and pressed her palm flat against the bark. The wood was warm. The pendant flared against her chest and the inner glow became steady. The flowers around her feet turned their faces toward her in unison.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount923
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount923
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"pulsed"
4"could feel"
5"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords923
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount883
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Isolde1
Earth1
Fae1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Rory6
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
91.66% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.083
wordCount923
matches
0"not stone, but the local name had stuck"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean29.77
std21.68
cv0.728
sampleLengths
050
195
238
356
43
55
636
739
884
98
1036
117
1237
131
1435
1534
1628
1713
185
1951
2031
2135
228
2336
2425
2524
267
2712
2826
2930
3028
98.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"was locked"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was shouting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences117
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount127
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.015748031496062992
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean7.89
std5.53
cv0.7
sampleLengths
09
110
214
313
44
517
625
711
815
924
103
1115
129
134
1410
155
1611
178
1817
198
207
213
223
232
244
2516
2616
279
282
2916
303
314
325
339
3421
3512
3614
3728
383
395
405
414
421
4315
442
455
464
473
484
497
36.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners36
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Somewhere far off a dog"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences98
matches
0"It hung against her throat"
1"It had started to pulse"
2"She had told herself it"
3"She had checked the scar"
4"It did not."
5"She walked past the main"
6"They formed a loose ring"
7"She lifted the chain."
8"She had come because the"
9"She had laughed at a"
10"She turned her head."
11"She took a step into"
12"Her voice sounded too loud."
13"It bounced back wrong, as"
14"She told herself it was"
15"She crouched and touched a"
16"They smelled of nothing."
17"She stood and pressed her"
18"She pulled the chain free"
19"She did not run."
ratio0.276
5.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences98
matches
0"The gate at Richmond Park"
1"Rory ducked under the chain"
2"The delivery bag was gone,"
3"The pendant was not."
4"It hung against her throat"
5"It had started to pulse"
6"She had told herself it"
7"She had checked the scar"
8"It did not."
9"She walked past the main"
10"The park map in her"
11"Streetlamps thinned to nothing."
12"The path under the trees"
13"The standing stones were there."
14"They formed a loose ring"
15"Wildflowers bloomed at their feet"
16"Rory stopped at the edge"
17"The air inside the clearing"
18"The pendant warmed."
19"She lifted the chain."
ratio0.908
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"By the time she reached"
1"Now she stood in a"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.4371%