Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRE5PGJ8PCJ4SHQQHP71KY

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Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.003683
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs dropped into black. Detective Harlow Quinn counted them. Twenty-seven. The worn leather watch on her left wrist caught a glint from the torch she held. The air down here smelled of damp concrete and old oil. She stopped at the bottom and looked up at the sealed service door of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. A Metropolitan Police tape fluttered across it, yellow against grey brick. Eva Kowalski stood inside the tape line with a worn leather satchel full of books slung over one shoulder. Curly red hair stuck to her forehead. She tucked hair behind her left ear. “You should not be here.” Quinn stepped past the tape. “You called it in.” “I called it in because the Market does not allow police.” The Market. The Veil Market. The abandoned station was supposed to be empty between full moons. The schedule moved it. Tonight the Market had stayed. The platform stretched ahead, lit by the harsh white of the SOCO lamps. A body lay near the old ticket barrier. A man in a coat too thin for the damp. His throat was open. Blood had pooled on the concrete and dried to dark brown. No struggle marks on the walls. No footprints in the blood. Quinn crouched. The sharp jaw she kept under control tightened. “Time of death?” “Approximately four hours.” Eva did not move closer. Round glasses reflected the lamps. “He’s a trader. Name on the ledger is Jonah Pike. He sold information.” A colleague from SOCO knelt by the body. “No defensive wounds. Clean cut. One strike.” Quinn’s fingers brushed the edge of the pool. The blood had not reached the grout lines. It sat as if it had been placed. “That’s wrong.” “What’s wrong?” “The wound is too clean for a knife. No tissue displacement.” Quinn lifted the man’s coat. “Clothing is undisturbed. No drag marks. He’s been laid here.” Eva opened her satchel and pulled out a notebook. Freckles stood out against her pale skin. “Entry requirement is a bone token. Everyone who comes through leaves a token at the threshold. They are collected.” Quinn walked to the barrier. A shallow dish sat on the floor, empty except for dust. She knelt and ran a gloved finger through it. “Nothing.” “There should be something.” Eva’s voice rose. “The token for Pike. He would have left it.” Quinn stood. “He didn’t.” The colleague straightened. “We have a knife. Brass handle, found three metres east. No prints.” Quinn took the knife. Small brass compass casing. Face etched with protective sigils. Patina of verdigris on the edges. The needle inside did not point north. It quivered and pointed at the body. “Veil Compass,” Eva said. “Crafted by a Shade artisan. It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal.” “It’s a murder weapon.” “It’s a tool.” Eva stepped closer despite herself. “No one uses a compass to kill.” Quinn set the compass down on the concrete. The needle swung again, jittered, settled on the body. She looked at the wound. The cut was straight, narrow, deeper than it looked. She pressed two fingers to the side of the throat, felt the skin. “Lividity is wrong.” “Wrong how?” “It’s pooling on the upper side. He was on his back when he died. He’s on his front now.” Eva tucked hair behind her left ear. “He was moved.” “He was placed.” Quinn circled the body. “No blood spray on the ceiling. No arterial spatter on the walls. For a throat cut, there should be.” The colleague checked his notes. “Scene is clean. Too clean.” Quinn stopped at the far end of the platform. A shadow lingered under a bench. She lifted the bench with her boot. A bone token lay beneath, small, white, carved with a sigil. Eva exhaled. “He left it.” “Not here.” Quinn picked it up. The token was warm. “This is fresh.” “Pike left it at the threshold. Someone moved him.” “Someone moved the body.” Quinn’s eyes moved to the walls. The tiles were old, stained. She traced a line with her torch. “See this.” A faint smear ran along the base of the wall, high up, then down. Eva leaned in. “What is that?” “Blood. But it’s not from him.” Quinn pointed. “The spatter pattern is radial. Origin point is the ceiling.” “The ceiling is ten feet up.” Quinn walked to the center of the platform. She looked up. A dark stain on the ceiling, barely visible in the white light. She reached up and touched it. “Dry.” “Dry how long?” “Hours.” Quinn lowered her hand. “Longer than four.” Eva opened her satchel again and pulled out a thin book bound in black. She flipped pages. “The Market sells banned alchemical substances. Some of them can preserve tissue. Some can mimic death.” “You’re saying he’s not dead.” “I’m saying the evidence doesn’t add up for a normal murder.” Eva’s green eyes met Quinn’s brown ones. “The compass points at him. The needle points toward the nearest rift.” Quinn stared at the compass. The needle trembled and then steadied, pointing not at the body but at the ceiling stain. “The rift is up there.” The colleague cleared his throat. “Detective, we need to process this scene. If there’s a supernatural element—” “There’s no supernatural element.” Quinn’s military precision cut the air. “There’s a missing token, a body placed after death, blood on the ceiling that predates the body, and a compass that points to a stain.” She crouched again beside the man. His eyelids were half open. The skin around his wound looked wrong, too pale, too smooth. She pressed a gloved finger to his chest. No rise. No fall. The compass needle jumped again and pointed at her. Eva stepped back. “The Compass is attuned to supernatural energy.” Quinn stood. The watch on her left wrist ticked. She looked at the body, at the empty dish, at the bone token in her palm, at the stain on the ceiling. “The evidence doesn’t add up.” “No.” “The wound is clean. The blood is placed. The body is moved. The token is missing from the threshold and found under a bench.” Eva’s hand hovered over her satchel. “The Market moves every full moon. The Market is not supposed to stay.” “It stayed.” Quinn’s gaze fixed on the ceiling. The compass needle held steady, pointing up. “Someone wanted us to find a body here.” “Who?” Quinn did not answer. She turned the compass over in her hand. The sigils on the face caught the light. The patina of verdigris flaked slightly. The body lay still. The blood on the concrete looked too perfect. The blood on the ceiling looked too old. The colleague spoke again. “We should call the coroner.” Quinn kept her eyes on the stain above. The needle pointed. The platform was quiet except for the hum of the lamps. Eva tucked hair behind her left ear and waited. Quinn lifted her torch higher and held it against the ceiling. The stain was not a stain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1172
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1172
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"fluttered"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"quivered"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"fluttered"
2"etched"
3"quivered"
4"traced"
5"trembled"
6"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount758
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.17
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn24
Tube1
Camden1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Kowalski1
Market3
Veil1
Round1
Eva14
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Market"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.853
wordCount1172
matches
0"not at the body but at the ceiling stain"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean16.28
std12.81
cv0.787
sampleLengths
05
164
233
35
49
511
625
757
810
93
1026
1115
1224
132
142
1526
1616
1719
1825
191
2016
214
2215
2333
2418
254
2615
2744
283
292
3019
3110
3226
3310
3433
355
3613
379
3824
3914
406
4118
426
4329
441
453
468
4717
4816
495
98.83% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"was supposed"
1"been placed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences156
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"yellow against grey brick."
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.022397891963109356
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003952569169960474
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean7.51
std4.77
cv0.635
sampleLengths
05
15
21
316
411
520
611
719
87
97
105
115
124
1311
142
153
1611
174
185
1913
208
2110
224
2311
246
255
262
278
283
298
305
3113
328
337
348
358
368
372
382
3916
4010
419
427
4319
445
4511
469
471
487
499
37.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.28205128205128205
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences99
matches
0"She stopped at the bottom"
1"She tucked hair behind her"
2"His throat was open."
3"It sat as if it"
4"She knelt and ran a"
5"It quivered and pointed at"
6"She looked at the wound."
7"She pressed two fingers to"
8"She lifted the bench with"
9"She traced a line with"
10"She looked up."
11"She reached up and touched"
12"She flipped pages."
13"She crouched again beside the"
14"His eyelids were half open."
15"She pressed a gloved finger"
16"She looked at the body,"
17"She turned the compass over"
ratio0.182
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences99
matches
0"The stairs dropped into black."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn counted them."
2"The worn leather watch on"
3"The air down here smelled"
4"She stopped at the bottom"
5"A Metropolitan Police tape fluttered"
6"Eva Kowalski stood inside the"
7"She tucked hair behind her"
8"Quinn stepped past the tape."
9"The Veil Market."
10"The abandoned station was supposed"
11"The schedule moved it."
12"Tonight the Market had stayed."
13"The platform stretched ahead, lit"
14"A body lay near the"
15"A man in a coat"
16"His throat was open."
17"Blood had pooled on the"
18"The sharp jaw she kept"
19"Eva did not move closer"
ratio0.949
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.033
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.1958%