Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KR86ZEJH791P8WTWT016VG

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Duration:
1m 1s
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$0.004747
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed above the door of The Raven's Nest and threw a sickly wash over the rain-slick pavement in Soho. Rory ducked under it with a bag of dumplings cooling against her hip, the Golden Empress delivery thermal still zipped to her chest. She had come down for a pint after her shift, not for company. Inside the bar smelled of old wood and spilled beer. Maps yellowed at the edges covered the walls, black-and-white photographs of men in coats she did not know. The low light caught the silver signet ring on Silas Blackwood's right hand as he polished a glass behind the bar. His grey-streaked auburn hair sat under a neat trimmed beard of the same color. He limped when he moved between bottles, the left leg catching just a fraction. Rory lifted her head to find him already looking at her. He lifted his chin a fraction. "You’re late on the rent." "I’m not late," Rory said. She set the bag on the bar. "I paid on Thursday." "Thursday was a week ago." She peeled off her jacket. Straight shoulder-length black hair fell forward as she shook rain from it. Bright blue eyes swept the room out of habit, cataloguing exits, the bookshelf that did not sit flush with the wall, the door at the back. "Someone’s in your booth," Silas said. Rory turned. The booth by the window held a woman with wet hair pulled back, a coat still dripping onto the floor. The woman looked up and smiled, and the smile broke into something smaller. "Eva?" The woman stood. She was taller than Rory remembered, or Rory had shrunk. Her coat was expensive, the kind that did not belong in this bar. She crossed the room in three strides and pulled Rory into an embrace that smelled of perfume and city rain. "Rory Carter," Eva said into her hair. "Laila. Malphora." Rory laughed, a short sound that caught in her throat. "You still call me that." "I still know you," Eva said. Silas watched from behind the bar, the glass still in his hand. He did not pour. He did not move. Rory stepped back and studied her. Eva's cheekbones had sharpened. Her eyes were tired in a way Rory had not seen at Cardiff University when they shared a flat and a kettle and plans for law school. Rory's own hands were rough from bike handles. A small crescent-shaped scar marked her left wrist, pale against her skin. "You came to London," Rory said. "I came back," Eva said. "I’m here for work. A conference." "You never liked London." "I never liked you leaving." Silas set the glass down with a soft click. He limped to the booth and set two glasses on the table without asking. He did not sit. Rory slid into the booth across from Eva. The vinyl sighed under her. She kept her coat on. "You look well," Eva said. "You look tired," Rory said. Eva's mouth tightened. "You look like you sleep on the floor." "I have a flat," Rory said. "Above the bar." "I know. I saw the sign when I walked in. The Raven's Nest." Silas leaned against the bar, arms crossed. The silver ring caught light. Rory's fingers found the scar on her wrist and rubbed it once. "Cardiff seems far," Eva said. "Cardiff is far," Rory said. "Dad still asks about you." "Does he?" "He asks about everyone. He asks about you most." Eva stared at her hands. "I didn’t know about Evan." Rory's jaw set. "You weren’t there." "I was there when you left," Eva said. "You called me from the train station. You said you were going to start over." "I did." "You stopped calling." "I stopped answering." A silence settled between them, heavy as the bar's low music. A regular at the end of the bar laughed too loud. Eva reached across the table and brushed Rory's knuckles with her fingertips. Rory did not pull away. "I thought you’d be a barrister," Eva said. "I thought I’d be a barrister," Rory said. "I was going to follow Dad. Pre-Law at Cardiff. I hated it." "You were good at it." "I was good at arguing," Rory said. "That didn’t help." Eva's eyes filled, then cleared. She blinked quickly. "You never told me why you left," Eva said. Rory looked at the maps on the wall, at a photograph of a man in Prague with a younger Silas standing beside him. She thought about the flat above, the thin ceiling, the way Silas never knocked. "He was a good story until he wasn’t," Rory said. "I learned to leave before the story ends." "You should have told me." "I told you I was leaving." Eva laughed, a raw sound. "You told me you were going to London. You didn’t tell me you were running." Rory leaned forward. Her voice stayed even. "I’m not running now." "You’re delivering dumplings at night," Eva said. "I’m paying rent," Rory said. "I’m keeping a roof. I’m not yours to audit." Eva flinched. She looked down at the glass Silas had set down. It remained full. Silas cleared his throat. He limped toward the bookshelf at the back, his hand brushing the spines. The shelf shifted a fraction. "You’re here late," he said to Rory. "Flat’s cold at this hour." "I’ll be up soon," Rory said. He nodded once and disappeared into the back room. Eva watched him go. "You know him." "He owns the building," Rory said. "He owns the bar. He owns half of Soho, apparently." "You live above a spymaster." "I live above a man with a bad knee and a ring." Eva smiled despite herself. "You’re still funny." Rory’s shoulders dropped a fraction. "I’m still tired." Eva reached for the glass and drank. She set it down hard. "I missed you," Eva said. Rory looked at her. The woman across the table was the same age, twenty-five, but she carried it differently. The lines around Eva's eyes were not from laughter. "I missed you too," Rory said. "I just didn’t know what to say when I saw you." Eva wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. "I have a hotel. I can’t stay long." "I know." "Can I see you tomorrow?" Rory thought about the shift at Golden Empress, about the bike, about the flat with the thin walls and the man who never knocked. She thought about the crescent scar on her wrist and how it had stopped hurting years ago. "You’re in London for work," Rory said. "I’m in London for three days." "Come for a drink." Eva’s eyes searched Rory’s face. The bar lights caught the blue in Rory’s irises. Eva leaned in. "You’re still cool-headed," Eva said. "You always figured the angle before anyone else." Rory didn’t answer. She lifted her glass. The liquid caught the neon green from outside. "You changed," Eva said softly. Rory set the glass down. "So did you." Eva stared at the table between them. Her fingers trembled. "I’m sorry I didn’t come sooner," Eva said. Rory watched her. The rain kept tapping the window. Silas’ bar hummed around them, full of old photographs and maps to places neither of them had been. "You’re here now," Rory said. Eva nodded. She didn’t cry. She smiled, a tight, real thing. "Tell me what you’ve been doing," Eva said. "All of it." Rory opened her mouth.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:45:06.293Z" 9/3/2026, 1:45:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.789
rawRatio0.033
effectiveRatio0.026
91.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1243
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1243
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1243
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions42
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions92
wordCount834
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity4.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity7.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Golden2
Empress2
Silas9
Blackwood1
Rory41
Cardiff1
University1
Eva31
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1243
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs90
mean13.81
std13.24
cv0.958
sampleLengths
059
177
217
35
416
55
643
76
835
91
1046
119
1215
136
1420
1557
166
1711
184
195
2027
2118
225
235
2411
259
2613
2712
2812
295
3010
312
329
3310
346
3523
362
373
383
3922
4017
418
4220
435
4410
458
469
4737
4818
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"were tired"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences163
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount828
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.021739130434782608
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004830917874396135
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean7.63
std5.18
cv0.679
sampleLengths
023
123
213
310
418
521
614
714
811
96
105
115
127
134
145
155
1612
1726
186
192
2020
2113
221
233
2410
2513
2620
277
282
2910
305
316
3212
334
344
356
364
3727
388
3912
406
415
426
434
445
459
4614
474
488
495
40.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.18404907975460122
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners30
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Bright blue eyes swept the"
ratio0.012
85.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences86
matches
0"She had come down for"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair sat"
2"He limped when he moved"
3"He lifted his chin a"
4"She set the bag on"
5"She peeled off her jacket."
6"She was taller than Rory"
7"Her coat was expensive, the"
8"She crossed the room in"
9"He did not pour."
10"He did not move."
11"Her eyes were tired in"
12"He limped to the booth"
13"He did not sit."
14"She kept her coat on."
15"She blinked quickly."
16"She thought about the flat"
17"Her voice stayed even."
18"She looked down at the"
19"It remained full."
ratio0.337
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences86
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory ducked under it with"
2"She had come down for"
3"Maps yellowed at the edges"
4"The low light caught the"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair sat"
6"He limped when he moved"
7"Rory lifted her head to"
8"He lifted his chin a"
9"She set the bag on"
10"She peeled off her jacket."
11"The booth by the window"
12"The woman looked up and"
13"The woman stood."
14"She was taller than Rory"
15"Her coat was expensive, the"
16"She crossed the room in"
17"Eva said into her hair"
18"Rory laughed, a short sound"
19"Silas watched from behind the"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Bright blue eyes swept the room out of habit, cataloguing exits, the bookshelf that did not sit flush with the wall, the door at the back."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags30
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.789
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.7323%