Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRB7KJV6KXN4JQMW1K2FAG

Run Details

Duration:
15.7s
Cost:
$0.011811
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tear in the Veil parted with the dry snap of splitting cedar. Aurora stumbled onto solid ground, her boots striking flagstones the color of dried pomegranate. The air struck her lungs first—dense, humid, and thick with the scent of fermented figs, crushed cloves, and sun-baked earth. Every breath tasted like honey scraped off a rusted knife. Above them, no sun held court. An uninterrupted dome of warm, molten amber stretched from horizon to horizon, casting long, bronze shadows across the landscape. "Step light, Carter." Nyx’s voice slipped past her ear, thin and dry as rustling parchment. The Shade drifted over the stones, their humanoid silhouette fraying at the edges where the amber light bit into living dark. Two pinpricks of violet burned within the cowl of their head. "The ground here remembers hunger better than it remembers stone." Aurora steadied herself, fingers flying to her sternum. Beneath her collar, the thumbnail-sized crimson Heartstone throbbed against her ribs, radiating a persistent, feverish heat. She pressed her palm over it to mute the sting, her thumb brushing the small crescent scar on her left wrist. "It feels like walking into an oven," Aurora said. Her eyes adjusted to the glare, widening as the scale of the valley unfolded. They stood upon an immense, tiered promontory overlooking a canyon of impossible agriculture. Sprawling vineyards cascaded down sheer cliffs of black basalt, their vines thick as ship's rigging and choked with clusters of translucent, plum-colored fruit the size of ostrich eggs. Further out, vast orchards fanned across terraced plateaus, their branches groaning under the weight of fruits that glowed with inner, golden embers. Far below, a river the shade of dark wine cut through the gorge, throwing up a vapor that smelled sharply of nutmeg and old yeast. Isolde drifted past them. The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair floated around her shoulders as if suspended in water. Her pale lavender eyes drank in the amber horizon without blinking. Beneath her bare feet, the mossy seams between the pavers remained utterly uncrushed; she left no indentations, no scuffs, no trace of passage. "A garden planted for appetites that never sleep," Isolde murmured, tilting her head toward the rustling groves. "Every seed here was watered with a plea, yet none who harvest ever leave the table." "Is that a warning or a menu?" Aurora drew the Fae-forged dagger from its sheath at her belt. The moonsilver blade caught the amber sky and threw back a clean, cold gleam, sending a chill through her fingers that cut through the oppressive ambient heat. "Both dishes share the same plate," Isolde replied, turning her ethereal profile toward a wide marble stairway descending into the nearest terrace. "Listen to the fruit. It sings only when the teeth are close." Nyx glided ahead, their shadow stretching unnaturally across the steps. "The Prince’s harvest halls lie past the lower arbor. If the rift holds behind us, we have hours. If it snaps, we become compost for next season’s vintage." "Comforting as always, Nyx." Aurora adjusted her grip on the hilt, descending behind them. The stone beneath her boots felt warm, almost soft, yielding with the faint elasticity of cured leather. On either side of the staircase, massive stone urns sprouted twisting brambles loaded with white berries. As Aurora drew level with one of the urns, the berries shivered. A faint, harmonic hum rose from the cluster, vibrating at the back of her teeth. She leaned back instantly. The Heartstone against her chest flared with an urgent, sharp pulse of heat, answering the plant's hum. "Don't breathe it in too deep," Aurora said, nodding at the white cluster. "It’s pulling at the stone." "The air itself is an invitation," Nyx whispered, their form pooling across three steps at once before reforming into an elongated, upright silhouette. "Dymas does not conquer with iron. It offers a chair, fills your cup, and waits until your bones grow too heavy to rise." They reached the first landing, where the path widened into an ancient courtyard. Colonnades of white bone-stone curved in a grand semi-circle, framing an enormous pavilion. The architecture defied mortal craft: slender pillars branched out like petrified trees, intertwining overhead to form a vaulted canopy that filtered the amber light into dappled patterns of gold and rust. At the center of the pavilion sat a banquet table carved from a single slab of green marble, easily fifty paces long. Decanters of cloudy crystal, platters of tarnished silver, and tall goblets lay scattered across the surface, buried beneath centuries of creeping ivy and dry, fossilized bread loaves. Aurora stepped under the canopy, the cold silver of her dagger raised. "How long has this been abandoned?" "Abandoned is a mortal word," Isolde said, trailing a slender finger an inch above a dust-caked chalice without making contact. "A banquet does not end merely because the guests have turned to ash. It simply waits for the next seating." A sudden breeze rolled off the canyon, carrying a symphony of chiming glass from the vineyards below. Aurora froze. The sound was not wind against leaves; it was the rhythmic clinking of stemware, hundreds of tiny collisions echoing through the groves, rising and falling in an eerie cadence of phantom applause. Nyx flattened against the nearest bone-pillar, their violet eyes narrowing to sharp crescents. "The tenders are waking." "Where?" Aurora scanned the rows of giant vines below the courtyard. Movement rippled through the purple foliage. Tall, gaunt figures moved between the trellises. They walked with the slow, mechanical grace of sleepwalkers, clad in tattered tunics the color of bruised peach, carrying long curved shears of black iron. None of them looked up toward the pavilion, yet their movements were coordinated, snip-snapping in rhythm with the chiming glass. "Helbound harvesters," Nyx murmured, their voice barely audible over the canyon wind. "Souls bound by contract before their breath ever left their lungs. They prune, they pick, they ferment. Forever chasing the perfect vintage to buy an hour of sleep." Aurora watched a harvester reach for a giant, glowing gourd. The vine lashed out, wrapping around the figure's forearm in a tight, affectionate coil. The harvester did not flinch, simply driving the shears through the stem and cradling the bleeding fruit against their chest as thick, sap-like amber dripped onto the dry earth. "We need to move past this terrace before they work their way up the stairs," Aurora said. "They cannot see what does not wish to be eaten," Isolde said, turning her lavender gaze toward an arched gate at the far end of the courtyard, where an overgrown path wound deeper toward the cliffside chambers. "Desire is their only lantern. Bring none, and you are mist to their eyes." Aurora tightened her fingers around the icy hilt of the moonsilver blade, letting its chill clear the heavy, sweet fog from her thoughts. "Then let's stay hungry."
created_at"2026-09-03T13:46:45.241Z" 9/3/2026, 1:46:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.52
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"marble"
count2
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"symphony"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"mechanical"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count1
14
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"weight"
2"chill"
3"oppressive"
4"marble"
5"comforting"
6"pulse"
7"crystal"
8"symphony"
9"rhythmic"
10"echoing"
11"scanned"
12"mechanical"
13"perfect"
14"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1145
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.37% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount895
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Shade1
Heartstone2
Half-Fae1
Aurora13
Fae-forged1
Nyx5
Movement1
Isolde5
persons
0"Shade"
1"Heartstone"
2"Half-Fae"
3"Aurora"
4"Nyx"
5"Movement"
6"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.774
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like honey scraped off a rusted kn"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1145
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
91.39% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean38.17
std17.93
cv0.47
sampleLengths
013
144
225
357
445
523
688
752
833
945
1034
1138
1214
1360
1421
1518
1646
1757
1849
1918
2040
2151
2217
2311
2458
2540
2653
2717
2851
2927
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"were coordinated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
22.13% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences71
ratio0.042
matches
0"The air struck her lungs first—dense, humid, and thick with the scent of fermented figs, crushed cloves, and sun-baked earth."
1"Beneath her bare feet, the mossy seams between the pavers remained utterly uncrushed; she left no indentations, no scuffs, no trace of passage."
2"The sound was not wind against leaves; it was the rhythmic clinking of stemware, hundreds of tiny collisions echoing through the groves, rising and falling in an eerie cadence of phantom applause."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount907
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"translucent, plum-colored fruit"
1"nearest bone-pillar, their"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.015435501653803748
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007717750826901874
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean16.13
std7.61
cv0.472
sampleLengths
013
114
220
310
46
519
615
721
811
910
108
1116
1221
139
1414
1513
1628
1722
1825
194
2014
2111
2223
2317
2416
2518
2627
2722
2812
2910
3028
3114
3217
3316
3412
3515
364
3717
3813
395
4023
4123
4213
4313
4431
4522
4627
4712
486
4920
91.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5633802816901409
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners40
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Further out, vast orchards fanned"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences56
matches
0"She pressed her palm over"
1"Her eyes adjusted to the"
2"They stood upon an immense,"
3"Her pale lavender eyes drank"
4"She leaned back instantly."
5"They reached the first landing,"
6"They walked with the slow,"
ratio0.125
58.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences56
matches
0"The tear in the Veil"
1"Aurora stumbled onto solid ground,"
2"The air struck her lungs"
3"Every breath tasted like honey"
4"An uninterrupted dome of warm,"
5"Nyx’s voice slipped past her"
6"The Shade drifted over the"
7"Aurora steadied herself, fingers flying"
8"She pressed her palm over"
9"Her eyes adjusted to the"
10"They stood upon an immense,"
11"Isolde drifted past them."
12"The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair"
13"Her pale lavender eyes drank"
14"Isolde murmured, tilting her head"
15"Aurora drew the Fae-forged dagger"
16"The moonsilver blade caught the"
17"Isolde replied, turning her ethereal"
18"Nyx glided ahead, their shadow"
19"Aurora adjusted her grip on"
ratio0.804
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Further out, vast orchards fanned across terraced plateaus, their branches groaning under the weight of fruits that glowed with inner, golden embers."
1"Far below, a river the shade of dark wine cut through the gorge, throwing up a vapor that smelled sharply of nutmeg and old yeast."
2"The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair floated around her shoulders as if suspended in water."
3"The moonsilver blade caught the amber sky and threw back a clean, cold gleam, sending a chill through her fingers that cut through the oppressive ambient heat."
4"The architecture defied mortal craft: slender pillars branched out like petrified trees, intertwining overhead to form a vaulted canopy that filtered the amber …"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their voice barely audible over the canyon wind"
30.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.24
82.3985%