Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRDWGBDGGD74DY59Z88VEA

Run Details

Duration:
19.6s
Cost:
$0.012275
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain streaked the front window of The Raven’s Nest, fracturing the green neon into bleeding ribbons of emerald across the dark mahogany tables. Behind the bar, Silas shifted his weight off his bad leg, the heavy silver signet on his right hand clinking softly against an amber tumbler of rye. Rory sat on the corner stool nearest the brass tap, tracing the condensation on her pint glass. Her black hair fell straight to her collarbones, sharp and clean, framing cheekbones that had grown sharper over three winters in Soho. A delivery jacket from Golden Empress hung over the back of her chair, still smelling faintly of fried ginger and wet nylon. The brass bell above the heavy oak door gave a sharp, wet jangle. A woman stepped out of the Soho downpour, wrestling with a collapsed umbrella that dripped onto the worn floorboards. She wore a tailored camel coat, water beaded across the shoulders, a leather briefcase tucked tight beneath one elbow. When she pushed back her damp hood, the bar’s yellow bulb caught the familiar curl of strawberry-blonde hair and the wide, open tilt of her brows. Eva stopped mid-step. Her breath caught, fogging the cold air between them. Rory kept her hand flat on the cool cedar bar top. Her left wrist, where the thin white crescent of an old childhood scar sat pale against her skin, did not twitch. Eva took two cautious strides forward, heels clicking against the timber. "Rory?" The name sounded foreign under the vaulted timber ceiling, stripped of the cadence of Cardiff rain and shared student flats in Cathays. "Eva." Eva stood before the stool, her hands hesitating in the space between an embrace and a defensive fold. She let them drop to her sides, fingers tightening around the damp handle of her umbrella. "Three years. You vanish off the face of the earth, and you’re sitting behind a pint in Soho." Silas set a clean coaster on the wood between them with measured slowness. His hazel eyes moved between the two women, taking in the rigid line of Eva’s spine and the calculated stillness in Rory’s shoulders. He reached down, drew a clean glass from the rack, and poured a measure of dark rum without a word before retreating to the far end of the counter, his limp dragging slightly against the floorboards. Eva pulled out the stool beside Rory, her camel coat brushing the oilcloth delivery jacket. She did not sit immediately; she stood inspecting Rory’s face, tracing the hardened angles, the bright blue eyes that no longer hurried to apologize. "You cut your hair." "A long time ago." "And the law degree?" "Sitting in a cardboard box under a bed in Cathays, I imagine." Eva sat down, her leather bag resting against her shins. She reached out, her fingertips hovering near Rory’s sleeve before drawing back, settling instead on the rim of the rum glass Silas had left. "Your mother thinks you’re in Bristol. She calls me every Christmas, Rory. Every single December, asking if I’ve had a postcard." Rory rotated her pint glass a quarter turn. The moisture left a dark ring on the cedar. "She knows I'm alive. That's enough." "It's not enough for her. It wasn't enough for me." Eva took a sip of the dark liquor, wincing slightly as it hit the back of her throat. "I bought you the train ticket. I packed your bags while Evan was down at the pub, smashing glasses and shouting at the television. I told you where to run." "And I ran." "You were supposed to meet me at Paddington three days later. We had a deposit down on a place in Camden. I waited five hours on that platform with two suitcases and your share of the tenancy agreement." Rory’s jaw tightened. She looked past Eva’s shoulder toward the wall, where yellowed nautical charts and monochrome prints of Cold War checkpoints hung in heavy black frames. "I couldn't drag Cardiff behind me, Eva. You were part of it." "I was your best friend." The silence between them stretched, thick with the sound of the storm outside rattling the leaded panes. A taxi hissed through standing water on the street, sweeping a dull arc of headlight across the bottles of gin and vermouth. Eva pulled a silver case from her pocket, clicked it open, and extracted a sleek gold pen, turning it end over end across her knuckles. A lawyer's habit, ingrained and rhythmic. "I made junior partner last month. Davis & Lloyd." "Brendan always said they took only the top tier." Rory’s voice dropped lower, stripped of bite. "He was right about that, at least." "Your father came to my swearing-in." Eva set the pen flat on the wood. "He looked ten years older. He sat in the third row with his hands folded in his lap, looking for you in every woman with dark hair who walked past the rail." Rory took a slow pull of her ale, the bitter malt coating her tongue. "He wanted an associate. He wanted someone to inherit the leather-bound briefs and the damp townhouse on Cathedral Road. He didn't want me." "He wanted his daughter." Eva leaned in, her perfume—something crisp and citrusy that Rory remembered from second-year revision sessions—cutting through the stale smell of rain and old draft beer. "Evan is gone, Rory. He moved to Swansea two years back. Married some girl from the docks. You didn't have to stay buried." "Look at me, Eva." Rory turned on the stool, facing her square. The soft wool jumpers and silver hoop earrings were gone; in their place sat a dark linen shirt buttoned to the throat, utilitarian trousers, and hands with cuticles roughened by salt, weather, and crate-straps. Her posture held the coiled, watchful quiet of someone who checked the fire exits before sitting down. "Do I look like an associate at Davis & Lloyd?" Eva’s gaze drifted from Rory’s steady blue eyes down to the crescent scar on her wrist, then to the worn elbows of her shirt. A shadow of grief flickered over the other woman’s face, replacing the indignation. "No," Eva whispered, the gold pen rolling an inch to the left under her palm. "You look like someone who survived a shipwreck and decided to live on the rocks." "The rocks don't cave in." Silas moved past them with a tray of polished snifters, his hazel gaze skimming over Rory’s rigid profile with brief, silent appraisal. He set the glasses down near the taps and began wiping down the beer pumps with steady, rhythmic strokes. Eva reached into her coat and pulled out a small, folded envelope of cream cardstock. She set it next to the amber glass, its pristine corner touching the wet ring left by Rory’s pint. "I’m getting married in August. In Llandaff." Rory looked at the heavy paper, at the embossed silver lettering of Eva’s name alongside a surname she did not recognize. "He's an architect," Eva offered, her voice brittle. "You'd like him. He talks too much about bridges and doesn't care about legal precedent." "I'm happy for you." "Are you?" Eva slid off the stool, pulling the camel coat tight across her chest. The leather strap of her briefcase creaked as she hoisted it onto her shoulder. "Because you sound like you're reading a deposition." Rory didn't pick up the invitation. She kept her palms flat against the cold grain of the counter. "I don't fit in the cathedral pews anymore, Eva. You know that as well as I do." Eva picked up her wet umbrella, the metal tip tapping against the floorboard. She stared at Rory for a long second, searching for any remnant of the girl who used to split bags of chips on the curb outside Cardiff Central, laughing into the wind until her sides ached. "You got out," Eva said, turning toward the heavy oak door. "I just didn't think you'd leave yourself behind." The bell chimed once, sharp and hollow, as Eva stepped back into the Soho rain. The door clicked shut. Silas paused his wiping, set the cloth down on the zinc rim of the sink, and slid the rum glass away from the empty stool. Rory picked up the cream envelope, felt the thick, unbroken seal beneath her thumb, and let the green neon light wash over the paper.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:48:12.661Z" 9/3/2026, 1:48:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.432
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1397
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1397
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"pristine"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"tracing"
2"familiar"
3"measured"
4"calculated"
5"silence"
6"rhythmic"
7"flickered"
8"pristine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1395
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1011
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas5
Soho3
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff2
Cathays1
Eva20
Rory19
Cold1
War1
Central1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Empress"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
6"Central"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Cathays"
globalScore0.511
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1395
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean25.36
std18.62
cv0.734
sampleLengths
050
161
213
364
412
532
611
71
822
91
1034
1118
1272
1339
144
154
164
1712
1834
1921
2017
216
2258
233
2438
2527
2612
275
2839
2931
309
3123
3246
3314
3423
3552
364
3759
3810
3937
4030
415
4241
4334
447
4521
4623
474
4837
4918
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
46.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences89
ratio0.034
matches
0"She did not sit immediately; she stood inspecting Rory’s face, tracing the hardened angles, the bright blue eyes that no longer hurried to apologize."
1"\"He wanted his daughter.\" Eva leaned in, her perfume—something crisp and citrusy that Rory remembered from second-year revision sessions—cutting through the stale smell of rain and old draft beer."
2"The soft wool jumpers and silver hoop earrings were gone; in their place sat a dark linen shirt buttoned to the throat, utilitarian trousers, and hands with cuticles roughened by salt, weather, and crate-straps."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1017
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.01966568338249754
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004916420845624385
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean15.67
std8.75
cv0.558
sampleLengths
023
127
217
322
422
513
619
719
826
93
109
1111
1221
1311
141
1522
161
1718
1816
1918
2013
2123
2236
2315
2424
254
264
274
2812
2910
3024
3121
328
339
346
3528
3630
373
3838
393
4024
4112
425
4317
4422
4525
466
479
4816
497
45.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.29213483146067415
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences60
matches
0"Her black hair fell straight"
1"She wore a tailored camel"
2"Her breath caught, fogging the"
3"Her left wrist, where the"
4"She let them drop to"
5"His hazel eyes moved between"
6"He reached down, drew a"
7"She did not sit immediately;"
8"She reached out, her fingertips"
9"She looked past Eva’s shoulder"
10"Her posture held the coiled,"
11"He set the glasses down"
12"She set it next to"
13"She kept her palms flat"
14"She stared at Rory for"
ratio0.25
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences60
matches
0"Rain streaked the front window"
1"Rory sat on the corner"
2"Her black hair fell straight"
3"A delivery jacket from Golden"
4"The brass bell above the"
5"A woman stepped out of"
6"She wore a tailored camel"
7"Eva stopped mid-step."
8"Her breath caught, fogging the"
9"Rory kept her hand flat"
10"Her left wrist, where the"
11"Eva took two cautious strides"
12"The name sounded foreign under"
13"Eva stood before the stool,"
14"She let them drop to"
15"Silas set a clean coaster"
16"His hazel eyes moved between"
17"He reached down, drew a"
18"Eva pulled out the stool"
19"She did not sit immediately;"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rain streaked the front window of The Raven’s Nest, fracturing the green neon into bleeding ribbons of emerald across the dark mahogany tables."
1"A woman stepped out of the Soho downpour, wrestling with a collapsed umbrella that dripped onto the worn floorboards."
2"She did not sit immediately; she stood inspecting Rory’s face, tracing the hardened angles, the bright blue eyes that no longer hurried to apologize."
3"She reached out, her fingertips hovering near Rory’s sleeve before drawing back, settling instead on the rim of the rum glass Silas had left."
4"She stared at Rory for a long second, searching for any remnant of the girl who used to split bags of chips on the curb outside Cardiff Central, laughing into t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.108
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.054
81.7054%