| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.52 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "marble" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "symphony" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "scanned" | | 12 | "mechanical" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1145 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 895 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Movement | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Movement" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.774 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like honey scraped off a rusted kn" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.39% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 38.17 | | std | 17.93 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 88 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 57 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 27 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 22.13% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "The air struck her lungs first—dense, humid, and thick with the scent of fermented figs, crushed cloves, and sun-baked earth." | | 1 | "Beneath her bare feet, the mossy seams between the pavers remained utterly uncrushed; she left no indentations, no scuffs, no trace of passage." | | 2 | "The sound was not wind against leaves; it was the rhythmic clinking of stemware, hundreds of tiny collisions echoing through the groves, rising and falling in an eerie cadence of phantom applause." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 907 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "translucent, plum-colored fruit" | | 1 | "nearest bone-pillar, their" |
| | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.015435501653803748 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007717750826901874 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 16.13 | | std | 7.61 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 91.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5633802816901409 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Further out, vast orchards fanned" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 1 | "Her eyes adjusted to the" | | 2 | "They stood upon an immense," | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes drank" | | 4 | "She leaned back instantly." | | 5 | "They reached the first landing," | | 6 | "They walked with the slow," |
| | ratio | 0.125 | |
| 58.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The tear in the Veil" | | 1 | "Aurora stumbled onto solid ground," | | 2 | "The air struck her lungs" | | 3 | "Every breath tasted like honey" | | 4 | "An uninterrupted dome of warm," | | 5 | "Nyx’s voice slipped past her" | | 6 | "The Shade drifted over the" | | 7 | "Aurora steadied herself, fingers flying" | | 8 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 9 | "Her eyes adjusted to the" | | 10 | "They stood upon an immense," | | 11 | "Isolde drifted past them." | | 12 | "The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair" | | 13 | "Her pale lavender eyes drank" | | 14 | "Isolde murmured, tilting her head" | | 15 | "Aurora drew the Fae-forged dagger" | | 16 | "The moonsilver blade caught the" | | 17 | "Isolde replied, turning her ethereal" | | 18 | "Nyx glided ahead, their shadow" | | 19 | "Aurora adjusted her grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.804 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Further out, vast orchards fanned across terraced plateaus, their branches groaning under the weight of fruits that glowed with inner, golden embers." | | 1 | "Far below, a river the shade of dark wine cut through the gorge, throwing up a vapor that smelled sharply of nutmeg and old yeast." | | 2 | "The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair floated around her shoulders as if suspended in water." | | 3 | "The moonsilver blade caught the amber sky and threw back a clean, cold gleam, sending a chill through her fingers that cut through the oppressive ambient heat." | | 4 | "The architecture defied mortal craft: slender pillars branched out like petrified trees, intertwining overhead to form a vaulted canopy that filtered the amber …" |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice barely audible over the canyon wind" |
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| 30.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.36 | | leniency | 0.72 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.24 | |