Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRCFX6F576KDAXZAB5S78M

Run Details

Duration:
18.3s
Cost:
$0.013633
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering film of the Veil sheared apart like wet silk, snapping closed behind them with the crack of displaced thunder. Rory stumbled across the threshold, her boots catching on slick, black basalt. She regained her footing in an instant, her left hand snapping up to press against the collar of her jacket. Beneath the fabric, the Heartstone pendant burned against her chest, a steady, furious thrum that matched the rhythm of her racing heart. The deep crimson gem cast a bloody glow through the weave of her shirt. "Watch the drop." Nyx poured forward from Rory’s silhouette. The living shadow rose to a towering height, violet eyes burning like smoldering embers in a pool of ink. Wisps of darkness drifted from their shoulders, dissipating into the thick, sulfurous air. Above them, the sky stretched in an unbroken expanse of bruised amber. There was no sun, no clouds, only a heavy, luminous haze that cast long, amber shadows across an ancient world carved from dark stone and rampant growth. "The boundary held longer than expected," Isolde noted, her voice drifting like fine linen over the stone. She glided down the basalt ridge. Her waist-length silver hair caught the amber glow, floating behind her as if submerged in water. Where her boots met the mossy flagstones, not a single lichen crushed; she left no trace on the earth. "Yet the door does not care who knocks, only who enters." Rory drew a breath. The air rolled down her throat, dense with the scent of crushed figs, spiced nectar, and something metallic, like copper cooling on an anvil. "The air tastes like burnt honey and brass." "The first sip is always sweet before the teeth close," Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the expanse below. They stood atop a colossal terrace that tumbled into a valley of impossible proportions. Tier upon tier of ancient colonnades stretched into the golden distance, fractured by massive roots thick as ship masts. Sprawling orchards clung to the architecture, heavy with fruit that Rory had no names for—gourds that pulsed with pale, internal light, and clusters of translucent berries the color of arterial blood. Farther down, aqueducts carved from white marble wept streams of dark, iridescent syrup into massive cisterns, their surfaces calm as polished glass. Nyx’s shadow-tendrils flared, tasting the draft rising from the basin. "A feast laid for giants who starved centuries ago," the Shade hissed, their voice a dry rustle of autumn leaves. "Do not touch the soil, mortal. It feeds on more than rain." Rory unhooked the Fae-forged blade from her belt. The moonsilver metal bit into her palm with an immediate, bracing chill, cutting through the sweltering heat of the terrace. Its leaf-shaped edge cast a cool, pale shimmer against the amber stones at her feet. She adjusted her grip, the small crescent scar on her left wrist flexing against the leather wrap of the hilt. "We stick to the flagstones," Rory stated, nodding toward a wide, cracked staircase descending into the heart of the ruins. "If the ground has teeth, I’d rather keep my boots on stone." "The stone remembers the butcher's block," Isolde offered, drifting past the first massive pillar. The obsidian column stood fifty feet tall, carved with intricate friezes of faceless revelers clutching goblets and tearing into carcasses. "It swallowed the marrow long before the roots found a way through." Rory descended, each step measured. The sheer scale of the masonry dwarfed them. Blocks of black granite, cut with geometric precision that defied human engineering, formed retaining walls that held back surging tides of alien flora. Vines with leaves like serrated copper plates wrapped around broken statues, their tendrils curling and uncurling in slow, rhythmic pulses. A low, resonant hum vibrated through the soles of Rory’s boots. She stopped, crouching low, her knuckles grazing the edge of a step. "You feel that?" Nyx drifted lower, their incorporeal mass flattening against the stone like an oil slick. "The heart of this place still beats," the Shade whispered from the floor. "Deep below the stones. prince and prisoner alike listen to the churn." "Belphegor's playground," Rory muttered, standing and keeping the silver dagger level. "Excess until the floor gives out." "Nothing rots here without permission," Isolde said, tracing a finger an inch above a flowering vine that spilled across a shattered pediment. The blossoms were shaped like open mouths, lined with pale, hair-like filaments that quivered as she passed. "The hunger preserves what it desires to devour later." They reached the floor of the upper courtyard. The air grew thicker here, damp and heavy with an intoxicating warmth. Massive stone tables, long enough to seat hundreds, lay overturned or split in half by creeping briers. Goblets of hammered gold and platters of tarnished silver lay half-buried beneath carpets of creeping thyme and pale, fleshy mushrooms that released faint puffs of blue spores with every gust of wind. Rory skirted an overturned basin. Inside it, a pool of black liquid bubbled lazily, releasing steam that smelled sharply of fermented plums. "Look at the carvings on the dais," Rory pointed with the tip of her blade. At the center of the courtyard sat an elevated platform carved from a single slab of veined, red marble. Atop it rested an immense throne overgrown with thorny briers. The arms of the seat were carved in the shape of grasping human hands, their stone fingers curled as though clutching the wrists of whoever sat there. "An invitation to sit," Nyx drifted around the base of the dais, shadow-edges sharpening into jagged spikes. "And a promise you will never stand again." Rory circled the perimeter, her analytical gaze picking apart the architecture. Every path through the courtyard channeled visitors toward that central elevation. The slope of the stones, the curvature of the cracked drainage channels, even the leaning angles of the broken pillars forced the eye toward the throne. "It’s not just a hall," Rory observed, stepping over a thick, pulsing root that seeped amber sap across the path. "It’s a funnel. Everything here drains toward the center." "All rivers in this realm flow to the maw," Isolde agreed, turning in a slow circle, her gaze fixed on the amber horizon. "The past does not sleep here. It waits for fresh breath to blow the dust from the plates." A sudden snap echoed through the courtyard. Rory froze, dropping her weight into a low stance, the moonsilver blade gleaming in the heavy light. Ten paces ahead, a brier thick as a man's thigh contracted sharply, pulling itself across a shattered slab of granite. From the torn bark, a dark, viscous fluid leaked, hissing faintly as it touched the cold stone. "Movement?" Rory kept her voice low, her eyes scanning the shadows beneath the ruined colonnade. "The flora reacts to your blood," Nyx warned, rising behind her until their form cast a veil of cool darkness over her shoulders. "The pulse in your veins is loud to things that have known only stone for ages." Rory glanced down at the crimson pendant resting over her chest. The Heartstone flared brighter, its heat intense against her skin, casting a rhythmic, crimson beacon through her clothes. "Then we keep moving," Rory gripped the hilt tighter, her jaw set as she looked toward the archway leading into the lower terraced valley. "We didn't cross the Veil to admire the scenery."
created_at"2026-09-03T13:47:26.519Z" 9/3/2026, 1:47:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx drifted around [around]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
87.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count2
highlights
0"lazily"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"racing"
count1
2
word"fractured"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"marble"
count2
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count2
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"churn"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count2
13
word"quivered"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"maw"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"gleaming"
count1
19
word"scanning"
count1
20
word"pulse"
count1
21
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"racing"
2"fractured"
3"pulsed"
4"marble"
5"chill"
6"intricate"
7"measured"
8"rhythmic"
9"vibrated"
10"churn"
11"tracing"
12"shattered"
13"quivered"
14"warmth"
15"maw"
16"echoed"
17"weight"
18"gleaming"
19"scanning"
20"pulse"
21"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1232
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount998
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Heartstone2
Rory17
Shade2
Fae-forged1
Isolde5
Nyx5
persons
0"Veil"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
3"Shade"
4"Isolde"
5"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.648
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though clutching the wrists of whoever sat there"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1232
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean34.22
std20.64
cv0.603
sampleLengths
021
168
23
338
439
569
628
78
821
986
1010
1132
1263
1332
1446
1556
1623
173
1814
1925
2017
2148
2269
2322
2415
2556
2625
2748
2829
2941
307
3154
3215
3339
3429
3533
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"were shaped"
1"were carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
72.31% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences81
ratio0.025
matches
0"Where her boots met the mossy flagstones, not a single lichen crushed; she left no trace on the earth."
1"Sprawling orchards clung to the architecture, heavy with fruit that Rory had no names for—gourds that pulsed with pale, internal light, and clusters of translucent berries the color of arterial blood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1005
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.01791044776119403
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004975124378109453
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean15.21
std6.44
cv0.423
sampleLengths
021
112
220
322
414
53
66
719
813
912
1027
1117
126
1316
1419
1511
164
1724
188
1921
2014
2119
2231
2322
2410
2520
2612
278
2820
2915
3020
3120
3212
3314
3420
3512
365
378
3823
3920
4011
4112
423
4314
4413
4512
4611
476
4822
4917
81.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5308641975308642
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences66
matches
0"She regained her footing in"
1"She glided down the basalt"
2"Her waist-length silver hair caught"
3"They stood atop a colossal"
4"Its leaf-shaped edge cast a"
5"She adjusted her grip, the"
6"She stopped, crouching low, her"
7"They reached the floor of"
ratio0.121
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences66
matches
0"The shimmering film of the"
1"Rory stumbled across the threshold,"
2"She regained her footing in"
3"The deep crimson gem cast"
4"Nyx poured forward from Rory’s"
5"The living shadow rose to"
6"Wisps of darkness drifted from"
7"Isolde noted, her voice drifting"
8"She glided down the basalt"
9"Her waist-length silver hair caught"
10"Rory drew a breath."
11"The air rolled down her"
12"Isolde murmured, her pale lavender"
13"They stood atop a colossal"
14"Tier upon tier of ancient"
15"Nyx’s shadow-tendrils flared, tasting the"
16"the Shade hissed, their voice"
17"Rory unhooked the Fae-forged blade"
18"The moonsilver metal bit into"
19"Its leaf-shaped edge cast a"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Beneath the fabric, the Heartstone pendant burned against her chest, a steady, furious thrum that matched the rhythm of her racing heart."
1"Her waist-length silver hair caught the amber glow, floating behind her as if submerged in water."
2"They stood atop a colossal terrace that tumbled into a valley of impossible proportions."
3"Blocks of black granite, cut with geometric precision that defied human engineering, formed retaining walls that held back surging tides of alien flora."
4"She stopped, crouching low, her knuckles grazing the edge of a step."
5"The blossoms were shaped like open mouths, lined with pale, hair-like filaments that quivered as she passed."
6"Inside it, a pool of black liquid bubbled lazily, releasing steam that smelled sharply of fermented plums."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde noted, her voice drifting like fine linen over the stone"
1"Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the expanse below"
2"the Shade hissed, their voice a dry rustle of autumn leaves"
3"Rory kept, her eyes scanning the shadows beneath the ruined colonnade"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Isolde noted (note)"
1"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
2"the Shade hissed (hiss)"
3"Rory stated (state)"
4"the Shade whispered (whisper)"
5"Rory muttered (mutter)"
6"Rory observed (observe)"
7"Isolde agreed (agree)"
8"Nyx warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.9
effectiveRatio0.6
75.8465%