Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRARX0BJ2VQFH2FDQB8PNV

Run Details

Duration:
38.6s
Cost:
$0.002875
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory parked the bike behind the park gates and walked the rest of the way on foot. The streetlights thinned out past Roehampton Vale and the park swallowed the noise of the road. Air turned damp and cool against her face. She pulled her jacket tighter and kept her left wrist exposed to the wind, the crescent scar catching a thin line of light. The pendant hung against her chest under the shirt. Silver chain cold at first, then warm. Deep crimson stone throbbed once against her skin. She stopped and listened. She had not planned to come here at night. Eva had sent the message at 2:14 a.m. with a pin drop and three words: check the grove. No explanation. Rory had left a delivery bag half-packed at the flat above Silas’ bar and walked out with her phone dead and her keys in one hand. Richmond Park opened before her in black shapes. The oak line rose ahead, old and wrong for the season, branches bare but for a smear of green where there should not have been green. Wildflowers pushed up between the roots even in December. White and violet, open to a moon that should not have found them. The standing stones marked the edge. Seven oaks, or eight, Rory could not tell. They stood in a loose circle, trunks thick as houses, bark split in patterns like fingers. She stepped past them and the air changed. Sound dropped. The city hum that had followed her down the path cut off. “You’re late.” Rory spun. No one stood there. The voice came from the trees, or from behind her, or from inside her own throat. She kept her hands up, empty. “I got a pin. No time stamp.” The flowers moved. A ripple passed through them without wind. The pendant warmed. A faint inner glow pushed through the fabric of her shirt. She pulled the chain out. The stone pulsed against her palm, a slow heat like a living thing. She had received it three weeks ago in a paper bag left on her doorstep with no note. She had worn it since. It had never done this before. “It’s warm,” she said. She took three steps into the clearing. The ground softened under her boots. Moss gave under her weight and did not spring back. The circle closed behind her with a sigh of leaves. Time slipped. She checked her watch. 2:47. She had not walked that long. A shape moved at the edge of her vision, low and quick between two trunks. She turned. Nothing. Just bark and a spill of moonlight that made the flowers look bruised. “You’re not answering my question,” she said. Her voice sounded thin. It came back to her a half second too late, as if the clearing held it first. The pendant beat faster. She could feel it through her fingertips. She held it up and the crimson caught the moon. The glow steadied. “Hel portal?” she asked. “That’s what it does. Near Hel portal.” The trees did not answer. The wildflowers bent toward her, a slow lean that should have taken minutes but happened in a breath. She backed a step. The standing stones loomed. Their roots formed a pattern under the soil, a knot she had not seen from the path. A rustle rose from the grass behind her. She turned and the rustle stopped. The grass stood still. She stared at a patch of violet flowers and counted to five. They did not move again. “You came with me,” she said. Silence pressed in. She could hear her own breathing, too loud, and the faint tick of the stone against her skin. The pendant grew warm enough to sting. Footsteps. Soft. Bare. They started at the far side of the circle and stopped. Rory did not move. She planted her boots and lifted her chin. Her eyes caught the pale glow of the flowers. Something shifted in the dark between the oaks. A silhouette, taller than a person, thinner. It did not walk. It repositioned, like a shadow adjusting to a new light source. “I know you’re there,” she said. The shape did not speak. The flowers leaned again, all at once, toward the shape. She stepped forward. The pendant flared, heat spiking up her arm to the scar on her left wrist. The scar tingled. She had not felt it in years. “Eva sent me,” she said. The name hung. The air went still. Even the insects stopped. A low sound rose from the ground, a hum that vibrated through the soles of her boots. The standing stones exhaled. Dust fell from their bark in a fine, slow shower. “You shouldn’t have come at night,” the voice said. It was not from the trees now. It was from the flowers. It was from the stone. Rory’s throat went dry. She kept her hand on the pendant. The crimson stone pulsed in time with her heart, or it made her heart match it. “I need to know why it’s here,” she said. “Why you left it.” The shape moved. She saw the edge of it now, a suggestion of bark and a suggestion of skin, something that belonged to the grove and to nothing else. It stopped just beyond the ring of flowers. The flowers did not touch it. They left a space. Rory took another step. The ground gave under her boot, soft and giving, as if the earth breathed. The pendant was hot now, almost painful. “Step back,” she said. The shape did not step back. The flowers leaned harder. The hum rose. The moon slipped behind a cloud and the clearing went dark except for the faint inner glow of the stone and the pale faces of the flowers. She could hear breathing now. Not hers. Close. On the other side of the circle. “You’re not alone,” she said. The pendant flared bright and then dimmed. The heat receded. The air in the grove tightened. A hand brushed her shoulder.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:46:30.183Z" 9/3/2026, 1:46:30 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.786
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1008
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1008
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"pulsed"
2"weight"
3"could feel"
4"loomed"
5"silence"
6"footsteps"
7"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1008
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount935
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Roehampton1
Vale1
Richmond1
Park1
December1
Rory7
Silence1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silence"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"December"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1008
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean25.2
std17.39
cv0.69
sampleLengths
064
128
255
356
452
52
628
77
824
947
104
1146
1231
137
1421
1524
1611
1748
1835
196
2028
2114
2251
236
2415
2528
265
2711
2831
2926
3027
3113
3247
3325
344
3540
3615
375
3816
395
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"been green"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount163
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.018404907975460124
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean7.75
std5.56
cv0.717
sampleLengths
017
116
28
323
49
57
68
74
89
98
1010
112
1226
138
1426
159
1613
176
188
1916
208
212
2212
232
242
254
2616
276
287
293
307
313
3211
335
3413
3518
365
376
384
397
406
4110
4210
432
444
451
466
4715
482
491
36.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3023255813953488
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners39
63.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Just bark and a spill"
1"Even the insects stopped."
ratio0.019
75.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences105
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She stopped and listened."
2"She had not planned to"
3"They stood in a loose"
4"She stepped past them and"
5"She kept her hands up,"
6"She pulled the chain out."
7"She had received it three"
8"She had worn it since."
9"It had never done this"
10"She took three steps into"
11"She checked her watch."
12"She had not walked that"
13"Her voice sounded thin."
14"It came back to her"
15"She could feel it through"
16"She held it up and"
17"She backed a step."
18"Their roots formed a pattern"
19"She turned and the rustle"
ratio0.362
12.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences105
matches
0"Rory parked the bike behind"
1"The streetlights thinned out past"
2"She pulled her jacket tighter"
3"The pendant hung against her"
4"She stopped and listened."
5"She had not planned to"
6"Eva had sent the message"
7"Rory had left a delivery"
8"Richmond Park opened before her"
9"The oak line rose ahead,"
10"Wildflowers pushed up between the"
11"The standing stones marked the"
12"They stood in a loose"
13"She stepped past them and"
14"The city hum that had"
15"The voice came from the"
16"She kept her hands up,"
17"The flowers moved."
18"A ripple passed through them"
19"The pendant warmed."
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She saw the edge of it now, a suggestion of bark and a suggestion of skin, something that belonged to the grove and to nothing else."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.0967%