Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRBPPNH5MN8ENB9HKF17VE

Run Details

Duration:
14.7s
Cost:
$0.009685
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The boundary between Richmond Park and the hidden hollow announced itself through a sudden pressure against Aurora’s eardrums, the kind that accompanied a rapid descent in an elevator. She squeezed between the two ancient oak standing stones, their lichen-crusted surfaces damp beneath her fingertips. Beyond the threshold, the low roar of London traffic died. Perpetual spring held the clearing in stasis. Foxgloves, nightshades, and pale wood anemones pushed through the loam, petals wide under the moonless canopy despite the autumn chill gripping the rest of the city. Aurora adjusted the strap of her canvas satchel and stepped off the faint dirt path into the tall grass. She had marked this spot three nights earlier after finding the wax-sealed parchment slipped under the door of her flat above the bar. The instructions had demanded an exchange at midnight: three iron nails for a name she needed. The air smelled wrong. The sweet, rotting scent of overblown blossoms carried an undercurrent of sour vinegar, sharp enough to coat the back of her throat. Aurora paused, cocking her head. Silence hung over the grove. Not the restful quiet of a sleeping wood, but a vacuum that sucked the ambient rustle of leaves and nocturnal insects into nothing. Even the wind failed to stir the branches overhead, yet the canopy creaked, wood grinding against wood with the dry resonance of breaking bone. She reached up, her thumb finding the smooth, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The nervous habit grounded her. "Silas said midnight." Her voice fell flat, the syllables swallowed by the foliage without an echo. To her left, a patch of bluebells shivered. No breeze touched them; the neighboring stalks remained rigid as iron rods. Aurora tracked the movement. The vibration traveled in a clean, narrow line toward the base of a split ash tree. Something pressed the grass down in rhythmic, deliberate depressions, each footprint sinking into the moss with a faint squelch. Nothing stood above the indentations. She shifted her stance, dropping her center of gravity. Her shoulder-length black hair brushed her neck, static electricity lifting the fine strands. The air had dropped ten degrees in seconds, turning her breath into plumes of white vapor that hung suspended before her mouth, refusing to dissipate. Beneath the collar of her jacket, a sharp prickle of heat flared against her breastbone. Aurora reached inside the lapel and pulled out the Heartstone pendant. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem, hung on its tarnished silver chain, pulsed with a dull, internal ember. It radiated an unnatural warmth against her skin, throbbing in time with an unseen rhythm that did not match her own accelerated pulse. The pendant only woke when a threshold thinned. "Show yourself." The command carried no weight into the gloom. From behind the curtain of ash branches came the sound of tearing cloth. It repeated three times—short, wet rips that set her teeth on edge. Aurora turned slowly on the balls of her feet. Her bright blue eyes swept the perimeter, dissecting the shadows between the massive trunks. The grove felt smaller than it had five minutes ago. The standing stones, previously visible as dark pillars behind her, were gone, shrouded in a dense, coiling vapor that crept along the forest floor like spilled milk. A branch snapped thirty yards to her right. She whipped her head toward the noise. The undergrowth stood motionless. Then came the sound of wet leather dragging through mud, circling the periphery of the clearing at an impossible speed. It started on her right, whipped behind her, and skidded to a halt somewhere in the thicket behind the split ash. The momentum threw up no leaves. It stirred no dust. Aurora’s hand drifted toward the pocket of her coat, fingers curling around the cold iron nails. "I have the trade." A mimicry answered her from high in the branches. "Have the trade." The voice used her own Cardiff cadence, but stretched the vowels until they warped into a reedy, whistling hiss. It sounded as though someone were forcing air through a severed windpipe. Aurora locked her knees to keep from stepping back. Panic was an indulgence she could not afford, not here where the rules of distance and time bent like heated glass. She fixed her gaze on the fork of the ash tree where the sound had originated. The bark of the tree shifted. A knot of wood blinked. A pair of pale, lidless apertures opened within the deep ridges of the trunk, reflecting no ambient light. Below them, the wood tore open in a jagged vertical split, oozing thick, black sap that pattered onto the wildflowers below with the cadence of falling rain. The Heartstone burned hot enough to scorch the skin above her sternum. Aurora broke eye contact, scanning the ground for the exit. The geometry of the clearing had rotated. The path she had walked in on no longer met the tree line; instead, a wall of dense, thorned briars knit together in real time, their barbs glistening with translucent venom. Something shifted in her blind spot, just beyond the edge of her peripheral vision. A tall, disjointed shape unfolded itself from the shadow cast by an oak. When she snapped her head toward it, the space was empty, but the grass still flattened under unseen weight, the blades snapping in rapid sequence. Step. Squelch. Step. Squelch. It moved in a tightening spiral, cutting off her avenues of retreat. The smell of vinegar deepened, joined by the copper tang of fresh blood. A low frequency hum vibrated up through the soles of Aurora's boots, vibrating the bones in her shins. The physical sensation pressed against her lungs, making each inhale feel like dragging wet wool into her chest. She reached down, took a single iron nail from her pocket, and drove the sharp point into the fleshy palm of her hand just hard enough to draw a bead of scarlet. The sharp, clean shock of pain cut through the sensory fog pressing against her mind. "You're not what was summoned." A breath washed over the back of her neck. It carried no warmth, only the dry, frozen chill of a tomb sealed for centuries, stirring the short hairs at the base of her skull. Aurora stood completely still, her fingers tightening around the iron. Directly behind her ear, the darkness clicked its teeth.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:47:00.703Z" 9/3/2026, 1:47:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"resonance"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"glistening"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"resonance"
3"echo"
4"rhythmic"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"pulse"
8"weight"
9"gloom"
10"scanning"
11"glistening"
12"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1059
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1042
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora11
London1
Heartstone2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.972
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.944
wordCount1059
matches
0"Not the restful quiet of a sleeping wood, but a vacuum"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean24.07
std18.8
cv0.781
sampleLengths
044
110
252
339
426
55
652
719
83
913
1020
1139
125
1347
1415
1550
168
172
188
1925
2060
218
2211
2351
2416
254
269
273
2831
2946
306
315
3245
3312
3448
3552
364
3712
3849
3947
405
4134
4210
439
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"were forcing"
38.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences82
ratio0.037
matches
0"No breeze touched them; the neighboring stalks remained rigid as iron rods."
1"It repeated three times—short, wet rips that set her teeth on edge."
2"The path she had walked in on no longer met the tree line; instead, a wall of dense, thorned briars knit together in real time, their barbs glistening with translucent venom."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"smooth, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02194656488549618
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0057251908396946565
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean12.91
std7.78
cv0.602
sampleLengths
028
116
210
37
426
519
623
716
84
922
105
115
1223
1324
1414
155
163
1713
188
1912
204
2116
2219
235
249
2513
2625
2715
2811
2916
3023
318
322
338
3413
3512
369
3714
3810
3927
408
417
424
4320
4421
456
464
4716
484
499
54.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36585365853658536
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"Even the wind failed to"
1"Then came the sound of"
2"Directly behind her ear, the"
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences73
matches
0"She squeezed between the two"
1"She had marked this spot"
2"She reached up, her thumb"
3"Her voice fell flat, the"
4"She shifted her stance, dropping"
5"Her shoulder-length black hair brushed"
6"It radiated an unnatural warmth"
7"It repeated three times—short, wet"
8"Her bright blue eyes swept"
9"She whipped her head toward"
10"It started on her right,"
11"It stirred no dust."
12"It sounded as though someone"
13"She fixed her gaze on"
14"It moved in a tightening"
15"She reached down, took a"
16"It carried no warmth, only"
ratio0.233
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"The boundary between Richmond Park"
1"She squeezed between the two"
2"Foxgloves, nightshades, and pale wood"
3"Aurora adjusted the strap of"
4"She had marked this spot"
5"The instructions had demanded an"
6"The air smelled wrong."
7"The sweet, rotting scent of"
8"Aurora paused, cocking her head."
9"Silence hung over the grove."
10"She reached up, her thumb"
11"The nervous habit grounded her."
12"Her voice fell flat, the"
13"Aurora tracked the movement."
14"The vibration traveled in a"
15"Something pressed the grass down"
16"Nothing stood above the indentations."
17"She shifted her stance, dropping"
18"Her shoulder-length black hair brushed"
19"The air had dropped ten"
ratio0.836
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"To her left, a patch"
ratio0.014
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The boundary between Richmond Park and the hidden hollow announced itself through a sudden pressure against Aurora’s eardrums, the kind that accompanied a rapid…"
1"Not the restful quiet of a sleeping wood, but a vacuum that sucked the ambient rustle of leaves and nocturnal insects into nothing."
2"The air had dropped ten degrees in seconds, turning her breath into plumes of white vapor that hung suspended before her mouth, refusing to dissipate."
3"It radiated an unnatural warmth against her skin, throbbing in time with an unseen rhythm that did not match her own accelerated pulse."
4"It repeated three times—short, wet rips that set her teeth on edge."
5"The standing stones, previously visible as dark pillars behind her, were gone, shrouded in a dense, coiling vapor that crept along the forest floor like spilled…"
6"Below them, the wood tore open in a jagged vertical split, oozing thick, black sap that pattered onto the wildflowers below with the cadence of falling rain."
7"The physical sensation pressed against her lungs, making each inhale feel like dragging wet wool into her chest."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.8814%