| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He swallowed hard [hard]" | | 1 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.42 | | leniency | 0.84 | | rawRatio | 0.095 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 96.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1356 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1356 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "crystal" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "chilled" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "lilt" | | 6 | "pounding" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "solitary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1354 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 780 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.31 | | worstName | "Julian" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Julian" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Silas | 5 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Edison | 1 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 3 | | Vaughan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | University | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Julian | 18 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Edison" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Vaughan" | | 7 | "University" | | 8 | "Rory" | | 9 | "Julian" | | 10 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.346 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1354 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 23.75 | | std | 17.92 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 69 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 46 | | 39 | 49 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory looked past him, toward the narrow staircase hidden behind the archway at the rear of the bar—the drafty hallway that led up to her solitary room, her bare desk, her quiet." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 773 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.018111254851228976 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 14.56 | | std | 10.01 | | cv | 0.687 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 63.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.41935483870967744 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "His hazel eyes tracked the" | | 1 | "Her shoulder-length black hair clung" | | 2 | "He pivoted with the stiff" | | 3 | "His gaze caught Aurora’s bright" | | 4 | "He stood up, adjusting his" | | 5 | "She hoisted herself onto the" | | 6 | "His gaze lingered on Julian" | | 7 | "He swallowed hard" | | 8 | "he said softly" | | 9 | "He signaled toward the far" | | 10 | "He picked up his briefcase," |
| | ratio | 0.186 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain drummed against the leaded" | | 1 | "The silver signet ring on" | | 2 | "His hazel eyes tracked the" | | 3 | "Aurora shook the damp from" | | 4 | "Her shoulder-length black hair clung" | | 5 | "Silas gave a curt nod," | | 6 | "He pivoted with the stiff" | | 7 | "A lone patron occupied the" | | 8 | "The man sat with an" | | 9 | "The man turned his head." | | 10 | "His gaze caught Aurora’s bright" | | 11 | "Aurora froze, fingers curled around" | | 12 | "The childhood name scraped against" | | 13 | "Julian Vaughan lowered his glass." | | 14 | "The soft, round boy who" | | 15 | "A faint crease carved between" | | 16 | "He stood up, adjusting his" | | 17 | "Rory crossed the space, keeping" | | 18 | "She hoisted herself onto the" | | 19 | "Silas set the sweating pint" |
| | ratio | 0.932 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The man sat with an immaculate posture that belonged to carpeted appellate chambers rather than a dim London watering hole." | | 1 | "Julian reached out, his fingers hovering inches above her sleeve before dropping back to the polished counter." | | 2 | "Rory looked past him, toward the narrow staircase hidden behind the archway at the rear of the bar—the drafty hallway that led up to her solitary room, her bare…" |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Julian countered, his jaw setting hard" | | 1 | "Julian whispered, the words dropping like lead weights onto the counter" | | 2 | "Silas said, voice low and dry as winter grass" |
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| 90.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Julian noted (note)" | | 1 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Julian whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.18 | | leniency | 0.36 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.12 | |