Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KR9D2NJHA489F05RAJJT21

Run Details

Duration:
33.8s
Cost:
$0.010430
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed against the leaded glass of The Raven’s Nest, muting the relentless hum of Soho traffic. Behind the mahogany counter, Silas Blackwood ran a dry linen cloth over a heavy rocks glass. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against the crystal, rhythmic as a metronome. His hazel eyes tracked the brass pendulum clock above the top-shelf scotch before shifting toward the draughty entrance. Aurora shook the damp from her black canvas jacket, stepped past the green neon reflection pooling across the threshold, and unspooled the wool scarf from her throat. Her shoulder-length black hair clung in damp strands to her jaw. "Lager, Silas. The cheap tap." Silas gave a curt nod, his grey-streaked beard catching the amber glow of the Edison bulbs overhead. He pivoted with the stiff gait in his left leg, reaching for a clean pint glass. A lone patron occupied the curved end of the bar, surrounded by yellowed navigation charts framed in tarnished brass. The man sat with an immaculate posture that belonged to carpeted appellate chambers rather than a dim London watering hole. Tailored charcoal flannel hugged broad shoulders. Beside his tumbler of single malt rested a leather briefcase stamped with gold foil initials: *J.V.* The man turned his head. His gaze caught Aurora’s bright blue eyes and locked there. "Rory?" Aurora froze, fingers curled around the strap of her satchel. The childhood name scraped against her ribs like gravel. "Julian." Julian Vaughan lowered his glass. The soft, round boy who once hoarded mint humbugs in the back row of Cardiff University’s tort law lectures had vanished beneath sharp cheekbones, a trimmed hairline, and the heavy veneer of a junior barrister. A faint crease carved between his eyebrows, permanent as an ink line. "Three years." He stood up, adjusting his cuffs with an automated flick of the wrists. "No forwarding address. No emails. Jennifer told my mother you went to Edinburgh." "My mother tells people whatever keeps the neighbors from whispering after Sunday service." Rory crossed the space, keeping two barstools between them. She hoisted herself onto the worn leather seat. "Edinburgh has too many hills." Silas set the sweating pint before her. His gaze lingered on Julian for a fraction of a second, measuring the cut of the man's coat, the tension in the set of his jaw, before he retreated down the bar to polish the draft taps. "You’re soaked," Julian noted. "Water falls from the sky. It happens." Rory wrapped her fingers around the cold glass. The crescent scar on her left wrist showed pale against her chilled skin. "What brings silk and wool south of the Thames?" "Crown Court briefing in Holborn. Chambers put me up at the Dean Street townhouse." Julian ran a manicured thumb along the rim of his crystal glass. "I wandered in out of the deluge. Pure accident." "Nothing’s an accident in Soho." "Still suspicious of the entire world, then." "It keeps the rent paid." Rory took a long swallow of the bitter lager. "You look different. Sleeker. Like something designed in a wind tunnel." "The firm expects a certain silhouette. Father insisted on the Savile Row account the day I passed the bar." Julian's voice lacked its old lilt, flattened out by years of southern chambers and polite London elocution. "You look thin, Rory. Tired." "I work for a living." "You were first in our cohort. You tore Lord Bingham’s dissents apart in second-year seminar until Professor Davies looked ready to choke." Julian leaned forward, the smell of cedarwood and expensive tobacco rolling off his coat. "You threw that away to haul grease-stained takeout boxes across Westminster?" Rory’s knuckles tightened against the glass. "I took a detour." "You vanished into smoke. One morning your flat on Cathays Terrace stood empty. Evan was half out of his mind, pounding on my door at midnight, demanding to know where you hid the keys." Rory set her pint down with enough force to slosh foam onto the wood. "Did you give him any?" Julian looked down into his amber whiskey. The ice had melted into a flat, clear disc. "I didn't know anything to give." He swallowed hard. "I told him you probably took an early train to your aunt’s place in Swansea. He broke my hall mirror with his fist before he left." Silence stretched between them, thick with the damp heat radiating from the cast-iron radiators along the wall. In the corner, the low hum of Silas' vintage radio ground out a muted trumpet solo. "He always had a delicate temper," Rory murmured. "You should have called me." "And put you in the middle of it?" Rory shook her head, strands of dark hair cutting across her cheek. "You were busy drafting mock briefs and measuring yourself for court dress. You had a trajectory, Julian. A nice, straight line from Cardiff Bay to the high court bench. I was a crater." Julian reached out, his fingers hovering inches above her sleeve before dropping back to the polished counter. "We walked the coastal path every Saturday for five years, Rory. Rain, sleet, hungover out of our skulls. You made me memorize the entire Law of Property Act while we ate chips under the pier at Penarth." A raw fracture surfaced beneath his smooth barrister's cadence. "Then one Tuesday you evaporated. As if none of it mattered. As if *I* was just furniture you left behind in the flat." "It wasn't about you." "That makes it worse." Julian turned his glass in a slow, agonized circle. "Because if it wasn't about me, then it was just about running. And you never stopped." Rory traced the ring of condensation on the dark timber. "Look at you, Julian. Look at the coat, the watch, the flat English accent. You think you stayed put? You traded your whole life for a partnership track that doesn't care if you live or die. You’re thirty years older than you were three winters ago." "I built something," Julian countered, his jaw setting hard. "I stayed. When the work was miserable, when the rain didn't stop for four months straight, when my father had his stroke and couldn't sign his own name—I stayed. I didn't burn the house down just because the roof leaked." "The roof wasn't leaking, Julian. The walls were coming down on my head." Julian stared at her. The neon green light through the front window cut across his face, exposing the fine lines around his eyes and the shadow of exhaustion beneath his skin. "I know," he said softly. "I saw him at the rugby club in November. He has a new girl. Someone from the medical school. Young. Quiet." Rory’s breath hitched, barely a tremor, but Julian caught it. "Did you warn her?" she asked. Julian looked down at his signet ring, spinning it around his finger until the skin turned white. "I bought him a gin and tonic," Julian whispered, the words dropping like lead weights onto the counter. "I asked about his brother's firm. I shook his hand, Rory. I walked away." The air between them chilled, cold as the sleet battering the glass above. Rory lifted her glass and drained the remainder of the lager. "That's the difference between us," she said. Julian flinched, but he didn't argue. He signaled toward the far end of the bar, reaching inside his coat for a slim leather billfold. Silas emerged from the shadows, gliding across the floorboards without a sound, and set a brass tray between them. "Put the lady's drink on my tab," Julian told him. "Her tab is settled," Silas said, voice low and dry as winter grass. "Has been for months." Julian pulled out a crisp twenty-pound note anyway, laying it flat beside his empty tumbler. He picked up his briefcase, the brass latches clicking shut in the quiet room. "Are you ever coming home?" Julian asked. Rory looked past him, toward the narrow staircase hidden behind the archway at the rear of the bar—the drafty hallway that led up to her solitary room, her bare desk, her quiet. "I don't have a map for that anymore."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He swallowed hard [hard]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.42
leniency0.84
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.08
96.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1356
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1356
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"crystal"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"chilled"
count2
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"solitary"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"rhythmic"
2"tension"
3"chilled"
4"silk"
5"lilt"
6"pounding"
7"silence"
8"traced"
9"solitary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1354
ratio0.001
matches
0"J.V."
1"I"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount780
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.31
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Silas5
Blackwood1
Edison1
London2
Aurora3
Vaughan1
Cardiff1
University1
Rory11
Julian18
Silence1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Edison"
5"Aurora"
6"Vaughan"
7"University"
8"Rory"
9"Julian"
10"Silence"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.346
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1354
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean23.75
std17.92
cv0.754
sampleLengths
067
138
25
333
461
515
61
719
81
952
1028
1135
1244
134
1437
1535
165
177
1825
1941
205
2147
226
234
2434
2514
265
2716
2835
2933
308
315
3253
3317
3469
354
3629
3710
3846
3949
4013
4131
4226
4310
446
4517
4632
4713
4811
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences93
ratio0.011
matches
0"Rory looked past him, toward the narrow staircase hidden behind the archway at the rear of the bar—the drafty hallway that led up to her solitary room, her bare desk, her quiet."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount773
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.018111254851228976
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean14.56
std10.01
cv0.687
sampleLengths
017
116
216
318
427
511
65
717
816
919
1020
116
1216
135
1410
151
1610
179
181
195
2035
2112
2215
2313
2422
258
265
277
2837
294
3015
3113
329
3326
349
355
367
3714
3811
3936
405
415
4236
4311
446
454
4634
4714
485
497
63.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.41935483870967744
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences59
matches
0"His hazel eyes tracked the"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair clung"
2"He pivoted with the stiff"
3"His gaze caught Aurora’s bright"
4"He stood up, adjusting his"
5"She hoisted herself onto the"
6"His gaze lingered on Julian"
7"He swallowed hard"
8"he said softly"
9"He signaled toward the far"
10"He picked up his briefcase,"
ratio0.186
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences59
matches
0"Rain drummed against the leaded"
1"The silver signet ring on"
2"His hazel eyes tracked the"
3"Aurora shook the damp from"
4"Her shoulder-length black hair clung"
5"Silas gave a curt nod,"
6"He pivoted with the stiff"
7"A lone patron occupied the"
8"The man sat with an"
9"The man turned his head."
10"His gaze caught Aurora’s bright"
11"Aurora froze, fingers curled around"
12"The childhood name scraped against"
13"Julian Vaughan lowered his glass."
14"The soft, round boy who"
15"A faint crease carved between"
16"He stood up, adjusting his"
17"Rory crossed the space, keeping"
18"She hoisted herself onto the"
19"Silas set the sweating pint"
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The man sat with an immaculate posture that belonged to carpeted appellate chambers rather than a dim London watering hole."
1"Julian reached out, his fingers hovering inches above her sleeve before dropping back to the polished counter."
2"Rory looked past him, toward the narrow staircase hidden behind the archway at the rear of the bar—the drafty hallway that led up to her solitary room, her bare…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Julian countered, his jaw setting hard"
1"Julian whispered, the words dropping like lead weights onto the counter"
2"Silas said, voice low and dry as winter grass"
90.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Julian noted (note)"
1"Rory murmured (murmur)"
2"Julian whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.18
leniency0.36
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.12
81.6492%