Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRAAB9R90P421TDMSNDSFS

Run Details

Duration:
38.5s
Cost:
$0.002900
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked in succession. Rory had the chain off before she lifted the latch. The hallway smelled of cumin and damp plaster from the curry house below. She kept her left wrist tucked against the door frame, the small crescent scar catching the thin light from the landing. The door opened. Lucien filled the doorway. Tailored charcoal suit, slicked-back platinum blond hair damp at the temples. One eye amber, one black. Ivory-handled cane rested against his thigh. Ptolemy dropped from the bookshelf in the flat and landed on the mat with a soft thump. "You have a cat," Lucien said. "She has a cat," Rory said. "Eva has a cat." "She is not here." "I know." He shifted his weight. The cane tapped once against the floorboards. "You left your key at the Golden Empress," he said. "I didn't leave it." "You left it in a soup bowl." Rory closed the door behind him. The flat was cramped and warm. Books teetered on every surface. Scrolls were weighted down with mugs. Research notes covered the kitchen counter in overlapping sheets. "Three deadbolts," Lucien said. "Two are Eva's. One is mine." He looked at the scar on her wrist when she pushed the door fully shut. She noticed him notice and pulled her sleeve down. "I heard you moved," he said. "I work deliveries for Yu-Fei," Rory said. "I live above Silas' bar. This is Eva's place." "You're sleeping on her couch." "I'm not sleeping. I'm working." He stepped past the threshold and the flat seemed smaller. Ptolemy wound around his ankle and he stopped. The cat stared up at him. Lucien crouched. He scratched Ptolemy behind the ears with two fingers. "She likes you," Rory said. "She likes anyone who does not smell like curry." "That's most people." He stood. The cane clicked against a stack of paperbacks. A scroll unrolled. "You're a mess in here," he said. "You're in my friend's flat." "Your friend's flat." Rory crossed her arms. The hem of her delivery jacket brushed her thighs. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "I came for you." Silence settled over the books. The fridge hummed. "You said my name was a bad idea," Rory said. "I said a lot of things." "You said you didn't do attachments." "You said you didn't do second chances." "I said that to Evan." His jaw tightened. He set the cane against the wall and it stood upright on its own. "Rory." "Don't." "I have a job." "I don't take jobs from you." "You took three last year." "I took information. That's different." "You took money." "I paid rent." "You paid for the flat above Silas." "I paid for a month. You paid for the rest." He moved to the window. Brick Lane was a streak of neon and rain. "You owe me a call," he said. "I owe you nothing." "You owe me an explanation." "The explanation is you left." "I left because you told me to." "You left because I was inconvenient." "You were dangerous." "I was honest." Rory picked up a mug from the counter and put it down. Her fingers brushed a note in Eva's cramped handwriting. "You didn't have to show up here," she said. "I had to see you." "You could have texted." "I tried." She looked at him. Bright blue eyes held steady. "You called twice." "Twice." "You didn't answer." "You blocked me." "I blocked Evan." He turned from the window. The suit jacket strained at his shoulders. "That wasn't Evan." "No." The flat felt too narrow for the space between them. Ptolemy jumped onto the couch and settled among the pillows. "You're working for who," Rory said. "A client." "Which client." "One who asks questions about you." "That's not a job I want." "It's a job you need." She laughed once, short and dry. "You're good at selling." "I'm good at finding." "You found me." "I always find you." The cane stood by the door. The ivory handle caught light. Rory stepped closer. The scent of his cologne cut through the smell of old paper. "You still carry a blade," she said. "You still hide a scar." She lifted her sleeve again. The crescent was pale against her skin. "You remember that," she said. "I remember everything." "You remember the wrong things." He didn't step back. "Tell me why you came to the door with the chain on," he said. "Because it's Brick Lane." "Because it's me." Rory's mouth opened, then closed. She looked past him to the hallway where the three deadbolts gleamed. "I let you in," she said. "I know." The books leaned. The scrolls rustled.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:46:15.284Z" 9/3/2026, 1:46:15 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.416
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount774
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount774
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords774
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
21.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount428
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Ptolemy4
Lane1
Eva1
Lucien4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Lane"
globalScore0.215
windowScore0.5
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed smaller"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount774
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean7.59
std6.68
cv0.88
sampleLengths
06
144
23
326
417
56
610
74
82
911
1010
114
127
1332
144
156
1624
176
1816
195
205
2118
226
2311
245
259
263
2713
287
295
303
3113
325
334
348
3510
366
376
387
395
4017
411
421
434
446
455
465
473
483
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"were weighted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs87
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences132
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount430
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.02558139534883721
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002325581395348837
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean5.86
std3.3
cv0.563
sampleLengths
06
110
213
321
43
54
611
75
86
917
106
116
124
134
142
154
167
1710
184
197
206
216
225
236
249
254
266
2715
289
296
307
319
325
335
3410
358
366
372
389
395
409
413
422
438
443
457
465
473
484
499
40.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.25
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners33
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Bright blue eyes held steady."
ratio0.019
99.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences53
matches
0"She kept her left wrist"
1"He shifted his weight."
2"He looked at the scar"
3"She noticed him notice and"
4"He stepped past the threshold"
5"He scratched Ptolemy behind the"
6"His jaw tightened."
7"He set the cane against"
8"He moved to the window."
9"Her fingers brushed a note"
10"She looked at him."
11"He turned from the window."
12"She laughed once, short and"
13"She lifted her sleeve again."
14"He didn't step back."
15"She looked past him to"
ratio0.302
16.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences53
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked in"
1"Rory had the chain off"
2"The hallway smelled of cumin"
3"She kept her left wrist"
4"The door opened."
5"Lucien filled the doorway."
6"Ptolemy dropped from the bookshelf"
7"He shifted his weight."
8"The cane tapped once against"
9"Rory closed the door behind"
10"The flat was cramped and"
11"Books teetered on every surface."
12"Scrolls were weighted down with"
13"He looked at the scar"
14"She noticed him notice and"
15"He stepped past the threshold"
16"Ptolemy wound around his ankle"
17"The cat stared up at"
18"He scratched Ptolemy behind the"
19"The cane clicked against a"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.416
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.6448%