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Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRCGM04X5F4JVJ1TTV7S2T
Run Details
Model:
Muse Glimmer 30B (Reasoning, Medium)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.005482
Provider:
Phala
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
95.36%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
90.72%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
52.44%
Name drop frequency
(details)
82.43%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
40.40%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
78.82%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
11.47%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
84.6549%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The third deadbolt clicked. Aurora did not move.
She kept her hand on
the worn brass knob and let the chain rattle against the door frame.
Ptolemy jumped from the arm
of the old brown leather sofa and landed on the rug with a thump that shook the stack of books on the floor. "I know you're in," Lucien said.
His voice came through the
wood without the usual polish. No French flourish, no broker's courtesy. Just flat. Aurora lifted the chain. The door opened an inch.
The hallway smelled of curry
from the shop below and old paper from the flat.
Every surface in Eva's place
wore books, scrolls and research notes.
A thin layer of dust
caught the light from the street. Lucien filled the doorway. Tailored charcoal suit, ivory-handled cane hooked over one wrist, slicked back platinum blond hair catching the hall bulb. One eye amber, one black.
He looked like he had
walked straight out of a meeting and straight into her debt. "You shouldn't be here," Aurora said. "Neither should you."
She stepped back and let
the door open fully.
The chain clanged against the
frame.
Ptolemy circled Lucien's ankles once
and stopped, tail up, ears flat. "Three locks," Lucien said.
He tilted his head at
the deadbolts. "Progress." "Three locks," Aurora said. "Three reasons you can't come in." He shifted his cane.
The ivory handle caught the
light. "Eva's out." "She's at the library until midnight." "She left her key under the mat." Aurora's jaw tightened. "She doesn't leave it under the mat." "She does when she knows I'll need it." Silence settled between them, thick as the smell of turmeric from below.
Aurora's fingers found the small
crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood accident she never bothered to hide. It itched when she lied. Lucien looked past her at the cramped room. The single bed
was unmade
, a stack of takeaway boxes from Golden Empress sat on the table, and a thin blue scarf hung over the back of a chair. His own. "You left it," he said. "You left it when you left." "Same thing."
He stepped in without waiting
for permission. The door clicked shut behind him. He did not touch anything.
He never touched anything in
a flat he did not own. Aurora closed the door and reset the deadbolts one by one. The sound was deliberate. "What do you want, Luc?" "Information." "About what." "About the man who put your name on a list." She froze mid-turn. The flat tilted. "That's not a joke." "It's not a joke."
He set his cane against
the wall,
carefully
, tip down. The thin blade inside stayed hidden. "They're calling you Malphora in the back rooms," he said. "You like that name." "I don't use it." "You used it to sign the contract with the warehouse crew in Walthamstow. You used it to buy the package at Camden." Aurora picked up a thin black notebook from the coffee table and tucked it under her arm. "You tell me what I need to know." "I told you to stay away from Eva." "You're telling me now?" "I told you three weeks ago when you came back to London."
He took a slow step
forward. "You didn't listen." "You told me to stop digging. I didn't." "You were digging with a shovel." The cat brushed against her calf.
She bent and scratched behind
Ptolemy's ear, a small, steady movement. "Digging's my job," she said. "You know that." "I know you work deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung by day and play detective by night." "And you broker secrets for demons by lunch." He smiled without
warmth
. "Avaros doesn't pay in cash." "No." "They pay in favours." "And you collect." He stopped two feet away. Close enough that she could see the faint scar at his left temple, the one he always hid with hair. "Evan's dead," he said. The words landed flat. She did not flinch. That was the point. Cool-headed, intelligent, quick out-of-the-box thinking. Rory didn't show. "He's not dead." "He is. A flat fire in Brixton last night. No witnesses. The coroner hasn't filed yet." Aurora set the notebook down. "You came here to tell me that." "I came here to tell you not to go to the funeral." "There is no funeral." "There will be. Tomorrow evening. St. Mary Abbots."
She laughed, a short sharp
sound. "You think I'm going to cry over him?" "I think you're going to get killed." "By who?" "By the people who hired him to find you." The room felt smaller. The books leaned in. "You knew," she said. "I suspected. I confirmed yesterday." "Why tell me now?" "Because you stopped answering my messages." "I stopped answering because you stopped being an ally and started being a leash."
He lifted a hand, palm
up, a gesture of offering. No, of surrender. "I pulled you out of Cardiff." "You pulled me out of a cab and into a war you didn't explain." "You asked for protection." "I asked for a friend." The air between them thinned. Aurora's bright blue eyes held his heterochromatic gaze and did not blink. "You left," she said. "I was ordered." "Don't." "Don't what?" "Don't give me orders." He picked up his cane. "The list has your name, your address, and a photograph of Eva's flat. Three deadbolts won't matter if they decide to burn it." Ptolemy hissed. Aurora's hand moved to the back of her belt where she kept a small flat blade for opening delivery boxes. Her fingers brushed metal. "Get out." "Not until you listen." "I am listening." "Good." He stepped closer. "Leave Brick Lane. Tonight." "And go where?" "My place." "Your place is a hotel room with a view of the Thames and a price tag." "My place is safe." "Your place is a trap." "Your place is a target." She looked at the door, at the three deadbolts, at the notes spread across every surface like a map she could never finish. "You're not leaving until I say so," she said. "I never asked to leave." He reached into his inner pocket and set a small rectangular green French silver whittling knife on the table. The blade caught the light. "For opening boxes," he said. "For opening throats." "For opening doors you shouldn't." Aurora stared at the knife, then at him. The flat's front door rattled. Both of them turned. The deadbolts held, but the chain shook.
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9/3/2026, 1:47:27 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
13
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
82
tagDensity
0.159
leniency
0.317
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
95.36%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1078
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
90.72%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1078
totalAiIsms
2
found
0
word
"silence"
count
1
1
word
"warmth"
count
1
highlights
0
"silence"
1
"warmth"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
83
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
83
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
151
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
29
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1078
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
30
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
52.44%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
26
wordCount
615
uniqueNames
7
maxNameDensity
1.95
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
French
2
Eva
1
Lucien
5
Golden
1
Empress
1
Aurora
12
Ptolemy
4
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Empress"
2
"Aurora"
3
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"Eva"
1
"Golden"
globalScore
0.524
windowScore
0.667
82.43%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
37
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"looked like he had walked straight out of"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1078
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
151
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
106
mean
10.17
std
9.47
cv
0.932
sampleLengths
0
4
1
50
2
6
3
18
4
9
5
37
6
43
7
6
8
3
9
15
10
11
11
12
12
10
13
10
14
2
15
6
16
7
17
10
18
8
19
36
20
39
21
5
22
6
23
2
24
29
25
15
26
5
27
1
28
2
29
10
30
6
31
4
32
4
33
16
34
14
35
4
36
22
37
25
38
8
39
4
40
21
41
8
42
6
43
17
44
8
45
15
46
8
47
9
48
1
49
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"was unmade"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
110
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
151
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
619
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
1
"small rectangular green French"
adverbCount
12
adverbRatio
0.01938610662358643
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.0032310177705977385
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
151
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
151
mean
7.14
std
5.44
cv
0.762
sampleLengths
0
4
1
4
2
18
3
28
4
6
5
10
6
6
7
2
8
4
9
5
10
15
11
11
12
11
13
4
14
18
15
5
16
16
17
6
18
3
19
9
20
6
21
11
22
4
23
7
24
1
25
4
26
6
27
4
28
6
29
2
30
6
31
7
32
3
33
7
34
8
35
12
36
19
37
5
38
8
39
29
40
2
41
5
42
6
43
2
44
7
45
6
46
5
47
11
48
11
49
4
40.40%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
19
diversityRatio
0.31788079470198677
totalSentences
151
uniqueOpeners
48
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
68
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
78.82%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
24
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"She kept her hand on"
1
"His voice came through the"
2
"He looked like he had"
3
"She stepped back and let"
4
"He tilted his head at"
5
"He shifted his cane."
6
"It itched when she lied."
7
"He stepped in without waiting"
8
"He did not touch anything."
9
"He never touched anything in"
10
"She froze mid-turn."
11
"He set his cane against"
12
"He took a slow step"
13
"She bent and scratched behind"
14
"He smiled without warmth."
15
"He stopped two feet away."
16
"She did not flinch."
17
"She laughed, a short sharp"
18
"He lifted a hand, palm"
19
"He picked up his cane."
ratio
0.353
11.47%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
61
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"The third deadbolt clicked."
1
"Aurora did not move."
2
"She kept her hand on"
3
"Ptolemy jumped from the arm"
4
"His voice came through the"
5
"Aurora lifted the chain."
6
"The door opened an inch."
7
"The hallway smelled of curry"
8
"Every surface in Eva's place"
9
"A thin layer of dust"
10
"Lucien filled the doorway."
11
"He looked like he had"
12
"She stepped back and let"
13
"The chain clanged against the"
14
"Ptolemy circled Lucien's ankles once"
15
"He tilted his head at"
16
"He shifted his cane."
17
"The ivory handle caught the"
18
"Aurora's jaw tightened."
19
"Aurora's fingers found the small"
ratio
0.897
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
68
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
23
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
13
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
82
tagDensity
0.134
leniency
0.268
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
84.6549%