Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KREGMRTH54AAXCYBVHSKHV

Run Details

Duration:
20.9s
Cost:
$0.011436
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory crossed the threshold between the two central oak standing stones, and London vanished. Outside in Richmond Park, November stripped the canopy down to black ribs against a bruised city sky. Here, inside the pocket boundary, the air turned dense and humid, thick with the cloying perfume of crushed stems and belladonna. Unnatural, pearlescent twilight hung between ancient branches, illuminating carpets of bluebells and pale foxgloves that bloomed out of season across the forest floor. She reached beneath her wool scarf and let her fingertips brush the Heartstone pendant. The deep crimson gem rested flat against her sternum, cold as river ice. Silas had sworn the contact would wait at the center of the ring by midnight, bearing the parchment needed to settle the debt on the flat. The silence hit her ears like a sudden drop in cabin pressure. No hum of Heathrow flight paths cut through the canopy. No rustle of red deer grazing in the brackens drifted from the park outside. The clearing swallowed every ambient vibration, leaving only the sound of her pulse drumming against her eardrums. Rory adjusted the strap of her courier bag and stepped forward. Her leather boot sank into the loam, yet the dead leaves beneath her sole produced no crunch. She stopped. She lifted her foot and brought it down hard on a dry, fallen branch. The wood snapped beneath her weight, but the break made no sound at all. The visual fracture occurred—fibers splintering, bark peeling—in complete, suffocating muteness. Rory tucked her chin toward her shoulder, pushing a strand of straight black hair out of her eyes. "Silas sent me." Her voice fell flat, the syllables dying the instant they left her lips, stripped of resonance or echo. The air tasted like copper and ozone, sharp on the back of her tongue. Nothing answered. Ten yards ahead, the clearing opened around an expanse of gray, moss-eaten boulders. Wildflowers crowded the stone bases, their petals rigid, unmoving despite a phantom current that stirred the fringe of Rory's coat. She checked the silver watch on her left wrist. The minute hand stood frozen between the twelve and the one, twitching over the pale crescent scar cut into her flesh. Time did not slip predictably in the Grove; an hour here could bleed into three days in the borough of Richmond. She needed to find the cache, take the parcel, and get back across the oak perimeter before dawn. She took three deliberate strides toward the center boulder. Behind her, something took three strides in return. Rory pivoted on her heel, dropping her center of gravity. The path behind her stood empty. The twin oaks framing the entrance remained visible, but they sat further away than thirty paces—the distance had stretched, the trees now resembling gray needles against a wall of white fog. Between her and the boundary, the bluebells stood tall and undisturbed. "Show yourself." She kept her tone level, refusing to feed the phantom with panic. "I have the payment. Leave the parcel on the stone and step back." A draft crept along the nape of her neck. It carried the smell of stagnant pond water and turned earth, freezing cold against her heated skin. At the edge of her vision, near the fringe of a weeping ash tree, the shadow cast by a cluster of ferns shifted. The shadow detached itself from the foliage, sliding along the forest floor against the angle of the ambient light, stretching ten feet toward her boots before snapping back into place. Rory did not blink. She tracked the contour of the trunk, searching for the shape of shoulders, the outline of a coat, or the glint of a mask. The gray bark looked solid, but the space directly behind it rippled like heat rising from tarmac in July. Then came the click. It was faint, like fingernails tapping rhythmically against slate. *Tap. Tap. Tap-tap.* The sound did not come from the ash tree. It originated from the branches directly above her head. Rory tilted her chin upward inch by inch. Thick, gnarled boughs intertwined overhead, forming a dense ceiling of emerald leaves. No creature sat among the forks. No bird perched on the mossy bark. Yet, as she stared into the canopy, the leaves parted without a breeze, parting cleanly down the middle as though an invisible, heavy mass dragged itself through the foliage. *Tap. Tap.* The tapping drifted down, landing six inches from her right ear. Rory stepped to the side, maintaining visual contact with the branch. Her boot struck a patch of clover, and this time, the soil squelched wetly—loud, distorted, echoing through the clearing like a gunshot. The sound shattered the muteness. Instantly, the surrounding woods woke with subtle, discordant movement. Twigs snapped in four directions at once, each crack coming from an impossible angle, too high off the ground to belong to an animal and too irregular to belong to a man. Against her chest, the Heartstone pendant flared. The crimson stone burned through her linen shirt, radiating an intense, searing heat that scalded the skin over her ribs. A faint, bloody glow seeped through the weave of her dark sweater, pulsing in erratic, urgent rhythms. Hel portal proximity. The thought sliced through her mind with sharp clarity. The grove was no longer merely touching the Fae border; something else had cracked the foundation of the pocket dimension from beneath. Rory backed toward the center boulder, keeping her eyes scanning in wide, sweeping arcs. "Whoever is there, the trade is off." The shadows between the trees did not retreat. They lengthened, creeping across the damp loam like black ink bleeding into parchment. A breath brushed the shell of her ear—a long, shallow inhalation that rattled with the wet weight of fluid. She spun, slashing her arm out to strike whatever stood at her back. Her knuckles met empty air. Yet the bluebells directly before her flattened into the mud one by one, pressed down by heavy, invisible impressions that marched in a slow, deliberate line straight toward her boots.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:48:32.802Z" 9/3/2026, 1:48:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"resonance"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"resonance"
4"echo"
5"glint"
6"echoing"
7"shattered"
8"searing"
9"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"m with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1009
ratio0.005
matches
0"Tap. Tap. Tap-tap."
1"Tap. Tap."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount984
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Richmond2
Park1
November1
Heartstone2
Heathrow1
Rory9
Grove1
July1
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"November"
4"Grove"
5"July"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like copper and ozone, sharp on th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1009
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean21.93
std16.81
cv0.766
sampleLengths
014
161
253
312
441
528
62
738
818
93
1032
112
1233
1330
1439
159
168
1710
1848
192
2012
2113
2226
2353
2447
254
2612
2718
288
2954
302
3111
3233
335
3441
357
3637
373
3831
3914
407
4121
4219
4313
445
4530
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences78
ratio0.077
matches
0"The visual fracture occurred—fibers splintering, bark peeling—in complete, suffocating muteness."
1"Time did not slip predictably in the Grove; an hour here could bleed into three days in the borough of Richmond."
2"The twin oaks framing the entrance remained visible, but they sat further away than thirty paces—the distance had stretched, the trees now resembling gray needles against a wall of white fog."
3"Her boot struck a patch of clover, and this time, the soil squelched wetly—loud, distorted, echoing through the clearing like a gunshot."
4"The grove was no longer merely touching the Fae border; something else had cracked the foundation of the pocket dimension from beneath."
5"A breath brushed the shell of her ear—a long, shallow inhalation that rattled with the wet weight of fluid."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount991
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"gray, moss-eaten boulders."
1"freezing cold against her"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.025227043390514632
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011099899091826439
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.94
std7.78
cv0.602
sampleLengths
014
117
221
323
414
513
626
712
810
914
1017
1111
1217
132
1414
1514
1610
1718
183
1918
2014
212
2213
2320
249
2521
2621
2718
289
298
3010
316
3231
3311
342
3512
3613
379
3817
3923
4030
414
4224
4319
444
459
461
471
481
499
51.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners30
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then came the click."
1"Instantly, the surrounding woods woke"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences67
matches
0"She reached beneath her wool"
1"Her leather boot sank into"
2"She lifted her foot and"
3"Her voice fell flat, the"
4"She checked the silver watch"
5"She needed to find the"
6"She took three deliberate strides"
7"She kept her tone level,"
8"It carried the smell of"
9"She tracked the contour of"
10"It was faint, like fingernails"
11"It originated from the branches"
12"Her boot struck a patch"
13"They lengthened, creeping across the"
14"She spun, slashing her arm"
15"Her knuckles met empty air."
ratio0.239
79.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rory crossed the threshold between"
1"Here, inside the pocket boundary,"
2"She reached beneath her wool"
3"The deep crimson gem rested"
4"Silas had sworn the contact"
5"The silence hit her ears"
6"The clearing swallowed every ambient"
7"Rory adjusted the strap of"
8"Her leather boot sank into"
9"She lifted her foot and"
10"The wood snapped beneath her"
11"The visual fracture occurred—fibers splintering,"
12"Rory tucked her chin toward"
13"Her voice fell flat, the"
14"The air tasted like copper"
15"Wildflowers crowded the stone bases,"
16"She checked the silver watch"
17"The minute hand stood frozen"
18"Time did not slip predictably"
19"She needed to find the"
ratio0.761
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Yet, as she stared into"
ratio0.015
36.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Unnatural, pearlescent twilight hung between ancient branches, illuminating carpets of bluebells and pale foxgloves that bloomed out of season across the forest…"
1"The clearing swallowed every ambient vibration, leaving only the sound of her pulse drumming against her eardrums."
2"Yet, as she stared into the canopy, the leaves parted without a breeze, parting cleanly down the middle as though an invisible, heavy mass dragged itself throug…"
3"The crimson stone burned through her linen shirt, radiating an intense, searing heat that scalded the skin over her ribs."
4"Rory backed toward the center boulder, keeping her eyes scanning in wide, sweeping arcs."
5"A breath brushed the shell of her ear—a long, shallow inhalation that rattled with the wet weight of fluid."
6"Yet the bluebells directly before her flattened into the mud one by one, pressed down by heavy, invisible impressions that marched in a slow, deliberate line st…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.1683%